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Hi, I live in Southern California, I'm 14 yrs. old, and I'm in 10th grade. I'm in color guard at my high school(just got chosen to be co-captain for my sophomore year), but I used to be in gymnastics and wish I still could be. I love reading, I'm a bookworm and always have been, always will be. I love fantasy, and my favorite series is Harry Potter, of course! I love reading fan fics- especially romance, my favorite ships being R/Hr, H/G, and J/L. I also like reading Hr/D and D/G, but I don't think they're very plausible.

I'm currently in the process of writing my own fic, about the child of Ginny and Harry (don't worry, they're married; it's just gross otherwise), but i'm going to wait until I have at least two chapters completed before i start posting them.
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Summary: Past Featured Story

Seventh grader Alexandra Quick returns to Charmbridge Academy. This year she faces bullies from another wizarding school, a secret Dark Arts club, and the machinations of her father, but her greatest trial yet awaits her in the dangerous Lands Below.

This is the second book in the Alexandra Quick series.



Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Mild Profanity, Violence

Word count: 235074 Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/26/08 Updated: 06/03/09


Reviewer: crystalphoenix Signed
Date: 12/29/08 Title: Chapter 6: The Mors Mortis Society

Yay! You updated!
Hmm... So she decided to join MMS. I'm not sure that's the wisest decision, especially considering they want their members to sign in blood. I bet the scroll has some sort of hex on it. And what's Maximilian King doing there? I would have thought they'd only invite people who're actually from Charmbridge. Unless the society has branches at the other schools too?

 
Reviewer: crystalphoenix Signed
Date: 12/08/08 Title: Chapter 3: Stormcrows

This chapter was really good. I'm not surprised Darla got showed up like that- poor girl. So what exactly is the MASE program? Is it like an exchange program? What is Blacksberg, like some kind of military academy? They sound so rigid and robot-like (until they start talking). I think Alexandra should choose PME as her elective; wasn't she rather good at it last year?

 
Reviewer: crystalphoenix Signed
Date: 03/30/09 Title: Chapter 22: Thirteen

Not a whole lot of action, but I still liked this chapter. Winged horses? Hey, I'd love that! I really hope she finds some way to get to go.

 
Reviewer: crystalphoenix Signed
Date: 12/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Mall

Yay! I was so happy to see the first chapter of another Alexandra Quick story! Haha, that's so typical Alexandra- getting grounded during summer break. What was Ms. Grimm doing in the mall? Was she there to talk to Alexandra about her earlier accidental use of magic? If so, how did she know to find her at the mall? At any rate, she had very good timing- although surely it would have been somewhat better for her just to show up herself, rather than using magic to stop the boys. Shouldn't she be more worried about using magic in front of Muggles?

 
Reviewer: crystalphoenix Signed
Date: 03/19/09 Title: Chapter 19: Dangerous Hearts

hahaha! I can't believe David actually went along with it! And I can't believe she actually kissed him! She's really trying to get on Max's nerves, isn't she? We haven't really heard much about the MMS lately, have we? But I'm sure they're not actually subdued- they're probably just biding their time. I wonder if Alex's plan is affecting Darla more than Angelique? Well, I can't wait to find out!

 

Summary: Fred Weasley woke in a strange bedroom in a strange house and didn’t know where he was. All he knew was he needed to get home.

But how do you get home when you have no idea where you are, you have no wand, and you can’t Apparate?

Follow Fred on his quest to get home for Christmas no matter what obstacle he faced, even the biggest obstacle of all…

He was dead.


I am mudbloodproud of Hufflepuff and this is my entry for the Winter Snows challenge, prompt one, Home for Christmas

1st Place Winner in the Home for Christmas Category

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 6341 Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/27/08 Updated: 12/24/08


Reviewer: crystalphoenix Signed
Date: 12/24/08 Title: Chapter 3: One Last Christmas Prank

Awww, that's so sad... and sweet. Poor Fred!

 

I'm Only Me When I'm With You by paperrose
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 61]

Summary: The war has been over for four years and everyone is moving on -- except for one. Nobody has heard from Harry Potter since he left after his defeat of Lord Voldemort. But now, in the year 2002, new threats against his life, a wedding between old friends, as well as a secret connection between his past and present will draw Harry out of his self-imposed exile and towards an ending that he long ago gave up upon. It is a journey about love, life, heartbreak, and the long road taken to get back home.

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Mild Profanity, Violence

Word count: 24168 Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Published:
11/29/08 Updated: 08/10/09


Reviewer: crystalphoenix Signed
Date: 12/29/08 Title: Chapter 3: The Past Comes Back to Hurt You

interesting

 

An Unexpected Twist of Fate by bellaoc
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 6]

Summary: Lily and James Potter knew that their unborn son was marked by a dangerous prophecy. They thought they had prepared for everything. But when their unborn son turns out to be a girl, their world suddenly spins back into their control. Follow along as the Potter's daughter Haven goes off to Hogwarts without the burden of a prophecy.

Categories: Alternate Universe Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 957 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
12/27/08 Updated: 12/27/08


Reviewer: crystalphoenix Signed
Date: 12/29/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue - Safe Haven

aww, how sweet

Author's Response: Thanks! The next few chapters will be Haven when she's a teenager, so keep reading please! :-D

 

Turning the Page by Sly Severus
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 21]

Summary: Andromeda Tonks has lost nearly everything. Now is she left to raise a child alone. Overwhelmed with grief and fear, she finds one person to turn to in the chaos.

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations

Word count: 10131 Chapters: 8 Completed: No
Published:
12/28/08 Updated: 01/13/09


Reviewer: crystalphoenix Signed
Date: 01/10/09 Title: Chapter 6: A Promise

hmm... this is a very original take on things, and i like that. i also like the way you portray the characters.

Author's Response: Thank you!

 

Happy Birthday, Professor Snape by AlwaysSS
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 7]

Summary: Just a short one-shot to celebrate the Potions master's birthday. Snape is caught off guard by a bit of unexpected gratitude.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 1229 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/06/09 Updated: 01/07/09


Reviewer: crystalphoenix Signed
Date: 01/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Happy Birthday, Professor Snape

aww, that's cute!

Author's Response: Thanks!

 

The Sleeping Beauty Ward by MorganRay
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 12]

Summary: Past Featured StoryOnce upon a time, there was a young witch who fell under an old and terrible curse. At least everyone thought it was a curse because the truth was, no one knew what caused the “Sleeping Beauty Sickness.” It was a rare and strange, but it was famous enough that the Muggles even told stories about how these bewitched girls would wake, but every wizard knew the truth: no one ever woke up. They laid in a coma, aging slowly, until they died. When the child of a famous pureblood family falls ill, she is entrusted to Saint Mungo’s hospital, and instead of a stone tower, is given her own Ward, which becomes a place of scandal and horror.

MorganRay writing for Hufflepuff.


Categories: One Flew Over the Fwooper's Nest Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Violence

Word count: 8604 Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/26/09 Updated: 08/21/09


Reviewer: crystalphoenix Signed
Date: 08/22/09 Title: Chapter 3: Fairytale

i like it :)

Author's Response: Thanks

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Alexandra Quick returns to Charmbridge Academy for eighth grade, angry and in denial. Unwilling to accept the events of the previous year, she is determined to fix what went wrong, no matter what the cost. When her obsession leads her to a fateful choice, it is not only her own life that hangs in the balance, for she will uncover the secret of the Deathly Regiment!

 This is the third book in the Alexandra Quick series.



Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Mild Profanity, Violence

Word count: 204741 Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/28/10 Updated: 06/14/10


Reviewer: crystalphoenix Signed
Date: 03/26/10 Title: Chapter 8: Ghost Sickness

So why would the ghost, whether it's Max or not, attack Benjamin and the elves? If it is Max, I suppose he would be angry at elves, even though the house elves are very different from those in the Lands Below. But why Benjamin? And why wouldn't he show himself to Alexandra? Is ghost sickness something the ghosts can voluntarily inflict, or an involuntary side effect? It doesn't particularly sound involuntary, based on Angelique's remarks and Alexandra's own experiences with ghosts. Hmmm...in any case, somebody had better explain to Mordecai that Alexandra didn't curse his brother or there's going to be lots of trouble...

 
Reviewer: crystalphoenix Signed
Date: 05/21/10 Title: Chapter 24: The Lands Beyond

Oooh, she's actually going to do it! Wow. Anna's going to be really mad that Alexandra is not trusting her again, assuming she makes it back alive.

 
Reviewer: crystalphoenix Signed
Date: 04/28/10 Title: Chapter 17: A Tightly-Wound Plan

AAAAHHHH!!! I need to find out what happens! Of course Alexandra would get into trouble again; when does she not? Wait a second... that evil spirit that was attacking people at Charmbridge... is that going to be one result of Alexandra's messing with time? I bet it is. Hmmm... but will she be successful? I can't wait for the next chapter!

 
Reviewer: crystalphoenix Signed
Date: 04/30/10 Title: Chapter 1: The WODAMND Act

So Darla stunned her, took her Time Turner, did something with it, and then returned it? That's the way it looks to me, at least. I wonder what she would want to change? Especially since she can't go back too far...
How is Alexandra going to clean up this mess with her friends now? Anna's obviously under a lot of stress right now, but that doesn't necessarily mean she'll forgive Alexandra, even if her father is released from prison and her life becomes a little more normal. Poor girl. Was Alexandra's ability to trust horribly damaged when Brian broke their friendship? Or is it just a permanent personality trait, her tendency to keep her own council?

 
Reviewer: crystalphoenix Signed
Date: 03/29/10 Title: Chapter 9: Rebellion

That was an evil cliffhanger!!! Ahh!!! I want to find out what happens! Alexandra is going to get in sooo much trouble. She hasn't even been doing as much stuff as the other years, but trouble seems to keep finding her... she really is a trouble magnet. What killed Ms. Gale? Why was she down there to begin with? Will Alexandra get expelled? I can't stand the suspense...

 
Reviewer: crystalphoenix Signed
Date: 06/14/10 Title: Chapter 1: The WODAMND Act

Another book finished. Amazing job, as always. So... Max and Martin? That was a little bit of a shocker. I never got that vibe from either of them. I think I'm glad Alexandra's finally accepted that she can't bring Max back. She had to do that in order to truly mourn for him, and now she can finally begin the healing process. It sounds like the next book will be really interesting too- Alexandra's growing up, and she's going to try to find some way to let the wizarding world know about the Deathly Regiment. How does she plan to do that? It would almost be easier in the Muggle world, with TV and everything.
Aww, Alexandra's first date! How cute!
Alright, well I look forward to the next book. It's going to be hard to wait that long.

 
Reviewer: crystalphoenix Signed
Date: 05/24/10 Title: Chapter 25: Through the Veil

Yikes. That does not sound good. But she got through. Now question is, will she make it back?

 
Reviewer: crystalphoenix Signed
Date: 03/16/10 Title: Chapter 5: The Girl Who Came Back

Oh, Alexandra. She's going to try to change what happened when Max died, isn't she? Really stupid idea... but I really hope she succeeds. I liked Max. Interesting piece of gossip about Darla's older sister. Will we be hearing more about her later?

 
Reviewer: crystalphoenix Signed
Date: 05/10/10 Title: Chapter 21: Sweethearts and Traitors

Oh, Anna. Of all the things... she must have known that this will destroy all of Alexandra's trust for her. It's kind of understandable, since she probably thought it might help her father, but I still don't see why she would throw away their friendship for so slim a chance.

 
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