I'm 21 years old, and the mother the most beautiful baby in the world! My son, Kieran, is 19 months old. I live in Northern California, and am a student at the JC. I am also, of course, a die-hard Harry Potter fan!
I think your story is well written and really intriguing. So, far, I enjoy it immensely. I just wanted to point out that in Ch. 2 of part 3, you say that Hermione and Ron live in Godric's Hollow. However, earlier in the story, it says that they live in Hogsmeade.
I will lt you know what I think of the whole thing when I finish- seems like Harry and company treat Draco badly.. I hope that changes!
Author's Response: Oh...thank you very much for pointing that out! Thats very silly of me. I will definitely be finding that mistake and correcting it. Thanks for the review!
Hey there! I have really enjoyed reading your story- are you going to finish it? It's been so long since you put out a chapter.... Anyway, your story is one of the better ones out there, and it would be a shame to leave it unfinished.
You have a great story here. You write really well, and I like how you have handled all the various characters and their emotions (no over-the-top sappiness.)
You better let Harry/Ginny be together though! (j/k)
Author's Response: Thanks, I\'m glad you like my handling of the characters, I put a lot of effort into it! And don\'t worry about H/G, I\'m a huge H/G shipper but I never like to give them the easy way out to be with each other ;) If you like the pairing, you should be very happy with the next chapter...
I am very intrigued by your story so far. Especially how you show that things don't "magically" get better once the war is won. I was surprised that you chose to have Harry not need Ginny any more. I can only hope they will be reunited.... Update soon please!
Author's Response: Ah thank you! You\'re one of few who agree with our angsty post-war tone. More will be up soon! Miss Radcliffe~
I LOVE your story so far. It's well written, with a good plot. I like the humor in your story- I've laughed out loud more than once. I can't wait for your next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I\'m blushing from all your praise. I\'m glad you think it\'s humourous. I mean, I think it is, but it\'s nice to know someone else agrees! Chapter 4 is half-done, I hope it\'s up soon. Thanks again.
I love the chapter. Ron's imitation of Hermione towards the end actually made me laugh out loud. Completely brilliant- keep up the good work!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm thrilled I made you LOL. cj
I loved how much of the books you have tied into the story. This chapter was excellent- can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: Thanks very much for saying. I had thought the next chapter would be in the queue by now, but life interfered. Stay tuned! cj
LOVED it! Please keep writing- so many just leave wonderful stories unfinished!
Author's Response: Thank you! I do promise that this will be finished. I will not leave it unfinished, even if it takes many years to post! Just kidding. I hope to be all done by Christmas. It's my gift to my readers. cj