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I'm 30 years old, married and an avid reader.

I love Fantasy books. Some of my favorite Authors include JKR, David Eddings, Tad Williams, Marion Zimmer Bradley, Elizabeth Hayden, and Robert Jordan.

I have a twin sister that betas for me. We have always been best friends and I hope we will stay that way.

I have found a great fondness for taking Hapkido. I'm currently a purple belt, and really having fun since I have gotten my twin, Step-sister, and husband to start coming to class with me. I also have a few other massage therapists from my office that come.

My favorite Animals are penguins. I also have a thing for cats, which led to me writing my first story, Switched.

My first Child was born in June. She is totally amazing, and I can't wait until she is old enough to share Harry with.

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69

Reviewer: Cheshlin Signed
Date: 01/04/06 Title: None

It is sad seeing a broken down Tonks, but I can see that that might help Phoebe get closer to her. It might also save her being there and not at her own place. I still want to see Harry win over Gedrath, but I think Gedrath will give a fight and succeed in some things that aren't very nice.

Author's Response: Yes ... things will not go so wel with Gedrath ... :( and as for Tonks and Phoebe ...

~Ermine the One

Reviewer: Cheshlin Signed
Date: 01/23/06 Title: None

A lot has definitely happened in that chapter. Harry seems to be getting more control over Gedrath...enough to realise what is going on, and getting sick over it. A lot of it would have been better if Sirius or Phoebe actually did kill him. Harry wouldn't have died totally himself, but at least a little in control. It is sad that Tonks is gone though. :( She has always been a favorite of mine. I hope that Snape can quit being such a twit and actually try to get Harry some help. I can't guess what is going to happen, but I can see some possibilities. I look forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Cheshlin Signed
Date: 02/04/06 Title: None

Wow! That was a very informative chapter. Harry made a Horcrux? I can't see him killing anyone or sacrificing his soul to do that, but I'll wait and see where you are going with that. I'm glad that Sirius forgave his wife. I want to see them at least a little happy. Snape grinning like that is really weird. I look forward to seeing why. I'm glad to see that Harry is winning a bit over Gedrath.

Author's Response: I enjoy writing Gedrath (twisted, I know) as he is basically, to me, what Harry really would become if he let his "powers" over-run him. Sadly though, I can't imagine JK turning Harry dark in the books. As for the Horcrux ... well, that is a question ...

~Ermine the One

Reviewer: Cheshlin Signed
Date: 05/07/06 Title: None

That was a very interesting chapter. We definitely have a few answers. Now we need to see what happens from all this. "What a tangled web we weave" comes to mind! I look forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: A tangled web is right ... I had so many problems writing the next chapter, nothing I put seemed to level up with Chappie 17 ... I\'m still worried it\'s not good enough! I\'l have to check it over ... again!

~ Ermine the One

Reviewer: Cheshlin Signed
Date: 12/20/05 Title: None

I really am curious as to who the new guy is! I know you'll give us clues though. I hope he can really help. It seems like they need all the help they can get!! Poor Phoebe. She has a lot on her plate.

Author's Response: yes, the next chapters only make things worse for her ....

~Ermine the One

Reviewer: Cheshlin Signed
Date: 08/02/05 Title: None

Very interesting story line! I had an idea that Gedrath was Harry from the description in the first chapter! :) I don't really like the idea of Harry going bad, especially that bad, but it is still a very interesting story line. I also like the dream. Snape being inside Harry's head... that is very interesting.

Author's Response: Thanks! I know the idea of Harry being evil is kinda ... well, evil but it is just somthing I have been thinking of for quite some time so I decided to write it. I'm glad you like it though! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Cheshlin Signed
Date: 12/11/05 Title: None

I have a feeling that Harry isn't totally gone. If he was, he wouldn't have had any problem killing Phoebe. I soooo want to see hem change back to the good side, and truly beat Voldemort!! I look forward to the next installment!

Author's Response: Thanks, as do I! :D

Reviewer: Cheshlin Signed
Date: 12/05/05 Title: None

Wow. Poor Phoebe!! She just keeps having problems, doesn't she!! I hope that she makes it through this!! I also hope there is some hope for salvation for Gedrath....Harry can't be totally gone!! Great to see you updating again!

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, I have begun to feel slightly sorry for Phoebe ... And Gedrath, although technically still being J.K's creations (him being Harry and all) I am very proud of him as a character. I hope there will be salvation for him also ;) Thanks for the review, I have just this minute submitted chapter 9, so you shouldn't have to wait too long!

~Ermine the One

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, I have begun to feel slightly sorry for Phoebe ... And Gedrath, although technically still being J.K's creations (him being Harry and all) I am very proud of him as a character. I hope there will be salvation for him also ;) Thanks for the review, I have just this minute submitted chapter 9, so you shouldn't have to wait too long!

~Ermine the One

Reviewer: Cheshlin Signed
Date: 01/28/06 Title: None

Poor Sirius!! I hope that his family is able to pull back together. There has to be more there then it seems at the moment. Poor Phoebe, again! You do like tormenting your characters. It just makes me want something good to happen even more. I want to know what Snape is up to also. If he is the reason Harry became Gedrath, I hope he gets his due! That would be a really cruel thing to do, promise all the Horcruxes are gone, and knowing one of them is still there. I look forward to your next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks! Well, things are pretty much getting summed up now, although don't worry - the whole Snape buisness will soon be wrapped up. Sirius will get another word in yet, though.

~Ermine the One


Death Be Not Proud... by Magical Maeve
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 13]

Summary: Okay, this is a strange one. I finished Daughter Of Light yesterday and decided to start my big edit of the whole fic. As I was working on chapter three this scene popped into my head. It is Maeve and Severus' death. I had to write it, just because the idea wouldn't leave me alone, so here it is. It's what could happen in a hundred years or so... so don't get too traumatised. :-)

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2534 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
06/22/05 Updated: 06/28/05

Reviewer: Cheshlin Signed
Date: 12/30/05 Title: Chapter 1: Death Be Not Proud...

I just found this story, and having read DOL and HPSS, it was a wonderful story!! I was crying as I read Maeve's thoughts on going on with out Severus! I can see how she wouldn't have been able to do it.

Author's Response: Thanks, Cheslin! This review is so late because MNFF now gives me no excuse not to find my unanswered reviews. *blushes* And Maeve went with him because you hear so many stories of one spouse dying and the other following soon after, as if they just can\'t bear to live without their partner. That was the inspiration behind this.


The Severed Souls by Magical Maeve
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 274]

Summary: Summary : The sequel to Daughter of Light. Maeve has a very bad end to her honeymoon as things come to light about Severus that astound her. Why is her husband so keen to keep Draco Malfoy alive at all costs and can she really get over her loathing of Narcissa Malfoy to work together to save both Severus and Draco from the fate that Voldemort would like to inflict on them? Why is Harry so furtive and will Neville save the day when Maeve’s necklace is returned to her by her father. Oh, and our favourite bad-boy Auror is back!

There has been rather a long break in the writing of the story due to work commitments, but I'm back on the case and hoping to get it finished - if there's anyone left still reading!! :-)

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 261335 Chapters: 39 Completed: No
07/23/05 Updated: 06/22/11

Reviewer: Cheshlin Signed
Date: 10/13/05 Title: Chapter 10: The Missing Malfoys

Wow. I think we are on the trail of the missing Horcrux that Snape can't find! I like that the Sorting Hat is playing a role also. Lucius appearing dead, and Narcissa and Draco missing form where they were being protected, very interesting!!! I can't wait to see where you take that part of the story line!

Reviewer: Cheshlin Signed
Date: 09/05/07 Title: Chapter 34: Draco's Distress

I love how you are working some of DH into your story. :) It is sad to see Draco in such a state. I don't like him, but no one deserves that. I love the way you are writing Neville. :) I look forward to seeing how you keep this story going.

Reviewer: Cheshlin Signed
Date: 07/24/07 Title: Chapter 32: The Deathly Hallows

I love thinking of Lugh driving the cart like that! LOL I await to hear what Rampton has to say to his father. Should be interesting. It will also be interesting to see if Maeve finds anyone to talk to. I look forward to reading more.

Reviewer: Cheshlin Signed
Date: 10/09/05 Title: Chapter 9: Godric's Hollow

Lots of things are happening. I like how Roderick is still playing the protector. I wish that Harry would have found some closure in visiting Godric's Hollow. I do like that old man though. It was nice for Harry to have found someone that knew his mom. I think Draco is going to get himself into some trouble. SIGH. OH well. That is his problem! hehe I look forward to more!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Cheslin. Keep an eye on that old man! he may be back. :-)

Reviewer: Cheshlin Signed
Date: 01/26/07 Title: Chapter 27: Potions, Potions

Wow. Roderick is as unpredictable as ever! I truly didn't expect him at the end of that chapter. It is also interesting to see Maeve on her last nerve. She is usually more collected then that. Great chapter!! Cyns

Author's Response: *nods* Maeve is definately starting to fray a little. poor woman. And Roderick. The only thing predictable about Roderick is that he is completely unpredictable. ;-) Thanks for sticking with this story, despite the big gaps in updating. Hopefully I\'m back on track with it now.

Reviewer: Cheshlin Signed
Date: 07/10/07 Title: Chapter 30: Like a Dagger in the Heart

It was great to see this story updated. Wow, Draco killed his own mother? I would have never suspected that. Interesting, very interesting. I hope you are able to update this story before too long. Cyns

Reviewer: Cheshlin Signed
Date: 10/27/05 Title: Chapter 11: Toil and Trouble.

Wow. A lot is going on. I can't wait to learn more about Gryps. I see a lot of story coming from him. I hope Maeve or Severus finds Draco before any other Death Eater can! Severus is definitely playing with fire, and I know he has been burned before. I hope he doesn't get burned too badly again! I actually like him in your story. The 1st one I have ever liked! :)

Author's Response: Yay! I made another Snape convert. :-) I'm going to try and keep him from getting burned too badly, but these characters seldom listen to me. :-)

Reviewer: Cheshlin Signed
Date: 01/26/06 Title: Chapter 19: Heirs and Graces

That was another great chapter! I loved the boggart with Maeve and Narcissa! It is interesting to see their different reactions to seeing their husbands. Very interesting indeed. It was also fun having Rampton figure out that Snape and Filch are up to something!! Griffindors heir, hmmm, that should add something interesting to the story. I like how Dumbledore's picture awakens to tell a small piece of information, and then goes back to sleep. It is a very fun idea! I look forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: Cheshlin Signed
Date: 11/06/05 Title: Chapter 12: Decided and Undecided.

A lot is happening! I hope that Narcissa's information can help Maeve. I'm still very fond of Roderick. We never totally know what he is up to, but he helps Maeve everytime she needs it! Poor Remus. He always ends up not getting his way! I look forward to reading what happens next!!!

Reviewer: Cheshlin Signed
Date: 04/13/06 Title: Chapter 22: Confrontation

There is so much going on, and all at once. I really find a lot of interesting things happening in this chapter. Harry is in for a big shock when he comes too. Percy is proving just how bad he has become. There is something there that I just can't seem to put my finger on. I hope that Neville is ok. I hope that someone figures out that Maeve would never let Harry actually die. Anyone that knows her should know that! I really look forward to the next chapte!

Author's Response: I can\'t believe so much suddenly happened in this chapter. it so wasn;t planned that way, but Severus had the bright idea of taking Harry so it just all went off. Next chapter is under way, and your commment about anyone realy knowing Maeve has been noted. ;-)

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