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Moon Spell by WinkeeJR
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 15]

Summary: You met Abby in “A Child's Gift” now read her story. She's grown up and chasing down a legendary necklace known as Moon Spell. Someone wants to stop her, someone wants her to succeed and someone just wants it all to end, no matter which side wins.

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 20294 Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Published:
08/18/08 Updated: 04/07/09


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 04/07/09 Title: Chapter 3: Master

i love this story...:P ... i like this chapter too... i especially love the part where Draco n Harry talks like normal friends... thats not an everyday thing to see...:P

Author's Response: Thank you

 
Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 04/07/09 Title: Chapter 4: Blue Smoke

its been a while since u update the previous chapter.... Im glad that its finally here... actually, i had been waiting for this chapter for a while... and u didnt dissappoint me with this chapter either, in fact i love this chapter!!! Its the best so far! what i like the most abt this chapters are that eventhough they r updated late but its long in length...this chapter was well written!! Hope in future we will get to know more abt Damien... Cant wait for the next chapter to b updated!!!! update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you and hopefully you won't have to wait so long next time.

 

The Lions of Gryffindor by Equinox Chick
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 313]

Summary: Past Featured StoryIt is June 1976 and The Marauders are at the top of their game. From the outside they look to have everything.But appearances, as the saying goes, can be deceptive.

James is discovering that not everything in life is his for the taking. Sirius knows he will have to defy his formidable family. Remus lives in constant fear of his life beyond Hogwarts. As for Peter... Well, Peter is struggling to live up to his friends.

The ties of friendship are strong, but war is raging and with a dark power rising those ties will inevitably fray.

Added to the mix is an adversary called Severus Snape, some lost House Points, a prank or two and a whole lot of Lily.

This is a Marauder tale.

This is a story of what made them special.

This is a story of why it started to go wrong for The Lions of Gryffindor.

OH MY GOOD GODRIC! Lions of Gryffindor won the 2009 QSQ for Best Marauders' Era Story. Amazed and incredibly grateful to those who nominated, judged and have beta'd this fic. THANK YOU.

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Trick or Treat!
3. She clicks on her mouse and swipes her wand;
Some stories go up, and some stories are gone.
Stories of her own? Why, she has plenty!
Fewer than one-hundred, but far more than twenty.



Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 110875 Chapters: 23 Completed: No
Published:
09/10/08 Updated: 04/28/12


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 03/28/09 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Journeys to King's Cross

well in my opinion this chapter is brilliant...i love it! Especially the bit about Sirius and James and also abt James n Lily, it was sweet...update soon..... im looking forward to read the next chapter.... cant wait!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm getting on with the next chapter now... I promise.

 
Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 05/09/09 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Caught in the Crossfire

i think he would be like the twins more than Percy...:P... once again i love tis chapter... cant wait to read more...

Author's Response: I can't see Fabian being a stickler for the rules either, but he is a Professor now. Thank you for the review, it really is appreciated. Carole xxx

 

Muggle Island by Trivia Camlee
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 13]

Summary:

How many people does it take to cause a ruckus? Four: The three Dursleys, and a Ministry of Magic official. The Dursleys have no boat to get off the island in the first book, so a Magic official arrives to help them. Let the chaos, begin.

Note: language warning just to be safe- there are no real swears in here

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 2796 Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/28/08 Updated: 01/22/09


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 04/16/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chocolate Cake

haha ur right...i love this too... its funny... i love dudley nick name to.... Dummpy whummpy...:p

Author's Response: Thank you for reading three of my stories! I'm glad you liked it :) Every time I wrote down one of his nick-names I cracked up...

 
Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 04/16/09 Title: Chapter 2: Mourning for Cake and Aprons

i thought the part where vernon was asking petunia n dudley to keep quite was funny:P.... they kept arguing abt wat is more important... i really pity Bill ...he had to stand vernon n dudley's weight...haha.... love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u should really do humour fics:D.... well i think now im going to go n read "time gives us a push"....i always love james/lily pairing!:D...

Author's Response: Yea; I love knowing which parts people liked best. Poor Bill indeed! He was so excited to help- and they attacked him... lol. Thank you for all the awesome reviews :)

 

Reflection by Nitwit Blubber Oddment Tweak x
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 66]

Summary: Nearly every witch and wizard in the magical community suffered in the aftermath of the Great Battle of Hogwarts, including Draco Malfoy. He’s no longer the cocky, arrogant, slick-haired Prince of Slytherin, but a haunted, vulnerable young man. Finally free of his father and the Dark Lord’s clutches, he revels in his new found independence. The wizarding society is broken and rebuilding, and Draco returns to Hogwarts to repeat his seventh year. Newly appointed as Head-Boy, it seems Draco has changed. But has he changed enough to accept Hermione Granger as Head-Girl?

Chapter Seven is up! Leave a review :D


Categories: Hermione/Draco Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 10112 Chapters: 7 Completed: No
Published:
11/29/08 Updated: 05/17/09


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 05/12/09 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

its nice ..but isnt it a little short?? by the way keep up the good work :D...

Author's Response: I know, I know; but it was just a little transition chapter... Chapter 6 is wayyyy longer! Thanks for the nice review :D

 
Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 12/16/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

hi,
the story line was good... n i like this story...its bit kind of diferent from others on draco/hermione. but i do wanna ask something why is the chapter 1 below chapter 2?

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for taking the time to write the review! That error should be fixed now. Continue to read & review please (:

 

Summary: Draco Malfoy was in a mess. His father was determined to get their stance back in the wizarding world, even if it meant ruining his son's life. Draco needed to find a way to stop his father's disgusting plans, and fortunately, he found just the answer: Astoria. The solution? Pretending to be engaged to Astoria when they're truly not, so that his father doesn't get him married to some Mudblood.

But what happens when this little game called pretend turns into something more? Will it be too late before they both realize their feelings for each other?



Categories: Draco/Other Character Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations, Substance Abuse

Word count: 9304 Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Published:
12/26/08 Updated: 09/11/09


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 05/06/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: "First Impressions"

I love it:D.... plz continue.........

Author's Response: Glad you love it! Of course I'll continue. :)

 
Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 05/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: "The Two Actors"

haha :D... i really cant wait for the next chapter... its a realy good story... i think its a very good thing ur filling the gaps on Draco and Astoria... this is the first story i read on them:D....

Author's Response: Aww, thanks. I also hope I can update faster. It's reviews like yours that keep me going! :)

 

Just a Boggart by trinsy
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 5]

Summary: Sirius was staring at the patch of carpet where the boggart, pretending to be Harry’s body, had lain. (OotP, Ch 9)

What was going through Sirius’s mind during “The Woes of Mrs. Weasley”? A missing moment from OotP.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2093 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/13/09 Updated: 01/16/09


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 01/16/09 Title: Chapter 1: one-shot

I love it... it nearly made me to cry...i really pity sirius... i guess, j.k.rowling was right by taking sirius's life so that he could join james and know that he didnt blame sirius for what had happened... Im sure only then sirius would be peaceful... great story though... love it!!!

 

Everything We Could Have Been by redcastle
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 44]

Summary: With Ron's constant snogging of his new girlfriend, Lavender, Hermione is never around. Yes, she was jealous of Lavender and upset with Ron, but what was she doing all this time? The rise of Voldemort, constant pressure in school, and her love for Ron are clear issues in her life, but what if Hermione was struggling with other problems—problems no one else, save one, knew about? What if, while in love with Ron, she found herself falling in love with someone else—someone none of her friends, nor herself, would ever have expected? This is the bittersweet tale of the love that blossomed between Hermione Granger and Draco Malfoy during their 6th year at Hogwarts and beyond.

**UPDATE:** I am sorry for taking such a long break. I am now rewriting the story from a third person perspective because I just feel it is my stronger style and I feel I could not describe things the way I wanted to simply from Hermione's eyes, especially because she could not know Draco's thoughts, which I would like to include. I hope to finish the new Prologue in a few days and hopefully it will be validated quickly. I will probably just delete the current chapters as soon as the new version is accepted. Please continue to review and let me know what your opinion of the new version is. Again, I am so sorry. Future updates will be announced on my livejournal account so please follow there and comment. Thank you for any fans left out there who believe in my story. I am also looking for a beta to please look over my chapters before I submit them. Send me a message on the forum (username: redcastle) or on livejournal (username: cherryredcastle) if you are interested.

Categories: Hermione/Draco Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations, Strong Profanity

Word count: 1100 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
01/18/09 Updated: 01/13/11


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 01/24/09 Title: Everything We Could Have Been

hey,
I love it so far but would it be AU later on? i mean as we all know that in the 7th book, hermione and ron would be together....thats y im asking....

Author's Response: Well I don't want to give everything away, but if you read my story notes you should be able to figure out the ending way ahead of time. So no, it really won't be AU unfortunately, but that's the whole point of my story. I hope that doesn't disappoint anyone :(

 

Our Little Secret by Kerichi
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 416]

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was like a wizard tale. The clever Slytherin helps a hag who later repays the debt. Except that Rose Weasley wasn't a hag, and Scorpius didn't expect to call in the favour.

*Winner of the 2010 Next Generation QSQ award*



Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 66520 Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/02/09 Updated: 08/28/09


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 04/21/09 Title: Chapter 11: Burrow

:D...once again i love it... i liked the part where scorpius decorated the fairy cakes especially for Rose! it was so sweet... will Scorpius know that his grandfather wasnt truthful abt Harry?? Its kinda sad to see Scorpius keep thinking abt wat his grandfather told him... I like the 4 rules to date my daughter part...yeah ur right, it would hav been fun to think of how Teddy's eyes would b getting huge...:P...I liked the way u wrote abt how the kids n Scorpius played:P....cat wait for the next one!!!!!!!! update soon:D

Author's Response:

It's all about perception. Harry didn't know what that spell would do, but he used it anyway and almost killed Draco. He didn't want him to die, but that wouldn't have made Scorpius' father less dead if Snape hadn't been there, so Lucius was speaking the truth...as he saw it.

I'll be interested in your reaction to the next chapter!

 
Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 04/15/09 Title: Chapter 10: Patronus

I love it:D.... cant wait to see hows the weasley guys n harry going to react.... I do feel bad about the george/angelina relationship....i also really loved scorpius' patronus!!!!!!!! looking forward to read the next chappie!!!!! update soon!

Author's Response: I feel bad too...just not enough to keep them trapped in an unhealthy relationship. Thank you for loving the Patronus!

 
Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 04/07/09 Title: Chapter 9: Promises

I like this chapter... wonder wat shape is scorpius's patronus... haha update soon... cant wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: I can't wait for your reaction! :D

 
Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 04/02/09 Title: Chapter 8: Family

i love it!! update soon

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm hoping soon = in the next few days! :)

 
Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 05/28/09 Title: Chapter 16: Stories

love it!!!!! another great chapter... :P.. i like the part abt where Hermione spills about her love life ...haha was so funny!!! by the way, whose sofa? harry's??


update sooon.... cant wait 2 read d next chapter!!!

Author's Response: It's a mystery about the sofa, :D, but my guess is Christmas at the Burrow, Rose was asleep in the middle of their bed upstairs, so Hermione and Ron came down to the lounge for a kiss and cuddle. ^_~

 
Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 05/10/09 Title: Chapter 13: Surprise

once again, i love it... I also love the Trackingbralls... it sound so facinating... :D...cant wait to read more... update soon ya!

Author's Response: Thank you for loving the Trackingbrall! It isn't the only thing up Lucius' sleeve. ;)

 

The Phoenix's Ashes by Natida
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 3]

Summary:

Life has never been so difficult, or so dangerous. In midst of the deaths, attacks, violence and betrayal, James, Sirius, Remus, Peter, Lily, Alice and Violet leave Hogwarts forever to live a new life as adults. With the secret organization that Dumbledore founded, known as the Order of the Phoenix, they risk their lives to fight against the terrible Lord Voldemort who threatens to take over everything they live for. In spite of the terror, good things still happen, and most ties of friendship still endure through hardship.

We join the Marauders and their friends as they struggle through life, death, friendship, love, and betrayal. Their lives will never be the same again.



Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 5513 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
02/06/09 Updated: 03/16/09


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 03/18/09 Title: Chapter 2: The Order of the Phoenix

I love it... i like the way u assume on how the marauders and the others were out of school... its great... not everyone does it.... usually they tend to start from their school time... keep it up... update soon ya... im looking forward to read the next chapter..

Author's Response: Thank you, I'll update as soon as I can :)

 

Summary: "Between the woods and frozen lake, The darkest evening of the year..." Lily and James take a walk.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 951 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/19/09 Updated: 02/19/09


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 02/20/09 Title: Chapter 1: Between The Woods & Frozen Lake

i love it! it was a very sweet chapter...

 
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