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Through the Fire by Croyez
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 250]

Summary: It all starts out with a meeting. Little do Harry and Hermione know what problems and dilemmas will surface along with their secret relationship. Hearts are shattered, prophecies are spoken, disappearances occur, dark plans are schemed, and discoveries beyond their understanding are made. Can their relationship withstand the perils it is subject to? Will their fate and worries stand in the way of true love? They can only hope not…



The air was suddenly filled with Hermione’s screams. They reverberated off the walls, echoed in the space…in Harry’s head…he felt as if he were sharing her pain, as if he were the one under the curse. He couldn’t take it. He couldn’t see her in such pain, maybe even wishing, like he had earlier, to die…for it to end…

He didn’t notice it when his hand began loosening its grip on the edge. He didn’t notice it until he began to fall to the ground, but as soon as he did, he pointed his wand at Voldemort. He felt seventeen years of suffering, seventeen years of mystery and trials…he felt hatred like he had never experienced before, pouring out of him. He felt every single thing that had happened to him on Voldemort’s account, rising to the surface, almost drowning him in a mix of emotions.

And then, he yelled, with all his might, “Avada Kedavra!”

He wished for it all to end…for it to be over…



The Last Chapter (Twenty) is up on [July/12] Thank you so much, Stephanie!


H/Hr, and Book 1-5!Hermione! will only sink when there are none loyal to them. So there.

Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 120337 Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/06/04 Updated: 08/04/05


Reviewer: king Signed
Date: 06/26/05 Title: Chapter 3: The Masked Ball

Good story. Well written. I do feel sorry for Ron but Hermione does love Harry more. Lupin's return as DADA instructor would be great. I think Hermione's parents would think Ron a better choice for Hermione than Harry but they would go along with whatever she wants. I think that Hermione gets what Hermione wants, even if it's not good for her. Nice long chapters. Keep up the good work.

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: king Signed
Date: 06/27/05 Title: None

Being Harry's girlfriend is bound to be a dangerous job. Keep writing.

Author's Response: Of course! But love can prevail over anything. Thanks for reviewing!

 

Realizing by koolaid
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 373]

Summary: When they finally realize that they love each other, everything will change. What will happen? Find out as the infamous trio enters their 6th year at Hogwarts.

Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations, Character Death

Word count: 30678 Chapters: 16 Completed: No
Published:
01/23/05 Updated: 06/24/06


Reviewer: king Signed
Date: 02/28/06 Title: Chapter 7: Hermione's Secret

Good chapter, keep it up! I can see you're not in the "Draco is really a good guy club". He raped Hermione and she has to see him everyday at school. Nasty! I like how you have Harry and Hermione bickering and then making up like newly weds.

 
Reviewer: king Signed
Date: 07/11/05 Title: Chapter 5: Fidus Amor

Good Story. I'm glad that Ron took the news about Harry and Hermione so easily. What is Lord Voldemort up to in the desert? Is he in Egypt? And why does he care about Harry's love life? I can't wait to read chapter 6.

 

A Letter for My Love by Beth Brown
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 84]

Summary: Harry is getting married, and it's to the woman he loves. Isn't it? Then why does he still look at Hermione and never want to turn away? Why does her presence leave him breathless and a mere touch send shivers of desire through him, leaving him wanting more? Surely this is just cold feet. Yet a single letter changes everything and Harry comes to discover that what his heart truly desires has been standing before his eyes all this time.

Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 21242 Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/08/05 Updated: 09/06/05


Reviewer: king Signed
Date: 06/26/05 Title: Chapter 5: Let Go

Poor Gwen. Poor Ginny. Poor Cho. Harry will break hearts. That is inevitable. It's got to be Harry and Hermione of course. Hermione would be a natural for a Healer.

Author's Response: that and Harry and Hermione belong together. Thanks for the review by the way

 

Summary: Hermione Granger has been in love with Harry Potter since the middle of fifth year—she thinks the feeling is mutual and she’s tired of waiting. Now Hermione is a very smart witch; when she sets out to achieve a goal, the realization of said goal is generally in the bag. A tale about what happens when Hermione gets fed up and Harry gets woken up.

Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 21872 Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/03/05 Updated: 03/25/05


Reviewer: king Signed
Date: 06/26/05 Title: Chapter 8: All's Well That Ends Well

Nice story. Sweet and innocent. Good analysis of the complexity of Hermione's thought processes. You dealt with the Ronald issue very nicely. I would hate to see him break Luna's heart, afterall Weasley is her King.

 

Summary: Parvati makes a love potion, but who is she planning on giving it to? Hermione finds out, but will it be too late? Please read and review, I like to hear how I'm doing!

Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 12677 Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/19/05 Updated: 10/01/05


Reviewer: king Signed
Date: 06/27/05 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three

Good story. But this cliffhanger! Why should Dumbledore care about Harry's love life? Please update soon.

 
Reviewer: king Signed
Date: 10/11/05 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six

This is a nice way to tie up the story. JKR's characterization of Ron makes him more self centered and jealous than your fic. A lot of the R/Hr shippers say that H/Hr shippers portray Ron badly but I think we actually tend to make him a better and more loyal friend to Harry than JKR does. I can't imagine the Ron of HBP being helpful in bringing Harry closer to Hermione even if they both asked him to do so.

 
Reviewer: king Signed
Date: 07/05/05 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five

Excellent story. I think Ron mght be a bit more jealous but still excellent. All it would take for Harry to pair up with Hermione is a little nudge in the right direction. The love potion is a great gimmick.

 

Summary: Written post-Last Battle.

Hermione Granger knows that it will never end; the nightmares, the visions of death, the agony of it all. She begins to piece together the shattered remains of her former life, only to find that one piece is missing. The piece that will eventually cause her to find the light among the dark. This is the story of two tortured souls longing to be loved; longing to belong. . .

Note: This is an extended Song-Fic to the tune of 'This I Promise You' by NSYNC.

Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 5081 Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Published:
06/21/05 Updated: 12/21/05


Reviewer: king Signed
Date: 08/03/05 Title: Chapter 1: The Aftermath

As Wellington said at Waterloo, "a victory is a disaster that is surpassed only by defeat." Nice start. The post traumatic stress from a wizards' battle could be very severe. The fighting is so personal and unpredictable. Keep writing!

Author's Response: That was my inspiration quote. I'm glad you caught it.

 

The Old, The New, and The Dead by Shortie
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 20]

Summary: The same old villain, a new teacher, and someone's going to die. As a new year at Hogwarts begins so does a relationship between friends.

Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 15850 Chapters: 5 Completed: No
Published:
06/30/05 Updated: 05/04/06


Reviewer: king Signed
Date: 07/01/05 Title: Chapter 2: He's Back

Well that certainly clears up the question of who will inherit 12 Grimmauld place. I think Hermione is brave and resourceful but sending her to spy on Voldemort, wow! Does Harry know about that? Your story is well written, keep it up.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. Harry will find out in the next chapter. I worked really hard on this story and the next chapter is on it's way.

 
Reviewer: king Signed
Date: 07/14/05 Title: Chapter 3: Reunion

It's a good plot please continue to update. It looks like poor Hermione is going to be in for a rough ride. Frankly I think that is a real possibility in JKRs books too. It would be very daring of Dumbledore to put Hermione into such danger, but it is a lot more realistic than stories that begin "Harry and Hermione were two carefree teenagers..."

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing again. I really appreciate when people review it keeps me writing. I'm just waiting for my beta to read chapter four then it will be up.

 

From My Perch by Waddiwasi chik
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 138]

Summary: Humans… Ya can’t live with ‘em, ya cant live without ‘em. Well, actually -- we could. We owls are perfectly capable of looking after ourselves. It’s the humans who need us. My name is Hedwig, or at least that’s what my so called ‘owner’, Harry Potter calls me. Everybody thinks he’s so special. I think it’s something to do with surviving death when he was a baby. I only hear snatches of conversation about it. He talks to me sometimes. Oh yes, he tells me just about everything. It can be dull, but over emotional and hormonally challenged youth often find comfort in confiding their every trouble and sorrow in their beloved pets. Poor Harry. He’s so miserable, it’s really quite pathetic, but I can’t help but love the guy. This is his story, from a different point of view. It's in! Please read and review chapter 11!

Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 16275 Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/04/05 Updated: 11/23/05


Reviewer: king Signed
Date: 02/01/06 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven: Loose Ends

Good Job! I hope you keep on writing! Your idea of writing from Hedwig's perspective was excellent. I'd like to see a story from Crookshanks perspective. I think that cat's behavior reveals a lot. Just who does that cat like more, Harry or Ron? When Hermione was acting all friendly towards Ginny in HBP, Crookshanks seemed to spend a lot of time watching her pygmy puff. Do you suppose he thought he could get away with eating that bird and not get in trouble?

Author's Response: Part of the reason I choose Hedwig was because her personality is generally shown, but the fine details were up to me. I think that Hermione and Ginny are good enough friends that if Crookshanks did eat Arnorld (that\'s the pygmy puff\'s name, isn\'t it?) that Ginny would be upset, but she\'d remember that Crookshanks was right about Sirius Black (she\'s probably been told abut that) so she\'d be all right.. Hermione might scold crookshanks a bit though.

 
Reviewer: king Signed
Date: 02/01/06 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven: Loose Ends

Good Job! I hope you keep on writing! Your idea of writing from Hedwig's perspective was excellent. I'd like to see a story from Crookshanks perspective. I think that cat's behavior reveals a lot. Just who does that cat like more, Harry or Ron? When Hermione was acting all friendly towards Ginny in HBP, Crookshanks seemed to spend a lot of time watching her pygmy puff. Do you suppose he thought he could get away with eating that bird and not get in trouble?

Author's Response: same.

 
Reviewer: king Signed
Date: 07/30/05 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four: The Black-Haired Weasley

Great chapter! Having the Weasleys adopt Harry is a really unique idea. I hope they don't adopt Hermione too. That would really ----. Fred and George are the consumate capitalists!Veritaserum for everybody! It will be a hugely profitable item! Of course it will destroy society as we know it but hey, they'll make money doing it!

Author's Response: Yeah, considering this is a H/Hr fic, having them be siblings just doesnt sound... right... 'Destroy society as we know it', well judging the societly, i'd say it could use some majory destroying! Though, as im only 14, im not sure if im qualified to be the judge of that... pity... but thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: king Signed
Date: 10/09/05 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine: Stranded

Hi Waddiwasi!, Good chapter! Thanks for updating. With the delay because of the technical problems I had forgotten some of your key plot elements. But this story is AU, starts between Harry's 5th and 6th years. Dumbledore is alive and Draco came over to the good guys side because Lucius Malfoy murdered Narcissa. It's cute how Pig was concerned about Hedwig when they were stuck in Diagon alley.

Author's Response: Wow, you've probably got it down better than I do. I did have something in mind for Pig, but then I changed my mind... Even I forget key points of the plot sometimes...

 
Reviewer: king Signed
Date: 07/10/05 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two: Results and Blood

Very unique! Hedwig's perspective, I love it. Can you answer the burning question? Will Hedwig be building a nest and laying eggs, or is she a he? I like the blood magic idea too. Dumbledore loves that sort of stuff, especially when the blood is from a dragon like Aunt Petunia.

Author's Response: HA!!! I've been trying to log on for the last 7 and 1/2 minutes to respond to your review!!! I'm glad you love it. It's definetly not as cool as yours though *sigh* Ah well... To answer your question: I always thought Hedwig is a girl, is she not? *runs around the house looking frantically for Harry Potter books* She is, isnt she? Well, she's a girl in my fic, anyway... A nest? hmmm... It's like you read my mind... and eggs? possibly... Blood magic, fun stuff, eh? Bit disturbing, but if you read chapter 2 carefully, you'd have found that it might not be permanent. I wont say no more here! Thanks for your review!

Author's Response: I take back what i said about the eggs and the nest, in my first story plan, it was in, but then i thought of a different (and hopefully alot better) ending, and sadly, i cant figure out how to put them in without writing an extra chapter, and this is Harry's story, not Hedwig's... even if it is from her point of vew. Ah yes, a while ago i was listning to book 2, and Hedwig is deffinetly a girl.

 
Reviewer: king Signed
Date: 10/21/05 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Ten: Scheming, Skirmishing, and Settling Down

Hi Waddiwasi chik!, Good chapter. It's a nice little AU you're creating here. That Hermione loves Harry with the white hot intensity of a tousand suns is quite realistic. Using Luna and Draco to distract Ron and Ginny is very creative and definitely the alternative reality of this alternate universe. If only it was that simple in JKRs version.

Author's Response: Well, I dont really know what it's like to love somebody with the white hot intensity of a thousand suns... I dont plan to any time soon, but there's just something so right about Harry and Hermione that us delusional people are somehow able to see. I am a simple writer, I'm not blessed with the mad skills to come up with the amazingly intertwined plots that JKR dreams up. I wish I could, but life isnt always fair, becuase if it was... Things would be different. Thanks for the review

Author's Response: Well, I dont really know what it's like to love somebody with the white hot intensity of a thousand suns... I dont plan to any time soon, but there's just something so right about Harry and Hermione that us delusional people are somehow able to see. I am a simple writer, I'm not blessed with the mad skills to come up with the amazingly intertwined plots that JKR dreams up. I wish I could, but life isnt always fair, becuase if it was... Things would be different. Thanks for the review.

Author's Response: I have no idea how i did that...

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: king Signed
Date: 08/11/05 Title: None

The second chapter is very good. I think you are an excellent writer. Bringing in Alberforth is an interesting idea because Harry is clearly going to need help to overcome Lord Voldemort and his army. Will Harry wear and use the enchanted necklace or will he put it in the bottom of his trunk like he did with the magic mirror that could have connected him with Sirius?

Author's Response: Thank You! I guess you'll have to wait to find out about the necklace! I'm going to try to review the 3rd chapter tonight. I've been really busy with school so hopefully the chapter will be up at least in a week. I really want to at least start ch. 4 before I post ch. 3. Keep reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: king Signed
Date: 07/30/05 Title: None

Excellent start. Keep writing! Do not be disappointed by HBP, Book 7 may change everything. Harry's vision of his own grave is very realistic. I do worry about his future. Interesting twist on Aunt Petunia. She's sort of a day late and a dollar short though.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'll probably like HBP when I reread it. That's what always happens. But somethings just won't change. Keep on reviewing, it makes me want to continue the story!

 
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