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Everything Happens for a Reason by MerrryD
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 31]

Summary:

Five hundred twenty-five thousand six hundred minutes

Every student plans on making their final year at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry the most memorable one ever. Eight in particular want to make those minutes really count. Except, they each have a different idea of how to go about doing it.

James Potter would like to waltz into Lily Evans’s life and throw it completely off course. Julie McGuire didn’t exactly plan on rescuing Remus Lupin, but now that she has, why not just go with it? Marlene McKinnon should have know what she got herself into when she kissed Sirius Black the first time, but that boy has a way of knocking her senseless. Emmeline Vance had planned to just sit back and watch it all happen, until Roxanna Louchester, her ex-friend, barged in and turned everything upside down.

Suddenly they’ve gone from only wanting the most memorable year, to achieving it. It’s a year of love and lust. It’s a year of tears and fights. It’s a year of finding yourself. It’s a year of learning to lose. It’s a year that none of them are likely to forget.

How do you measure a year in the life?



Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations, Strong Profanity, Violence

Word count: 18589 Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Published:
06/27/08 Updated: 08/28/09


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 04/29/09 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four: Oh, Won't You Light the Candle?

Yay James is back!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it... hmmm when James asked to dance i thought he still liked her and stuff... but it didnt actualy show much....does he???????? i can see tat Lily is starting to notice him more n more which is good...

You know u might find it weird but i absolutely loved thid lines:

“Why?” James sounded amused. “An old boyfriend?”

She winced. “No. He never got that chance.”

He froze. “Snape?” he whispered.

Lily lowered her head a fraction, dropping her gaze to the floor. “Yes,” she murmured.


I dunno y.... but i think it was fantastic especially when Lily said he never got the chance after James asked her.... furthermore, i had been waiting for a chapter about Lily and James for long.... finally its here!!!!!!!! and ur right i find that this is also my favourite chapter so far too!!! this chapter is well written and it was also good to se it from Lily's point of view... will we be able to see from ?James' point of view??? cant wait for the next chapter.... plz update soon!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Summary: The Bachelorette, the reality show that has swept the universe, has finally arrived at Hogwarts! Hermione Granger has been chosen as the contestent who will search through a herd of male contenders to find her one true love. But what will ensue on her extremely dangerous journey where Hogwarts seems to have been flipped upside down?




Our lovely commentaters, Granny and her whiney granddaughter, Darla, will critique their way through this highly anticipated reality television series and pick their favorites out of the charming, scary, simple, complex, and hilarious men who are vying to win Hermione's heart


Stay tuned...

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 521 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
07/05/08 Updated: 07/05/08


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 04/16/09 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

plz update the next chapter! its really good so far

 

Marauders to the End- Year One by armagod679
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 46]

Summary: This is the story of the rat, the stag, the werewolf, and the dog. They met by fate and were bound by a secret. Hopes, fears, love, tears, great and small, Marauders all. Their years at Hogwarts will always live on in infamy, although so many people say different things. Here is the frivolous first year of the tale of Moony, Wormtail, Padfoot, and Prongs.

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Book 7 Disregarded, Mild Profanity, Substance Abuse, Violence

Word count: 39466 Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/08/08 Updated: 09/09/09


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 04/05/09 Title: Chapter 15: Underneath the Willow Tree

haha i enjoyed it:P.... too bad it will take u a while to write again but im looking forward to the next one:D... try to write as soon as possible when ur done.... great chapter by the way!

 
Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 03/27/09 Title: Chapter 13: On Being Eleven Years Old and on Top of the World

wow this chapter was updated really fast n i love it! update soon...cant wait to read more...

Author's Response: You're right, it was! I'm glad you're enjoying this!

 
Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 03/18/09 Title: Chapter 11: Some Winter's Tales

I love it... i had always been a fan of this story since it first started... still am till now..i think this chapter is great... at least Sirius knows Remus's secret.. but i do hope that James will know soon abt it and as well as on Sirius's life... plz update soon ya... im really looking forward to read the next chapter..

Author's Response: Thanks! Wait for the next chapter!

 
Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 03/30/09 Title: Chapter 14: The Essay that Took Over Hogwarts

Haha i love the ending part abt ppl speaking normal english:P.... i feel bad for sirius though..... great job by the way! n again thanks for putting up this chapter really fast:D....

 
Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 03/26/09 Title: Chapter 12: A Very Painful Meeting

the story abt Remus life is really sad... it nearly made me to cry... oh by the way, thanks for making James to find out abt it sooner than later... Remus really needs his friends for support.... i love this chapter !! It shows great friendship between the marauders...cant wait for the next chapter!!! n thanks again for updating this chapter earlier than expected...

 

A Different View On Love by helz_belz
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 364]

Summary: James would do anything to get inside Lily’s head. Lily would do anything to get away from James. Lily was brewing a banned potion. James went to find her. Lily made a mistake and the potion exploded. James got his wish, but is it much more than he bargained for?

Now Complete!



After a year the Epilouge is now up! Come read for a bit of fun!!

Runner up QSQ - Best Chaptered Canon Romance


Reason for Nomination:
This is the most unique take on how James and Lily really got to know each other. The story is hilarious and keeps you laughing throughout, but it never lets you forget the serious stuff. Plus, she somehow manages to end each chapter with a nice cliffhanger.

~~hestiajones

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 51560 Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/23/08 Updated: 04/08/11


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 05/05/09 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven: The Head's Dormitory

I think its perfect:D... i really really love it... The best chapter so far!!!! update sooon ya

Author's Response: Aww thanks so much :) I'm glad you liked it

 

More than Meets the Eye by lilybobily7
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 194]

Summary: First problem: James Potter is Head Boy. Second problem: Why is he acting so different? The James Potter that Lily Evans knows is arrogant and conceited and loves Quidditch and bullying his “inferiors” with an unimaginable passion. This year he’s kind and charming and much more, shall we dare say it…mature. He is also much more distant than he has ever been in all her years at Hogwarts. In her seventh year, Lily finds out that there is much more to James Potter than meets the eye and together they set out on the long and precarious road to each other’s hearts.


Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 66128 Chapters: 23 Completed: No
Published:
08/08/08 Updated: 01/11/10


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 05/26/09 Title: Chapter 17: Truth

finally!! haha yup love it... by the way till when r u going to continue tis!??? u know wat was the most amazing thing?? i just thought of this story yesterday n today its all updated with d moment we hav been waiting for all along :D....cant wait for the next chapter... update soon...

Author's Response: oh that's great that you thought of my story the day before it was updated. haha. and no, this story is not over. right now i'm working on editing chapter 20/beginning to write chapter 21. and then after that there's probably going to be another couple chapters. thanks so much for reviewing! ~julia~

 
Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 03/18/09 Title: Chapter 1: Good Dreams and Nightmares

i really like this chapter... furthermore, its kinda different from wat a person imagined how the story would go... good work on that. I think that Lily might talk to Severus or Sirius in the hospital wing or maybe professor dumbledore, himself ( theres a possibility) ...haha could u update it soon... Im really looking forward to read the next chapter...

Author's Response: thanks for reviewing! and it's a possibility...I'll try to update soon =]

 
Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 03/30/09 Title: Chapter 15: Unexpected

I love this chapter!!!! Finally, LIiy told him the truth abt how she felt.... and i do pity Severus though.... I love the part where Sirius, Lily, Remus were critizing Olivia during breakfast :P.... Overall, great job! :D... and thanks for the plate of cyber chocolate chip cookies... plz update soon... cant wait to know what will happen between James and LIly now...

Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, Lily did finally tell her feeings to James...things might get interesting in the next couple chapters. ;) The breakfast scene was fun to write too. poor Olivia. No one likes her except James. Again, thanks for reviewing and I'll try to update soon.

 
Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 05/05/09 Title: Chapter 16: In a New Light

I love it... i just hope James breaks up with Olivia soon..... He and Lily should get together soon too.... how many more chapters to go by the way??? plz update soon

Author's Response: Thanks! It'll happen soon enough. ;) Umm...right now I'm in the process of writing chapter 20..and then there will probably still be a few more chapters after that. hopefully i'll finally finish this story. =]

 
Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 02/20/09 Title: Chapter 13: The Lion and the Serpent

Haha i dont hate you...or James... I mean Lily did ask him to move on to another girl... Furthermore, im sure he was in a depress state so the only thing he could do now is to forget Lily by going out with someone else.... i like this chapter... i hope Lil would finally tell James about how she feels... Update soon!! cant wait to read more

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! We'll see about Lily.. I'll try to update soon. ~Julia~

 

Moon Spell by WinkeeJR
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 15]

Summary: You met Abby in “A Child's Gift” now read her story. She's grown up and chasing down a legendary necklace known as Moon Spell. Someone wants to stop her, someone wants her to succeed and someone just wants it all to end, no matter which side wins.

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 20294 Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Published:
08/18/08 Updated: 04/07/09


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 04/07/09 Title: Chapter 3: Master

i love this story...:P ... i like this chapter too... i especially love the part where Draco n Harry talks like normal friends... thats not an everyday thing to see...:P

Author's Response: Thank you

 
Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 04/07/09 Title: Chapter 4: Blue Smoke

its been a while since u update the previous chapter.... Im glad that its finally here... actually, i had been waiting for this chapter for a while... and u didnt dissappoint me with this chapter either, in fact i love this chapter!!! Its the best so far! what i like the most abt this chapters are that eventhough they r updated late but its long in length...this chapter was well written!! Hope in future we will get to know more abt Damien... Cant wait for the next chapter to b updated!!!! update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you and hopefully you won't have to wait so long next time.

 

The Lions of Gryffindor by Equinox Chick
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 335]

Summary: Past Featured StoryIt is June 1976 and The Marauders are at the top of their game. From the outside they look to have everything.But appearances, as the saying goes, can be deceptive.

James is discovering that not everything in life is his for the taking. Sirius knows he will have to defy his formidable family. Remus lives in constant fear of his life beyond Hogwarts. As for Peter... Well, Peter is struggling to live up to his friends.

The ties of friendship are strong, but war is raging and with a dark power rising those ties will inevitably fray.

Added to the mix is an adversary called Severus Snape, some lost House Points, a prank or two and a whole lot of Lily.

This is a Marauder tale.

This is a story of what made them special.

This is a story of why it started to go wrong for The Lions of Gryffindor.

OH MY GOOD GODRIC! Lions of Gryffindor won the 2009 QSQ for Best Marauders' Era Story. Amazed and incredibly grateful to those who nominated, judged and have beta'd this fic. THANK YOU.

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Trick or Treat!
3. She clicks on her mouse and swipes her wand;
Some stories go up, and some stories are gone.
Stories of her own? Why, she has plenty!
Fewer than one-hundred, but far more than twenty.



Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 110875 Chapters: 23 Completed: No
Published:
09/10/08 Updated: 04/28/12


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 03/28/09 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Journeys to King's Cross

well in my opinion this chapter is brilliant...i love it! Especially the bit about Sirius and James and also abt James n Lily, it was sweet...update soon..... im looking forward to read the next chapter.... cant wait!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm getting on with the next chapter now... I promise.

 
Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 05/09/09 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Caught in the Crossfire

i think he would be like the twins more than Percy...:P... once again i love tis chapter... cant wait to read more...

Author's Response: I can't see Fabian being a stickler for the rules either, but he is a Professor now. Thank you for the review, it really is appreciated. Carole xxx

 

Muggle Island by Trivia Camlee
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 13]

Summary:

How many people does it take to cause a ruckus? Four: The three Dursleys, and a Ministry of Magic official. The Dursleys have no boat to get off the island in the first book, so a Magic official arrives to help them. Let the chaos, begin.

Note: language warning just to be safe- there are no real swears in here

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 2796 Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/28/08 Updated: 01/22/09


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 04/16/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chocolate Cake

haha ur right...i love this too... its funny... i love dudley nick name to.... Dummpy whummpy...:p

Author's Response: Thank you for reading three of my stories! I'm glad you liked it :) Every time I wrote down one of his nick-names I cracked up...

 
Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 04/16/09 Title: Chapter 2: Mourning for Cake and Aprons

i thought the part where vernon was asking petunia n dudley to keep quite was funny:P.... they kept arguing abt wat is more important... i really pity Bill ...he had to stand vernon n dudley's weight...haha.... love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u should really do humour fics:D.... well i think now im going to go n read "time gives us a push"....i always love james/lily pairing!:D...

Author's Response: Yea; I love knowing which parts people liked best. Poor Bill indeed! He was so excited to help- and they attacked him... lol. Thank you for all the awesome reviews :)

 

Reflection by Nitwit Blubber Oddment Tweak x
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 66]

Summary: Nearly every witch and wizard in the magical community suffered in the aftermath of the Great Battle of Hogwarts, including Draco Malfoy. He’s no longer the cocky, arrogant, slick-haired Prince of Slytherin, but a haunted, vulnerable young man. Finally free of his father and the Dark Lord’s clutches, he revels in his new found independence. The wizarding society is broken and rebuilding, and Draco returns to Hogwarts to repeat his seventh year. Newly appointed as Head-Boy, it seems Draco has changed. But has he changed enough to accept Hermione Granger as Head-Girl?

Chapter Seven is up! Leave a review :D


Categories: Hermione/Draco Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 10112 Chapters: 7 Completed: No
Published:
11/29/08 Updated: 05/17/09


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 05/12/09 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

its nice ..but isnt it a little short?? by the way keep up the good work :D...

Author's Response: I know, I know; but it was just a little transition chapter... Chapter 6 is wayyyy longer! Thanks for the nice review :D

 
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