Summary: Harry is home, Sirius is dead and Harry has a long summer ahead to worry about the prophecy. He meets a stranger, learns more about his parents and develops a plan to overcome Voldemort. This is a complete novel-length story. I think you'll find this a gripping tale to the very end. Reviewers on other sites have given this a 10 out of ten.
Very good. Love your work. I think you mentioned you had other stories you'd pulled off different sites. Are they posted any place else? Would love to read more of your work.
Author's Response: Cannot upload on this site. All stories are located at fanfiction.net under Natasha Vloyski.
Summary: This is my take on the Marriage challenge, at WIKTT. This takes place on Hermione and Severus' wedding night. This is a one shot, but part of a series of three.
I Like that one very good
Summary: This is a continuation of the first story with the same name.
Great addition to the first story, love more detal to their lives
Summary: Harry has just lost Sirius, runs from the Dursleys into the wizarding world where he experiences people and creatures he's never known before. Do they help him to prepare to meet Voldemort? Read and see. Follows Cannon, No Slash. The first in the trilogy. Reviewers have given this a ten out of ten.
Very good, hope they will call eachother friend someday. LOve storied where Snape and Harry have to work together.
Summary: This story starts during the summer between Harry's fifth and sixth year. It follows his journey from the skinny, guilt-ridden Boy Who Lived to the Man Who Would Defeat Voldemort. Some H/G and R/Hr romance. Chapter 50 is up!!!! STORY COMPLETE!!! Written pre-HBP. This story no longer follows cannon.
Really have enjoyed this so much so far, Hate to be getting so close to the end.
Summary: The war is on and the only person with the power to stop Voldemort's second reign of terror is sulking alone in a cold, dark room. The unexpected arrival of an old school chum in Privet Drive jolts him to action, however, as Harry begins his most exciting year at Hogwarts. Year 6 will include a visit to the ancient village of Godric's Hollow; a first hand account of the 1000 year old quarrel that ripped Hogwarts apart; a Fred and George-style farewell to a certain ex-Minister of Magic; and the discovery of the Half-Blood Prince, a mysterious figure who holds the key to winning the war...
(And, as J.K. says, what's life without a little romance?)
I wouldn't be so sure that you couldn't do a better job than JK Rowling. I found your story exceiting and engaing. Very visual and colorful. The characters are interesting and filled out very nicely. I am a Snape fan so felt his absence very much. Other than that small detail I congratulate you on a very fine story. It was a nice lonf week spent reading it. I enjoy long stories.
Summary: Story follows Band of Gypsies. Something happens to Dumbledore and Harry is called on to help. Caught up in the dark mysteries of Knockturn Alley he finds himself captured along with Snape, held in the grasp of Voldemort's right-hand man; someone neither ever thought of meeting. Follows cannon, no slash. Written for general audiences.
HOw can this be finished. Nothing has been solved. It was going well and now its just stopped like chopping someones head off. I hope that you will continue. This was an amazing work and I really enjoyed it.
Summary: At the start of Harry’s sixth year, the wizarding world is falling further under Voldemort’s evil control. Fudge has declared a draconian State of Emergency, but he is little more than Lucius Malfoy’s corrupt puppet. But when Malfoy seeks to impose Voldemort’s racist Pureblood ideology upon Hogwarts - the last bastion of the Light - the students rise up in revolt.
The spirits of the great Witches and Wizards of the Light, fearful for the future of the Wizarding world, send Harry and his friends a powerful ally, to help them in the desperate struggle to save Hogwarts and the wizarding world from impending darkness.
An epic struggle of Good against political corruption, racism, elitist ideology ... and Ultimate Evil. The roller-coaster plot twists and turns into the past and future – and Nightmare Realities, where the terrible consequences of failing to stop Voldemort are chillingly revealed.
A story to fascinate the intelligent reader ... philosophy, politics, time-travel, romance, humour ... and a few very cunning ideas.
Very Good, I enjoyed the new character. I seldom like new Characters but this one worked so well. It's taken me a good week to read this and I am sad t leave a "good friend" behind. Great job.!!! Would have loved to read how the new Snape was though.
Summary: During a Seventh Year Potions class, Severus Snape begins thinking on and making plans for his future.
Great story! hate to see it end. I enjoyed every bit of it.
Summary: Eight years after Hogwarts, Hermione's last chance to open up her heart
PLS R&R, that means Read and Review...Pulease....flutter flutter....pout..
Visually interesting, I'm not a fan of RW/HG but it's a good story. Well Written.
Summary: Harry, Ron and Hermione survived the Final Battle with Voldemort and now work for the Ministry of Magic. Emotionally scarred, they are living their lives to the best of their abilities. Now, a new threat rears its ugly head. Lord Malfoy. This time they have a new friend to help in the battle between good and evil. Just like JKR, I start light and end up dark... lots of humor, intrigue and romance in between. This is a delightful romp through the Potterverse. Enjoy the ride! (Written Pre HBP)
I enjoyed this very much. I don't think I've ever liked a "mary Sue", story before. You created a very likeable and interesting character. I'd like to see you go forward. There was too much left undone. What happened to Draco. Do Jessica and Harry marry. What does Ron do when he finds our Hermione is pregnant. What will Jessica do now and how will she chose her next wand and what is her patronus? Just a few things I would like to see explored. Aslo Sverus Snape deserves a life and some congratulations for his years of scarifice. Thanks for the greta entertainment the last few days.
Author's Response: ewww...you REALLY read my story! Whee, Whoopee and Wow. From your questions, I find that you truly understood some of the \'sequel\' seeds I planted. Yes, I had planned on a sequel and have written a few chapters, but fell into a plot hole. Then my puter gave out and my new one with the all exaulted \'Vista\' doesn\'t come with \'Word\'...so I can\'t write at the moment. I really want to revisit this story, because I think I have learned much through reading more. I also want to explore Snape (although AU at this point...well it all is with DD still alive) Perhaps some day soon. I thank you so very much for such an insightful review. You give me hope that I can continue.
Summary: He spent two and a half years in the wrong place, but now he's out thanks to her. When they meet again, they are both ready for change. One-shot, AU due to a small detail that doesn't fit with HBP. Please R&R!
very good, enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Thank you! I wrote this so long ago... I\'d almost forgotten about it! I\'m glad to know that people are still enjoying it!
Summary: Severus Snape finds himself a resident of Azkaban for his deeds and misdeeds during Voldemort's reign. A broken man, he is struggling merely to stay alive when one of the guards takes an interest in him. This is an interest that could get her into serious trouble as she tries to save the life of a man who may not want to be saved.
And I must credit the wonderful Poultrygeist for the title and Anne for her sterling beta work! Thank 'ee. :-)
Loved this its a wonderful story. Is there a sequal?
Summary: In the wake of the Final Battle, the Order has opened Headquarters to house its youngest members during a summer of Ministry-sponsored social events. With Snape as a chaperone, and engaged to another woman, the advent of a busy Hermione, determined to see her friends in love-matches, can only be a recipe for disaster.
Wonderful amazing story, worth all four days it took for me to read it. I could hardely make myself go to bed last night even though the time chnage made it very late. Awesome Job! Jeannie
Very touching scene in the last paragraph. This is so far a wonderful escape from real life. Well done.
Summary: St Mungo’s is a very busy place. And mistakes do happen. Try explaining that to Severus and Hermione.
very funny, I needed that laugh, Great job !!!!!
Summary: This is an alternate version of Book Seven. Harry reluctantly returns to Hogwarts to train with a new DADA teacher, one appointed in specifically for Harry in Dumbledore's will. As the rest of the Wizard World reacts to Dumbledore's defeat, Harry develops the skills he needs to fulfill the Prophecy--including mastery of the Kedavra curse.
Mysteries are explored along the way, particularly the "missing 24 hours" from 1981--the span of time between Hagrid taking Baby Harry from the ruins of Godric's Hollow on Halloween Night, and his arrival to hand off Baby Harry on Privet Drive the following night. The Veil Room in the Department of Mysteries is also revisited. A traitor is uncovered, and Dumbledore's wisdom comes into question. And even when all goes as planned, things are not all they seem.
Wow what a ride. I enjoyed it all very much. You need to be writing professionally. Very complicated well thought out story. I wanted more at the end with Snape and Tura. I did pick up that he was her Angel when she mentioned she'd taken his job as DADA teacher. Absolutely loved the Snape Harry scenes. Very enjoyable way to spend many hours over the last two weeks.
Author's Response: Thanks! You know, MNFF has never let me post the last part of Chapter 43--apparently there's some incorrect HTML command that I just can't find. So what you read is actually incomplete. But only that one part is missing...
This last scene with the Phoenix is brilliant. It gave me the chills. Awesome.
Author's Response: *grin* Cool! Glad you liked it!
excellent story, original twists and turns. Would have liked to have known that Neville was okay after the "mind probe" and I would have like to have seen a scene with him and his parents reuniting.
Author's Response: Yeah, I can see that. I'm not sure how I could write the reunion without it being schlockier than how one might imagine it. Nevillle's so understated, compared to Harry, it might almost be embarassing to see him in such an intense moment.
Summary: "I'm Harry. Harry Potter," the man smiled as he reached out a welcoming hand, "and who are you?" "Brian. Brian Harrison," the boy lied. He could feel the sadness rise in him as they shook hands, as if meeting for the first time.
ewww, but well written. Good job