I'm 13. My favourite movies are pirates 2 H.P 5, Gladiator, Stardust and Hairspray! I have a twin brother who is ever so annoying and an older sister.
It's fantastic. i haven't written any stories of my own but it doesn't mean i don't know a good one when i see it!
Author's Response: Ha ha, thanks!
Hi! I liked the story it was beautiful you are a fantastic writer but I wasn't as interested as I was in something that had her hating him and then falling inlove. I always love those stories because it's always so much more interesting then lovey dovey stuff! I did like it though! You are amazing at describing things. I believe that if you really wanted to you could become a writer. But I still wasn't interested in it like I would be with a story written by KASK!!! It was ok I guess.
Author's Response: There are a lot of stories about how Lily hates James, James\' personality does a 180, and Lily falls in love with him. These seem unrealistic to me, especially because Sirius says in book 5 that Lily never hated James. Admittedly, there are a lot of good stories about their falling in love, but I wanted to examine a moment after that had happened. Purple Ink, one of my other stories has more action and less \"lovey dovey\", as you call it. Thanks for your review!