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Someone To Watch Over Me by MagEd
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 1663]

Summary: Past Featured Story2009 QSQ Awards Winner for Best Chaptered Canon Romance

Before the chosen one was ever born, his parents had to meet, fall in love, and defy Voldemort three times. Easier said than done. Things were never easy for Harry Potter's parents, but it gets a whole lot harder when Death Eaters kidnap Lily. This is the story of Lily and James, the trials they face, and how James finally wins Lily's heart. (pre-Deathly Hallows)

*Completed*

“I’ll always protect you.”

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 185106 Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/17/06 Updated: 01/16/09


Reviewer: Bexia Signed
Date: 12/20/10 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Overall, I really loved your story and admired your writing style.
The way you develop characters is spectacular in every way except perhaps Lily and James, coincidentally. They were a wee bit too whiny and the change happened much too fast.
You paint scenes very clearly and, as a reader and writer, I can appreciate that.
I particularly like the way you portray Sirius. Some people make him out to be flippant and carefree, but you showed a much deeper characterization of him that makes you stand out.
Keep writing. Every day. You have a gift, so don't waste it. I really loved reading this story. It is wholly unique:)

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it for the most part, even if you didn't much care for how James and Lily were written.

 

Of Christmas Past by Chaser921
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 543]

Summary: Harry, Ron, Hermione and Ginny find themselves in a Muggle hotel in Godric's Hollow on the Winter Solstice. During an enthusiastic snowball fight, Harry and Ginny step through a stone circle that transports them seventeen years into the past. This may be the only chance Harry has to spend with his parents, and it may also be what he needs to figure out his relationship with Ginny.


The warning is for later chapters.



Edit: So, this was originally strictly a Harry/Ginny fic, but Ron and Hermione kept trying to get together too, so I felt like I had to change the category. And there's a bit of Lily/James in there too, though they're already married, and I've also added a bit of Remus/Tonks. Poor Sirius is the only Singleton (though he may manage to get a girl of his own)!


Edit: This story was cannon until after Deathly Hallows came out, so I changed it to Alternate Universe, but it's still pretty close to cannon. Only a few things will end up being different when the story ends.



Edit: I've changed all of the chapter titles to the titles of Christmas songs that I felt reflected the events in the chapters best. Tell me what you think! Does it fit?

Categories: Various Pairings Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Sexual Situations

Word count: 63021 Chapters: 20 Completed: No
Published:
01/02/07 Updated: 01/15/12


Reviewer: Bexia Signed
Date: 04/14/08 Title: Chapter 11: Let There Be Peace On Earth

It is really sad and I feel like crying! It is also very genius though.

 

Dream Come True by rupertgrintlover13
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 160]

Summary: This is the story that every good Harry Potter fan wants to come true. I hope that I do it justice. Harry has Ginny. Ron has Hermione. Life is sweet…no catch. It’s the perfect dream come true.







It's all full of fluff and pixie dust!





All review get a response!

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded, Sexual Situations

Word count: 13306 Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Published:
02/19/07 Updated: 07/02/10


Reviewer: Bexia Signed
Date: 03/26/08 Title: Chapter 4: The Wrath of Mrs. Weasley

Good writing but i am not a sucker for sappy stories though it would make a very good fairy tale.

Author's Response: wouldn\'t it though? thank you :)

 

Lily's Smile by Trueillusions1
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 25]

Summary: Lily Potter has spent her whole life in the shadow of her father and brothers, but can the magic of her smile shine through all of that to make her own path in the world. Lily is a fourth-year Gryffindor and is dating a sixth-year Slytherin, Scorpius Malfoy. How will their family's react when they find out? Will their relationship help mend old feuds or will it be torn apart by them?

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 2656 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
08/29/07 Updated: 09/06/07


Reviewer: Bexia Signed
Date: 03/26/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Courage to Write

Nice plot. Will you put up another chapter please!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

 

Amphibious Lizards by Apollonious
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 117]

Summary: They are all talented, some more than others. Some play Quidditch. Others are known for their brilliance in academics. They are the Marauders and a group that has lain in the shadows up to now, called the Lady Firebrands, known for their hot tempers and rather subdued practical jokes.

Romance will bloom.

Rivalries will blossom.

The author will try to stop using so many bad plant puns.

The story of Moony, Wormtail, Padfoot, and Prongs' NEWT years will be told.

These are the Amphibious Lizards.


Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death, Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 70066 Chapters: 24 Completed: No
Published:
12/01/07 Updated: 05/25/12


Reviewer: Bexia Signed
Date: 05/01/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Family Matters

That is hilarious! I like how you did everything!!!!!

Bex

Author's Response: Thank you!

 

Corrupt Sanctity by MikePhoenixLament
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 162]

Summary: Harry Potter and his best friends return for their seventh and final year of school. The Wizarding world begins to rebuild itself after the events of the Battle of Hogwarts and the Ministry of Magic and the Order of the Phoenix work together to round up the remaining Death Eaters, still at large.


Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 42034 Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Published:
12/07/07 Updated: 04/27/08


Reviewer: Bexia Signed
Date: 04/28/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - The Talented Mr Henderson

Whoa! You have an amazing talent. Keep it up!!!!!

Author's Response: I wouldnt call it 'amazing' or a 'talent', but thanks all the same :)

 

Great Expectations by Cassandras Cross
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 505]

Summary: A weekend trip to the mysterious Rose Cottage leads to Ginny's second pregnancy and Hermione's first. The Potters and Weasleys take on “The Next Great Adventure” as they anticipate the births of Albus Potter and Rose Weasley.

NOW COMPLETE!


Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 107864 Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/13/08 Updated: 07/25/08


Reviewer: Bexia Signed
Date: 04/06/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Pregnant Pause

I really have enjoyed this story. I love romance stories!

Author's Response: I\'m very glad you\'re enjoying it. There\'s plenty more romance to come.

 

The Light of His Life by The Scribbler
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 18]

Summary: The Marauders seventh year at Hogwarts is about to begin and everyone is excited, but for James, something—or rather someone—weighs heavily on his mind. All summer he had worked to change into a better person… all for Lily Evans. The only question now is if she’ll give him the second chance he needs to change her mind.

The sequel to The Beginning and Unexpected Hope.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 3708 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/27/08 Updated: 02/12/08


Reviewer: Bexia Signed
Date: 04/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love your writing. Stick to your quirky cool style!

Author's Response: Ooh, quirky! Thanks for your review! I definitely won\'t be changing my style anytime soon now that you\'ve mentioned it.

 

Summary: Sirius has been best friends with Bree since their first year. And when he feels as though she means a little more than that, he does all he can to deny it.

That is, until certain events unfold which make denial impossible.

Now, he not only has to worry about getting the girl, but getting the girl to see he is more than an inconsiderate prat, and still worth having as a friend.

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations, Substance Abuse

Word count: 3051 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
02/02/08 Updated: 04/06/08


Reviewer: Bexia Signed
Date: 04/08/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Because Firewhiskey makes all decisions bad, and all situations awkward

It is like super interesting!!

Author's Response: thanks.

 

Of Sisters, Socks, and Sorrow by FenrirG
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 25]

Summary: Albus Dumbledore really did see socks when he looked into the Mirror of Erised. And this is the reason why.

Categories: Historical Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1338 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/22/08 Updated: 03/29/08


Reviewer: Bexia Signed
Date: 04/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Of Sisters, Socks, and Sorrow

That is really sweet!

 

Summary: The third war looms. As Harry's two eldest children start Hogwarts for the very first time, chilling Death Eater threats are sent to Headmistress McGonagall, and unknowingly, the Potter children stumble into a terrifying set of events which could mean that everything Harry worked for in the last war is erased in a matter of minutes...

Rewritten from the original to incorporate various Deathly Hallows spoilers, this story has been updated to include more plot twists and cliff hangers than ever before.

This is for the Xtreme Makeover Fanfic Edition Challenge by apollo13 of Slytherin House.

Categories: XTreme Makeover Challenge Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded, Character Death, Violence

Word count: 5070 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
05/19/08 Updated: 06/20/08


Reviewer: Bexia Signed
Date: 05/20/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Offer

It has great potential. A very interesting first chapter!!!

Bex

Author's Response: Thank you, my only and fantastic reviewer! :D

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