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Through the Fire by Croyez
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 250]

Summary: It all starts out with a meeting. Little do Harry and Hermione know what problems and dilemmas will surface along with their secret relationship. Hearts are shattered, prophecies are spoken, disappearances occur, dark plans are schemed, and discoveries beyond their understanding are made. Can their relationship withstand the perils it is subject to? Will their fate and worries stand in the way of true love? They can only hope not…



The air was suddenly filled with Hermione’s screams. They reverberated off the walls, echoed in the space…in Harry’s head…he felt as if he were sharing her pain, as if he were the one under the curse. He couldn’t take it. He couldn’t see her in such pain, maybe even wishing, like he had earlier, to die…for it to end…

He didn’t notice it when his hand began loosening its grip on the edge. He didn’t notice it until he began to fall to the ground, but as soon as he did, he pointed his wand at Voldemort. He felt seventeen years of suffering, seventeen years of mystery and trials…he felt hatred like he had never experienced before, pouring out of him. He felt every single thing that had happened to him on Voldemort’s account, rising to the surface, almost drowning him in a mix of emotions.

And then, he yelled, with all his might, “Avada Kedavra!”

He wished for it all to end…for it to be over…



The Last Chapter (Twenty) is up on [July/12] Thank you so much, Stephanie!


H/Hr, and Book 1-5!Hermione! will only sink when there are none loyal to them. So there.

Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 120337 Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/06/04 Updated: 08/04/05


Reviewer: miss patil Signed
Date: 05/15/05 Title: Chapter 1: The Secret Meeting

Is an awsome story I am loving it!!! Keep writing I am awaiting the next chapter!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! Ch.17, I believe, is submitted exactly fifteen days after you reviewed. =) May 30th. I hope you enjoy it!

 

Born the Day You Kissed Me by CLee
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 1262]

Summary: I was born the day you kissed me...I died inside the night you left me...But oh how I lived while you loved me. . . .


The sequel Agapanthus is up!

Categories: Hermione/Draco Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 71595 Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/07/04 Updated: 02/27/06


Reviewer: miss patil Signed
Date: 04/27/06 Title: Chapter 24: Black

OMG i totally luv this story!!!!!! I can't wait to read the sequel!!!!!!! 10/10

 

Studying Isn't Everything by smokeline
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 238]

Summary: A view into Hermione's diary shows the human that resides behind the bookworm. PG-13 for language. Note: This fic was completed before the release of HBP, so it will only follow through OOTP canon.

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 15842 Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Published:
11/08/04 Updated: 08/12/07


Reviewer: miss patil Signed
Date: 01/21/06 Title: Chapter 6: Grrr. Argh.

Harry and Parvati? Ewww. Is this going to change or stay this way? maybe h/g or someting.... you went on in other chapters on how parvati's such a slutty whore; HARRY CAN DO BETTER!! 9! good job!!

 
Reviewer: miss patil Signed
Date: 06/20/06 Title: Chapter 8: And So it Begins

Awesome!!! Update as soon as possible!!! ~SM

 

Prefect Not Perfect by TaraAnnFelton
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 244]

Summary: Hermione Granger normally cannot stand perfection, having been mocked for being perfect her whole life. Matters become worse when a simple plan to prove her "wild side" turns into the romance of a life time. The problem: He is absolutely perfect. According to her, at least.


Things get out of control, and after one thing leads to another, Hermione is forced to choose between losing what she has and losing what she wants.





Ignores books 6 and 7, but takes place in year 7


Categories: Hermione/Draco Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Book 7 Disregarded, Character Death, Non-Consensual Sex, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 12268 Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Published:
11/09/04 Updated: 11/12/05


Reviewer: miss patil Signed
Date: 06/08/05 Title: Chapter 8: Strange and Different

LUV IT!!!!!! PLEZ UPDATE!! i never saw that one coming! great twist!

 

Graduation Trip by nuttyniffler99
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 380]

Summary: So, what do you get when you mix together Hawaii, the graduating year of Hogwarts, teenagers with raging hormones, and a little romance? Craziness of course, with Harry and Hermione stuck in the middle. They'll just have to get each other through it! Please R/R!!! =)


♥ umm...yeah, it's finals week here at this high school of mine... so i'm pretty sure i'll be studying my ass off all week long. don't expect another update for another two or three weeks or so. sorry. ♥





Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 12920 Chapters: 5 Completed: No
Published:
11/21/04 Updated: 02/19/06


Reviewer: miss patil Signed
Date: 05/25/05 Title: Chapter 4: An Afternoon at the Beach

great job! luv the Silly Ron! update soon!!

 

Getting to the truth by iceblue
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 197]

Summary: Harry desperately needs to talk to Hermione and they decide to meet at the Millennium Eye. Chapter 23 up!

Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 56054 Chapters: 22 Completed: No
Published:
11/29/04 Updated: 07/23/05


Reviewer: miss patil Signed
Date: 05/15/05 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: The potion (part 1)

This is such a good story! I can't wait to read the rest!! Keep writing!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I have submitted the next chapter.

 

Barbara's Adventure by FlooCrookshanks
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 39]

Summary: Sirius gets James to help fix up his little friend. WARNING: This fic contains a story of the sheepish kind. Do not proceed if you have a tendancy to try out everything you read.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 948 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/20/04 Updated: 12/20/04


Reviewer: miss patil Signed
Date: 12/28/05 Title: Chapter 1: Barbara's Adventure

Wow. This story is definetly something you should write a sequel to. Have u considered other fics? 10!!!

 

Taste of Revenge by Queen of Serpents
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 259]

Summary:

Bad boy James must be taught a lesson. The game of vengeance begins with Lily's plan to seduce & then dump him and James retaliating when he finds out. But the taste of Revenge is sweet as well as addicting and neither are willing to admit defeat.

Chapter 6 is 40% complete



Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 14419 Chapters: 5 Completed: No
Published:
12/29/04 Updated: 01/12/06


Reviewer: miss patil Signed
Date: 02/19/06 Title: Chapter 5: Conundrums

love love LOOOOVE this story! It's like my mentor story! Update soon!!!!!!! ~SM

 

Daddy by blondebouncingferret
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 1739]

Summary: Past Featured StoryPost Hogwarts: Ron and Harry are sent to America for Auror training. Ron spends his last night in England with Hermione, and after returning two years later, he finds Hermione with a fifteen-month-old baby ...

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 40801 Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/02/05 Updated: 03/21/06


Reviewer: miss patil Signed
Date: 02/17/06 Title: Chapter 11: September Nineteenth

Ha! Ding Dong! The Bitch is dead. Which old Bitch? The Wicked Bitch! Ding Dong! The Wicked Bitch is dead! Sorry about my atrocious PG-13 rated language. I thought it seemed appropriate. You MUST make a sequel or something of the sort to this story!!! It doens't even have to be a sequel! Just something about the lives of Hermione and Ron and Harry and Ginny!!! PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD WRITE MORE!!! o.O ~SM

 
Reviewer: miss patil Signed
Date: 04/10/06 Title: Chapter 13: Epilogue

aww, thats beautiful! I love your writing style!! you should definetely continue writing romance stories. I like how you write hermione and ron, since people tend to miswrite them. 10/10. ~SM

 

Right Under His Nose by CathCarl
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 901]

Summary: Harry comes back from serving detention with Ron and finds Ginny and Dean in a rather compromising position. A strange and confusing set of new feelings erupts... like wanting to punch Dean Thomas senseless. But what's confusing Harry most of all is that Ginny no longer seems to be just Ron's little sister... she's a beautiful girl, standing right under his nose-- exactly where he hadn't been looking.

Edited by Moderator: Summaries should be concise and minimally formatted. They should not contain any form of author's note or pleas for reviews.

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 68103 Chapters: 17 Completed: No
Published:
01/15/05 Updated: 08/30/06


Reviewer: miss patil Signed
Date: 08/27/06 Title: Chapter 17: You're supposed to apologize, Potter.

Aw. Well, I guess all good things must come to an end. I hope to see your work eventually again! You're really good. Good luck at college. ~SM

 

The Unseemly Proposal by sparx
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 5423]

Summary: Past Featured StoryThe reign of Voldermort comes to an end, and with it ends the prestige and power Lucius Malfoy once had in the Wizarding World. In order to regain the respect of his fellow wizards and to make them believe that he has turned over a new leaf (which he actually hasn't) and has graciously accepted muggles and Mudbloods, Lucius asks Hermione, a Mudblood, to marry his son, Draco, a pure-blood. Obviously, they both refuse, but Lucius isn't going to give up easily. After all, he wants his status back. He still has a few tricks up his sleeve and is determined to play match-maker. What happens next is a series of events that serve only to bring Hermione and Draco closer, both literally and figuratively speaking. Read to find out how this one unseemly proposal causes absolute chaos in their lives! THIS STORY IS NOT HBP and DH COMPATIBLE! Hey all! Check out my personal info for the expected date of the next update. =)

Categories: Hermione/Draco Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 154682 Chapters: 38 Completed: No
Published:
01/17/05 Updated: 05/22/06


Reviewer: miss patil Signed
Date: 08/31/05 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18- Pansy’s Outburst

I love this story! The new chapter is great. please send me the original convo!! vballchick@patmedia.net

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked it! Sure, I’ll send it!

 

Security by IceHeart161
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 169]

Summary: Being a spy isn't easy. Neither is working with your biggest enemy. Doing both at the same time is near impossible.

Categories: Hermione/Draco Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 31941 Chapters: 15 Completed: No
Published:
02/23/05 Updated: 07/16/06


Reviewer: miss patil Signed
Date: 06/09/05 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Six: Piece of Mind

This is really good, and different! please update soon!

 

Summary:

A story about how the love between two people can turn out to be more than just love, but a life saving experiance. Plenty of suspense and twists and turns! Please Review: tell me you love it, hate it, want to change this or that, hell, tell me all about the secret conversation you and your cat had last night! Just review!

The Sequal is up! Look for Love Fulfilled in the Dark/Angst section by me! the dark arts master! So go read it, now! It's even better than the first one!



Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 52749 Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/13/05 Updated: 05/30/05


Reviewer: miss patil Signed
Date: 05/19/05 Title: Chapter 14: Preparations

This story is awsome!!!! please get the next chapter up soon!!! I hate clifhangers!!

Author's Response: Glad it's awesome! I try! Cliffies always make it better in the end! You know it!! This is a good one huh? Anyways, I hope to have the next chapters up soon, but it depends on how fast my reviews come in!

 

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Rated: [Reviews - ]

Summary:

Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: miss patil Signed
Date: 06/09/05 Title: None

This is really good! please update!!!!! I'm soo glad that she has Ginny back.

Author's Response: Me too. I was getting worried with myself that if I didn't bring one of her friends back that this would just be one depressing, and boring story. So, in the end I brought Ginny back in!

 

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Rated: [Reviews - ]

Summary:

Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: miss patil Signed
Date: 06/08/05 Title: None

This story is awsome! please update it soon! i can't wait 2 read more!

 

Promises to Keep by Gemmika
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 676]

Summary: It's been six years since Harry and Ginny have come face to face. Different career oprions led them in different paths than they had hoped but now at the wedding of Ron and Hermione they are forced back together. Will their fragile love survive the troubles that haunt their pasts? Rated "R" for Sexual scenes, Teen Pregnancy and Spousal Abuse in this story.

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Sexual Situations

Word count: 30099 Chapters: 11 Completed: No
Published:
05/06/05 Updated: 02/13/07


Reviewer: miss patil Signed
Date: 02/19/06 Title: Chapter 5: Confessions

Please update! I've been following this story for months on end and I'm dying to know what happens between Harry and Ginny!!! ~SM

 

Toxic by Therinian
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 236]

Summary: NOTE: CHAPTER 19 IS COMPLETE; CHAPTER 20 HAS BEEN STARTED!



It is Hermione Granger's seventh and final year at Hogwarts. When she and Draco Malfoy are together more often than either would like, Hermione asks herself: "Can a leopard change its spots?", as Draco wonders: "Will any sort of relationship with Granger be bad for my health...?"

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Please note: this story, while having some humor and mystery, really is a romance...!

**BE SURE TO READ MY OTHER FAN FIC, IN THE 'GENERAL FICS' SECTION!**


Categories: Hermione/Draco Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, None

Word count: 49320 Chapters: 19 Completed: No
Published:
06/15/05 Updated: 07/18/07


Reviewer: miss patil Signed
Date: 12/19/05 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Collecting Information

I love your story!! I know that it has some sub plots, but I think that it should stay under Romance because it has a lot of that too. Its really good! Update soon!

 

Truth Be Told by CraftySlytherin
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 354]

Summary: What happens when Fred and George Weasley, Hogwarts' reknowned kings of pranks, decide to spike a shipment of pumpkin juice bound for Hogwarts with truth potion? A day filled with true confessions of Hogwarts students!!!!!

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations, Alternate Universe

Word count: 4564 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/06/05 Updated: 07/06/05


Reviewer: miss patil Signed
Date: 02/14/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

DEFINITELY one of the best I've ever read, and I've read many! I love the Hermione/Draco/Ron triangle. Write other humor fics!!!~SM

 
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