Penname: Patrick Johnson [Contact]
Real name: Ian Blasius
Member Since: 01/20/08
Website: http://groups.msn.com/HawthorneAcademyofMagic
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Bio:
I am a Beginner in fan fiction. Right now I am wrting, a story about a boy who goes to American School of Magic.

The Novel:
Book One: Working on, Chapter One
Book Two: Not Completed
Book Three: Not Completed
Book Four: Not Completed
Book Five: Not Completed
Book Six: Not Completed
Book Seven: Not Completed


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Summary: Patrick Thatcher’s older brother teases him, his mother worries about him, and his father defends him. His family sounds very much like any other, but somehow Patrick’s is far from average. In Patrick’s world, adults disappear into thin air, owls deliver mail, and the most popular sport in the country is played on broomsticks. Not to mention that every member of his family is, and always has been, a wizard. When your grandfather is a famous American veteran, being a Thatcher isn’t the easiest life to live. When his acceptance letter to the most prestigious American school of magic arrives addressed to another student, Patrick’s position in his former world begins to take a tumble—right along with the newly elected President of Magic’s approval ratings. With the Wizarding world’s eyes shifting toward a new wizard, can Patrick figure out just why his first year is off to a rocky start? Inspired by J.K. Rowling’s wondrous Harry Potter Series, Patrick Thatcher’s adventures of wizardry in the United States is a tale all its own while still respecting its English origins. Readers are sure to find that the magic across the pond is just as unforgettable.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 90184 Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/08/05 Updated: 09/04/06


Reviewer: Patrick Johnson Signed
Date: 01/20/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Message Mishap

Hey! I Just Joined,
and I really like this story! My favorite part was seeing the Magic lessons, how a American School of Magic is different (Than Hogwarts) and seeing the New School textbooks! I have a question. Can you, ask warner brothers and scholastic books to see if they can make this into a movie and book, and also a video game? I was just wondering, thought it would be cool!

 
Reviewer: Patrick Johnson Signed
Date: 04/12/08 Title: Chapter 17: The Secret of the Compass

Dear Author of this Story,
Hi! My name is Patrick Johnson. I really liked this story, and I read it alot of times. I have a question. When is year two, going to be posted? I am really looking forward to the Ivory Tower.
from,
Patrick Johnson

P.S. Have you ever wanted to ask scholastic books, to see if this story can be publish?

 

Teddy by dumbledorefluertwins
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 297]

Summary: It's Teddy Lupin's first year at Hogwarts. As an orphan, he has bounced backwards and forwards between his grandmother and his godfather. Follow him on a journey where he discovers the values of friendship, family and love, along with fighting the prejudices against his father, and getting through Defense Against the Dark Arts, with a teacher who just seems to hate him for no reason...




*DH spoilers, obviously*

NOTE: I am sorry, but I have left this site, due to lack of time and personal issues concerning RL and the site. This story is discontinued here, but may well be posted elsewhere in the future.

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 22111 Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Published:
09/09/07 Updated: 11/03/08


Reviewer: Patrick Johnson Signed
Date: 03/13/08 Title: Chapter 7: Nothing Like Muggle Fairy Tales

Dear Author of the Story,
Hi! My name is Patrick Johnson. I really liked this story alot! I have always thought Ted, was going to be friends with a Muggle-Born!
from,
Patrick Johnson

P.S. Is there going to be more chapter's of Teddy?

Author's Response: Yes, definately. :) I\'m glad you like the story, but I would just like to give you a word of advice - please don\'t put your second name on the internet!! You don\'t know who\'s watching!!\r\n\r\nI\'m glad you like it at any rate. Yes, I thought I should have a muggleborn in there. ;)\r\n\r\n~Evie

 

Summary: Sadie Murray is your typical American girl, stuck in the middle of her family. Sadie has an older sister who is popular, talented at everything she does, and lavishes in the respect she garners. Sadie's younger sister is pretty, adorable, cute, and uses these characteristics to cover up the fact that she's a nasty little brat. But Sadie's luck just might change when she receives a letter saying she has been accepted to The Salem Institute of Magical Learning.

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 60522 Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Published:
11/14/07 Updated: 08/07/08


Reviewer: Patrick Johnson Signed
Date: 03/07/08 Title: Chapter 4: The 1978 Ford Fiesta

Dear Author of Saide Murray,
Hi! My name is Patrick Johnson. I have a question. Is Sadie Murray, a muggle-born? Because in the chapter: The Letter, you say "Magic?" "Witches?" "Wizards" "The Salem's Institute?" and I just wanted to know. I read this fic, about three times, to let you know, and it is Great!
from,
Patrick Johnson

P.S. I have one more question. Do you think you can contact scholastic books, to see if this series can become a book? I thought it would be cool because it would be cool to see a school of magic, in America.

Author's Response: Hey Patrick. Yes, Sadie is a Muggle-born wizard. Ummm, well, \"The Letter\" isn\'t through the queue since it\'s down right now... I wasn\'t aware anyone but myself could even see the chapter description. But you\'ll find out more whenever the chapter is officially legible. I suppose I essentially could contact Scholastic about getting it published, but I sincerely doubt it would be accepted. Harry Potter, the world, and series are all copyright of Rowling (which is why none of the stories on this site can be published for money), so my story would need her approval. But hey, yah never know. I\'d like to finish writing it first though. =] Thanks for reading!

 
Reviewer: Patrick Johnson Signed
Date: 04/29/08 Title: Chapter 4: The 1978 Ford Fiesta

Dear Author of Sadie Murray,
Hi! This is Patrick Johnson, again. I have a question. I was wondering, if for the seventh book of Sadie Murray, if you could make her be married to a muggle, because so that, it could be different and interesting for readers. Just wondering.
from,
Patrick Johnson

Author's Response: Yeah... umm, once again, I\'m not finished with the first in the series yet... Let\'s just wait for chapter five, eh?

 
Reviewer: Patrick Johnson Signed
Date: 04/12/08 Title: Chapter 4: The 1978 Ford Fiesta

Dear Author of this Story,
Hi! This is Patrick, again. I have a question. When is the rest of the story, going to be posted? Just wondering.
from,
Patrick Johnson

Author's Response: Oh geez, I have no idea. The next chapter has been in queue (since MNFF gussied up the site) for quite some time now. But I assure that as soon as it\'s validated, it will be here.

 

Summary: Dangerous werewolf Remus Lupin has escaped from Azkaban prison...

In the third instalment of the Neville Longbottom saga, the Boy-Who-Lived must face his greatest fears and come face to face with his own past and the past of those around him.

With a mysterious escaped criminal, a surprising Defence Against the Dark Arts professor and intrigue at every turn, many revelations are made and secrets revealed. How will Neville react to the changes to his world and the discoveries he makes? This is Year Three...

Categories: Alternate Universe Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 48305 Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/29/07 Updated: 05/23/08


Reviewer: Patrick Johnson Signed
Date: 05/22/08 Title: Chapter 13: The Time-Turner

Dear Author of this Story,
Hi! My name is Patrick Johnson. When I read this chapter, how come Harry, wasn't there? Did he just escape or something? Just wondering.
from,
Patrick Johnson

P.S. I can't wait to read the next chapter! When is the fourth book going to be posted?

Author's Response: Hi! Harry got hit by a spell from Pettigrew at the end of chapter 12, fell, and went missing, presumed injured. When Neville and Hermione Time-turned, they found out the reason Harry in fact went missing was that they themselves met up with him and together they helped free Lupin. I hope that makes sense, time travel is really confusing, I know! First chapter of GoF will go in the queue as soon as the last chapter of PoA is validated.

 

Summary: Nominated for the 2008 Quicksilver Quill Award for Best Post-Hogwarts Story

When Albus, Rose, and Scorpius are put on the train to their first year at Hogwarts, their parents have simple hopes for them. Namely to have the normal, boring school years they never got to experience themselves. But sometimes, we ask too much of our children.

When the school becomes plagued by invasions of wild beasts, three different students from three different houses follow in the footsteps of the generation before them, but strive to achive the one thing none of their predesesors ever could: DON'T GET CAUGHT!



Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 109928 Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/19/08 Updated: 02/15/10


Reviewer: Patrick Johnson Signed
Date: 03/13/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 An Unexpected Sorting Ceremony

Dear Author of the Story,
Hi! My name is Patrick Johnson. I have read this fan fic, alot and really liked it! Whe is the next chapter going to be posted?
from,
Patrick Johnson

Author's Response: I\'m glad you like it so much. I actually have the next two or three chapters done and edited, only I haven\'t been able to post them because of all the site problems. But I\'m very thankful that our mods were able to fix everything, and that all the stories will be up and running again very soon.

 
Reviewer: Patrick Johnson Signed
Date: 03/14/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 An Unexpected Sorting Ceremony

Dear Author of this story,
Hi! This is Patrick Johnson, again. I have another question. Did you ever think, you could do a Harry Potter roleplaying game, with the characters that you came up with?
from,
Patrick Johnson



Author's Response: I\'m not sure, but if you want to sort out some details, you could send me a message on this site or the beta boards.

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