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...a könyv az az eszköz, amely nélkül nem tudom elképzelni az életet, s amely nem kevésbé tartozik hozzám, mint kezem, vagy a szemem.

There, a little bit of Hungarian for You! :)


I'm a 22 years old law student from Hungary!
The day I discovered fanfiction was the day my brain exploded! :) I LOVE everything that has something to do with Harry Potter!

My favorite characters are:
- the next generation, especially James Potter Jr.
- the Weasley twins
- Gideon and Fabian Prewett
- Oliver Wood
- Bill Weasley
- and the bad guys: Bellatrix Lestrange, Blaise Zabini and Theodore Nott

I love the couples:
- James/ Lily
- Remus/ Tonks
- Arthur/ Molly
- Bill/ Fleur
- Andromeda/ Ted

I will probably never write fan fiction myself (because I can't write too good in English, sad, I know :( but I can't wait to read stories and to write reviews!

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Two Steps Back by emmablk1

Summary: James is going to be stuck with Lily for the entire summer...wait...isn't that supposed to be a good thing? In between all the angst and indecision, will these two EVER get together? Hmmm...maybe with a little help with a birdie named Sirius...
Reviewer: HungarianWitch Signed
Date: 04/24/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This was the FIRST fanfic that I read in my life, so it means a lot to me, it intorduced me to the fandom world, it has an emotional value!! It would mean so much to me if you wold continue, if you would finish it! You have got a great plot here!!


The Prongs Complex by Cherry and Phoenix Feather

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: James finally asks Lily out. The problem is, he chose a roundabout way of getting to her. Plus, he stands a high risk of breaking his neck in the process. Told from Remus Lupin's POV. Rated 3rd-5th years for slight language and mild innuendo on James's part. One-shot.

A/N: Quick note to all: I am sorry, but there are no plans for a sequel for PC. I hate to disappoint you all, but I feel that the story is better standing alone, leaving the rest to your imaginations.
Reviewer: HungarianWitch Signed
Date: 01/21/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Prongs Complex

This is my favorite oneshot!!
I laughed and laughed! The characters are really well written!
My favorite line:

“Yes,” James promised stoutly.
Lily sighed again. “Fine.”
James laughed delightedly. “Oy, Sirius!”
“Yes, James?” Sirius replied instantly and innocently.
“Read that poem I gave you this morning.”

It's sad that you are not planning a sequel..

White Wedding by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years •

"Aside from blood, he didn't believe there was anything left in the world that was truly pure, but Lucius lifted his glass anyway."

After the betrothal dinner, Malfoy's tete a tete with Narcissa transforms a marital arrangement into something more satisfying.


Reviewer: HungarianWitch Signed
Date: 02/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: White Wedding

I feel like a stalker. *blushes*
But I can't help it…

It seems, that today I was a bit addicted to the Slytherins, first Zabini, then Phineas, and now the Malfoys! 
I always knew, that behind the mask, the Malfoys are a real family, and in DH we saw that it's true.. It's good to see that Lucius and the cold Narcissa can show romantic feelings, in a slytherin way, but still 
Bellatrix was as expected, mad, beautiful and seductive… She is one of my favorite characters in HP books and in your fic too, altough I know, that she is really evil, maybe as evil as Voldemort..

Loved this fic too :D

Author's Response: You\'re not stalking, you\'re enjoying a fun with Slytherins day! :D

Bella loved Voldemort in her blind worshipping way, which is more feeling than he ever felt for anyone or anything, so I don\'t think she was totally evil. Mostly evil, maybe, hee.

A Marauders’ Little Christmas by trinsy

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: “These wonderful things are the things we’ll remember all through our lives!”

Sitting in his cell in Azkaban, Sirius reflects on one memorable Christmas with the Marauders. A one-shot companion to Canis Majoris. (It can be read independently.)
Reviewer: HungarianWitch Signed
Date: 05/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: one-shot

Oh. My.
This was just beautiful, sad, yes, but so brilliant!
Thanks for sharing it with us!

Reviewer: HungarianWitch Signed
Date: 05/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: one-shot

Oh. My.
This was just beautiful, sad, yes, but so brilliant!
Thanks for sharing it with us!

Paint it Black: the Portraits of Phineas Nigellus by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years •

When widowed Headmaster Phineas Nigellus commissions a private portrait, children and unexpected emotions complicate his elaborate plans for a simple seduction.

*A Victorian romance with a Christmas epilogue*

Reviewer: HungarianWitch Signed
Date: 02/02/08 Title: Chapter 3: Family

I can't believe you! I can't stop reading your fics! It's my sacond review today..

This was so good! Phineas reminds me of Sirius/Padfoot, well we all knew, that the Black men were a treat to the ladies! And Phineas's son Sirius was cool to : "And when I get old enough, I'll fornicate behind every sta–ahhh!" so siriusly good, dear old Snuffles had good DNA :D No wonder he has so many fangirls, including me too 

I was wondering, there are so many fics about Sirius/ Padfoot, but non of them are describing how did Sirius leave his family, what happened (well, there are fics, but, they are not too good..)..Well I don't wan't to make you do something you don't want, it's just a suggestion, but I think you could write an excellent fic about that, because you describe feelings and such things very real and very good… maybe if you have time and you have no other idea, you could think about it?

Author's Response: You make my day...or weekend...by reading my stories, so please don\'t stop! :D

Brooding and charming and sexy: Sirius got great DNA!

Right now, between Remus and Tonks dealing with werewolves and George and Alicia having a baby, I\'m swamped, but those are excellent ideas to tuck away for a rainy day! Thank you!

Reviewer: HungarianWitch Signed
Date: 02/02/08 Title: Chapter 3: Family

OH, I just read your authors response:

"It would be fun to do a Christmas future one shot with Sirius bringing his finacee Hester Gamp to dinner, young Phineas on the outs with relatives over his support of Muggle rights, and Bella giving her father an ulcer over her friendship with Geoffrey Prewett! :D"

It's a very good idea! Do continue!!!! It would be so cool! I love the era in which this fic takes place, reminds me of Agatha Christie books, the victorian era and everything…

Author's Response: It was a lot of fun to write this story, so I\'ll remember you\'ll read if I write! ^_~

Sweet Sorrow by lucilla_pauie

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Prim-and-proper-and-tough Lily.

She was only shaken once.

Not by James’s romance, nor by Voldemort’s evil antics, but by that little joyous miracle called ‘motherhood’. And in her case, it had nothing to do with erratic hormones and mood swings.

LucillaJoanna of Hufflepuff tells in this story how the mother of a destined hero feels, her perplexity of whether To Laugh or Cry.

Not your regular Lily/James story. Originally an entry to the Spring Challenges.

~dedicated to my fab bannermaker friend, Edwina (Wulfric Brian Dumbledore/blacsilver_serpent)

Reviewer: HungarianWitch Signed
Date: 05/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: Sweet Sorrow

This was simply beatifuly written! And you are going to my fav authors!! :)

For Bitter or for Worse by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years •

All is not well.

George uses work and Firewhisky to cope with Fred's death until a drink with a friend leads to something that dulls pain better than alcohol. Emotionally torn by grief, he struggles to allow Alicia into his life...and then comes baby....

*Winner of the 2008 Quicksilver Quill Award for Best Dark/Angsty Story*

Reviewer: HungarianWitch Signed
Date: 01/15/08 Title: Chapter 23: It's Beginning to Look a Lot Like Christmas

You guys here at mugglenet drive me crazy, I'm on the net for hours waiting for updates, new stories, reading fanfics… BUT MY ABSOLUTE FAVORITE IS: FOR BITTER OR FOR WORSE!!
You are trully brilliant!
I love that you quote things from other books, movies, songs, etc…
I love George's character and Molly Weasley's character is "bloody brilliant"!!
I love that Ron helped George, that he is no longer the "little brother"!
I really like Bill and Fleur, you could write a fic about them too!
I could go on and on…
Please update, update, update..
(And you could continue Chasing Angelina too ;)

Author's Response: I love you, man. Woman. Witch.


I\'ll join you in the mental ward, heh, because I really want to update. And when I finally get to post, I\'ll think of you, because there\'s some crucial quoting going on!

Reviewer: HungarianWitch Signed
Date: 01/22/08 Title: Chapter 25: Christmas

she said Yes- she said Yes * does a happy dance* she said Yes- she said Yes

It was soo sweet! I think I'm faling for George ;)

And the quote was absolute brilliant!

It was another AMAZING chapter! Thank You!

Author's Response: If you don\'t fall for George, then you won\'t believe Alicia does, and I\'m up the Thames without a paddle....or should it be down because of the current, lol.

Thank You! :)

Reviewer: HungarianWitch Signed
Date: 01/30/08 Title: Chapter 26: In the Cards

It's official now... this story is my crack!! Can't live without it!
I loved this chap, I loved the "younger adults", as you have put it!
My favorite lines were:
- "you didn't really think you'd get away with it–did you, hag?"
- " Killer Christmas Tree Pokes Kid’s Eye Out!"
Hilarious! :D

I wish George was real, or that I knew the Phelps twins.. :D

I love it, that you update so quick…

Author's Response: Thank you so much for liking the lines that made me grin to write! I can\'t hook you up with the Phelps twins, but I will try to update quickly! ^_~

Reviewer: HungarianWitch Signed
Date: 01/16/08 Title: Chapter 24: Christmas Eve

Thank you for this chapter, it's perfect!
I finished my exams today and it was a perfect gift to me! 

I was so happy, that George talked to Percy, that they are on their way to sort things out!
The snowman ornaments were a really good idea, so Fred- like  The scene about the decorating was very well written, You have put so many emotions in that scene, I could feel the grief, the love… And when George said "Happy Christmas, brother" , well yeah… I had tears in my eyes…
I didn't expect, George to propose to Alicia, it was a shock for me ( I know he loves her, but still..) And I'm so afraid that Alicia is going to say no (please say YES Alicia, PleasePleasePleasePleasePlease…) I would ;)

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: George has unconsciously distanced himself from deeper emotions, so although he doesn\'t push people away anymore, he hasn\'t thought about how deep his feelings for Alicia go. It\'s enough for him to care...and now all that\'s left is to find out if she\'s willing to take a chance. :)

The Marauderbury Tales by erikthephantom

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: A loving rip-off of Chaucer's great Canterbury Tales, the Marauders are here the merry travelers, set out on a mysterious training exercise by Mad-Eye Moody. Read as they struggle to survive without magic and enjoy as they attempt to entertain each other with magically enhanced story-telling.
Reviewer: HungarianWitch Signed
Date: 01/21/08 Title: Chapter 2: The Potter's Tale

Oh, how I LOVE all your fics!
I read Veiled Revelations, Between Now and Then, The Importance of being Single, The Marauderbury Tales… they are all AMAZING… I wish you would write more!

My favorite lines are:

- "Thank you Mad-Eye Moony"

- "The beautiful occupant of the bed’s thoughts were set (very deliberately) on the mission ahead, though for some reason they always strayed back to her gentleman on the floor who, for some reason, kept hitting his head on the floor."

- "Sirius, who had been up all night kicking the seemingly lifeless body of Remus was far less enthusiastic in his greeting of the sun. Remus, on the other hand, greeted the day with a smile and a painful throb in his ribs, the cause of which was curiously unknown to him"

- “James,” giant Remus said, a look of mingled surprise and amusement on his face. “You just killed Sirius with a pie crust.”

I laughed and laughed and laughed!

Please continue this fic! PLEASE! And please write more :D

Chasing Angelina by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years •

As a Chaser for the Harpies, Angelina Johnson is used to chasing goals, but when the team is sold and Blaise Zabini takes over management, she feels more like a Quaffle...and one that might not mind being handled.

Reviewer: HungarianWitch Signed
Date: 04/03/08 Title: Chapter 3: Zanzibar

Oh, a fans cruel life.. it's a hard decision to choose where to read a story, because while i LOVE mugglenet, ffnet has helped me trough a time, where my favorite site has had a bit of problems, so I owe that site a lot.. I don't know where to follow your stories. So now I give you 2 reviews! :D
As I sad, it's a perfect ending to a perfect story, and while I'm happy that Blaise and Angie are together, my other eye cries because this means the end of this story. But hopefully we will hear about them in FBoFW and you will actually write that ficlet about Mrs. Zabini and Kingsley, because you made me very curious (she actually LOVED a man --> this is worth a fic too ;) !

So end note:
- would be happy to read more about Blaise and Angie,
- would be more than happy to read about Mrs: Zabini and Mr. Zabini,
- would be more than happy to read about Mrs: Zabini and Kingsley
- this doesnt belong here, but I would be delighted if I would read more about Phineas... ;)
-AND FBoFW could go on forever, because i like it that much!!
- and I'm open for everything else you write too! ;)

So, yeah, I have small wishes, don't I ? ;)

Author's Response:

I love your wishes! They're big and beautiful! :)

I just wish I had the time to write all those stories! If only Time-Turners were real...sigh...


Reviewer: HungarianWitch Signed
Date: 02/02/08 Title: Chapter 2: Angelina

I didn't post a review for the first chap, so this one is for both!
You know how I LOVE your work, I sad it in For bitter or for Worse, but I could say it billion times..
Don't get me wrong, I LIVE for those minutes when I read George's and Alicia's story, but Chasing Angelina got me, maybe a little more than the previous…
It's different, and I really like it.. It's strange to see, that the slytherins are people, human too, that they are friends and that they care...Jk tried to show us that in DH trough the Malfoy family, but this fic outshines it .. and For bitter or for Worse outshines the Epiloge, where George isn't mentioned, altough he suffered maybe the worst…

Blaise must be VERY sexy ;) I wouldn't mind to see him "disrobe" ;)
I like Angelinas character too, I hope that she will discover, that Zabini went back to the castle for her..
And I like Mrs. Zabini too, for a woman, who killed her husbands, she is very pleasant, reminds me on my aunt, altough, she didn't kill her husband ;)

You wrote so many GOOD lines, but I have my favorites :)
- "We are free.", simple, but shows many things…
- " “I think it’s a hair past a freckle,” said Blaise. Her mouth fell open. “You made a joke.” He unfastened gold cufflinks before shrugging out of his white dress shirt and using a charm to shrink discarded clothing into scraps he placed in a pocket. “Don’t tell the Slytherin Alumni Association.” " made me grin :)

Can't wait for the new chap..


Author's Response: You sure know how to make up for lost time! (or review, lol) Thank you so much for seeing the Slytherin side. I\'ve always had a soft spot for them, wondering how they would be portrayed if seen from a different perspective than Harry\'s (with due cause) negatively viewpoint.

As for Mrs. Zabini...it\'s only rumoured she killed her husbands, not proven, although I might have to write a Kingsley/Dalila story to show him learning a few things about her...and himself! ;)

Thanks for the grin, too!

A Little Lighter Than Black by kritchen

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: From the ancient and noble house of Black to the obscurity of being Muggleborn, seventh year just promised to be another school year, although their last. Andromeda is testing her boundaries and the limits placed upon her. She's rebelling a bit from the ideals that she was brought up with. Ted is just living in the moment, still trying to decide what he wants to be. Fighting with habitual messiness and lack of organization, the cheerful, happy-go-lucky Hufflepuff soon finds himself in the midst of something he hadn't expected. Two unlikely characters, a spark of life, and the awkwardness of repeated encounters leads to more than they expected out of their seventh year.

I'm sorry for the long wait for the next chapter. It's finally finished. I graduated high school in 2010 and then entered college. It was quite a stressful time and quite the transition. I also lost the chapter once when my computer crashed. I had struggled with it for so long (writer's block) and when it was almost done, there it went into technological oblivion. I was so frustrated, I couldn't bring myself to try rewriting it until recently.
Reviewer: HungarianWitch Signed
Date: 07/15/08 Title: Chapter 9: Winter Flush

:D I'm SO happy you updated, this is a great story, and the slow update is sometimes killing me... ;)
And finaly a kiss! We have waited for so long... and it was perfect! I simply LOVE it!

Author's Response: Lol. I'm sorry bout that. I simply lost my hunger for HP fanfiction and had no will to write at all. I tried, but it wasn't the greatest, and I figured that wasn't fair to the rest of you who actually read my stories. But something happened to respark that eagerness and I'm halfway done with chapter 10. Though be warned, updating will still be slow. I've got 5 books to do for summer reading...

Reviewer: HungarianWitch Signed
Date: 04/03/08 Title: Chapter 6: Friends Against Family

erm.. you took your time.. but it was worth to wait this LONG ;)
an amazing chappy, as always, you sure know how to write Ted and Dromeda, all these feelings.. it's very realistic! Ted is such a loveable character, it's a shame he isn't real :)

Just a little side note: I don't really think, that Bella called her parents mum and dad, it's more likely they were father and mother to her..

I hope you update next time little quicker! ;) Can't wait till that..

Author's Response: Well, this time, it took longer than expected to get through the queue. I submitted it the day that MNFF was back up after the hacker incident & update. Thank you very much for your words and lol. You\'re totally right. I\'ll keep that in mind next time. :D

Reviewer: HungarianWitch Signed
Date: 01/21/08 Title: Chapter 4: Peeves is a Peeve

I like this fic VERY VERY MUCH!
The characters of Dromeda and Ted, and the whole "atmosphere" is really well written! Congrat!!!
And I would really like to read the next chap, but I get the following from the site:
"Access denied. This story has not been validated by the adminstrators of this site"

Come on, I want to READ it!!!

And Kritchen keep on writing, you are very talented!

Author's Response: Thank you. [blushes] Lol. Chapter five hasn\'t been accepted yet. It should be very soon.

Reviewer: HungarianWitch Signed
Date: 04/10/08 Title: Chapter 7: A Very Confused Rainbow

YAY! New chappy! AND things are developing ;) The conversation betwen them was just perfectly written! :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I felt weird about the new chapter at first, but I\'m so glad you liked it.

Reviewer: HungarianWitch Signed
Date: 01/23/08 Title: Chapter 5: Imprints of Friendship

WOW, how can you write something this amazing and beautiful? (though, I don't know, can you say beautiful about a story? well I guess, I just don't care and say it! )
It's trully great! I LOVE IT!
I hope You continue it soon!!

Author's Response: Awwwah, that\'s so sweet. Thank you. :] I do plan on continuing it.