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A Little Game Called Pretend by Dark_Angel123

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Draco Malfoy was in a mess. His father was determined to get their stance back in the wizarding world, even if it meant ruining his son's life. Draco needed to find a way to stop his father's disgusting plans, and fortunately, he found just the answer: Astoria. The solution? Pretending to be engaged to Astoria when they're truly not, so that his father doesn't get him married to some Mudblood.

But what happens when this little game called pretend turns into something more? Will it be too late before they both realize their feelings for each other?

Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 05/06/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: "First Impressions"

I love it:D.... plz continue.........

Author's Response: Glad you love it! Of course I'll continue. :)

Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 05/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: "The Two Actors"

haha :D... i really cant wait for the next chapter... its a realy good story... i think its a very good thing ur filling the gaps on Draco and Astoria... this is the first story i read on them:D....

Author's Response: Aww, thanks. I also hope I can update faster. It's reviews like yours that keep me going! :)

Just a Boggart by trinsy

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Sirius was staring at the patch of carpet where the boggart, pretending to be Harry’s body, had lain. (OotP, Ch 9)

What was going through Sirius’s mind during “The Woes of Mrs. Weasley”? A missing moment from OotP.
Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 01/16/09 Title: Chapter 1: one-shot

I love it... it nearly made me to cry...i really pity sirius... i guess, j.k.rowling was right by taking sirius's life so that he could join james and know that he didnt blame sirius for what had happened... Im sure only then sirius would be peaceful... great story though... love it!!!

Everything We Could Have Been by redcastle

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: With Ron's constant snogging of his new girlfriend, Lavender, Hermione is never around. Yes, she was jealous of Lavender and upset with Ron, but what was she doing all this time? The rise of Voldemort, constant pressure in school, and her love for Ron are clear issues in her life, but what if Hermione was struggling with other problems—problems no one else, save one, knew about? What if, while in love with Ron, she found herself falling in love with someone else—someone none of her friends, nor herself, would ever have expected? This is the bittersweet tale of the love that blossomed between Hermione Granger and Draco Malfoy during their 6th year at Hogwarts and beyond.

**UPDATE:** I am sorry for taking such a long break. I am now rewriting the story from a third person perspective because I just feel it is my stronger style and I feel I could not describe things the way I wanted to simply from Hermione's eyes, especially because she could not know Draco's thoughts, which I would like to include. I hope to finish the new Prologue in a few days and hopefully it will be validated quickly. I will probably just delete the current chapters as soon as the new version is accepted. Please continue to review and let me know what your opinion of the new version is. Again, I am so sorry. Future updates will be announced on my livejournal account so please follow there and comment. Thank you for any fans left out there who believe in my story. I am also looking for a beta to please look over my chapters before I submit them. Send me a message on the forum (username: redcastle) or on livejournal (username: cherryredcastle) if you are interested.
Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 01/24/09 Title: Everything We Could Have Been

I love it so far but would it be AU later on? i mean as we all know that in the 7th book, hermione and ron would be together....thats y im asking....

Author's Response: Well I don't want to give everything away, but if you read my story notes you should be able to figure out the ending way ahead of time. So no, it really won't be AU unfortunately, but that's the whole point of my story. I hope that doesn't disappoint anyone :(

Our Little Secret by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years • Past Featured Story

It was like a wizard tale. The clever Slytherin helps a hag who later repays the debt. Except that Rose Weasley wasn't a hag, and Scorpius didn't expect to call in the favour.

*Winner of the 2010 Next Generation QSQ award*

Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 04/21/09 Title: Chapter 11: Burrow

:D...once again i love it... i liked the part where scorpius decorated the fairy cakes especially for Rose! it was so sweet... will Scorpius know that his grandfather wasnt truthful abt Harry?? Its kinda sad to see Scorpius keep thinking abt wat his grandfather told him... I like the 4 rules to date my daughter part...yeah ur right, it would hav been fun to think of how Teddy's eyes would b getting huge...:P...I liked the way u wrote abt how the kids n Scorpius played:P....cat wait for the next one!!!!!!!! update soon:D

Author's Response:

It's all about perception. Harry didn't know what that spell would do, but he used it anyway and almost killed Draco. He didn't want him to die, but that wouldn't have made Scorpius' father less dead if Snape hadn't been there, so Lucius was speaking the truth...as he saw it.

I'll be interested in your reaction to the next chapter!

Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 04/15/09 Title: Chapter 10: Patronus

I love it:D.... cant wait to see hows the weasley guys n harry going to react.... I do feel bad about the george/angelina relationship....i also really loved scorpius' patronus!!!!!!!! looking forward to read the next chappie!!!!! update soon!

Author's Response: I feel bad too...just not enough to keep them trapped in an unhealthy relationship. Thank you for loving the Patronus!

Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 04/07/09 Title: Chapter 9: Promises

I like this chapter... wonder wat shape is scorpius's patronus... haha update soon... cant wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: I can't wait for your reaction! :D

Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 04/02/09 Title: Chapter 8: Family

i love it!! update soon

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm hoping soon = in the next few days! :)

Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 05/28/09 Title: Chapter 16: Stories

love it!!!!! another great chapter... :P.. i like the part abt where Hermione spills about her love life ...haha was so funny!!! by the way, whose sofa? harry's??

update sooon.... cant wait 2 read d next chapter!!!

Author's Response: It's a mystery about the sofa, :D, but my guess is Christmas at the Burrow, Rose was asleep in the middle of their bed upstairs, so Hermione and Ron came down to the lounge for a kiss and cuddle. ^_~

Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 05/10/09 Title: Chapter 13: Surprise

once again, i love it... I also love the Trackingbralls... it sound so facinating... :D...cant wait to read more... update soon ya!

Author's Response: Thank you for loving the Trackingbrall! It isn't the only thing up Lucius' sleeve. ;)

The Phoenix's Ashes by Natida

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •

Life has never been so difficult, or so dangerous. In midst of the deaths, attacks, violence and betrayal, James, Sirius, Remus, Peter, Lily, Alice and Violet leave Hogwarts forever to live a new life as adults. With the secret organization that Dumbledore founded, known as the Order of the Phoenix, they risk their lives to fight against the terrible Lord Voldemort who threatens to take over everything they live for. In spite of the terror, good things still happen, and most ties of friendship still endure through hardship.

We join the Marauders and their friends as they struggle through life, death, friendship, love, and betrayal. Their lives will never be the same again.

Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 03/18/09 Title: Chapter 2: The Order of the Phoenix

I love it... i like the way u assume on how the marauders and the others were out of school... its great... not everyone does it.... usually they tend to start from their school time... keep it up... update soon ya... im looking forward to read the next chapter..

Author's Response: Thank you, I'll update as soon as I can :)

Between The Woods & Frozen Lake by GringottsVault711

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: "Between the woods and frozen lake, The darkest evening of the year..." Lily and James take a walk.
Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 02/20/09 Title: Chapter 1: Between The Woods & Frozen Lake

i love it! it was a very sweet chapter...

Trickster by Willow Rosenberg

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: After the disastrous events of the end of the Marauder's fifth year, a fuming Lily Evans decides that that arrogant James Potter and his friends need a taste of their own medicine. The straight-laced Prefect suddenly finds herself pranking her class's trickiest boys--and maybe even enjoying it. Coupled with a series of mysterious apology letters that Lily has begun receiving, it's bound to be an interesting year.

Winner of the 2010 QSQ for Best Canon Romance!

Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 03/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: Study Breaks

wow, its a really great story. I love how it is heading so far... but im a bit confused abt something, isnt Lily's patronous supposed to be a doe? Sorry, its just a bit confused thats all.Other than that, great job!! Update soon. Im loking forward to it.

Author's Response: thanks! and yeah, hers and snapes both are. i kind of figured since they both become totally different people later in there lives, their Patronuses are going to change. Like Snape's not so desperately in love with Lily right now, and like his whole life becomes about her after she dies, but he hasn't gotten to that point. JJust what i figured, hope that helps!

Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 03/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Study Breaks

haha yup it helps.... thanks.... but do update soon ya.... i reallly cant wait for the rest of the story!

Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 03/26/09 Title: Chapter 2: Dangerous Liaisons

I love it love it love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Its a really good chappie... especially the part where James talks to Lily... It was sweet... oh i also lked the part where LIly smacked directly into the bookcase after telling off Snape, who snickered at her.... could u update soon? Oh ya by the way, how far r u going to write the stoy? till James and Lily gets married or till their graduation or till the night where they protect their child??

Author's Response: Thanks so much! :) the next chapter should be up soon, hopefully! Well, this story is going to go until the end of the sixth year. I'm probably going to do at least one sequel though, maybe two, depending on how it turns out. Glad you liked it!!

Harry Potter: The Following Year by ginnygirl16

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Harry Potter returns to Hogwarts for his seventh year. With Quidditch, NEWT's, and a pompous new Transfiguration teacher this year is certainly not going to be dull! Mix in some Marauders, a couple jokes, and a bunch of good friends and this will be Harry's best year yet! Nominated for QSQ'a Best General Fic. Thank you!

Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 04/21/09 Title: Chapter 1: Rebuilding

yea i did... i like the part where Harry wants to send off Fred in style:P...

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it... I hope you will keep on reading! --ginnygirl16

Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 04/21/09 Title: Chapter 2: Fred's Funeral

i like Fred's funeral...:D...i also love the part where Harry holds n plays with Teddy!! cant wait for the next chapter!!! update soon!!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked Fred's Funeral. I thought it would be a nice touch. You know, I'm very glad you like the part with Harry and Teddy. In the original version of this chapter, that wasn't even in it. However, the mods thought I should add a little more, and that's what I came up with. I'm glad to hear you like it. The next chapter is in the queue right now, and I have a few more chapters done, so hopefully the updates will be fast. Thank you for your review, and I hope you keep reading. --ginnygirl16

Babysitting the Marauders by Pivotal_Love

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Gabrielle LeCorte grew up living next door to the Potters and they were like her family. When they started school she was given the task to 'keep an eye' on James Potter and try to keep him out of trouble. This was easier said than done, especially once he met Sirius Black, Remus Lupin and Peter Pettigrew. She became best friends with Sirius Black and was lucky enough to hang around with the infamous Marauders, even if she was more like a babysitter. Would she be destined to clean up after them her whole Hogwarts career or would she break away and become something separate from just the 'Marauder’s girl'?
Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 04/14/09 Title: Chapter 1: Same Old Story

I love it so far:D...Gabby seems really sweet and i like the part where she has some control over the marauders! Especially on James n Sirius.... I cant wait to see how James n Lily r going to b together from ur point of view... :P...i cant wait to read more.... update soon!!!!!!!!!

Crouching Father, Hidden Terror by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years •

It's official. Malfoy has murdered sleep.

*A Ron pov outtake to Our Little Secret.*

Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 04/18/09 Title: Chapter 1: To Sleep, Perchance to Dream

I just saw this fic... cant believe i missed it... anyways, its perfect!! It shows y Ron is still suspicious on Scorpius!!! I love tis fic.. I like the way u showed ron/hermione relationship as husband n wife....!!!!!! u should write one-shot on the Weasleys n harry's point of view on Sxorpius too....cant wait for the next chapter in "Our little Secret"....

Author's Response: Thank you for finding it! Harry has a series of books in his pov, so I like writing from other characters' viewpoints. George and Hugo are more likely candidates. :)

One Sweet Love by AlexPotter

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Love is something that shouldn’t be messed with. Like a bullet waiting to be shot, ready to destroy anyone in its path. But Lisa pulled the trigger! It was a mistake, although she knew that once it had happened, there was nothing she could do about it.

It had all started the day Lisa set eyes on Cedric Diggory. In a way, she was curious to get to know him better. To understand how his mind worked. In many ways he was a mysterious character in her mind. Little did she know, in her sixth year, all that was about to change…

Lisa Wood is a sixth year prefect at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. She is the younger sister of Oliver Wood, previous Gryffindor Keeper. Lisa falls for Cedric Diggory, but she has competition in the form of Cho Chang. Can she win his heart?

Hey guys! This story has been out for a LONG time, and I'm sorry. The good news is that I'm working on the 2nd Chapter, so expect to see it here soon! [15/06/10]
Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 04/13/09 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Awww its so sweet.... but to bad Cho comes into the pic.... n Cedric dies in his seventh year....great chapter though... i love it...!! its very well written...cant wait for the next chapter....update soon plzz

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! Unfortunately, Cedric doesn't even make it to his seventh year - he dies in his sixth. *Sob.* Don't forget this story has an AU tag - so anything could happen ;-) Next chapter is at BETA right now so keep reading! ~ Holly