Made no sense to the progress of the story. Also, McGonagall's statement to Hermione's achievements was perplexing.
Love the gift Harry gave Ginny. Let's hope that Lupin does know where the locket is.
Hmmm, wonder what happens now? 'Tis getting interesting again.
'Twas okay, although the last paragraph does not fit in that well with the rest of the chapter.
OK, it has tipped to the boring side of the scale again. At least there are no spelling or grammatical mistakes in the past few chapters (including this one).
Well, at least we sort of know where the cup is.
Turning interesting again. Watchout for typos and spelling mistakes.
Okay, getting interesting again. Watch for typos.
'Twas okay, hopefully the locket is at the end of this journey.
Not great, but pretty good. Hopefully it'll draw me into the story later on. Good Luck!!
It was okay, you should try to make your chapters longer and more indepth.
Nice, they have destroyed one of the last remaing Horcruxes.
Nice plot. The wedding could stand to be a bit more magical though.
'Twas okay, 'tis getting boring again.
OK, did you notice the specific mention of the ninth floor by THE DAILY PROPHET and the statement by Mr. Weasley about where Sirius' stuff went? Ler's hope this coincedence leads to something.
Again, it was okay. The plot could use a little work. Also, look out for spelling mistakes and typos.
Again, you need to work on fixing typos and spelling mistakes. Also fix the grammatical errors. The chapters still need to be longer and more indepth.
Bet that a battle is coming, I hope that it is a good one. Keep watching out for those typos.
Keep working on correcting typos and grammatical errors.
Nixe twist with Dumbledore telling the Order aboit the Horcuxes. It is getting a bit better. (I know you may think that I am really harsh, but trust me, these thungs that I am pointing out will only make you a better writer.)