Summary: For anyone who's read LOTR's "Very Secret Diaries" or "Bridget Jones", here is Harry's diary (thus all the fragments) for what happened in year one.
LMAO! This had me literally ROFL-ing. Good job!
Summary: "Those who are faithless know the pleasures of love; it is the faithful who know love's tragedies." -Oscar Wilde
Lily didn't always love James. There was a man she loved before James, a man she loved during. See the desperate journey of Lily Evans' heart from the beginning of her Seventh year, when the person she least expected is named Head Boy.
Wonderful so far! Keep going. I personally think that a Lily/Lupin fanfic is a great idea. Lily/Snape would be great too, but yours is really good so far. Keep writing!