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Alexandra Quick and the Deathly Regiment by Inverarity

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Past Featured Story

Alexandra Quick returns to Charmbridge Academy for eighth grade, angry and in denial. Unwilling to accept the events of the previous year, she is determined to fix what went wrong, no matter what the cost. When her obsession leads her to a fateful choice, it is not only her own life that hangs in the balance, for she will uncover the secret of the Deathly Regiment!

 This is the third book in the Alexandra Quick series.

Reviewer: potterchassid Signed
Date: 06/04/10 Title: Chapter 28: Oak and Mistletoe

Riveting. But why doesn't she try to summon that house elf who lives with the Generous Ones? He is free, and free to listen to her, just like Dobby was free to listen to Harry Potter.

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Date: 04/29/10 Title: Chapter 1: The WODAMND Act

I have another question. In the Potterverse, time turners only allow you to go back in time, but we have never seen them bring one back to the future. If Alex tries to go back several months, how does she return to the present? Surely she must fail or this will become a significant problem, right?!

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Date: 04/12/10 Title: Chapter 13: Reunion

Valeria! What a surprise. Will she get to talk to her in private? Or will she only discover that her youthful resolve can't guarantee success?

BTW, in GoF, portkeys seem to transport many people as effortlessly as few people, so why would the fare be higher?

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Date: 03/22/10 Title: Chapter 1: The WODAMND Act

Alex is growing up, I half expected her to right away open the door to the lower basement. So she first wants to find the ghost and question him?

This is developing wickedly fast. Great story.

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Date: 05/17/10 Title: Chapter 23: Deathly Conjures

this is getting dangerous. I noticed she summoned spirits, in the plural. Are other visitors coming, too?

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Date: 06/07/10 Title: Chapter 1: The WODAMND Act

What an intense chapter. And now, ladies and gentlemen, Inverarity has finally told us what
(one of) Alexandra's mission(s) is: she will have to defy the kind of unbreakable vow forcing her to sacrifice herself seven years on.

But pray, tell, how will you be able to wrap up such a story with only another two more chapters?

And I wonder, is Death the universal power of magical death, or simply a massive power on formerly Indian territory?

Reviewer: potterchassid Signed
Date: 05/03/10 Title: Chapter 19: A Long, Cold December

Ah, a warm an fuzzy chapter for the winter holidays at home, a chapter that will enable us in future chapters to find out more about Alexandra's past, and a little cliffhanger to boot?! Marvellous.

Reviewer: potterchassid Signed
Date: 05/11/10 Title: Chapter 1: The WODAMND Act

Oh my, oh my, now that Alex has opened up to Anna she was betrayed? But Abraham knew what to expect and was faster none the less ... powerful. I wonder whether we will see in this book what Abraham meant about the Thorn Circle not needing to remain a secret anymore.

Reviewer: potterchassid Signed
Date: 03/01/10 Title: Chapter 1: The WODAMND Act

Ah, congratulations to you and your readers, the long awaited volume three has arrived!

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Date: 03/26/10 Title: Chapter 8: Ghost Sickness

the Cat-In-The-Box Failsafe Principle that apparently had nothing to do with either cats or boxes

Was Schroedinger a magical theorist?

Chocolate Frog by L A Moody

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: Amid the desolation of Diagon Alley, a tiny ray of hope lay buried. Nothing more than a tidbit amid the sweeping despair of Deathly Hallows, yet it would not let go of my imagination. Had I found the casually inserted pivotal clue that would rise like Nicolas Flamel from the pages of the first book? Or had I stumbled upon another Mark Evans: nothing but filler detail in the opening pages of The Order of the Phoenix, JKR having overlooked that he bore the same last name as Harry’s mother?

So I waited for my little gem to bear fruit, to become one of those climactic surprises we should have seen coming, but somehow overlooked. Only it never came to pass. The death count mounted to a staggering high, the epic moments came and went, Snape’s back story was finally revealed, and still nothing.

So it has lain, bereft and unwanted, among the detritus of a Diagon Alley the Death Eaters had turned into a bully’s playground. But in the intervening years, this rough diamond has become the inspiration for this story, spreading its tentacles into new and intriguing territories.

Although Harry mentions Chocolate Frog as the title of Mad-Eye Moody’s autobiography at the end of my previous tale, The Dark Phoenix, this version of the story goes beyond that. Nonetheless, the sections representing Moody’s memoirs are clearly labeled.

This story begins with events recounted in Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows and continues beyond the end of the series. I have attempted to conform to canon as much as possible, elaborating only where the circumstances are vague or passed over. It is an interpretation of the events that happened behind the scenes, so to speak.

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Date: 11/13/10 Title: Chapter 11: Eleven / Harry: Bereavement at the Burrow

Will Dumbledore speak again from the cards? How will they feel knowing he can be around everywhere?

Author's Response: I can tell you this much: Dumbledore will think long and hard before he interferes. Like many others, he recognizes that he needs to let go of the past and move on. Harry himself will see the similarity to the portraits that hang in the Headmaster's/Headmistress's office.

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Date: 10/25/10 Title: Chapter 8: Eight / Moody: The Devil's Playground


Author's Response: Thanks from the bottom of my heart! Am submitting the next installment today, hope you’ll keep reading.

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Date: 12/01/10 Title: Chapter 13: Thirteen / Harry: The Ghosts of Guilt

His eyes strained against the gloom as Dumbledore’s face seemed to purse its lips sadly in the collector card Ron left behind. Or had that been a figment of his overwrought imagination as well?

Oh, wow, it seems like DD is going to make another chocolate frog card appearance.

Author's Response: Make no mistake, Dumbledore’s in it for the long haul… but complications are always bound to arise . More to come!

Reviewer: potterchassid Signed
Date: 10/10/10 Title: Chapter 1: One / Moody: Limbo

This is a great story. You indeed found a nice gap in canon that allows for this very creative set of vignettes. And oh, this idea of the people in the chocolate frog cards to be actual real passageways they can use for communication once they died, marvellous. It fits very well with the Hogwarts headmasters' portraits canon

Author's Response: So glad you're liking the story so far. I consider myself extremely lucky that the gapping hole wasn't spotted by an obsessive reader before I could put it to good use. I felt certain until the very end of DH that JKR was going to have Moody pull 'a Gandalf'', if you know what I mean. More amusing coincidences to come...

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Date: 10/28/10 Title: Chapter 9: Nine / Dumbledore: On the Wings of a Thestral

Beautiful chapter. And great eye for detail in having Victoria Station for the souls, since Kings Cross was where they met. I wonder what Mad Eye is up to.

Author's Response: So happy you liked this chapter. I was so afraid people would find it too sad, even though we already know most of what happened. With the next chapter, we go into unchartered waters …(gulp)