I read fan fiction because no author has room to follow every path a story can follow. I am no longer satisfied with canon, I analyze what I see and how it could be done better. I appreciate a well-plotted and well-characterized story.
Summary: Ginny lures Hermione to do some sneaking about late one night, straight into mischief. Little do they know, a sneaky Slytherin sees it all...
this is adorable!! keep writing
Author's Response: Thank you kindly! I'm having a little writer's block, but I'm plugging away nonetheless!
Summary: Sequel to A Different Kind of Love: Lily's response to James' letter saying he loves her.
Part of me wants to say, please, let’s just be friends and forget what we’ve written to each other—these moments are too precious to risk spoiling them. But I know enough of the world to know that time is a one-way street. Forward is the only direction we can go.
i frickin love it!!!!!!! i like the first one alot too.
Summary: In the dead of the night, someone steals Harry's Marauder's Map.
Insanity, hilarity and catastrophe, of course! (This wouldn't be a humour story if it didn't, would it?)
As different people try to activate the Marauder's Map, the four infamous Marauders answer back, in their own wonderful style.
keep going! its sounds good.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! What's your username supposed to mean? It sounds interesting!
Summary: James would do anything to get inside Lily’s head. Lily would do anything to get away from James. Lily was brewing a banned potion. James went to find her. Lily made a mistake and the potion exploded. James got his wish, but is it much more than he bargained for?
After a year the Epilouge is now up! Come read for a bit of fun!!
Runner up QSQ - Best Chaptered Canon Romance
Reason for Nomination:
This is the most unique take on how James and Lily really got to know each other. The story is hilarious and keeps you laughing throughout, but it never lets you forget the serious stuff. Plus, she somehow manages to end each chapter with a nice cliffhanger.
this is sooo suspenseful! i want to read more. i love it.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I'm glad you are enjoying it. I sent Chapter 10 off to my beta's this morning. It is called, "Every Man's Deepest Fear."
totally freeking brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!!keep writing.
Author's Response: Thank you, keep reading :D
Summary: Sirius, the expert on getting ladies, gives baby Harry a chat on how to be a proper gentleman. Harry, however, has other ideas.
that is hilarious!!!!!!!!!!!1i love it.
Author's Response: Thank you. :D
Summary: Harry calls after her. "Cho!" But she doesn't stop. Good, that'll teach him to go on dates with Cho Chang.
He throws a galleon on the table and runs after her. I sneeze. Everyone in the tearoom turns their eyes from the still tinkling door to me hiding under the table.
Ginny ditches Quidditch practice to spy on Harry's first (and only) date with Cho. Written from Ginny's POV
Song fic to "Invisible" by Taylor Swift First part in my "Little Ginny Weasley" series, but it can stand alone.
sob!!! but i know it turns out okay in the end. i love it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! amazing thought process. good writing.
Author's Response: thank you so so much!! these high praise reviews are really raising my spirits!
Summary: She said he couldn't change. Discovering his true heart's desire made him want to try. Can Severus Snape reclaim what was lost before it's too late? LE/SS
i love the humor in this story, and the drama is even better. all of your characters are well done, i particularly like the way you portray regulus, he often gets too little attention. please keep wirting, i want to know what happens!!
i love this story!!!! keep writing, much encouragement!
At age fifteen, Regulus Black became sole heir to the largest fortune in Wizarding London. At sixteen, his abnormal intelligence won him entry into the most notorious cult of Dark wizards on earth. At seventeen he made a mistake – one that he would never be able to take back – and his entire world came crashing down.
Enter London, 1979. The story of a boy who managed to defy Voldemort at the height of his regime. But what price did he have to pay?
this is one of the best regulus based stories i've ever read. i happen to find him really fascinating. definitely keep writing. you capture his personality and conflict very well.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really flattered by your comments. :) I think Regulus is one of the most fascinating and complex characters in the books, and I'm so glad you're enjoying my story about him. Thanks again and I hope you like the rest!
excellent start! the writing quality is good, and it promises alot of emotion in future chapters. keep writing
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you think it's promising. :)
Summary: Willing out every memory he could think of, he gasped for the boy to take them. He had no other way to explain. The boy had to end this. There was no other way now. Perhaps there never would have been any other way. Thank God that Granger girl was with him to help. It would be over soon if the boy would only look at him.
Lily’s beautiful green eyes met his. Lily. Lovely Lily. His Lily. The green eyes swam and swayed out of focus, but Snape could see green distantly before him as though looking through a cloud. As he continued to watch, it came back into focus.
This is a story of Severus Snapes journey on
this is amazing! iove it.
Before I can rethink my actions, I'm running towards him.
This is it. I'm going to do it. I'm going to do it!
I kiss him.
Harry and Ginny kiss after the Quidditch game, but what happened afterwards? This is kind of the sequel to my fic "Invisible", but it can stand alone.
Song-fic to the song "Fearless" by Taylor Swift.
From Ginny's POV
that is adorable!!!
Author's Response: aaawww thanks!! :)
It was like a wizard tale. The clever Slytherin helps a hag who later repays the debt. Except that Rose Weasley wasn't a hag, and Scorpius didn't expect to call in the favour.
*Winner of the 2010 Next Generation QSQ award*
very good start. keep writing!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm really enjoying the characters. ^_^
i like this story. your writing is amazing. i noticed you used some names from the vampirate books, like lorcan. i like it. very cute plot.
They sound interesting, and I'm going to look them up on amazon, :D, but I've never read the vampirate books. After DH came out there was some "year in the life" documentary on JKR and one of the things on it was her drawing of the Weasley Family Tree. You can google it or look it up on this site, likely. She named Luna and Rolf Scamander's kids Lorcan and Lysander. I do like Lorcan though. Reminds me a bit of Lucian from Underworld.
Summary: Keedie Dante has experienced many amazing things during her time at Hogwarts, including the hushed up drama that was the Chamber of Secrets. However, with two overachieving friends and a headmaster who does not even know she exists, Keedie feels that perhaps her seventh year will not be too spectacular. However, Dumbeldore sees her potential as a writer and enrols her in a simple writing course. Here, she meets the mysterious and terrifying Tom Riddle and they instantly get under one another's skin. She is drawn to his dark determination towards some unknown goal and he is fascinated by her, in every way. However, Tom's friends do not approve of Keedie and her unconventional ways and Keedie has many people trying to keep her away from the dark young man as well. Something inside tells Keedie that she can make him better, but even he assures her that this is an impossible task. But she's not one to give up easily...
"He is a dark one, Keedie. Try not to let him consume you entirely."
This story has the characters Albus Dumbledore, Armando Dippet, Moaning Myrtle, Rubeus Hagrid, Aaron Dante, Harry Potter, Ebony Abbott, Minerva McGonagall, Melena Creevey, Ollivander, Gregor Holmwood, Horace Slughorn and, of course, Tom Riddle and Keedie Dante...enjoy!
Winner of "Best Romance Between Other Characters" and nominated for "Best Female OC" in the 2009 Quicksilver Quill Awards
this is intense, the suspense is good and riddle's detachment is brilliant.
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you took the time to read. Next chapter soon :-)
Summary: It’s April Fool’s Day at Hogwarts, and three generations must uphold a Gryffindor tradition.
This story was written by Gmariam of Ravenclaw for the April Fool’s Day One-Shot Challenge.
i love it !!! this is hilarious.good writing.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate the compliments - thanks again! :)
i love it !!! this is hilarious.good writing.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story and had a good laugh. Thanks again for reading it and leaving such a nice review! ~Gina :)
Love is healing. Love makes the world go ‘round. Love is all you need.
Whoever said that, obviously forgot about the part where it could destroy you, leave you empty and worthless, numb to everything, except the suffocating pain of knowing you aren’t good enough.
Hate is strong word. Hate destroys us. Hate is an ugly thing.
Sometimes, it’s our hate that drives us. It fuels us, pushing us through the past, forcing us to accept what we have. It gives us a reason to move. It motivates us into action.
Sometimes, hate is all we have.
very cute ending, intense beginning and a passionate middle. i love it!
Summary: Harry reads a bedtime story to his children.
** Contains spoilers for The Tales of Beedle the Bard **
Warnings: Epilogue Regarded, Story Sweeter Than Treacle Tart Embedded
this is stunning, hilarious. i like tha idea that ginny had told them the real story, and harry in his ignorance of wizard fairy tales, picke the worst book. love it!!
Author's Response: I found Miss Bloxam in Dumbledore's notes and thought what every author ought to: "Who keeps buying that book?" And the answer came back, "Muggleborns, mostly." From there it was just all too tempting. Especially for a Snapewriter.