I really love your story so far! It's enjoyable to see a different side to the James/Lily story. It's always made out to be really funny whereas you put some reality into it...there truly wasa war going on and you own up to that in your story. Ud SOON!
I can't believe you just cliffhangered!! Ah!!
Please update soon-veryyyyy good story you have here!
“It’s our rule not to dredge up past things, remember?”This rule is about to be broken.
~Inspired by a worldwide beloved film.
I really enjoyed this!
I hope you ud soon.
I wonder when they'll figure out they're blood related...hopefully soon!
Ah ha! So a Potter is involved! It's possible, then, that Tzippora is related to Harry...or not. Oh the mystery!
This just keeps getting more interesting!
I have no idea if you know about this and it would be extremely hard to bring it into a story...but will you bring in shomer negiah? My friends and I are both curious about that. I'm also nervous for the poor girl...when she finds out what's going on in vienna, she'll be devastated! I really can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: I agree it would be pretty hard to bring shomer negiah into this story, especially because Tzipporah breaks it by shaking hands with Dumbledore in chapter three (although I know it\'s disputed whether that actually counts). Still, with my plans for a romance (even a G-rated one), it would be hard to work this in. As for what\'s going to happen in Vienna, let me just say that Tzipporah\'s reactions are most definitely devastated, and even more so because of the friends she makes at Hogwarts who are all dealing with the results of WWII and/or Grindelwald\'s attacks.
Once again, interesting touch. I hope she tells her friends soon-im wondering if you'll make them hate her for it...but maybe they won't cuz they like the challah ;)
can't wiat for next ud!
amazing prologue! so nice to see a jewish witch ;)
I have been watching this fic for awhile and I really loved it-im almost sad it's over- but what an ending! It was so interesting to see Harry Potter with Jewish parts-thanks so much for writing this story! I really enjoyed it!
Extremely interesting, I love the use of the yiddish words. It sounds very accurate with what was going on at the time also. I hope you ud soon!
i do love this story!!
so far, it's truly brilliant. i did think it was a bit much to take on shomer negiah :) i definitely understand. even the rest of the laws will probably prove hard to fit into the world of harry potter but i cant wait to see how you do it!
Once again, a great chapter-specifically the sorting hat song! I really enjoyed that. The excerpt from the next chapter makes me nervous and curious...will she ever tell her friends of her Jewish background?
Rose was a Weasley. She never gave Scorpius Malfoy a second glance. They were sworn enemies, even though they’d barely even spoken to each other. But sometimes all it takes for love to blossom is a Potions lesson, a few snide remarks and a dropped book.
Two people. Two entirely different worlds that are suddenly intertwined.
I really enjoyed this last chapter!
Rose is so cute...all flustered about it :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Rose is adorable, isn\'t she?
I really think you've started out well. You gave Rose a really cute, sweet personality and you didn't make Malfoy and her have an overbearing relationship right away which I think many people do. ud soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m glad you liked my characterisation. I\'ll post the next chapter soon!
YAY!! finally..i have been waiting for that moment when they'd really get together. well done!! ud soon!
Author's Response: I\'m glad you liked it, love. And I AM updating reasonably quickly ... I think the past two chapters were within a week of each other.
Wow-the westing game is one of my favourite books! I'm so excited to see where this story goes-ud soon!
Thank you! I\'ll submit Chapter two when it comes back from the beta.\r\n\r\n
Love the username, by the way :)
it's short but a good start! im intrigued!
Author's Response: Thank You!
That is so cute!
I love the points you put in about the yishuv and all...very cool. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Glad to hear that! Thanks for all the positive feedback. I\'ve already sent the next chapter for approval.