Im 17yrs old... I love to read Harry Potter ...im a huge fan...
But what happens when this little game called pretend turns into something more? Will it be too late before they both realize their feelings for each other?
I love it:D.... plz continue.........
Author's Response: Glad you love it! Of course I'll continue. :)
haha :D... i really cant wait for the next chapter... its a realy good story... i think its a very good thing ur filling the gaps on Draco and Astoria... this is the first story i read on them:D....
Author's Response: Aww, thanks. I also hope I can update faster. It's reviews like yours that keep me going! :)
I love it... it nearly made me to cry...i really pity sirius... i guess, j.k.rowling was right by taking sirius's life so that he could join james and know that he didnt blame sirius for what had happened... Im sure only then sirius would be peaceful... great story though... love it!!!
I love it so far but would it be AU later on? i mean as we all know that in the 7th book, hermione and ron would be together....thats y im asking....
Author's Response: Well I don't want to give everything away, but if you read my story notes you should be able to figure out the ending way ahead of time. So no, it really won't be AU unfortunately, but that's the whole point of my story. I hope that doesn't disappoint anyone :(
It was like a wizard tale. The clever Slytherin helps a hag who later repays the debt. Except that Rose Weasley wasn't a hag, and Scorpius didn't expect to call in the favour.
*Winner of the 2010 Next Generation QSQ award*
:D...once again i love it... i liked the part where scorpius decorated the fairy cakes especially for Rose! it was so sweet... will Scorpius know that his grandfather wasnt truthful abt Harry?? Its kinda sad to see Scorpius keep thinking abt wat his grandfather told him... I like the 4 rules to date my daughter part...yeah ur right, it would hav been fun to think of how Teddy's eyes would b getting huge...:P...I liked the way u wrote abt how the kids n Scorpius played:P....cat wait for the next one!!!!!!!! update soon:D
It's all about perception. Harry didn't know what that spell would do, but he used it anyway and almost killed Draco. He didn't want him to die, but that wouldn't have made Scorpius' father less dead if Snape hadn't been there, so Lucius was speaking the truth...as he saw it.
I'll be interested in your reaction to the next chapter!
I love it:D.... cant wait to see hows the weasley guys n harry going to react.... I do feel bad about the george/angelina relationship....i also really loved scorpius' patronus!!!!!!!! looking forward to read the next chappie!!!!! update soon!
Author's Response: I feel bad too...just not enough to keep them trapped in an unhealthy relationship. Thank you for loving the Patronus!
I like this chapter... wonder wat shape is scorpius's patronus... haha update soon... cant wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: I can't wait for your reaction! :D
i love it!! update soon
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm hoping soon = in the next few days! :)
love it!!!!! another great chapter... :P.. i like the part abt where Hermione spills about her love life ...haha was so funny!!! by the way, whose sofa? harry's??
update sooon.... cant wait 2 read d next chapter!!!
Author's Response: It's a mystery about the sofa, :D, but my guess is Christmas at the Burrow, Rose was asleep in the middle of their bed upstairs, so Hermione and Ron came down to the lounge for a kiss and cuddle. ^_~
once again, i love it... I also love the Trackingbralls... it sound so facinating... :D...cant wait to read more... update soon ya!
Author's Response: Thank you for loving the Trackingbrall! It isn't the only thing up Lucius' sleeve. ;)
Life has never been so difficult, or so dangerous. In midst of the deaths, attacks, violence and betrayal, James, Sirius, Remus, Peter, Lily, Alice and Violet leave Hogwarts forever to live a new life as adults. With the secret organization that Dumbledore founded, known as the Order of the Phoenix, they risk their lives to fight against the terrible Lord Voldemort who threatens to take over everything they live for. In spite of the terror, good things still happen, and most ties of friendship still endure through hardship.
We join the Marauders and their friends as they struggle through life, death, friendship, love, and betrayal. Their lives will never be the same again.
I love it... i like the way u assume on how the marauders and the others were out of school... its great... not everyone does it.... usually they tend to start from their school time... keep it up... update soon ya... im looking forward to read the next chapter..
Author's Response: Thank you, I'll update as soon as I can :)
i love it! it was a very sweet chapter...
Winner of the 2010 QSQ for Best Canon Romance!
wow, its a really great story. I love how it is heading so far... but im a bit confused abt something, isnt Lily's patronous supposed to be a doe? Sorry, its just a bit confused thats all.Other than that, great job!! Update soon. Im loking forward to it.
Author's Response: thanks! and yeah, hers and snapes both are. i kind of figured since they both become totally different people later in there lives, their Patronuses are going to change. Like Snape's not so desperately in love with Lily right now, and like his whole life becomes about her after she dies, but he hasn't gotten to that point. JJust what i figured, hope that helps!
haha yup it helps.... thanks.... but do update soon ya.... i reallly cant wait for the rest of the story!
I love it love it love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Its a really good chappie... especially the part where James talks to Lily... It was sweet... oh i also lked the part where LIly smacked directly into the bookcase after telling off Snape, who snickered at her.... could u update soon? Oh ya by the way, how far r u going to write the stoy? till James and Lily gets married or till their graduation or till the night where they protect their child??
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :) the next chapter should be up soon, hopefully! Well, this story is going to go until the end of the sixth year. I'm probably going to do at least one sequel though, maybe two, depending on how it turns out. Glad you liked it!!
yea i did... i like the part where Harry wants to send off Fred in style:P...
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it... I hope you will keep on reading! --ginnygirl16
i like Fred's funeral...:D...i also love the part where Harry holds n plays with Teddy!! cant wait for the next chapter!!! update soon!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked Fred's Funeral. I thought it would be a nice touch. You know, I'm very glad you like the part with Harry and Teddy. In the original version of this chapter, that wasn't even in it. However, the mods thought I should add a little more, and that's what I came up with. I'm glad to hear you like it. The next chapter is in the queue right now, and I have a few more chapters done, so hopefully the updates will be fast. Thank you for your review, and I hope you keep reading. --ginnygirl16
I love it so far:D...Gabby seems really sweet and i like the part where she has some control over the marauders! Especially on James n Sirius.... I cant wait to see how James n Lily r going to b together from ur point of view... :P...i cant wait to read more.... update soon!!!!!!!!!
It's official. Malfoy has murdered sleep.
*A Ron pov outtake to Our Little Secret.*
I just saw this fic... cant believe i missed it... anyways, its perfect!! It shows y Ron is still suspicious on Scorpius!!! I love tis fic.. I like the way u showed ron/hermione relationship as husband n wife....!!!!!! u should write one-shot on the Weasleys n harry's point of view on Sxorpius too....cant wait for the next chapter in "Our little Secret"....
Author's Response: Thank you for finding it! Harry has a series of books in his pov, so I like writing from other characters' viewpoints. George and Hugo are more likely candidates. :)
Awww its so sweet.... but to bad Cho comes into the pic.... n Cedric dies in his seventh year....great chapter though... i love it...!! its very well written...cant wait for the next chapter....update soon plzz
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! Unfortunately, Cedric doesn't even make it to his seventh year - he dies in his sixth. *Sob.* Don't forget this story has an AU tag - so anything could happen ;-) Next chapter is at BETA right now so keep reading! ~ Holly