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Veiled Revelations by erikthephantom
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 514]

Summary: The Hogwarts Express brings mystery and mischief in the Marauders' seventh and final year at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. James, Sirius, Remus, and Peter are facing a year of N.E.W.T.s, romance, intrigue, and, of course, a little mischief-making. There are plot twists galore! James (in the midst of saving the world) continues desperately to try to woo the incorrigible Lily Evans. Sirius deals with family problems while dealing with his incredible popularity and good looks (the horror!). Remus is provided with a backdoor to avoiding the prejudices of the inevitable real world, but at what cost? (dun-dun-dun) And Peter...well, Peter gets himself a girlfriend (but don't worry: it doesn't affect his hero-worshipping of James...or DOES IT?!)

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 103833 Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/08/04 Updated: 12/17/04


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 02/27/08 Title: Chapter 24: Now It's Forever

actually its really a sad happy ending for james and lily... after that sirius... then finally for remus... but i didnt really feel sad when peter died... i mean if it wasnt for him james n lily would still be alive and harry would have his parents... but great story ... it was nice to read about the marauders!

 

The Last Line by Sparkling Star
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 181]

Summary: Sequel to THE AMERICAN REVOLUTION



Melody has been shipped back to Beauxbaton, but readjusting isn't even the hard part. The coming year is full of struggles that open Melody's eyes to her mistakes and the person she once was. A constant battle to retain her final ounces of happiness will tear her and Harry apart and after internal mending, maybe the two can finally be at peace together or perhaps, apart.





Categories: Harry/Other Character Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 41852 Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/01/05 Updated: 11/07/06


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 01/23/08 Title: Chapter 14: Alone in Turbulation

mel makes me feel so sick...i dunno y....her character is like...haiz... i just hope harry n her wont b together......he deserves someone better... come to think of it... cho's character is better than mel...

 

Between Now and Then by erikthephantom
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 724]

Summary: In this riveting sequel to the "acclaimed" Veiled Revelations, Voldemort has risen to his full strength and is threatening both the wizarding world and the muggle world in an attempt to gain total control. A small group of people - the Order of the Phoenix - are all that stand in his way. Join James Potter, Sirius Black, Remus Lupin, Peter Pettigrew, and Lily Evans as they battle the most evil wizard the world has ever seen. (Reviews are always nice and appreciated - and Erik has rated this story 6th-7th years as a result of her incorrigible pride).


Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 120076 Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/14/05 Updated: 09/01/06


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 02/29/08 Title: Chapter 34: Finis

the story is brilliant... u really had everything right... erm i really feel bad for sirus... i couldnt stop crying everything i read a story abt james and lily dying... and sirius going to azakaban... haiz... peter only died in the 7th book.. i still dont get it y harry didnt allow him to be killed when sirius and remus wanted to... but this is really great story !!!!!!! i luv it..

 

Talitha's Tale by mad4sirius
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 93]

Summary: This was started pre-HBP, and I was just going to let it slide...but I've really enjoyed writing it, so I'd like to see what other people think. I guess you would say it's AU, now, but give a shot! Meet the girl who will change Harry's life forever....

Story Completed! Thank you to everyone who was kind enough to leave a review!

Categories: Harry/Other Character Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Alternate Universe

Word count: 37496 Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/25/05 Updated: 04/02/06


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 01/21/08 Title: Chapter 10: The Finale

erm... sad acctually.....its a really a great story but the ending made me feel so sad....

 

Last Chance by PheonixAnimagus
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 80]

Summary: As Lily and James head into their final year at Hogwarts, some of Lily's feelings for James change. And will Voldemort, becoming ever stronger, change the fates of Lily and her friends? He will kill whoever gets in his way in his rise to power, and Lily and James could be their only hope for stopping him. Alternates POV of Lily/James. Has been edited a lot recently from its original posting.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 11242 Chapters: 7 Completed: No
Published:
10/11/05 Updated: 12/28/07


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 03/02/08 Title: Chapter 7: The Cruelest Betrayal

I really like it! most of the lily/james story i read ..they usually make lily into someone who wil keep shouting n refusing james... but u made it excellent... i like this lily better..... plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i really wana know wat happens next...

Author's Response: i\'ll try!

 
Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 04/27/08 Title: Chapter 1: Back To Hogwarts Again

hi, I would like u to be my beta reader... could u??

Author's Response: sure! send me an email from my profile if you still would like me to.

 

All Right, Evans? by anglophile
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 272]

Summary: Everyone knows the story after that Halloween night that Harry Potter became an orphan... but what about before? James Potter and Lily Evans are two young people with an extroadinary story of bravery, friendship, and love. Join them throughout their seven years at Hogwarts and see how the past affects the future.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 28043 Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/01/05 Updated: 12/13/07


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 03/01/08 Title: Chapter 18: Lily and James's First Chapter

lol great story though... erm arent you gonna continue it??

 

Love and Quidditch by Kerichi
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 59]

Summary:

"I'm no Ravenclaw, but I finally learnt to take no for an answer." When James stops asking Lily out, she tells him that's not Quidditch!



Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1325 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/17/05 Updated: 11/17/05


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 04/18/09 Title: Chapter 1: Love and Quidditch

i love this one:D....i hope u dun mind me reading most of ur fanfiction :P... i love james/lily pairing .... this is chapter is well written...my fav part would be :
He leaned back against the door and remarked, "I've never had a chat in a linen cupboard before. Come here often?" She shook her head,

"No. This is a first."


I love it!!!!

Author's Response:

Are you kidding? I love that you're reading my stories! You make my day, especially when you tell me the part that made you smile. *hugs*

 

Love Can't Be Stopped by ambush
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 146]

Summary: New year, new start, new feelings. Has James' newly deflated ego and mature attitude finally won over the heart of Lily Evans? With a mixture of embarrassing situations, falling out of bed, and roaming hands, this year could be an interesting one.


My first fanfic everybody, so any criticism is very welcome! enjoy!



Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 22333 Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Published:
12/09/05 Updated: 08/24/08


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 03/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Strange Feelings

That was great!!!!!!!!!!! Splendid job... cant wait for the next chapter... Plz update soon... lol... its really nice..

Author's Response: Thank you - keep reading, I will be updating in the next week or so.

 

A Child's Gift by WinkeeJR
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 868]

Summary: Past Featured StoryDraco wanted to get away. He needed to get away from all the things that reminded him everyday of the mistakes he had made and the one he had lost. He found the perfect spot too, a small town in Wyoming, USA, a place called Nowhere. A perfect name as far as he was concerned. Magic, fate has a way of finding you no matter where you go though.

Categories: Hermione/Draco Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 140669 Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/19/06 Updated: 08/28/07


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 07/30/08 Title: Chapter 34: Epilogue

I really liked it... I couldnt stop reading.. wow there was so much suspense in the story n that attracted me a lot:P.. geat story!

Author's Response: Thank you.

 

Lily's Love by PurpleLily
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 6]

Summary: Lily Evans meets her new best friends on the train ride to Hogwarts. She also meets James Potter.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1410 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
05/25/06 Updated: 06/03/06


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 03/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: James Crazy

hey great story.. i like it.. erm... when will u update becoz i cant wait to read it...

 

Love, Werewolves, and Animagi by Mistletoe
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 21]

Summary: Hullo! I'm Lily Evans, and I'm starting my seventh year at Hogwarts soon. I'm Head Girl with James Potter, which I'm secretly thrilled about, emphasis on the secretly. Seriously secretly, like even to me, kind of. Well, I must be off!


Hey! Lily! Oh, sorry, so rude of me, I'm Anna, Anna Boothe. Lily's uh, hold on let me grab my trunk, it's just slipped out of my fingers. Where was I? Oh yes, Lily's best friend. We're inseperable, really. Like two peas in a pod and whatnot. Where is she, anyway? Er, well it was nice meeting you, I've got to go catch the train!


Oi! Did you just see Evans? I've been looking for her and I thought I just saw her here. I'm rather excited about being Head Boy with her; it'll give me a chance to show her the real James Pot--


What are you going on about, Prongs? Why are you even listening to this nutter? We've got to catch the train. Probably talking to you about Evans, am I right? He would talk to a tree about Evans if he could. Moony, Wormtail, help me get this starry-eyed git onto the train before it leaves without us...


You two are helpless, don't you think, Pete?


More helpless than two Grindylows out of water...



-----



This is Lily and Anna's final year at Hogwart's School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Lily is hiding her secrets from everyone, even herself. Anna is as noncommittal as ever. James is getting his act together. Peter is thinning out. And unbeknownst to everyone, Remus and Sirius are gallivanting off to unseen parts of the castle. Amidst all said frolicking, Lily notices something very strange about the single days that Remus Lupin is missing and all tranquility goes awry.


[RLSB: Slash is minor and for a later chapter :]]

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Slash

Word count: 11144 Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Published:
06/26/06 Updated: 08/31/08


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 02/25/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

great story... i really mean it..... plz update soon......cant wait to read the next chapter!

 

Someone To Watch Over Me by MagEd
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 1663]

Summary: Past Featured Story2009 QSQ Awards Winner for Best Chaptered Canon Romance

Before the chosen one was ever born, his parents had to meet, fall in love, and defy Voldemort three times. Easier said than done. Things were never easy for Harry Potter's parents, but it gets a whole lot harder when Death Eaters kidnap Lily. This is the story of Lily and James, the trials they face, and how James finally wins Lily's heart. (pre-Deathly Hallows)

*Completed*

“I’ll always protect you.”

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 185106 Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/17/06 Updated: 01/16/09


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 03/04/08 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: Where We Really Belong

Hi,
I really was not that interested in your story at first...i hated the part where lily asked james to appologise to his ex-gf and the ppl he pranked. i also really hated the part james and sirius fought... but to tell you the thruth after a while i couldnt stop reading... i was spending day and night to read this... i really want to know what happened to Ted... i really must hand it to you, you did a very good job... but you havent updated a very long time since the last chapter... plz update soon... how many chapters are there for this story???

Author's Response: Sometimes stories do that to me, too. I\'m glad you got hooked even if you didn\'t enjoy the beginning too much. I can\'t update -- although I have the whole next chapter and half of the one after that written, because the queue is currently closed. As soon as it\'s open, though . . . !

 

525,600 Minutes by MarauderWannabe
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 129]

Summary: A fear of commitement drives Lily away. Circumstance gives them another chance, but old friends could be there end. This is the story of James Potter and Lily Evans, the year after Hogwarts. Excerpt from the new chapter:

He doesn’t want you to kiss him, she told herself rationally.
“No p-,” she started
Guess not.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 8864 Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Published:
10/09/06 Updated: 12/29/08


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 03/04/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: We Don't Want To Talk About It!

erm im blur ... er i thought both harry's parents are aurors... arent they? er... im blur right now ...lol

 

Not a Maybe Thing by HoneydukesAddict
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 126]

Summary: Lily knew that James was nothing but trouble. He was rude, conceited, and indifferent to anyone that wasn't in his group of friends. She had known him to be that way for six long years.

But their seventh year comes, and Lily slowly begins to see that he is no longer the boy he was. Now Lily sees herself more clearly, and she isn't sure she likes what she sees.

This is the almost-forgotten story of Lily and James's romance, and what they went through to become the heroes that were Harry Potter's parents.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 15567 Chapters: 9 Completed: No
Published:
10/22/06 Updated: 10/29/07


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 03/02/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine

really nice! plz update soon!

 

The Curtain Call by Amelia Bedelia
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 421]

Summary: James and Lily spend their summers together producing plays, though neither are happy about the presence of the other. With James, as the set designer, and Lily, as the actress, tensions run high.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 101551 Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/29/06 Updated: 07/02/10


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 04/26/08 Title: Chapter 1: Bennett Theater

I really liked it ...not only like but loved it! This is a really awesome story! I just read chapter 12 ... could u plz continue and put the final chapter 13...i really cant wait for it...i really loved the way u made james n lily to reveal their feeling....plzzzz update soon

Author's Response: Haha - I\'ll do my best on getting that up as soon as I can! Summer break officially starts in 3 days for me, so I\'ll have plenty of time to write, then!\r\n\r\nThanks for reviewing!\r\n\r\nYours truly,\r\nAmelia Bedelia

 

Summary:

2009 QSQs: Runner-up: Best Romance - Other Character Story


Add together one ladies' man, one Quidditch player, one werewolf, and one soon-to-be traitor. Then, mix in one imaginative idiot, one fiery redhead, one clever Ravenclaw, and one blonde artist. Stir counterclockwise until trouble occurs, and you are dealing with one of the best-loved group of friends in Hogwarts history. Follow the story of the four Marauders and four equally troublesome girls. See them deal with their first encounters of love, sorrow, heartache… and Death Eaters. How will these future Order members cope with the ordeals that life throws at them? Will love blossom in what was once thought a highly unlikely place? What do you do when the person you care about most in the world doesn’t seem to notice you at all? Will a well-kept secret shatter the foundations of a seven-year friendship? Follow the lives of these friends through their last year at school to the dramatic final battle with Lord Voldemort two decades later.

Warnings are for later chapters, and any sexual situations are very minor.

Chapter Twenty Two: "The Snakes Strike" is in the queue. Excerpt:

Perfume filled his nostrils as Emma walked passed and Rosier’s gaze lingered on her bare, pale legs as the group headed outdoors. “Don’t you just love summer?” he inquired of Regulus, a hungry sneer lighting his face.

“This is ridiculous,” Regulus announced in a furious whisper, “we’re never going to get them alone!”

“Have faith, Black,” commanded Rosier smoothly. “Girls are well renowned for their desire for girly chats. I’m sure they’ll slip off the shackles of their chaperones soon enough.”


Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations, Substance Abuse, Violence

Word count: 175402 Chapters: 28 Completed: No
Published:
02/03/07 Updated: 01/16/10


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 05/02/09 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 20 - The Curious Incident of Two Wet Gryffindors in a Dormitory: Part Two

I liked it... :D... pity Kirsty n Sirius...too many complications keep happening which prevent them from being together... i hope he understands that she made the promise the way he had made to Debbie... by the way wat happened to the Slytherin's and their "plan"??? update soon ya.... cant wait 4 the next chappie

 
Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 03/12/09 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 19 - Love Will Keep You Up All Night

oooh ur really good at this... i really love it... could u try to update fast??? I really cant wait to read more....

Author's Response: Thank you! Chapter 20 is in the queue ;)

 
Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 04/25/09 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 20 - The Curious Incident of Two Wet Gryffindors in a Dormitory

Hi,
Your right, I love it! :D Was Sirius going to tell her just now how he felt abt her??? I cant wait for the next chapter.... hope Remus and Hayley would get back together... and there will be more of James and Lily!! Gud luck for ur A level!!!!

 

Love Conquers by dumbly_dorr
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 321]

Summary: If you're looking for the usual James-loves-Lily-but-Lily-hates-James storyline, then this isn't it. The thing is, Lily doesn't hate James at all, he can just be annoying at the best of times. As she comes to realise why she doesn't hate him, it leads to the famous love we all know about. Set against the backdrop of a warring magical world where nothing is certain, can James and Lily hold onto each other and fight?

UPDATE August 08: It's FINISHED! Thank you so much to all those who have read and reviewed this story, I have loved your support. i hope there are still people out there who are willing to read it. Keep an eye out for more stories by me! UPDATE February '08: I have changed the chapter names of some of the 'Defied' chapters, to make this fit and to make it more plausible, as I see the 'thrice defying' of Voldemort as happening when James and Lily are part of the Order of the Phoenix.

UPDATE 20th September: I have altered my facts in the chapter 'Once Defied' as I made mistakes in the ages of James and Lily. It didn't matter so much in this chapter but had annoying repercusions for future chapters. It should all now be correct.


Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 70122 Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/20/07 Updated: 07/21/08


Reviewer: JeeviS Signed
Date: 03/01/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Perfect Birthday

To tell u the truth about bella n peter doesnt make sense to me.. i mean wats the point... peter only will turn to the bad side on the same yr as harry was born... sorry... but its good story though..

 
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