My name is Madeline. I am thirteen years old and in Year eight. I live in Melbourne, Australia.
I have told stories to all my life and have continued to keep it up through writing. I hope to one day write a full length novel for teenagers and adults alike to read. But that won't be happening anytime soon, I don't expect.
For Bitter or for Worse by Kerichi
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 1016]
Summary:
All is not well.
George uses work and Firewhisky to cope with Fred's death until a drink with a friend leads to something that dulls pain better than alcohol. Emotionally torn by grief, he struggles to allow Alicia into his life...and then comes baby....
*Winner of the 2008 Quicksilver Quill Award for Best Dark/Angsty Story*
I love this story, I loved this chapter, and really would love it if you updated soon!
Keep up the good work. 10/10
Oh, that song you had in the Author's notes is on a 'don't speed' add here in australia and it makes me cry every time I see it. So, I found it funny some how that you added that part in the end.
~ Parchment and Quill
Nice chapter. A Romainian fantasy, intersting concept.
Two honeymoons, now that's just not fair. Can I say that? Even if I'm still considered to young to date (13 turning 14 in November, not that young, but still).
Keep up the good work and update soon! I was so happy when I came home to find that I had an update!
~ Parchment and Quill
Thank you for being happy to have an update!
If life was fair, Fred would be alive, (Boo Jo! *have to do that every once in awhile, heh) but since life isn't fair, I'll tell you that isn't their last honeymoon, LOL.
Nice... not much more then I can say right now. I'm a little tried and it's only 8.30pm!
shocker!
Keep up the good work, love the story!
~ Parchment and Quill
Have you been burning the candle at both ends or not taking vitamins? :D I hope you have sweet dreams, because you're sweet to review, even when you're tired!
*hugs*
I've read a few other fic's that place Bill being conceived before they married and I have to say that I like the idea, although it is quite disturbing.
I really like the story. Keep up the good work.
~ Parchment and Quill
Author's Response:
It the idea of parents being young lovers carried away by passion.
Very squicky. The mind instinctively flees disturbing mental images which might inhibit the child's own desire to procreate, LOL.
Thank you!
Wish You Were Here by Evans613
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 40]
Summary: Ginny watches Harry, Hermione and Ron disapparate from Bill and Fleur's wedding as countless Death Eaters arrive.
She prays for their safety, fully aware that Harry could lose everything...
This fic follows Ginny through her sixth year at Hogwarts with exerpts from Deathly Hallows itself. Doing what she can for the wizarding world, determined to help harry in whatever way she can, read on as Ginny dodges Death Eaters that roam the halls of Hogwarts, attempts to steal the Sword of Gyffindor right from under Snape's nose, sneaks out to Hogsmeade, all the while enduring the Cruciatus Curse from Amycus and Alecto Callow, and even her fellow classmates. Join Ginny, Neville, Luna and the returning DA leading up to the Battle of Hogwarts, and Voldemort's undoing.
DISCLAIMER: I do not own Harry Potter.
WARNING: So many Deathly Hallows spoilers - you don't even know.
I really good story. Still a little confusing but alright.
Keep up the good work, I can't wait for you to update so I can see what you've planed for this story.
~ Parchment and Quill
Nice start, although a little confusing. Keep up the good work, the story could go really well.
~ Parchment and Quill
Teddy's Gift by SiriusRadcliffe
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 77]
Summary: The war may be over, but the true fight is just beginning. Two hearts, still searching for the truth, are brought together by the most unexpected person. And in the end, destiny overtakes them. From the imaginations of Miss Radcliffe and SiriusBlack1113 comes a story of love, passion, heartbreak, and healing.
I loved that interaction between Harry and Ginny! Definitely worth the wait.
So, I hope the next updates soon. But with the Validation queue so long .... Just promise to write the story as quickly as you can, OK?
I would say that my favourite line is: “Did I miss something?”
Yep, exactly what I would have said if I found Ginny the way George did.
Anyway, I stop rambling and let you get back to writing. And thanks for there not being a cliffie. I would of gotten a fry pan and smacked you over the head a few times, then conjured up a headache potion so you could get back to writing.
Bye for now, Parchment and Quill
Author's Response: Thanks! I know I also speak for Sirius when I say I love this juicy, detailed feedback! I will grudgingly credit the \"Did I miss something?\" line to Sirius although I was the one that remembered that George can\'t see Harry come back in or the line wouldn\'t be as funny. :P We are definitely working on the next chapter even though we\'re also in the midst of preparing for AP\'s... Thanks again for your interesting and highly entertaining comments! Miss Radcliffe~
It's sad how he blames himself. I like the way you wrote the story/ chapter.
Keep up the good work. 10/10
~ Parchment and Quill
Ah, I think I love this chapter the most. It's got Ginny in it!!!! Yeah!!!
Anyway, I love this chapter. The whole story, and the way Teddy changed his eye colour to look like Harry's was pretty cool. It really shows how babies remember and react to things.
Keep up the good work. 10/10
~ Parchment and Quill
Author's Response: Haha, yeah we figured readers just might want to see what\'s going on with the other main character of this story. Glad you liked the scene with Teddy! Miss Radcliffe~
I hope Harry gets a little more happier soon. I'm getting slightly annoyed at his emotions or lack of different ones, but it's your story and I don't want to interfere with the story line.
Although a conversation between Ginny and Harry would be nice ....
Keep up the good work. 10/10
~ Parchment and Quill
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I understand your annoyance, believe me, but also believe me when I say it will definitely be worth the wait. As for a conversation between Harry and Ginny... you won\'t be disappointed with the upcoming chapters... The next one is in queue! Miss Radcliffe~
A Dream Come True by SunDevil05
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 49]
Summary: One of Harry's biggest dreams is coming true. A Post DH one shot.
I smiled the whole time. I really liked the story, although I did find one typo in it.
“You didn’t know anything about being a godfather,r and you’re doing an excellent job so far. Teddy adores you,” Ginny replied.
I think you can get rid of the extra r after the comma.
So, keep up the good work. 10/10 - it's written exactly the way I imagined it.
~ Parchment and Quill
The Twinge by MagEd
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 73]
Summary: Some say to follow your heart, others think it best to follow your head. And what does Ginny Weasley believe? A short history of Ginny Weasley and how she learned to follow the twinge, from her first kiss to the day when Harry almost died. *one-shot*
I loved it. I had a kind of twinge that liked to react to certain lines in your story. The best line I think would be this one.
She could kiss him again, flirt with him again, marry him, have his children, live in his house, and grow old with him. That’s what you do with people who are alive. Harry was alive.
The second best one would be this one.
The twinge in her stomach was dancing the conga.
I really liked it. It's probably my third time stumbling over this chapter. And each time I enjoy it more and more.
Keep up the good work. I hope you get more surges of boredom. Because if this is the result, I would love to have more.
10/10. I'd say one of the best final battle Ginny POV's of read.
~ Parchment and Quill
Author's Response: Thanks very much! I know there have been many stories and one-shots about Ginny and other characters\' opinions and thoughts during the final battle, and I\'m glad you thought mine one of the better ones. I think everybody has some form of the twinge in them, and it\'s good to know this could get yours into action ;) Thanks very much for the review (especially which lines you liked; I always love to read those!)
His Greatest Power by deej
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 83]
Summary: Takes place between Harry's 5th and 6th years. This story is H/G primarily, but could be categorized as AU at this point as it takes place in the summer after Harry’s 5th year. Harry has just learned of the prophecy, and is trying to come to grips with the fact that something as ordinary as love can be his greatest weapon.
Hmm, this is an interesting chapter. A little AU and Petunia is a little too knowledgeable and kind. But, hey, don't listen to me. If you want to make it less canon then fine, you do that.
Keep up the good work though. Your writing is really good. It's the content that is a little off canon, but that's OK if you want it that way.
~ Parchment and Quill
Love!?!... How was that going to help him? Was he supposed to hug Voldemort to death? Was he supposed to invite him on a camping trip so they could sit around a campfire singing “Cum-Bye-Ah” until Voldemort passed out with the emotion of it? Somehow, Harry did not see that happening.
The above line is from the last chapter. It was the best line in my opinion. *LOL*
Ok, the best line/s in this chapter would be....'
If you don’t, expect to be hexed the next time I see you. And if you don’t think I won’t just ask any of my brothers. You taught me too many spells this last year, and I am not afraid to use them on you. Got it?
This is from Ginny's letter, which was fantastic. *LOL*
Keep up the good work. It's a little AU, mostly because of Petunia, but that's ok.
~ Parchment and Quill :)
He always knew there were those that cared, like the Weasleys and Hermione, but he was getting better at letting them. - Could you explain? I don't get it.
Well, now it differently is turning AU. That's just my thought's though. The writing's good, it's just the content has slightly (or maybe a little more) disregarded Books 6 and 8.
Keep up the good work. You haven't written a bad story, just a different one to most.
~ Parchment and Quill
Author's Response: Thanks for reading P & Q. I meant it to be a little AU. It is how I wanted to see the summer go for him. Later on, I try to draw it back to Canon. I hope you keep reading.
Ginny's Battle by MarauderWannabe
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 30]
Summary: He was there. She didn’t know how it was possible, but there he was.
It is Ginny’s sixth year at Hogwarts and she is being haunted by dreams, some bringing up happy memories, others are her worst nightmares. Ginny feels helpless as her family and friends battle You-Know-Who and she is being left at school like a good little girl. Well she is tired of being useless, so why not restart Dumbledore’s Army?
Ginny’s love for Harry will drive her rebellion but what happens when a new member of the Army, threatens to tear it apart?
Set during Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows this is Ginny’s tale of love, loss, rebellion, and fear as she has her own battle with the Dark side, while she’s awake and while she dreams.
Cool. This fic has got to be one of the more rational (during deathly hallows for Ginny) fic's i've read. keep up the good work.
I really like this story. Keep it going, please.
best line:
“I’ve loved you since Dumbledore’s funeral.”
Yep, that's the best line. update soon, i'm really enjoying the story.
Finding Lily by obsessed_with_jo
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 85]
Summary: When Callie decides she wants to learn more about her birth parents, she merely expects to meet them and develop, if anything, a minimal relationship. However, when she discovers an old diary of her birth mother's, she finds an intriguing and heartbreaking tale of young love and its cost. In the process, she becomes closer to her mother than she ever could have envisioned.
Wow, this is ..... it's just ..... just ...... Wow!
So, my prediction is that her father's name is Severus Snape. That or you're going to make some big thing up and make her James' child.
I think I want to make her James' child, only because I can't comprehend Snape having one.
Anyway, back to what I was saying. This is really .... Wow .... and ..... yeah, keep up the good work.
Hope to have an update soon!
~ Parchment and Quill
Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m still writing the next chapter, but it shouldn\'t be too long before it\'s up. =]
Nice...
I feel sorry for Lily, I really do! Oh well, I can't do anything about it, your story.
Keep up the good work,
~ Parchment and Quill
Wow. This story is really good. Keep up the good work.
Update soon, I really like this story.
~ Parchment and Quill
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I\'m just fine-tuning the next chapter; I should be submitting it shortly. Thanks for your review.
