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All Stories Are on Hiatus.

sorry guys, i'll get on them as soon as I have time!






Status: Writing chapter 8...kinda.



Neversent: One-shot/finished. (:



A big whopping thank you to my amazingly amazing beta- Orlaith!

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A Hero Never Cries by annie
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 107]

Summary: Seven years after the second war, Ginny Weasley can still remember everything. Seven years after Voldemort prevailed over Harry, she's still broken. These are her thoughts and memories, written down seven years after the greatest horror the world has ever known. A heartbreaking tale that describes the months before, during, and after the war from Ginny's PoV.

The last chapter has been sent in. Thanks for reading, everyone!

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 5633 Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/30/05 Updated: 05/01/05


Reviewer: Lacerated Signed
Date: 04/13/06 Title: Chapter 4: Those Four Words

My god, this was an amazing little ficlet here! Powerful. Very very powerful. I loved it. I adore how Ginny comes off as the fighter she is, but we really see into her mind and thoughts here - even throught the facade. Lovely work here. I can't really say anything else! Perhaps that you didn't ruin my poor Draco, but other than that 10/10. =)

 

Nothing to Lose by Lumos
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 38]

Summary: It's the eve of the final battle, and Voldemort has made a terrible mistake. He has taken away Harry's last hope and joy - leaving nothing to live for. And Harry reacts in a way neither of them had ever quite expected. After all, the most dangerous enemy of all is an enemy with nothing to lose... A one shot songfic based on Jeff Buckley's Grace.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Violence, Suicide, Sexual Situations, Character Death

Word count: 2531 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/20/05 Updated: 04/05/06


Reviewer: Lacerated Signed
Date: 04/13/06 Title: Chapter 1: Nothing to Lose

Powerful. And an interesting turn of events! I enjoyed this story a lot, although I have a few suggestions. The ending was not nearly as powerful as some other bits of the story had been, I think, perhaps if you had prolonged your descriptions and gave the ending a darker feel it would have been even more lovely!

Author's Response: A few suggestions, eh? That interests me. Although this story was over and done with ages ago - a one off, written while I was bored - so I doubt I\'ll make any changes.

 

Summary: Rhian Morrigan lived the first few years of her life in happiness and peace and love with her family. Until one Christmas Eve night a stranger knocked on their door and kills her mother. Rhian was homeschooled until the year she turned 16, then she was sent to Hogwarts. On the train she meets a strange friend, who has alternate motives. Thanks to lavenderbrown_47 for helping me with my summary.

Categories: Draco/Other Character Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 3745 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
06/06/05 Updated: 06/25/05


Reviewer: Lacerated Signed
Date: 06/22/05 Title: Chapter 1: World Unknown

Hmmm, I like it. Rhianna is the name of my roleplay character who's with Draco. =) I Love that name, was going to use it in my own fanfiction, but changed it. The story sounds interesting, but...Draco seems just a bit out of character with his insults.. maybe your just not as good as insulting people (which isnt a bad thing) but I'm not feeling the whole "Slytherin-bad-boy" vibe just yet... Good work though!

 

Draco's Reflection by Galadriel8891
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 50]

Summary: Past Featured StoryOne-shot. Draco Malfoy has made a choice, and there is no turning back. But is it the right decision?

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1459 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/13/05 Updated: 07/13/05


Reviewer: Lacerated Signed
Date: 11/08/05 Title: Chapter 1: Draco's Reflection

Wonderful! I really love how you portray Draco, his views are so in character for him but they're just different. Beautiful writing, the morbid and dark aspect of it all is also fab-u-luhz! =)

Author's Response: Writing morbid stories is always fun, isn't it? I love picking apart the minds of bad guys. Anyways, thanks for the review!

 

Summary: Merope Gaunt is a completely unremarkable person in almost every way. Her burning passion for a certain Muggle, Tom Riddle, shames her family, who as Pureblooded wizards are disgusted by Muggles as a whole. When Merope is finally free from her families clutches, she pursues her lust for Tom Riddle, relying upon magic to bind hime to her. But how exactly did it happen?

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Abuse

Word count: 2237 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
08/10/05 Updated: 08/10/05


Reviewer: Lacerated Signed
Date: 10/25/05 Title: Chapter 1: Affection and Disease

Merlin! I Love it! (and not just because of the comma. haha.) In all seriousness though, the topic & characters for this piece have something morbidly interesting about them. That makes te fic way more interesting just because of the characters. Merope's actins are just as I imagined her, as well as Marvolo's and Morfins. I loved the knife scene (just...don't ask why.), it was written beautifully and actually seems like something that would've happened. I /think/ I noticed an -gasp- error! In one sentence, I believe it should be "Shoulder" instead of "shoud." This one: "She fell to her knee as she felt the knife sink into her should." Other than that, I really enjoyed it and can't wait for more! --Jen

Author's Response:

I actually saw those mistakes - I'm just lazy - I'll change them next week maybe. Yeah, the characters are definately the morbid kind and their despair or interests make it all the more compelling. Im really glad you liked my portrayal of Marvolo - he must have meant something to merope for naming her son after him. I'm stuck on how to begin the next chapter, but I'll have a ponder. Cheers, Jen!

 

Lost In Time by Orlaith
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 7]

Summary: Severus Snape sets out on a journey to ancient Ireland after his wife, former DADA Professor Sorcha Zandantius (now Snape), loses her Time Turner and cannot return. When Sorcha is mortally wounded Severus rushes to her aid, but it's not as easy as it seems. Can Severus save her in time?



Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Abuse

Word count: 26754 Chapters: 9 Completed: No
Published:
10/28/05 Updated: 12/03/06


Reviewer: Lacerated Signed
Date: 03/02/06 Title: Chapter 6: Demise of an Elf

My god, Robyn this is amazing! I command you to get over your block and finish this. Like now. =P I love how there's a bunch of this subtle humor in here, even the fact that Snape's married amuses me. I honestly want to marry this fic. And this review is crappy. Excuse that as well.

Author's Response: No one ever reviews this, so first off - cheers! This is my favourite fic that I've written - to me it just demonstrates how far I've come in the realm of fic writing. I wanted to include some basic, subtle humour as befits the situation, but not so it was an inherent theme. But I think they make a rather good pair! Sorcha started off as a joke - the prequel to this is a mess, and I'm re-writing it. Maybe I'll show the original someday, you'll laugh your head off... thanks!

 

Out of the Fire by LuckyRatTail
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 111]

Summary: Straight after the events of HBP. As Snape and Malfoy make for the exit, the latter has second thoughts. He remembers Dumbledore's words in his desire to escape the wrath of the Dark Lord. Darkness, confusion and a lot of rain.

Extract:

"However," the terrible voice resumed in a tone constructed solely of icy menace. "You are young. Too young to understand. No matter how far you go, no matter who you stay with or where you hide - if you run from me I will find you, and when I do you will pay."

Final chapter up! COMPLETE



Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 29673 Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/15/05 Updated: 07/29/09


Reviewer: Lacerated Signed
Date: 01/14/06 Title: Chapter 1: Hell to Pay

hmm...I like this. I like this alot! I think you've got some great writing going here, and I love your imagery and description. Such an interesting idea too. Keep up the great work. Alice, Craig and Frank make me laugh. =]

Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, they are rather comic aren't they? Glad you're enjoying it!

 

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Summary:

Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: Lacerated Signed
Date: 12/16/05 Title: None

Sorry but, Mary-sue much?

Author's Response: I know. I made her that way on purpose.

Author's Response: I know. I made her that way on purpose.

Author's Response: I know. I made her that way on purpose.

 

Anniversary by Mugglechump
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 155]

Summary: Ginny commemorates the fifth anniversary of her death and finds herself face to face with someone from her past.



Categories: Draco/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded, Character Death, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 10393 Chapters: 7 Completed: No
Published:
01/04/06 Updated: 08/26/06


Reviewer: Lacerated Signed
Date: 01/24/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

O0oo0oh. Great Job! I really enjoyed this concept, and Draco & Ginny's seperate reactions. To be constructive perhaps you should include more discription, thats the only problem I found with it. Perhaps, something about Ginny seeing the world with"new eyes" persay. All in all, I really liked it. Can't wait for more!

 
Reviewer: Lacerated Signed
Date: 02/11/06 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Yes, I know its the second review in a row. But I couldn't resist, it's for the MNFF scavenger hunt.=) Still, I really are intrigued by the fact that Ginny is "dead" and Draco can't recognize her. The poor girl. A bit of advice is that the chapter flows a little too fast, maybe you should stop and give more detail - but thats just me. I also think Ginny is wonderfully in character and not going all lovesick and attacking Draco... yet. Great work!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I\'m working on expanding my descriptions. I tend to write very matter-of-factly. I\'m glad you think Ginny is in character, I\'ve tried very hard to keep her that way!

 

Mummy's Story by sesiliah
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 58]

Summary: Seven years after the Second Wizard War, a mother tells her daughter the story of the man she loves, who disappeared after the war ended to save his and his loverís life. The Wizarding World has settled down again, peace returning to them after the defeat of Lord Voldemort. Written in first person, present tense, from the point of view of a seven year old girl.

Categories: Draco/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 11069 Chapters: 7 Completed: No
Published:
01/08/06 Updated: 07/09/07


Reviewer: Lacerated Signed
Date: 03/24/06 Title: Chapter 1: Do You Still Love Him, Mummy?

Oh this is such a cute story. Do write more, turn it into a multi-chaptered fic. It's great! My only concern however, is that the main character Narcissa is seven, correct? She seems a bit...well...a bit too old for her age. Maybe tone down her language a bit to be more appropriate for her age bracket. Other than that I adored it! 10/10.

Author's Response: Cissa sounds younger in later chapters, lol. I'm trying really hard to make her sound younger, but making her grammar a little less good (well. But Cissa would say good. ;)) Also, keep in mind that Cissa has a lot to think about constantly... this will make more sense in later chapters. And she's incredibly clever; Ginny's a fantastic witch and Draco was very, very smart (he did sneak Death Eaters in under Dumbledore's (sniff) nose), so she has smart genes, lol! Thanks for reviewing!

 

The Guild of Assassins by Orlaith
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 5]

Summary: The war against Voldemort rages on, but without Albus Dumbledore, the Order of the Phoenix is hard pressed to fight on all fronts. When one of the younger Order members, Tim Anderson, learns that he is no mere wizard, the threat is escalated. The ancient Guild of Assassins is reawakened, and Tim must fight with the Order to thwart the Dark Magic the Assassins (Fachen) throw their way.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Violence

Word count: 4838 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
07/26/06 Updated: 08/26/06


Reviewer: Lacerated Signed
Date: 08/31/06 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Perspective

*gasp* Robyn, get your arse in front of the computer and update this instant.



So sorry it took me so long to actually sit and read it, but let me tell you this chapter was well worth the wait. I feel I need to restate how much I love Sorcha, and how I want to take Dag home with me. =)


You move the story along very well and the interactions between the characters make them seem perfectly canon, even if they're not. However, during Sorcha's explanation to Tim, I feel that the big chunk of text without the slightest break gets a bit confusing, and for someone like me , a teensy little pause would've been lovely. =)


All in all, amazing as always.

Your fangirl,

Jen. (PS - I think I fell in love with Tim somewhere along the way. )

 

Summary: Trent Silvershore is nothing special. He never has been anything more than what some would consider a stain on the wall. But things change when a man in long black robes comes to call. Trent is introduced to a world the likes of which he'd never dreamed of. Will Trent leave the only world he knows for one that might just be a hoax? Why not? After all, there's nothing left to lose.



Chapter III - A Satisfying Disappointment now up!



Contains Deathly Hallows Spoilers!!

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Self Injury, Violence

Word count: 9278 Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Published:
08/12/06 Updated: 10/14/07


Reviewer: Lacerated Signed
Date: 08/18/06 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue - The boy with the tattered clothes

wow Jace, I absolutely love this! I don't seem to see any punctuation issues like you said. =] so I'd have to agree with you there. Anywhom, I love what you did with the apple. Its odd to think that something as simple as an apple could mean so much to the guy. Poor Trent.. he needs a hug... *runs off to hug Trent* Keep it up! - Jen

Author's Response: I wanted to emphasize in the fact that some people would burn someone\'s hands off for the chance to have something we take for granted. (and for the record, I didn\'t see any either..) - Jacie the Cat

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