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Oh, oh! Tell me what she said, I love this story!
Author's Response: Thank you :)\r\nI\'m writing the final chapter this very second. \r\n~ Cassie
hesitate to review? Not a chance. Not that I know what to say, but you know me well enough to know how very happyful it made me. *squees* And still, at the same time, sad because...it wasn't that way. I am debating, though... on the one hand Sev's daughter could be called nothing other than Lily, on the other, wouldn't that get a little confusing? Still, the first option wins.
Author's Response: Meda darling, the way to happines is to adopt this is canon.:D This and Sempra together will show that Jo Rowling!:p And even though he may be calling one Lily and the other may come, Sev won't complain much as he values both dearly.;)=Sammy
:D I believe in Lucius/Narcissa (mostly) so I loved this poem. My only ntipick is that you start in one style and finish in another. Nevertheless, the effect is interesting. You write good poetry :)
Author's Response: WOW! Meda! You\'re andromeda_tonks on MNFF Beta Boards, right? I\'m moonstone.silver - Munno the Lamoe :) Thannkkkkkssss for being my FIRST REVIEWER! OMG! *dies* thanks a lot :)
*dies of hysterics* *notices DLB and Douglas Adams references* *dies some more* Schmergo, you already knew I think your stories are amazing (well, actually I think I told you that you stole my personality, but it comes to the same thing). Nevilles Girl you are officially amazing too as of now.
PS Schmergo - I asked my mum if I could experiment with blowing up pop tarts if I took the toaster in the back garden so it didn't do anything too drastic to the kitchen, but she wouldn't let me for some reason...
Author's Response: HOOO-RAY! Hey, where was the Douglas Adams reference? I can\'t remember what it was... and I might have done it accidentally without even realized because I\'ve totally internalized his books and thought I invented them. And yeah, I had to reference Dark Lord\'s Blog... as for Nevilles Girl, she was officially amazing BEFORE now, too. You should check out some of her stories!
Will Remus accept the offer to teach at Hogwarts? And if yes, how is he going to prepare himself?
I am luinrina of Hufflepuff, and this is my submission to the Educational Decree prompt of the Summer Challenge.
That was a lovely story. It was just the right mixture of happiness and sorrow at his memories, and they were well integrated with the more recent events. Double thumbs up from me :D *huggles*
Author's Response: Awww, thank you, sweetie! *squishes* That's lovely of you to review me. *huggles back* Thanks!!
O.O Bine, how do you DO that? I know you're all over-whelmed already tonight, but I'm going to say this anyway: you are an amazing poet and I'm proud that you're my friend and PA. *hugglesquishes*
Author's Response: . . .
Can't speak here for a moment...
I'm so flattened. Thank you, thank you, thank you! I'm proud to be your friend, too.*squishes tightly*
Trying to think of a word for this story... hmm... *cries* Even if I never see her again, she will be safe. Dumbledore will make sure of that. Finally, I managed to do something right. *wails* I'm crying all over your story again... the word that comes to mind is bittersweet... and phenomenal... and *sobsniff*
What with this being a MWPP fic, I am making a supreme effort not to SevGirl all over it, because that's no help whatsoever. Well. It might be very helpful but not so much to this fic.
So. Good characterisation of the bullying toerag and brat *cough* I -er- mean Sirius and James. I liked your Remus too :).
Yes I *did* laugh out loud. It was funny. But only because you wrote it that way. Not because James is funny. Er... yes.
The whole not SevGirling thing really doesn't suit me. When do we get the pocket crosswords of Severus Snape?
Author's Response: *giggles* Meda, you're amazing me over and over again. *huggles* I can really feel how much effort it was for you to not "SevGirl all over" the story. *giggles again* And sorry to disappoint you, but I planned on having Sev's chapter being the last. And I haven't done any serious writing for that story in the last weeks. So you'll have to be a bit more patient. But thanks for reading and reviewing in the first place. *squishes*
PS: "Hallo" is written with one "o" only. *hint hint* ;-)
This made me cry... he was there for her as I so wish we could have been... and you just had to go and kill him off again. *sniffles* and who lives? JAMES! grrr. James being clumsy and saying all the wrong things. As he would. As least Lily got rid of him, lol. *sobs some more* and she thought he had forgotten her...
I will remember you…
Why did you forget me, Sev?
it was that bit that made me cry. Poor Sev. As if he ever, ever forgot Lily.
Author's Response: Your 'grr' about James made me giggle, Meda. ;)
I'd apologize for making you sad with this story, but you are a fellow SevGirl and therefore understand. *hugs*
That was one of the most powerful fan-fic poems I've ever read. Normally I find empathising with Sirius tricky to say the least, being a passionate SevGirl, but this was too good to not like. The use of language and the flow was impeccable, it really did retell a story I thought I knew in a new light. The short lines are highly reminiscent of the way that thoughts, especially panicked, shocked thoughts can be. My only suggestion would be to add "Sirius Black" to the end in the same way that you put all the other "black" phrases in the poem. It didn't really feel complete to be until I read his name in your A/N, which suggests to me that that should be in the poem. However, if you disagree feel free to ignore this. Good work and good luck with your future writing.
Author's Response: thanks so much for the review! I'm glad I could open your eyes to the world of sirius black. thanks for the suggestion and i'll consider it. ~Burning Star