Anouk Lisole is a serious, aspiring writer who loves the Harry Potter stories perhaps more than her life. She lives in the realm of books and is currently mourning the death of her fiance, Fred Weasley.
Oh. My. Goodness. I didn't think it possible that I could like a HarryxDraco story. You have changed my opinion! (though not entirely, most of them are still smut) But this is a jewel of fan fiction! Your characterization is perfection, the plot is extraordinarily well constructed, and your writing style is remarkably close to Rowling's! One itsy bitsy detail bugs me though: you call Harry a brunette. He has black hair. Brunettes are brown-haired. My suggestion (and feel free to ignore it, or take up the term in your writing) is, in place, to refer to him as a 'jet-head,' as this implies the blackness of his hair. Other than that (which is an almost insignificant detail) I praise your work! Thank you!
This is undoubtedly one of the best written stories I have ever read. I love your style. You're obviously incredibly well-read and it shows in your writing. I did not think there were any Harry Potter fan fics out there this good. Thank you! Oh, and textualsphinx - love it. You have hit the proverbial nail on the head in describing your own writing.
Bloody brilliant. You have outdone yourself! That internet slang curse was hysterical! And I enjoyed Blaise's changing nature. Can't wait for the next installment.