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'Beauty and the Beast: A Tale of the Werewolf Marauder' by xromanovx

Summary: Remus Lupin is invited to James Potter and Lily Evans' long expected wedding after not having any contact with James for two years. As Remus reads the invitation, he discovers he must find a date to tag along with him to one of the most important days of his best friend's life...
Reviewer: darknessofnight Signed
Date: 05/19/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Invitation

What is the pairing here? Make that clear early on. Other than that its totally awesome!

Melt the Ice of my Heart by a_muggle_mystery

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: "I ran up the door, closed the stairs, said my pajamas and put on my prayers, turned off the bed and hopped in the light, all because you kissed me goodnight."- Anonymous...

...Winter Snows Holiday Challenge # 3: A KISS FOR THE AGES...

A fairy-tale and scenic day brewed into a cauldron of war and death. Yet this is the day that will sing her song and change her life forever.

Enter the world of two friends, soon to be lovers!!

My first fic on muggle-net! REVIEW! -- one raffish raconteuse

Reviewer: darknessofnight Signed
Date: 05/19/08 Title: Chapter 1: Melt the Ice of my Heart

it's okay . . . .

Patches of Light by annie

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: It was the week before Christmas, and Hogwarts had never been so sombre. Yet somehow, one young man still manages to find comfort and solace in the unlikeliest of places.

Written for the Winter Snows Holiday Challenge Three: A Kiss for the Ages by Annie of Gryffindor.
Reviewer: darknessofnight Signed
Date: 02/14/08 Title: Chapter 1: Patches of Light

. . . *sob* I love this fic

A Dog's Life by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years •


Mother always said he would live a dog's life, wretched and ignoble. Lying before the fire with a lovely woman running her fingers through his hair, Sirius made a sound of deep contentment. The battleaxe had been dead wrong. It was good to be Snuffles.


Reviewer: darknessofnight Signed
Date: 02/28/08 Title: Chapter 1: A Dog's Life

I realize that you are #4 on the Favorite authors list and also on the prolific authors list, but if I hadn't looked it up I never would have believed it.

Author's Response: I looked you up and agree with your profile statement. You are indeed \"a terrible critc\"! :D

A Hogwarts Survival Guide by Pussycat123

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: During her fifth year, Lily Evans decides to write a guide to life at Hogwarts, and how to survive it. She covers all aspects of life, and gives helpful advice on how to deal with certain scenarios. For example, would you know what to do if you realised there was a kleptomaniac in your Dorm? What if you lost your beloved teddy bear, Mr Muffles? And do you know how to push, without any force? Read on, and find out the best way of living and surviving at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry ...
Reviewer: darknessofnight Signed
Date: 02/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: A Hogwarts Survival Guide

This is amazing! I love it. I was cracking up as I read it!

Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m glad you liked it.

"It Unscrews The Other Way" by Pussycat123

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: The line that probably best describes the legacy that the Weasley twins left behind after their Great Escape, during Umbridge’s brief rein at Hogwarts. Their legend lasted years afterwards ... but eventually, the only permanent physical reminder was the roped off corner of one corridor, containing a small part of swamp. The mystery of its origins is merely smiled at reminiscently by teachers, and the students can do nothing but spread rumours of how it came to be. When little Janey Weasley starts life at Hogwarts, the mystery is still unsolved. On a whim, and desperate for recognition, she writes home to her father, asking how it came to be. When Ron replies with the true story, a chain of events begins that might just be the making of the next true Hogwarts mischief legend ...

**One-Shot, Post Hogwarts** Now available as AudioFiction Episode #95!

Reviewer: darknessofnight Signed
Date: 04/19/08 Title: Chapter 1: "It Unscrews The Other Way"

Great title. Good idea. Boringly written.

Author's Response: Well, I\'m sorry you felt that way.

Things Aren't Always Black and White by padfootsgirl1981

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
2009 QSQs: Runner-up: Best Romance - Other Character Story

Add together one ladies' man, one Quidditch player, one werewolf, and one soon-to-be traitor. Then, mix in one imaginative idiot, one fiery redhead, one clever Ravenclaw, and one blonde artist. Stir counterclockwise until trouble occurs, and you are dealing with one of the best-loved group of friends in Hogwarts history. Follow the story of the four Marauders and four equally troublesome girls. See them deal with their first encounters of love, sorrow, heartache… and Death Eaters. How will these future Order members cope with the ordeals that life throws at them? Will love blossom in what was once thought a highly unlikely place? What do you do when the person you care about most in the world doesn’t seem to notice you at all? Will a well-kept secret shatter the foundations of a seven-year friendship? Follow the lives of these friends through their last year at school to the dramatic final battle with Lord Voldemort two decades later.

Warnings are for later chapters, and any sexual situations are very minor.

Chapter Twenty Two: "The Snakes Strike" is in the queue. Excerpt:

Perfume filled his nostrils as Emma walked passed and Rosier’s gaze lingered on her bare, pale legs as the group headed outdoors. “Don’t you just love summer?” he inquired of Regulus, a hungry sneer lighting his face.

“This is ridiculous,” Regulus announced in a furious whisper, “we’re never going to get them alone!”

“Have faith, Black,” commanded Rosier smoothly. “Girls are well renowned for their desire for girly chats. I’m sure they’ll slip off the shackles of their chaperones soon enough.”

Reviewer: darknessofnight Signed
Date: 02/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Gathering

what is the purpose of this? you rambled way to much in the beginning. Get to the piont!

Author's Response: I\'m sorry that you didn\'t like it. I rather thought that I had got my point across, which was to introuce my characters and my story.

A Tale of Two Matchmakers: Christmas Reunion by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years •

Sequel to A Tale of Two Matchmakers

Seven years later....

Blaise fears Terry wants a divorce, Luna is hiding a secret from Wesley, and Draco is tired of idiots saying his son has pink hair! Ginny's solution? Call the curls reddish blond and invite their friends to the Malfoy mansion for Christmas.


Reviewer: darknessofnight Signed
Date: 05/19/08 Title: Chapter 1: Christmas Reunion

*smile* I've forgotten how much I love this fic. The first time I read it, I think I read it 5 times in a row because it was so good. Nice job.

Author's Response:

Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you!

Five times in a row isn't enough to thank you for making my day, but I haven't perfected my roses teleportation spell yet. :D

Just Sand and Water by kbell

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Solid stone is just sand and water, baby...

Life is like solid stone...just bits and pieces mixed with time to create something stronger...

Life in the time of the First War is just bits and pieces, mixed with time to become stronger than us...stronger than anything we could ever imagine...

The story of the Marauders, their classmates, their 7th year, and those bits and pieces, and time going on...solid stone.

...sand and water, and a million years gone by.

Warnings apply mainly to later chapters
Reviewer: darknessofnight Signed
Date: 02/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Just Sand and Water

. . . . . .wahhhhhh. That was one of the best that I have ever read.

OAF: Operation April Fools by The REAL Weasley Twins

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: For the past six years, Lily Evans has put up with James Potter's pranking. But as her seventh year commences, she decides it's time to give James a taste of his own medicine.

Chapter 7 has finally been submitted!

A tiny sneek peek:

"Oh, come on now! Lily thought. “Just kiss me already,” she said audibly. James froze at her words and she, embarrassed beyond belief that her thoughts had spilled from her mouth, sat entirely still."

Reviewer: darknessofnight Signed
Date: 02/14/08 Title: Chapter 1: A Plan is Formed

horrifying first sentence. YUCK!

The Beauty of Blood by Bewitching

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: I am Teddy Lupin. I have found and lost love. I have lived many lives. And I am surely about to die. I am Teddy Lupin. This is my story.
Reviewer: darknessofnight Signed
Date: 02/14/08 Title: Chapter 3: The Pig-Man's Papers

. . . . wow. I've never read anything about Teddy and this was a great first expirience (?), I will never be able to read one about him again!

Author's Response: Well, its nowhere near over.

The Inner Eye by Pondering

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Sybill Trelawney's Inner Eye foretells that her first day of teaching at Hogwarts will be horrible. Is it right?

Won second place in the extra credit category for the Autumn Challenge in 2007.
Reviewer: darknessofnight Signed
Date: 02/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Inner Eye

Icky 1st sentence. If the first sentence isn't good, it puts the reader off.

Author's Response: Icky review. \'Good\' is such a subjective term, couldn\'t you think of anything better than that? You\'re better off not stating your opinion as definite proof as well. Just a hint for the future. I would have been perfectly content with this review if it said \'I don\'t like the first sentence because it put me off.\' If the first sentence put you off that badly, maybe it\'s because this story isn\'t really your cup of tea. :) But thanks for the review anyway.

Dark Side of the Moon by Lioness06

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •

In fifth year, Sirius along with James and Peter managed the difficult Animagus transformation. In fifth year, Sirius played the ‘werewolf prank’ on Snape. One was an act of loyalty, brotherhood, and friendship; the other an act of betrayal, vengeance, and recklessness. This story spanning the Marauders' fifth year will deal with both these incidents, as well as Sirius’s increasing rejection of everything having to do with ‘The Noble and Most Ancient House of Black”.

Reviewer: darknessofnight Signed
Date: 02/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Garden Rebellion

good, good, good, good *singing*

Author's Response: Yay, I\'ve inspired my reader to sing :) Thanks for leaving a review

Ski-reaming at the Top of her Lungs by LilyGinnyWrites92

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: What do you get when you have a slightly clumsy Lily, a mischievous Sirius, a peeved and tired Ginny, an annoying Hermione and an unwilling to intervene Harry? The Potter family ski vacation, of course!
Reviewer: darknessofnight Signed
Date: 02/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Plane Trip

Write more, this is the best!

Must Be Love by Phoenix Rising

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: HG/SS, Harry's POV. Post-OoTP.
Harry finally resigns himself to the fact that his best friend and worst enemy were dating.

"Greasy hair," Ron squeaked, then shrank back into the common room sofa when Hermione's glare was turned on him. For a seventeen year old girl, Hermione can glare like a champion. She'll make a great mother someday, let me tell you that.

Urgh. Mini-Snapes."

Thank you so much for all the great reviews guys!

Reviewer: darknessofnight Signed
Date: 02/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This the best. I've never read something quite like this before. It's hilarious.

Author's Response: Really? Thanks!

A Question of Heroics by Brekkable

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: It is the Golden Trio's sixth year, and the newest DADA professor has arrived at Hogwart, bringing with her all the right answers AND all the right questions. Pairings are not determined as of yet. This story is AU as of the publishing of HBP.

Reviewer: darknessofnight Signed
Date: 03/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

Good story. HATE the name Brethany though. *extreme shudder* sounds weak

Author's Response: Oh, dear; no one seems to like Brethany\'s name much. Thankfully, I didn\'t name her after some dear old relative, so I\'m not offended. Thanks for the compliment on the story so far!

Reviewer: darknessofnight Signed
Date: 03/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

Good story, where's the rest of it?

Author's Response: It\'s coming! We all wait with baited breath as the next chapters are validated...