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Summary: Past Featured StoryHarry is getting ready to fight. With trials along the way, Harry will have to make Voldemort mortal before the final battle. Many ships going on in here...


Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 32385 Chapters: 25 Completed: No
Published:
09/13/05 Updated: 02/02/07


Reviewer: hermione-freak Signed
Date: 03/23/08 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Transfiguration

Made no sense to the progress of the story. Also, McGonagall's statement to Hermione's achievements was perplexing.

 
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Date: 03/23/08 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Christmas

Love the gift Harry gave Ginny. Let's hope that Lupin does know where the locket is.

 
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Date: 03/23/08 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - The Locket

Hmmm, wonder what happens now? 'Tis getting interesting again.

 
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Date: 03/23/08 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - The Vault

'Twas okay, although the last paragraph does not fit in that well with the rest of the chapter.

 
Reviewer: hermione-freak Signed
Date: 03/23/08 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Potions

OK, it has tipped to the boring side of the scale again. At least there are no spelling or grammatical mistakes in the past few chapters (including this one).

 
Reviewer: hermione-freak Signed
Date: 03/23/08 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Motivation

Well, at least we sort of know where the cup is.

 
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Date: 03/23/08 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - With a little help from Dobby

Turning interesting again. Watchout for typos and spelling mistakes.

 
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Date: 03/23/08 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Stonehenge

Okay, getting interesting again. Watch for typos.

 
Reviewer: hermione-freak Signed
Date: 03/23/08 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

'Twas okay, hopefully the locket is at the end of this journey.

 
Reviewer: hermione-freak Signed
Date: 03/21/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One The Farewell

Not great, but pretty good. Hopefully it'll draw me into the story later on. Good Luck!!

 
Reviewer: hermione-freak Signed
Date: 03/21/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two - The Burrow

It was okay, you should try to make your chapters longer and more indepth.

 
Reviewer: hermione-freak Signed
Date: 03/23/08 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Nice, they have destroyed one of the last remaing Horcruxes.

 
Reviewer: hermione-freak Signed
Date: 03/21/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three - The Wedding

Nice plot. The wedding could stand to be a bit more magical though.

 
Reviewer: hermione-freak Signed
Date: 03/23/08 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

'Twas okay, 'tis getting boring again.

 
Reviewer: hermione-freak Signed
Date: 03/21/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four - Murder at the Ministry

OK, did you notice the specific mention of the ninth floor by THE DAILY PROPHET and the statement by Mr. Weasley about where Sirius' stuff went? Ler's hope this coincedence leads to something.

 
Reviewer: hermione-freak Signed
Date: 03/21/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five - Reunited

Again, it was okay. The plot could use a little work. Also, look out for spelling mistakes and typos.

 
Reviewer: hermione-freak Signed
Date: 03/21/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six - Dumbledore's Return

Again, you need to work on fixing typos and spelling mistakes. Also fix the grammatical errors. The chapters still need to be longer and more indepth.

 
Reviewer: hermione-freak Signed
Date: 03/23/08 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Bet that a battle is coming, I hope that it is a good one. Keep watching out for those typos.

 
Reviewer: hermione-freak Signed
Date: 03/22/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven - Diagon Alley

Keep working on correcting typos and grammatical errors.

 
Reviewer: hermione-freak Signed
Date: 03/22/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - The Order of the Phoenix

Nixe twist with Dumbledore telling the Order aboit the Horcuxes. It is getting a bit better. (I know you may think that I am really harsh, but trust me, these thungs that I am pointing out will only make you a better writer.)

 
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