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Hi, I live in Southern California, I'm 14 yrs. old, and I'm in 10th grade. I'm in color guard at my high school(just got chosen to be co-captain for my sophomore year), but I used to be in gymnastics and wish I still could be. I love reading, I'm a bookworm and always have been, always will be. I love fantasy, and my favorite series is Harry Potter, of course! I love reading fan fics- especially romance, my favorite ships being R/Hr, H/G, and J/L. I also like reading Hr/D and D/G, but I don't think they're very plausible.

I'm currently in the process of writing my own fic, about the child of Ginny and Harry (don't worry, they're married; it's just gross otherwise), but i'm going to wait until I have at least two chapters completed before i start posting them.

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Prophecy's Child by Katastrophe

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Harry's Aunt and Cousin have drastically changed. He notices that Ginny is no longer a little girl, and see his two best friends finally admit thier feelings for eachother. And the summer is just beginning!!! Chapter 18 is up, 19 is in the Queue!!!
Reviewer: crystalphoenix Signed
Date: 07/21/06 Title: Chapter 19: Fighting, Healing, and Romance

I think the name Develin suits the kitten more than Gurf. I love kittens! i wish i had one just like him. i also think they could call him Dev for short, because Develin is too long for such a tiny kitten! i like the muggle wands, and i'd like one for myself! it would be awesome. of course it would be even better if there was real magic, but i think that would make the world far more complicated than it already is. update soon! i can't wait to find out what happens next.

Author's Response: I actually got the name Develin when my kitten (the one this is patterned after) was being particularly playful. I kept saying \"You got a lil devil in you.\" Devil in being the key phrase. I\'m working on the next chapter now. Hopefully it will be up soon. Thanks for reading andthe great review!!

Sweet Misery by Croyez

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: ‘I hate you’ she would say, ‘I can’t stop thinking about you, and I blame you, obviously, for that. I’m not sane anymore; I can’t breathe freely thanks to you. What have you done to me? Why am I so obsessed with what I am not to have? With someone that, clearly, doesn’t feel anything close to this…this misery?’ One-Shot
Reviewer: crystalphoenix Signed
Date: 05/25/05 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

I liked this story. The Draco/Ginny stories are always interesting to me. I also like your style of writing. I think you portrayed the characters quite well.

Curse of the Reapers by deanine

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: A different sort of alternate universe... It is a world under the thumb of an ancient emperor. Muggle society has been oppressed beyond recognition. Wizards rule over all, their only laws defined by power. This is the story of a rebellion, a family, a traitor, and the long road that leads home at last.
Reviewer: crystalphoenix Signed
Date: 08/25/08 Title: Chapter 22: She Loves Me, She Loves Me Not

Wow, your story is so involved and complex. It's really interesting & addicting. Please update! I can't wait to find out what happens next!

Closer Than I Ever Imagined by 3secondfish

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: After the Voldemort's defeat in the second war, former Death eaters are still at large. The Ministry of Magic has begun cross-training between departments to make up the shortfall of qualified wizards. Draco and Hermione are involved in a training accident and end up closer than they ever imagined.
The last chapter has been appended. I'm *done*.
Reviewer: crystalphoenix Signed
Date: 08/15/05 Title: Chapter 7: Heart Failure

Great chappie! I liked the runespoor. About the "new partner" thing- does this mean Hermione's going to be an Auror now? Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: Isn't Trippy *cute*? Who wouldn't want one? I suppose Hermione *is* an Auror, now . . . at least she's dressed for the part.


Reviewer: crystalphoenix Signed
Date: 02/23/06 Title: None

Harry did something to his hair, didn't he? Either that, or someone else did... I loved the flying lesson thing! it was funny how ron crashed into the tree when he turned around to talk to Hermione. Update soon!

Author's Response: We will choose to ignore your comment about the hair for the time being. *nudge nudge, wink wink* The scene you mentioned was fun to write. Thanks for the review! We'll update soon! (if we can get more reviews)

Light of Sunrise by rivers of gold

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Many questions remain unanswered about Lily and James. Was James always an arrogant bully? Did Lily really hate James, or was there something more behind her angry reply at the lake? And whoever said Lily was a bossy bookworm? Join the marauders and their friends as they go through Hogwarts, and experience pain and joy, tears and laughter...as they realize that no matter how dark the night may get, the Light of Sunrise will always follow.
Reviewer: crystalphoenix Signed
Date: 05/14/07 Title: Chapter 11: Clouded

Yay! I just checked my email today for the first time in a couple weeks, and there was a notice that you finally updated! iwas so happy! i'm curious as to why Lily reacted so strongly to Lupin's revelation. she didn't grow up in the wizarding world, so she wouldn't have all their prejudices as ingrained as, say, James. why was her initial reaction so violently terrified? and what's happening with Dani? i want to find out! finally, the inevitable part of a review: please update soon!

Author's Response: Yup, I finally chased away the dreaded Writer\'s Block! Good questions. About Lily\'s irrational fear:

I am a Muggle too. *sigh* And I\'ve known about werewolves for a while. Some magical creatures are very publicized in the Muggle world. So Lily has some vague ideas about werewolves, but of course she never thought they were real. She might not even have realized that they existed in the Wizarding world, or if she did, she didn\'t relate to it...she still just thought of them as a fairytale monster. So when Remus told her that he was a werewolf, it was a tremendous shock. And it was kinda dark and creepy in that closet...so she freaked out.

But like you said, the prejudice isn\'t ingrained. So I doubt she\'ll stay terrified...you\'ll see... :)

Dani...haha, you\'ll find out. And I\'ll try to update about once a month, but maybe more often--it depends on how hectic my life is at any given time. I\'m so happy you reviewed...thank you! :D

Reviewer: crystalphoenix Signed
Date: 02/21/06 Title: Chapter 2: Bright Horizons

I just saw your story today for the first time and read both chapters. I think they're absolutely awesome! I love your portrayal of the characters, and I especially love the flying horses. This fanfic is different from most of the others i've read so far- i love your style of writing! Keep up the amazing work!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, crystalphoenix! I love horses, too, which is why I decided that when I finally wrote a fanfic, it would have horses in it. But flying horses are even cooler!~rivers of gold :)

Reviewer: crystalphoenix Signed
Date: 06/28/06 Title: Chapter 9: Beware The Glare

Hey! Sorry i haven't reviewed the last chappies, i hadn't been on mnff for a long time- finals, trips, camp, and loads of other excuses. i'm glad to see you weren't slacking off! i really liked this last chapter, bit of action and everything. oh, and i like how u portray Peter, how he's pitching in and coming up with ideas. i can't wait to see the outcome of the battle! thnx for writing this fic, i love it! ttfn!

Author's Response: Hehe great to have you back. ;) You\'re the first person who agrees with me about the way Peter\'s behaving, by the way. Cheers! *raises butterbeer bottle*~rog :D

Reviewer: crystalphoenix Signed
Date: 03/24/06 Title: Chapter 5: Flashes of Time

Another wonderful chappie! You're doing an awesome job, I love the way this fic is turning out. I liked James' parents' reaction to his letter, it was great! I agree with midnight_me, i would enjoy it if there were more chapters in each year, but i think the pace you're going at is fine if you don't want to write too many chapters for the earlier years. once again, thank you for this great chappie- your story is one that makes me enjoy reading fanfics! keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you! What an awesome review! :D Okay, you've just seconded the motion-I WILL try to write more chapters in each year. I love writing this fic anyway, so that shouldn't be a problem...Thanks again!~rog :D

Halfway to Infinity by Eponine

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: He with the power to defeat the Dark Lord does not. Harry Potter is dead. Fifty years later, both Muggle and magical worlds belong to darkness. All serve Lord Voldemort. But even in the grimmest of times, idealists are born. Without a prophesy to direct them, a rebellion will rise. Follow Lottie Rowe as she finds her way into the center of the rebellion and the heart of the war.

Winner of the 2011 Best Chaptered Alternate Universe QuickSilver Quill Award!
Reviewer: crystalphoenix Signed
Date: 12/22/08 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter Thirty-Three: François’s Farewell

If it actually is Harry's diary, then i bet he put a spell on it like Riddle's - wait, Harry wouldn't make a Horcrux, would he? Of course he wouldn't. But if he had- that would change everything.

Author's Response: Hahaha--you'll just have to wait until next chapter to find out! =D There is definitely more to that diary than just an empty book, but it is helpful to think about Harry's character and how far he would actually go.

Thanks for the review!


Reviewer: crystalphoenix Signed
Date: 03/06/09 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter Thirty-Four: The Diary of Harry Potter

cool. Lottie's related to Harry. that's probably why her blood will open the diary. so how will she use the information she gains from it?

Author's Response: Good call! You'll see! Teehee!

Thanks for the review!


Harry Potter and the Heirs of Slytherin by fawkes_07

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: This is an alternate version of Book Seven. Harry reluctantly returns to Hogwarts to train with a new DADA teacher, one appointed in specifically for Harry in Dumbledore's will. As the rest of the Wizard World reacts to Dumbledore's defeat, Harry develops the skills he needs to fulfill the Prophecy--including mastery of the Kedavra curse.

Mysteries are explored along the way, particularly the "missing 24 hours" from 1981--the span of time between Hagrid taking Baby Harry from the ruins of Godric's Hollow on Halloween Night, and his arrival to hand off Baby Harry on Privet Drive the following night. The Veil Room in the Department of Mysteries is also revisited. A traitor is uncovered, and Dumbledore's wisdom comes into question. And even when all goes as planned, things are not all they seem.

Reviewer: crystalphoenix Signed
Date: 07/25/07 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35: Illuminations

i love your story; the characters and events are very well thought-out and intriguing. i liked seeing draco's side of the first encounter. i'm also glad to see that both draco and harry are growing up. i'm also very curious to find out what's going to happen. did remus take wolfsbane potion? write more, please!

Author's Response: :) I think they are both growing up--perhaps a bit too fast on both sides, but maybe that\'s the price you pay for being magical.

A Fresh Start by Hypatia

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Scorpius Malfoy was brought up in the knowledge that he came from an old pure-blood family. Hogwarts is going to teach him a great deal more. Will he be able to rise above his family’s tainted past, or will history repeat itself?

First place in the 2007 Autumn Challenge’s New Beginnings prompt.

Nominated for Best History/Mystery in the 2008 QSQs!

Canon compliant with all seven books, however, not compliant with all interviews given by JKR.
Reviewer: crystalphoenix Signed
Date: 01/01/09 Title: Chapter 18: Full Circle

Really good story. Very entertaining, and well written. Good job!

Calliope and Thalia and Their Inspiration by lucilla_pauie

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: Callie and Lia, a Gryffindor and a Slytherin. A lady and a tomboy. Two opposite souls. Two sisters. Separated at birth by circumstances they are determined to discover... and undo. Yes, after being reunited, the siblings plan to reunite their parents as well. Let’s see them accomplish House Unity, too!

“It’s our rule not to dredge up past things, remember?”

This rule is about to be broken.

~Inspired by a worldwide beloved film.

Reviewer: crystalphoenix Signed
Date: 06/13/08 Title: Chapter 9: Friction

haha, this story is so funny. i love Hermione's freaking out at the end. what is Draco planning to do when she does confront him? when will Thalia tell Calliope that they're sisters? btw, Stephenie Meyer's awesome!

Author's Response: Yeah right, thank you! LOL. Of course I won\'t tell you what Draco\'s planning, nor when Thalia will speak up.

Reviewer: crystalphoenix Signed
Date: 08/04/09 Title: Chapter 11: Family knots

Well, this has taken quite an interesting turn! I can't wait to read the next chapter. Incidentally, that quote in the last chapter, "pearls before swine" is actually quite a bit older than you mentioned. It comes from the Bible, though not with the same implication.

Author's Response: Oh, yes, how could I forget about the Bible? It's ol' Miss Parker that came to mind when I used the quote. Thanks for reading!

Hogwarts Houses Divided by Inverarity

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Past Featured Story

Teddy Lupin's first year at Hogwarts. Canon-compliant. Nominated for a 2008 QSQ for best Post-Hogwarts story.

The war is over, and all is well, they say, but the wounds remain unhealed. Bitterness divides the Houses of Hogwarts. Can the first children born since the war's end begin a new era, or will the enmities of their parents be their permanent legacy?

Reviewer: crystalphoenix Signed
Date: 08/21/08 Title: Chapter 22: Generations

Yay, you updated! You just made my day. I love how all the D.A. brought muggle stuff to Hogwarts. And Violet, buying a bike! I wonder if they'll end up doing anything with it? Keep writing!

Reviewer: crystalphoenix Signed
Date: 09/15/08 Title: Chapter 25: Goblins & Elves

Oh, bravo, Stephen! I'm impressed at his levelheadedness in such a stressful situation. I'm also very happy that he finally has the chance to "play the hero" so to speak. The Sorting Hat's going to give Chloe something, isn't it? But will it be the Sword of Gryffindor, or something else? I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: crystalphoenix Signed
Date: 09/06/08 Title: Chapter 24: Hostages

wow. I'm surprised the house elves sided w/ the goblins. did they truly switch sides? i bet, if they did, that not all of them agreed- there are probably still some that would help the students. but they might have been subdued in some other way, then, to prevent them from giving the goblins away. Does metamorphmaging work that way? would teddy really be able to change his appearance to that of a goblin? it doesn't seem like it would work between species. but this is a really interesting turn of events! i wonder what violet and dewey will do?

Author's Response:

Well, Tonks was able to give herself a pig-snout. It's not clear how far a Metamorphmagus can transform himself or herself, but since goblins aren't all that far from humans in appearance, I think it's probably feasible. (Teddy has already made himself look like Professor Flitwick, who supposedly has goblin blood.)

As for the house-elves, you'll have to read the next chapter to find out!

Reviewer: crystalphoenix Signed
Date: 09/25/08 Title: Chapter 26: Underground

What's in those bags? whatever it is, it probably could stop the aurors- the goblins had to have some sort of backup plan when they attacked Hogwarts. I'm glad Chloe is finally showing a little bit of courage and initiative. Did the Sorting Hat really misplace anyone, or did it just say it did? Or perhaps its lesson was that really, pretty much anyone can fit into any of the Houses, as long as they make the effort and they have some support from their peers.

Reviewer: crystalphoenix Signed
Date: 07/10/08 Title: Chapter 15: Slipfang

hahaha. reminds me of the DA. so where are they going to meet? *wink* i think Neville was too hard on Teddy- he did have something important to say, but he wouldn't even let Teddy speak. and he is just a first year, after all. and you'd think he'd identify with Teddy, especially if he's having trouble, because it would remind him even more of himself. ah, well. people are irrational.