Hi, I live in Southern California, I'm 14 yrs. old, and I'm in 10th grade. I'm in color guard at my high school(just got chosen to be co-captain for my sophomore year), but I used to be in gymnastics and wish I still could be. I love reading, I'm a bookworm and always have been, always will be. I love fantasy, and my favorite series is Harry Potter, of course! I love reading fan fics- especially romance, my favorite ships being R/Hr, H/G, and J/L. I also like reading Hr/D and D/G, but I don't think they're very plausible.
I'm currently in the process of writing my own fic, about the child of Ginny and Harry (don't worry, they're married; it's just gross otherwise), but i'm going to wait until I have at least two chapters completed before i start posting them.
I liked this chapter. Not much real action, but Remus got to blow off steam, and I think he probably needed it. I'm glad he and Tonks got to spend time together, too. 1 thing, though- how would they be able to just fly in? Hogwarts already had lots of wards and defensive spells, plus they probably added more after Kane's attack. Other than that, this was a really good chapter! Can't wait for the next one!:)
Wow. I really loved this story. I think you did a great job. On everything! I don't think I'd have the patience to finish a 4 chapter story, let alone one that ended up 42 chapters long! Congratulations- on finishing it, doing such an awesome job, making it so realistic and believable, and everything else! I thouroughly enjoyed reading every page!
good chapter! that part with malfoy's mom was funny, and thepart with stephanie. i love your fanfic! i can't wait to read the next chappie!
Awesome! i totally loved it! nice prank *laughs mischieviously* i can't wait for the next chappie! oh, and stephanie robins: is she going to try to put Sirius under some sort of spell, or does she actually think he'll fall for her of his own free will?
Wonderful story! I quite liked your character Melody. The scene with Voldemort could have used a little work, but the rest of the story was fantastic. I can't wait to read the sequel!
It is ambitious Lily Evans' 7th and final year at Hogwarts. She is very excited about being one step closer to becoming an Auror and thrilled about being back to school altogether.
But there is one little annoyance: the Marauders. Specificially arrogant James Potter. He has been pestering her to go out with him, but she has coldly denied his wishes. She thinks this year will be no different to the past six school years.
But life is full of mistakes...::~!~::..
"Just one minute.” Lily noticed footsteps heading in her direction. She saw a hand reach from between the screens and drop a flower onto her bedside table.
“Mr. Potter! Return to your dormitory immediately!”
“Alright, alright…” The hand disappeared.
Once Lily was sure that no one was in the wing, he lifted her head and saw what flower Potter had dropped.
Lily stuffed her head in her pillow and screamed a muffled scream that no one could hear.
On the subject of ants- I hate ants! always have, always will. DIE, ANTS!!!!! DIE, DIE, DIE!!!!!! anyhow- good chapter. and the blowing up the boys' bathroom thing- did they really do that? if so, is Peters' memory just really bad, or what? on to next chappie!
Author's Response: They didn't blow it up into a million pieces, they just let off a small explosion in it. A few door fell off and there was flooding for a week. Other than that, nothing really happened. *wink*
OK, I'm doing a review for the past few chappies, because I hadn't checked your story in a while, and missed about 8 chapters. Your story is awesome. It's sad with everyone dying, but I do realize that it could be crucial to the plot, and that life isn't all happy. I was so sad when Remus died, though! One thing I did like was Harry and Ginny's visit to Godric's Hollow. I really liked that quote of James'- and the fact that Harry whispered it to Ginny later. I can't wait to read the next part!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I loved all the feedback I got when Lupin died. Apart from all the death threats, (j/k) I think people liked it in terms of being something sad. Thank you very much!!! (I repeat things). ;)
I like your fan fic a lot, so far. Good idea to have the Triwizard again. I'm interested to see what challenges you will have. I'm assuming you're not going to repeat the same challenges, are you? But anyhow, I like your stories, and I can't wait to read more!
You are such an awesome writer! this chapter was so funny- I was laughing almost the entire time! it was really amusing how Draco and Hermione were competing with each other. I thought it was really funny how Draco bought Simone the roses, and she was trying to tell him she was allergic, and he wouldn't listen. Sorry my review's a bit late- I haven't been on Mugglenet for awhile and only just read this chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words. I'm happy that you found this chapter funny and it made you laugh out. The whole idea was to have Draco and Hermione sort of ‘compete’ with each other in not-so-subtle ways just to give the readers a hint about how they feel. I did like the roses bit too! Thought it would be funny if Draco’s attempt at outdoing Viktor failed miserably. =D Don’t worry about the late review! Better late than never, really… ;)
Great story! Your plot is very interesting and well executed. I have one comment- when they were fighting the Death Eaters, a chapter or so ago, it mentions that Lily had left her own wand in the library. But then you mention her dueling Voldemort. I expect she probably just picked up some Death Eater's wand, but I don't think she would have been able to stand her ground before Voldemort for that period of time, because in the books it mentions that,"you will never get such good results with another wizard's wand." How, then, was she able to duel with Voldemort so well?
Wonderful! I loved it. I liked the "Water Lily" thing. And I like Anne. I think that's what I'm like, kind of. Except I'm not Korean, and I don't look like her. But, other than that...
Author's Response: lol I'm glad you like her!
Ooooo...Kaaayyyy... extremely confusing and scary chapter! What is going on? Are they all dreaming, or WHAT?! Please update soon,... you can't just give us a cliffie like that, then not update soon! I like the story, but that last chapter left me extremely confused. you better explain it soon! lol
Author's Response: YAY! I have succeeded! Yes- there's supposed to be ambiguity. This is only the first part after all. Things will become clearer soon!
Good chapter! i thought McGonnagal was slightly OOC, but i liked it. she must have really good self-control to not react to what was going on in the detention!lol. anyway, udate soon, i can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Fair enough. I can see how you might have thought she was OOC. But my impression of McGonagall is that she can often surprise us. Anyway, glad you liked it!
I love it! Your ideas are so original- how do you come up with them? I could read your stories for days on end! lol. i look forward to reading the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! My ideas - a lot of help from my awesome beta wvchemteach. I would say he's more of a collaborator for the amount of input he gives me. I'm thrilled you're enjoying it!
I just wanted to say, I'm from Anaheim and I think it's so cool you made characters from here! Anyhow, I really liked it , and I like the idea of the game with teams.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! We're glad you liked it! The game with the teams was Allison's idea(person on this account number 2, I'm obviously number 1) so I give her props for that! lol. You're from Anaheim? That's so cool! Do you go to Disneyland often? We're both from California but don't live in Anahaim. lol. Wish we did, though. Disneyland was one of the reasons we placed their home town in Anaheim. Thanks for reviewing and hope you like the next chapter!
I thought that was really good. (How on Earth did Harry get such a good grade for potions?I guess he needs it to be an Auror, though.) I like the exchange students idea. And I just sent in a review for the 1st chapter, I only read it today. (I haven't been reading fan fics much until now.)
Author's Response: lol. Yeah, we were struggling with that idea for a while. We finally decided to give him the O he needs to get into the potions class and will explain the reason in l8r chapters. lol. Thanks for reviewing, once again! Next chapter should be up within about a week or less... it's getting sent in today or tomorrow so it sort of depends on how fast the mods read it!
i absolutely love it!!!! it was fantastic, marvelous, wonderful, dazzling,... what other adjectives can i use?:) it was great, and i can't wait for the next "season." i thought it was kind of funny that he was about to tell Ginny how he felt, and then she interrupts with this whole planned speech of hers, all the while hoping he'll disagree, and he's so bewildered with it he just goes along with it. but you'll make Harry tell her eventually, won't you? hope it's soon! update asap, pretty please!!!
I love your story! It is so creative. But I hate cliffies!!!!! You are so evil to break it off like that and leave us with so many questions!:) jk,jk. but please update soon! I can't wait to find out what happens!!!
Author's Response: i hate them too and yet i am compelled to use them...i guess that does make me evil...lol....i cant wait for you to find out what happens too!
Whole story: I loved it! I think you're a really good author, and I like the way you portray all the characters. This story is probably one of the best fan fics I've ever read. When will Ginny finally realize that Harry likes her and dump Dean? For someone so perceptive, she can be rather clueless sometimes...not that I'm criticizing you. Just a little observation. Anyhow, update soon! I absolutely can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Yay!! thanks so much....Im so glad you liked it!!!....I think they are both a little clueless....sometimes i think when you want something really bad you blind yourself to anything that might show that you might get it and you convince yourself that it is never going to happen and never could happen so you cant get hurt or dissapointed......we will just have to see how long it takes for them to see the light......
Pretty good. I liked that portrayal of Sirius. Just two things- it was a bit brief, and I thought it was... I don't know, rather immature. But it was good!
Author's Response: The reason it is brief is because it's a short story. This entire thing is going to be a series of separate stories written by members. I just made it humorous as a way to lighten the mood. It is located in Humor Fics, just so you know. ~S.L.