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Love Conquers by dumbly_dorr
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 321]

Summary: If you're looking for the usual James-loves-Lily-but-Lily-hates-James storyline, then this isn't it. The thing is, Lily doesn't hate James at all, he can just be annoying at the best of times. As she comes to realise why she doesn't hate him, it leads to the famous love we all know about. Set against the backdrop of a warring magical world where nothing is certain, can James and Lily hold onto each other and fight?

UPDATE August 08: It's FINISHED! Thank you so much to all those who have read and reviewed this story, I have loved your support. i hope there are still people out there who are willing to read it. Keep an eye out for more stories by me! UPDATE February '08: I have changed the chapter names of some of the 'Defied' chapters, to make this fit and to make it more plausible, as I see the 'thrice defying' of Voldemort as happening when James and Lily are part of the Order of the Phoenix.

UPDATE 20th September: I have altered my facts in the chapter 'Once Defied' as I made mistakes in the ages of James and Lily. It didn't matter so much in this chapter but had annoying repercusions for future chapters. It should all now be correct.


Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 70122 Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/20/07 Updated: 07/21/08


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 03/01/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Perfect Birthday

To tell u the truth about bella n peter doesnt make sense to me.. i mean wats the point... peter only will turn to the bad side on the same yr as harry was born... sorry... but its good story though..

 

My Constant by MoRoCcAnAnDpRoUd
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 487]

Summary: The first war with Lord Voldemort is constantly getting worse; people are dying left and right, dementors are attacking people on the Death Eaters' orders, and nobody knows who is trustworthy anymore. Lily Evans, in her seventh year at Howarts, does not want to be a part of the war -- but some things are unavoidable.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded, Character Death, Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 147617 Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/16/07 Updated: 05/01/14


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 03/02/08 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter Seventeen

the story is all right nut y isnt james n lily together yet?? its like taking them forever to get together... lol but great story though... cant wait for the next chapter.. update soon

Author's Response: James and Lily aren\'t together get because of the way I made Lily\'s character. They will be soon, though. Unfortunately an update might take a while because my old computer broke completely and I have to rewrite chapters 18-20.

 

Light Up My Life by KASK
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 163]

Summary: Norah Kelley was the one James had always seen himself with. They had been together forever and he loved her. Lily Evans, on the other hand, was the one girl he truly loathed.

But in fifth year, with a changing outlook on life and problems finally surfacing at home, James and Lily began to a friendship. Both known for hating each other, they agreed to keep their friendship quiet.

But as things progress, James comes to find that he can't have everything and a decision has to be made. With this decision, James learns that what you expect isn't always what happens and love can spout from unexpected places.

This is told from James' POV.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 19287 Chapters: 8 Completed: No
Published:
03/19/07 Updated: 05/12/08


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 03/07/08 Title: Chapter 7: Building Bridges

I love the story! Its really good and it makes me wonder when he will stop dating Norah... I mean i know he would hav stopped dating her by ending of the 5th year... becoz he would ask lily out again by the lake... it just makes me wonder wat will he do in the 6th yr,.. i mean lily wont date him till the 7th yr... wow ur really a great writer!

Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m working on an update, right now, actually! Sorry for the wait!

 
Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 03/07/08 Title: Chapter 7: Building Bridges

But plz update soon though!

Author's Response: I\'m working on it! Sooooon, I promise.

 

Killer Instincts by Ginny Weasley Potter
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 228]

Summary: London: Four murders have taken place under bizarre circumstances, for what seems to be an equally bizarre reason.

Harry, a happily wedded man with a wonderful wife and a cute daughter, is an Auror at the Ministry of Magic and is now given a new case to solve with Ron and four other Aurors. Incidentally, the four Aurors include Ginny, Harry’s ‘schoolboy crush’; and it turns out to be much more than a crush when Harry sees her again. What’s more is that Harry is working upon a case that seems to connect to him directly. And once again, it opens up old fears: fears of losing loved ones.

Ron, on the other hand, seems to be tired of Hermione. Tempers are running high and fights are breaking out more often than usual. Are they really falling apart? Or can they sort this out before it is too late?

Then there is the case itself. Who is trustworthy, and who is not? Who is deadly enough to murder four people in cold blood?

Indulge into the gut-wrenching action, combined with warm romance and tingling suspense; while I tell you a story of love, ambition and obsession… a story of what those killer instincts can do. EDIT: MAJOR revamping going on, with regard to plot, characterisation, and general style of writing. I would urge you not to read this until I've removed this notice because I wasn't very good six years ago, and this is as bad as I was. *Places traffic cones*

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Book 7 Disregarded, Character Death, Violence

Word count: 130889 Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/27/07 Updated: 10/03/10


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 05/10/09 Title: Chapter 13: Shattered

i like it...update soon

Author's Response: Thank you! Update coming ASAP... three more weeks to go for exams to end! :)

 
Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 09/26/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

That was a great story... fr the first time im reading someone who wrote a fanfiction that was rfelated to indian culture:D and im happy about that!! The story is really nice and I cant stop reading.... I just hope Harry makes the right move in the end... :P I like the way u put in hindi words ... but i dun speak hindi much... but i id understand the meaning to most of it... hope you will update soon!! Cant wait for the following chapter..!!!

Author's Response: I'll update asap... I have a lot to do, out here. But chapter 7 is almost done! Thank you for the review!

 

The Girl in the Tower by SpookyMulder
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 19]

Summary: An epic tale. Four parts, spanning four years in the lives of Harry Potter and the people he loves -and hates- the most. The story begins toward the end of adolescence, when the main characters are 16 and in thier sixth year at Hogwarts. It ends on the other side of Darkness, tragedy, triumph, misery, and personal inner struggle, when they're twenty. Think you know Draco? Think again.
*sequel in progress*

Categories: Harry/Other Character Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death, Sexual Situations, Substance Abuse

Word count: 61462 Chapters: 8 Completed: No
Published:
06/09/07 Updated: 10/06/07


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 01/20/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Harry Falls in Love

Erm... i love ur story n i want to read the full story... can you tell me fast when ur going to update plz......plz n thank u

 

A Heart Torn By War by MistressOfTime
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 57]

Summary: We learn here the story of Lily Evans, a Muggleborn attending Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Her best friend -- and secret love -- Severus Snape, has been her guide through the first four years of her magical education. However, rumors of Severus doings are starting to concern Lily, as she starts to notice James Potter, a Quidditch star with unkempt hair and a knack for trouble. Lilys internal battle is heating up, as she prepares to start her fifth year at Hogwarts.

(Character Death and Sexual Situations Warnings are for later chapters.)

UPDATE 01/30: Chapter 2 is FINALLY posted! I hope you all enjoy this one! Chapter 3 is currently being edited, so I don't have any good excerpts to provide for you...however, keep checking here for updates!

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 8047 Chapters: 3 Completed: No
Published:
08/06/07 Updated: 01/30/08


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 02/24/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - Sneaks and Sorts

plz update soon... i really wanna know wat the piece of parchment says.. is there gonna be a Yule ball???? lol wow great story... but did Lily like Snape more than a friend in the hp books??? ur a really good writer... but plzzzzzzzzzzz update soon....

 

A Perfect Year? by wanderingLily
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 47]

Summary: Lily just wants the perfect last year at Hogwarts. James just wants Lily to finally agree to go out with him. What will happen? Will she change her mind, and if she does, why the change?

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 8497 Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Published:
08/06/07 Updated: 07/20/08


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 02/23/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

the story is really great!! Plz keep updating... cant wait to read what happens next!

Author's Response: glad you like it! i\'ll update ASAP! ~Lily

 

A Black Rose and a White Lily by Afifa
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 34]

Summary:

One school: Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry

Two Girls: A freak and a chatterbox

Three blood groups: Pure bloods, Half Bloods and Mudbloods

Four Houses:  Gryffindor, Hufflepuff, Ravenclaw and Slytherin

Five boys: A rebel, a pandered child, a traitor, a werewolf,  and a distressed boy.

The story starts with them...

 Five, four, three, two, one- Avada Kedavra! 

... and ends with them. 

 



Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 14177 Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Published:
08/13/07 Updated: 05/10/09


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 05/11/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-- And they were born

i reallly love it... i think its brilliant beginning!!!!! cant wait to read the next chapter...

Author's Response: Thank you for the praises. :D Though I'm sorry to say that the next chapter will take some time, around a month maybe. Blame exams. But I'll try and see if I can do something before that. :)

Thanks for leaving a review. :)

 
Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 05/11/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-- And they were born

i reallly love it... i think its brilliant beginning!!!!! cant wait to read the next chapter...

Author's Response: Oops. Double click. Thanks again. :)

 
Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 05/11/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2-- Forward eleven years

once again... i love tis chapter too... it showed how they received the letter and stuff... i do feel bad for sirius n remus... :(....cant wait to see wat happens in Diagon alley!

Author's Response: Aw, yeah. Poor Remus and Sirius. *hugs them*

Thanks for another review. :)

 
Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 05/11/09 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

i liked this chapter tooo... especially the part where james said he wanted a dragon, i laughed out loud.... i see that peter has met severus already likewise with james n remus.... cant wait for the next one....

Author's Response: Lol. Yeah, I had to put in some funny bits here and there. He's James, after all. :D

Thanks, once again, for the review. :)

 
Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 05/11/09 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

haha... i love it... hmm i always wondered wats with the name Snivellus... and i nvr fully understood why Severus was given tat nick name till now.... I find it cute that james n sirius already have started their mischievious so fast.... i really cant wait for the next chapter... where im sure the sorting ceremony would take place... plz update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Lol, yeah. The Sirius/James/Snivellus was mostly inspired by the passages in DH.

Um, I'm having my AS Level exams so update within this month would be difficult, let's see though... We'll see about the Sorting once it gets updated, hm? :D



Thanks for all the reviews. :D

 

Summary: For the past six years, Lily Evans has put up with James Potter's pranking. But as her seventh year commences, she decides it's time to give James a taste of his own medicine.


Chapter 7 has finally been submitted!

A tiny sneek peek:

"Oh, come on now! Lily thought. “Just kiss me already,” she said audibly. James froze at her words and she, embarrassed beyond belief that her thoughts had spilled from her mouth, sat entirely still."



Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 17538 Chapters: 7 Completed: No
Published:
09/03/07 Updated: 07/28/11


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 02/18/08 Title: Chapter 1: A Plan is Formed

the story was great!! but it will be nice though if u could hurry up...lol im so impatient to find out wat will happen next

 

Must Be by Privet Desperation
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 51]

Summary: Lily hate James...and James loves Lily. But will they be able to look past their own pride and see the love that has formed between them? Or is what must be just a dream?

Note: this randomly got deleted, so here it is again....
Also, the warning is just a precaution for possible later chapters...

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 11021 Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Published:
11/14/07 Updated: 01/30/08


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 02/24/08 Title: Chapter 6: 6. Landslide

I really love ur story!! Its great. Ur really a good write. JUst hope that u will update soon... cant wait to read the rest of the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

 

I Choose You by TheGoldenTrio
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 55]

Summary: Hermione reflects on her relationship with Ron, beginning with his walking out in DH.

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 2103 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/19/07 Updated: 11/25/07


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 01/22/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

The story was so fantastic!!!! u can really be a writer! you did a really great job by explaining Hermione's feelings for Ron! It was simply superb!

Author's Response: Oh gosh, thanks so much! I\'m glad that you liked the story.

 

Summary: Nominated for the 2008 Quicksilver Quill Award for Best Post-Hogwarts Story

When Albus, Rose, and Scorpius are put on the train to their first year at Hogwarts, their parents have simple hopes for them. Namely to have the normal, boring school years they never got to experience themselves. But sometimes, we ask too much of our children.

When the school becomes plagued by invasions of wild beasts, three different students from three different houses follow in the footsteps of the generation before them, but strive to achive the one thing none of their predesesors ever could: DON'T GET CAUGHT!



Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 109928 Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/19/08 Updated: 02/15/10


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 04/27/09 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 The Quintaped

Another great chapter! I loved it.... cant wait for more... plz update soon!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. I hope to have chapter 12 done very soon.

 

Everything Happens for a Reason by MerrryD
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 31]

Summary:

Five hundred twenty-five thousand six hundred minutes

Every student plans on making their final year at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry the most memorable one ever. Eight in particular want to make those minutes really count. Except, they each have a different idea of how to go about doing it.

James Potter would like to waltz into Lily Evans’s life and throw it completely off course. Julie McGuire didn’t exactly plan on rescuing Remus Lupin, but now that she has, why not just go with it? Marlene McKinnon should have know what she got herself into when she kissed Sirius Black the first time, but that boy has a way of knocking her senseless. Emmeline Vance had planned to just sit back and watch it all happen, until Roxanna Louchester, her ex-friend, barged in and turned everything upside down.

Suddenly they’ve gone from only wanting the most memorable year, to achieving it. It’s a year of love and lust. It’s a year of tears and fights. It’s a year of finding yourself. It’s a year of learning to lose. It’s a year that none of them are likely to forget.

How do you measure a year in the life?



Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations, Strong Profanity, Violence

Word count: 18589 Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Published:
06/27/08 Updated: 08/28/09


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 04/29/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One: Are You Ready? Hold that Focus--Steady

I think its fantastic!! I love it... for a first fic u did very well... and i completely agree on the part where Emmeline said to Lily :
“You always want to bring out your eyes, Lily. They’re one of the first things people notice.”

Furthermore, I love the chracter of Emmeline so far.... I dun like Roxie... she sounds so rude and evil to the others....

Ohh and I also love the art where James says:

“Evans and I just wanted to remind everyone not abuse their power too much, to pass out the passwords, and to establish a patrol schedule.” He leaned forward and began to pass pieces of parchment and a quill around.

I like that part because he made it sound like u could abuse ur power but not much:D... thats so sounds like him... I always loved james/lily pairing a lot... :P

 
Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 04/29/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two: Forces Are Gathering

Haha i agree on Dumbledore's speech.... But u did it well:D.... and again i love this chapter too!!! I liked the part where Em says:

“Sounds like things aren’t so great in paradise.”

I wonder wat Lily wanted to say to Em though.... The professor Temple sounds interesting... cant wait to read more..

 
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