I looked at this profile for the 1st time in like, ages and realised that its sooooo out of date. So i decided that i should re-write it coz its just way too old to salvage anything lol. So i'm a chick who loves to read, write and act. I have a brain as well, so I'm not some bimbo. I'm not so crazed on Harry Potter now as i used to be, but i still enjoy reading fanfics on occasion. I like to write them as well, but do you know how hard it is to get a story accepted on this site? A friend and myself have started writing a fic and are hoping that it will get accepted this time. So yeah.
"you do the right thing because you want to." I really liked this line, I felt like it ws true how people rarely do this. I like to think that I do the right thing most of the time, but it's because I feel obligated to do so. I want to change my attitude, now after reading this story, so that I do the right thing because I want to.
Hey, I really like your story, although this wasn't one of my favourite chapters. I mean, it was kinda a filler, wasn't it? Really looking forward to what is about to happen next! Will Ron, Hermione, maybe even Ginny find out about Harry and Pansey(is that spelt right?)? will Draco? hehe, you keep me in suspense, waiting for more! I can't wait for you to update!
Hey i really like this story! is there going to be more? can't wait i agree that Voldemort wasn't that scary, but i realise (being a budding author myself), that it is hard to create fear in a person's mind by wording it.
ooooooo i can't wait to see wat happens to harry! i would really love to see the look on some of the faces when they find out that harry was drinking! and better yet if they were to find out about the muggle drugs as well! i don't know why, but i would find that it would be very funny! i just can't imagine our sweet little harry from jkr's books getting into drugs and alcahol(urgh, can't spell) but i really love your story! can't wait for an update!
So, i bought Gwen Stefani's album today, and i was listening to it, and i wanted to know if you have ever listened to What You Waiting For? Because she uses "tick tock" in her song, and it just remined me of your story.
hey, its great! like this chappie cant wait to c more! soz im in msn typing form if u get wat i mean, coz i was talking to ma peeps on msn just now.
hey ive just found this site and ure story is the first i have read all of so far and i think its great! i love the plot and its just great! a friend of mine and myself actually had an idea to write something like that but ures is way better! i love the story can't wait 4 next chapter!
Author's Response: Yay! Double yay! I am deeply honored that my story is the first you read from the site! I'm so so so glad you like the story so far, and I hope you continue reading!
ooooooooooo final battle coming up! the big question, willl Harry live or die? I'm hoping he lives, but then it would be awesome if he died, and really, well, er, deep, i suppose? looking forward to hbp but want to read all the fanfic on mugglenet first (which i know is impossible since i tried to do that a while ago but its just too hard because u find that u really love a story but its really long, and then it takes ages to read and u get obsessed with it and can't read anything else...well you get my point! This story was one of those, and was probably the second story i eva read on mugglenet!) wow that was a long bracket! soz im like hypped on caffine and yeah i have to go to skool tomoz but i dont want to and i dont want to go on thursday either (worst days with subjects, u know)anyways om blabbing on and on and on but u know its because of the cafine, right? anyways i thought this chapter rocked! by the way, r u still going to look into betaring that story i sent u a while ago?its ok if ure not going to but i was just wondering.i dont know that i would be able to just let go if i was ron! if the person i loved didn't love me but was with me and then cheated on me, i think that i would be unable to forgive them eva, even though i would probably move on and have other relationships, i would neva be able to be friends with them still! but then, this is the golden trio, the special cases! i don't know mb i would be able to. anyways this derseves way more than a ten! (even though i found quite a few typo's like u writing her instead of him, like "he wrapped her arms around her" etc etc.)
Author's Response: Well, I think you've already read the last chapter, but if not--spoiler alert!.
I suppose it would've been deep if Harry did die, but I couldn't do that to poor Hermione. And he'd just mad eup with Ron...I tried to, but I couldn't bring myself to do it. =)
I'll beta your story soon...I'm sorry I haven't. I was working on finishing this one, and just enjoying summer.
Well, maybe in reality it would have been different for Ron. Like, if he lived in a normal world, there wouldn't be any mortal peril threatening all of their lives...that kind of thing really changes your way of viewing things, you know? Knowing that Harry, his best mate, or any one of them, could die soon made him realize that there are other, more important things, to worry about.
In a world such as ours, it might have taken him a longer time to realize that, and forgive them.
Anyway, thanks for the review, and for reading!
hey brilliant like always, and to do with the brittan easter: im in australia, which is originally a colony of Britain. it follows the same kind of thing for easter it think so this is what happens in australia: easter friday, saturday and sunday are the closest weekend to the full moon in the March/April kind of time thingy. i think britain does the same as australia. ok so i hope that was helpfull.
omg its over! It was a great story! oh wow i dont know what to say! very good! i have the phantom of the opera sound track, and it was playing as i read this chapter and "think of me" played at the bit while harry and hermione were kissing and the overture was playing in the dream bit! it just sounded right! omg omg omg HBP comes out in three days!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm so glad this came before it came out! I have a feeling Ginny going to die in HBP, I have no idea why, but I have a feeling. I also have this like, prediction but its hard to explain, but I also think there will be a new prophecey in this book, but it will be alot darker in meaning! thats my theories, but this isn't about my theories, it's about your grand story which is absolutly grand! I'm glad i got to read this today, because our power is being taked away all of tomorrow! i know i know get back to the story! I just have no idea what to say it was so good it has left me overwhelmed and flabbergasted. sooooooooooo good you have such a good writing style! omg omg omg last night i saw the last episode of the oc! omg it was so cool! soz i know i know get back to the story! i heard that America was up to the third season of the oc last year, but we in australia only got to see the last of the 2nd season last night! omg it was so good! i know i know get back to the story! I just have a really active mind! i envy the kids who got chosen to go to Scottland with that competition to see jkr and get an autographed copy and yeah i envy them soooooooooooo much! This was such a good story! I just have to check something..This is the story where Harry and Hermione are engagged, but having a long engagement? But originally Hermione was with Ron, but had a *affair* with Harry? Did you know that it took me nearly 2 hours to read and review this chapter?!?! It's taken like half an hour to write this! It more because I can't think of what to say, but I feel I should say something more! Well I'm going to leave this here so ttfn. Great story, deserves way more than ten!
hey i dont know the song that well but the story itself was really good and it would be good in a story that has more to it! i think its good that u can be inspired by a song to write a story. i think i get what your trying to do with the lyrics - its like a scene in a movie and this song would be the one playing in this scene with those lyrics coming through while the characters are silent.
hi i just read all of your story and i thought it was great, even though pansy with harry was a bit, well, different, but it was very good and turned out very well! i've been reading it non-stop all weekend! (wen im able to get to a computer i mean) so yeah, is there a sequel? coz this must have been written a while ago so im thinking there must be by now.
Author's Response: Yes, I thought it would give Harry someone different. I usually read him with either Ginny or some other Gryffindor, so I thought it would be interesting to pair him up with a Slytherin. I do have a sequel, actually two smaller ones and one longer one that I just finished. I'm glad you are enjoying these.
omg! i read all of your story yesterday and today! I'm so sad for everyone who was lost! with the fortune cookie fortunes, when i first heard Harry's, I instantly thought of his firebolt, but i thought that it couldn't mean that when the others turned out to be more drastic, like neville's gran. I'm so happy that Harry and Katie got together! When i first saw that this story was 70 chapters long, i didn't really want to read it, but i thought i'll give the first chapter a go, and then i got sucked in. I'm just so overwelmed. I had to go feeed my dogs wen i just started reading the last chapter, and i was crying, i was telling myself, Ginny's not dead, Ginny's not dead, Ginny's not dead! I had to remind myself that this was fan fic, not the real thing! With the portrait of Sirius, when he died in book five, I was like well he can have him back through a portrait! I didn't think about how it wouldn't be the same, like what your story talks about. I love this story and i think im going to read the sequel, well what is there of it.
awwww so cute! I had an argument with my friends today about who was supposed to be with who in Harry Potter and everyone was like Ron and Hermione have to be together and i totally agree! This is so cute and Pavati totally cracked me up! Great Idea!!! *10*
thanks for that!
HI i don't know what the marrage law challenges are so maybe you could plz fill me in?
Author's Response: There is a yahoo group called "When I Kiss The Teacher (WIKTT)" they issued a writing challenged called the Marraige Law. In this challenge the Ministry of Magic issues a law that all Muggle born witches or wizards must marry a Pure-blood wizard to keep the Wizarding population from getting too inbred. This was my contribution. The stories are usually longer but I really felt no need to make it longer than this one chapter and then a one-shot sequel.
You had me crying just as i read the Summary. My eyes watered for most of the story. It reminds me of myself, but I don't even have one really good friend. Sure I have loads of friends, but none of them are really that close. I feel like my best friends are my fantasy books which help me escape real life. I think that I relate to Hermione heaps, expesially your version. this is a very well written story, and I love it.
i feel the same way as redvelvetcanopy in that i found the start really funny and the end really romantic and mushy! i still dont really know what the Marriage law challenge is but im hoping you will fill me in!
Author's Response: The marraige law is a chellenge made by a yahoo community called "When I Kiss the Teacher" (WIKTT). Mininstry of Magic passes a law in which all pureblood wizards or witches have to marry muggle born or half muggle students. There are quite a few longer versions of this challenge, but I figured I'd do my part by just making a one-shot.
Very good story! I know they are in love and all, but calling each other "love" all the time just doesn't seem like something Harry and Draco would do. But you are a very good writer, and you have a very good plot idea here.
like it, draco is...different, definatly a better side of him. Bill better not fall for hermione! in the muggle world he could loose his job for having a relation ship with her! but then this is a story and its in the wizarding world. it makes a conflict!