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Trickster by Willow Rosenberg
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 131]

Summary: After the disastrous events of the end of the Marauder's fifth year, a fuming Lily Evans decides that that arrogant James Potter and his friends need a taste of their own medicine. The straight-laced Prefect suddenly finds herself pranking her class's trickiest boys--and maybe even enjoying it. Coupled with a series of mysterious apology letters that Lily has begun receiving, it's bound to be an interesting year.

Winner of the 2010 QSQ for Best Canon Romance!

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 57376 Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/04/09 Updated: 08/02/10


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 03/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: Study Breaks

wow, its a really great story. I love how it is heading so far... but im a bit confused abt something, isnt Lily's patronous supposed to be a doe? Sorry, its just a bit confused thats all.Other than that, great job!! Update soon. Im loking forward to it.

Author's Response: thanks! and yeah, hers and snapes both are. i kind of figured since they both become totally different people later in there lives, their Patronuses are going to change. Like Snape's not so desperately in love with Lily right now, and like his whole life becomes about her after she dies, but he hasn't gotten to that point. JJust what i figured, hope that helps!

 
Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 03/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Study Breaks

haha yup it helps.... thanks.... but do update soon ya.... i reallly cant wait for the rest of the story!

 
Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 03/26/09 Title: Chapter 2: Dangerous Liaisons

I love it love it love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Its a really good chappie... especially the part where James talks to Lily... It was sweet... oh i also lked the part where LIly smacked directly into the bookcase after telling off Snape, who snickered at her.... could u update soon? Oh ya by the way, how far r u going to write the stoy? till James and Lily gets married or till their graduation or till the night where they protect their child??

Author's Response: Thanks so much! :) the next chapter should be up soon, hopefully! Well, this story is going to go until the end of the sixth year. I'm probably going to do at least one sequel though, maybe two, depending on how it turns out. Glad you liked it!!

 

Summary: Harry Potter returns to Hogwarts for his seventh year. With Quidditch, NEWT's, and a pompous new Transfiguration teacher this year is certainly not going to be dull! Mix in some Marauders, a couple jokes, and a bunch of good friends and this will be Harry's best year yet! Nominated for QSQ'a Best General Fic. Thank you!



Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Mild Profanity

Word count: 14868 Chapters: 11 Completed: No
Published:
03/23/09 Updated: 11/08/09


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 04/21/09 Title: Chapter 1: Rebuilding

yea i did... i like the part where Harry wants to send off Fred in style:P...

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it... I hope you will keep on reading! --ginnygirl16

 
Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 04/21/09 Title: Chapter 2: Fred's Funeral

i like Fred's funeral...:D...i also love the part where Harry holds n plays with Teddy!! cant wait for the next chapter!!! update soon!!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked Fred's Funeral. I thought it would be a nice touch. You know, I'm very glad you like the part with Harry and Teddy. In the original version of this chapter, that wasn't even in it. However, the mods thought I should add a little more, and that's what I came up with. I'm glad to hear you like it. The next chapter is in the queue right now, and I have a few more chapters done, so hopefully the updates will be fast. Thank you for your review, and I hope you keep reading. --ginnygirl16

 

Babysitting the Marauders by Pivotal_Love
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 2]

Summary: Gabrielle LeCorte grew up living next door to the Potters and they were like her family. When they started school she was given the task to 'keep an eye' on James Potter and try to keep him out of trouble. This was easier said than done, especially once he met Sirius Black, Remus Lupin and Peter Pettigrew. She became best friends with Sirius Black and was lucky enough to hang around with the infamous Marauders, even if she was more like a babysitter. Would she be destined to clean up after them her whole Hogwarts career or would she break away and become something separate from just the 'Marauder’s girl'?

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2245 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
04/06/09 Updated: 04/12/09


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 04/14/09 Title: Chapter 1: Same Old Story

I love it so far:D...Gabby seems really sweet and i like the part where she has some control over the marauders! Especially on James n Sirius.... I cant wait to see how James n Lily r going to b together from ur point of view... :P...i cant wait to read more.... update soon!!!!!!!!!

 

Crouching Father, Hidden Terror by Kerichi
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 24]

Summary:

It's official. Malfoy has murdered sleep.

*A Ron pov outtake to Our Little Secret.*



Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations

Word count: 1213 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/09/09 Updated: 04/09/09


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 04/18/09 Title: Chapter 1: To Sleep, Perchance to Dream

I just saw this fic... cant believe i missed it... anyways, its perfect!! It shows y Ron is still suspicious on Scorpius!!! I love tis fic.. I like the way u showed ron/hermione relationship as husband n wife....!!!!!! u should write one-shot on the Weasleys n harry's point of view on Sxorpius too....cant wait for the next chapter in "Our little Secret"....

Author's Response: Thank you for finding it! Harry has a series of books in his pov, so I like writing from other characters' viewpoints. George and Hugo are more likely candidates. :)

 

One Sweet Love by AlexPotter
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 13]

Summary: Love is something that shouldn’t be messed with. Like a bullet waiting to be shot, ready to destroy anyone in its path. But Lisa pulled the trigger! It was a mistake, although she knew that once it had happened, there was nothing she could do about it.

It had all started the day Lisa set eyes on Cedric Diggory. In a way, she was curious to get to know him better. To understand how his mind worked. In many ways he was a mysterious character in her mind. Little did she know, in her sixth year, all that was about to change…

Lisa Wood is a sixth year prefect at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. She is the younger sister of Oliver Wood, previous Gryffindor Keeper. Lisa falls for Cedric Diggory, but she has competition in the form of Cho Chang. Can she win his heart?

Hey guys! This story has been out for a LONG time, and I'm sorry. The good news is that I'm working on the 2nd Chapter, so expect to see it here soon! [15/06/10]

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death

Word count: 2789 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
04/11/09 Updated: 05/09/09


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 04/13/09 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Awww its so sweet.... but to bad Cho comes into the pic.... n Cedric dies in his seventh year....great chapter though... i love it...!! its very well written...cant wait for the next chapter....update soon plzz

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! Unfortunately, Cedric doesn't even make it to his seventh year - he dies in his sixth. *Sob.* Don't forget this story has an AU tag - so anything could happen ;-) Next chapter is at BETA right now so keep reading! ~ Holly

 

Brothers & Sisters by ringobeatlesfan4
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 17]

Summary:

They fight. They argue. They threaten never to speak again. But in the end, it’s all alright. Because they’re brothers and sisters, or at least that’s what it feels like. James, Albus, and Lily Potter are the closest siblings you’d ever find. Rose and Hugo Weasley have their differences, but in the end, they would die for each other. And as for Scorpius Malfoy… he’s unlike anything the others have seen before. But he’s okay… because he saved them on countless occasions.

This is the story of the bonds between siblings, cousins, and friends. It’s the story of forgetting the past to create a brighter future. And it’s the story of learning to let go of the old, and holding on to the new.



Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Substance Abuse, Violence

Word count: 4300 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
04/12/09 Updated: 05/17/09


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 04/23/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love it...it kinda made my day!! thank you:D..... i especially love this lines:

“Aw, Jamesie, don’t let it get you down!” Lily patted his shoulder. “I’m sure that one of us will do worse than you… Maybe… If you’re lucky…”

“Alright, everyone. I think that’s enough. Look at the poor kid.” Scorpius gestured to James’s hurt face. “I don’t think any of you would appreciate this if it were you. But James… Seriously… That was pathetic!”

It was really good... I liked the fact u made Scorpius friends with all of them when most of the writers write on them being enemies at 1st...I think its abosuletly brilliant n unique!!!! cant wait for the next chapter....update soon!

Author's Response: Hi, JeeviS! I'm glad it made your day. *huggles* That made MY day! And those were some of my favourite lines to write, as well. And I don't see Scorpius being enemies with them; it just doesn't seem right to me. Thanks for the compliments, and the next chapter should be up soon (if the good grace of the mods shines upon me)! {BeccA}

 

We Are by Luna_Lover
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 8]

Summary: We are teenagers finding ourselves in a steadily darkening world. We are children and adults, confident and conflicted. We are different and we are the same. We are brave, ambitious, loyal and clever, arrogant, selfish, foolish and haughty. We are lovers and fighters and friends. We are Hogwarts, class of 1978.

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 10251 Chapters: 3 Completed: No
Published:
04/16/09 Updated: 11/13/09


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 04/27/09 Title: Chapter 1: Where We Began

I love it... especially the part where James calles Lily as "princess"... i also like the kitten name James too... he sounds so adorable... I cant wait to read more of it... plz update soon

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it. ~LiLu

 
Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 05/24/09 Title: Chapter 2: Where We Belong

i love it !!!!!!!!!!!! update soon plz!

Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you like chapter two. Chapter three requires some tweaking, but I'll get it up as soon as I can. ~LiLu

 

Summary:

 

It would be easier to kill his father than reason with him.

 

*A Draco pov outtake to Our Little Secret.*



Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 1401 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/17/09 Updated: 04/17/09


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 04/18/09 Title: Chapter 1: If it were done when 'tis done...

i think this one shot fic brilliant!!!!! I love to know from Draco's point of view.... u should consider writing more from his point of view once in a while!! but is Draco all right with Scorpius decision to spend his holiday in Rose Weasley's house???

Author's Response:

Thank you for wanting more from Draco's pov! I have a 52 chapter epic in his pov called A Tale of Two Matchmakers I'd love you to read if you like Shakespeare and don't mind D/G. :)

Draco would rather Scorpius be just about anywhere else besides the knighting ceremony, including the Weasleys house.

 

Summary: “Is it true five years have passed since that night? That I have been dead for five years?”


Hermione had known love with Ron. But, now he was married to someone else and Hermione was alone with only her work at the Ministry to keep her busy.

But, when she was asked by Minister Shacklebolt to handle a problem, would Hermione find love with someone from her past?

Sirius Black’s life was cut short when he fell through the Veil in the Department of Mysteries. But, somehow, he inadvertently found a way to come back through the Veil.

When he was told it was five years after he fell, Sirius didn’t believe Kingsley. Sirius found himself being held in a room in the Department of Mysteries. A prisoner again.

When the door opened and a grown-up Hermione walked through it, Sirius was stunned. How could this be the same girl he had known?


This is the story of a lost girl, a man back from the dead, and a love story that will be talked about for years.

Categories: Hermione/Other Character Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations

Word count: 22692 Chapters: 8 Completed: No
Published:
05/03/09 Updated: 06/17/12


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 05/11/09 Title: Chapter 2: Explanations

I like it... :D.. its good to see Sirius alive again... The marauders and Lily are my favourite characters besides the trio...:)...cant wait for chapter 3...!!

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I am glad you are enjoying it. I will update very soon. Terri

 

The First Drop Of Rain by Rikku
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 9]

Summary: Lily is sitting alone out on the grounds, pondering her bravery and thinking about the war, when James finds her.


Note: rated 3rd-5th years as a precaution because of a swear word and the mention of murders.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 3645 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/04/09 Updated: 05/07/09


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 05/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: The First Drop Of Rain

love it!!!!!!!!!!! u should try making a story on the pairing instead of one shot... i really like tis one...keep up the great work!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it :) I'm afraid this story is just a one shot though, I think it would sort of ruin it if I kept writing on it :D

 

But I'm A Gryffindor by KASK
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 14]

Summary: James always put being a Gryffindor above all else...

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 5923 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/20/09 Updated: 06/25/09


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 06/25/09 Title: Chapter 1: But I'm A Gryffindor

hi... i love it! LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! its really good... :) i mean it.... is there going to b another chapter????

Author's Response: I'm not sure yet. Thanks for the review! :)

 

Stars Apart by Willow Rosenberg
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 430]

Summary: The sequel to “Trickster”: The Marauders return to Hogwarts for their seventh and final year. Lily and James juggle more responsibility than ever, and James learns that convincing Lily to go on an actual date with him is harder than he would have imagined. Remus frets about post-Hogwarts life while Peter drifts even further from his friends. But when Sirius discovers a group of fourth-years who are bound and determined to steal the Marauders’ title of Greatest Hogwarts Troublemakers he wages war, rallying his friends so they can maintain their legacy. Meanwhile, outside the castle grounds, Voldemort is gathering supporters in unending preparation for a much darker battle…

and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart)

-E. E. Cummings

September 2012: HEY guess what I couldn't wait, and the third installment, "World Enough," is UP NOW under James/Lily. Or just under my name. Or at this link: http://fanfiction.mugglenet.com/viewstory.php?sid=92131. Yay! :D



Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 107059 Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/22/10 Updated: 06/22/12


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 01/11/11 Title: Chapter 12: Bare

I love it!!!!!!!! cant wait for the next chapter! plz update soon...

 
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