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Summary: It's Teddy Lupin's first year at Hogwarts. As an orphan, he has bounced backwards and forwards between his grandmother and his godfather. Follow him on a journey where he discovers the values of friendship, family and love, along with fighting the prejudices against his father, and getting through Defense Against the Dark Arts, with a teacher who just seems to hate him for no reason...
*DH spoilers, obviously*
NOTE: I am sorry, but I have left this site, due to lack of time and personal issues concerning RL and the site. This story is discontinued here, but may well be posted elsewhere in the future.
I know I already reviewed this, but just thought I'd tell you I just spent ages looking for this to add it to my favorites ;)
Author's Response: Lol! Good to know that you now have it safely in your favorites!! ~Evie
I like the way that you've written that chapter. I don't know if that is where you're going, but you could work it up into a distrust of Andromeda and Harry. If you were to do that, you are definitely going the right way, because you haven't taken it two quickly, but there are little seeds of doubt. Sunlight here, a splash of water there... Still, I'm randomly speculating and you could head off in a completely different direction. I love this story, because I haven't seen anything else like it and you write it well. It's one of my favourites that I always want to see at the top of the list because it has a new chapter. Update soon, please, I'm really curious.
Author's Response: Yes, there is going to be some mistrust and a rather large arguement in future chapters. I\'m so glad you like the story, thanks for such a lovely review!!\r\n\r\n~Evie
Kevin doesn't look very dead to me - at least he's still writable on :). I love this story, write more!
Summary: With Voldemort finally gone, the next generation of Potters, Weasleys, Longbottoms, and Malfoys all find their way back to Hogwarts. And somehow, Isobel Fletcher finds herself in the midst of these people. Friendships will be made while the unlikeliest of relationships will blossom.
All the while, a new power is rising, and it seems to be mysteriously linked to Isobel. As new secrets arise, the bonds of friendship will be shaken. Will they make it through the trials? Will they even make it out alive?
(A/N) Chapter One Re-posted!!
I like this story, I haven't seen one from Hugo's point of view before. My only worry is that people will lose track of who's who with so many people. Apart from that, I love it! *adds to favorites*.
Author's Response: Hey, thanks! I\'ve got a re-write in the works, so that should be up soon. Thanks for the support, you made my evening!!
Summary: It's Remus Lupin's fifth year at Hogwarts, and too much is happening at once! James loves Lily, Sirius is all for having a laugh, Peter's beginning to resent his friends, Lily need a real friend, and Remus, he's a werewolf, what other problems does he need? More than expected, that's for sure...
Extract from Chapter 4: Detentions and Deceptions
As I am writing this, I have noticed that there is a large box of Honeydukes chocolate underneath James’ bed. Why has he not shared them? We always share our stuff.
Or maybe, he has told Sirius and Peter, but is keeping them a secret from me. Why would he do that?
Oh yeah, he knew I would eat them at the first opportunity. I think I may have one, just out of spite.
Whoops, James just discovered me eating his chocolates, and, to be frank, there were not a lot left when he found me, though I am sure I only had one or two… He says I have to pay for a new box, the original having been a birthday present for Sirius. I do not think that I can afford a new box, not if I get Sirius a present too. Oh, no.
Good story. Remus was quite a lot like Hermione, wasn't he? I never thought of that. Incidentally, 99 is my favourite word in french, in fact, one of the only words in french that I didn't forget about a week after I learned it. I have now given up french.
Author's Response: Ah... the number 99 in French. Why give it a simple name when you can give it the names of four other numbers? ... the beauty of foreign languages...\r\n\r\nYes... Remus was quite like Hermione, methinks, in some ways, but for different reasons. I hadn\'t thought of that until you pointed it out...
That review submitted itself before I had finished. As I was saying... I'm waiting for updates.
~ Lucy ~
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing!!
Summary: A Free-verse questioning Peter on his motives.
That was very well written. I especially liked the ending:
Or did you simply, coldly, willingly
Not care at all?
That was very powerful, especially because you split the question into two lines. This is a technique that you use throughout the poem, and for me it is what gives it such strength. The little pauses and like someone who is hurt, more than hurt, gasping for breath, trying to get out what they wanted to say. It really was very good indeed. :D
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much. You can't imagine how happy this comment made me.:)
Summary: This story picks up at the end of Chapter Thirty- Six in the Deathly Hallows. Do not read if you have not read Deathly Hallows. It will spoil that book for you.
Harry wants to date Ginny now that Voldemort is dead ,but how will that conflict with his new job as an Auror? Ginny has to go back to school but not before some major changes in her life.
Hermione kissed Ron in the middle of the final battle. Does that mean that they are now dating?
Ron will also have to decide if he wants to work for his best friend, or his brother, who just lost his best friend.
Arthur, Kingsley, and McGonagall all have new jobs, and someone still needs to lead the Order of the Phoenix. There are also a lot of escaped Death Eaters to hunt down.
So many answers to be had and so many more questions to be asked, you will have to read to find out.
**J. K. Rowling owns these characters and locations, I just get to play with them.**
I like this story, and I think that you write well. For some reason, I can't add things to favourites at the moment, but I'll put a link to this on my computer. I want to know what happens next. I'm not sure about Ginny's reaction to Harry. It's very sweet, but I'm inclined to think that she'd be angry with him for leaving her behind. I like Hermione and Ron, thought. I especially think that you've captured Ron's character very well.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks alot. Ginny can\'t be too mad, after all he is the chosen one and he is alive. I have, after many months, posted Chapter Two: Heroes! Lets hope it gets validated. :)
Summary: Ok, so I really really want to apologize to everyone that has read this and wanted more. I just... I got to a point of writer's block, big time... and I got lazy. I'm really really sorry about that. And, I wish I could add to this, but I just... I don't really have other ideas. I'm terrible at writing chapter work. I can never seem to finish it. So, I know it left off awkwardly, but odds are, it's gonna stay that way, at least for a very long while. I'm very sorry. And, heads up, I completely beyond appreciate everyone that has read and reviewed this. I saw the read count being over 22,000 today, and I was just like WOW. I never ever imagined that would happen!!! Anyways, this is pretty much the end of the story indefinitely, at least for now.
Write more, MORE! Can't wait to read if Tonks finds Remus in town and what he says and how the twins know and...
Author's Response: Thank u! I have chapter 3 written already, I just have to submit it soon. Might have to tweak it too.
They're so sweet. But poor them, so, so, awkward
Author's Response: Oh, it gets even MORE awkward in chapter four... trust me... MUCH MORE!
woweeeeee I love this story. Too many people who write R/T just repeat the stuff we knew anyway. This is much more original. Update soon.
Author's Response: Thank u so much! This is like the best compliment ever. Any constructive criticism anyone??
This is getting really interesting. I especially like your characterisation of Sirius.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I feel good knowing that people actually like what I write.
Summary: After fighting the biggest battle of his life, Harry Potter finds himself in new, uncharted territory. Beginning a week after the final battle at Hogwarts, Harry finds himself with many choices before him. He spent the summer trying to sort out his future with Ginny and the Ministry, but now must find a way to balance both. Ginny has left for Hogwarts to complete her final year, with Hermione, and Harry is starting work as a full-fledged Auror. They both must find a way to make their long-distance relationship work. Ginny hopes to find peace at school and Harry hopes to build his life around the expectation that Ginny will be with him forever. Despite all of this, there is more to the work that Harry is doing with the Ministry then he realises. Will Gaunt prove trustworthy in these new endeavours? Will Ginny and Hermione have a horror-free year at Hogwarts?
I like this story, because I think that your approach to the way the bereaved react is far more accurate than in many other fics I've read. I also think that you handled Ginny's reaction to Harry's absence very well, a lot of people take it for granted that they carry on where they left off, but with Harry's permenantly guilty conscience, and Ginny's fiery nature, I think it is more likely that it would be more complicated than that. All in all, great writing, I love it and I added it to my favourites :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much - I have noticed that also and feel like it is rather unrealistic. Mourning can\'t be ignored and I can\'t imagine that \'love\' can solve all the issues they both have to deal with. Thank you for the comment!
Summary: My take on the first of those 'nineteen years' between the 36th chapter of DH and the epilogue.
Warnings: contains an unusually-shaped ring, a nosy neighbour, a rude shop assistant, shaving mishaps, thoughtful gestures, threatening goblins, and, unexplained appearances of Romantic!Ron and Romantic!Harry. You have been warned.
Rating is for *mild* innuendo and *mostly* innocent interactions but I wouldn't let my 9 year old read it.
I love this story, although I'm not sure if I reviewed it before or not. You have a very good grasp on the characters of the characters (I'm sure there's a better way of putting that, but you know what I mean). Just one thing, and it's something I've come across in quite a few fics. I always wonder whether, although Molly and Arthur both love Harry, they would be especially happy with them being engaged before she's finished school. I hope you update soon.
Author's Response: Oh shucks! I WAS supposed to add that. I forgot! I was going to put in that her parents wanted them to wait until they were done school. Oh well. Have to add that in somewhere later. Besides, Ginny would probably just point out that at least they\'re not eloping like Molly and Arthur did. That might make Mrs. Weasley relent! ;) Glad you love it! Thanks for reading and reviewing. cj
Summary: A quiet evening is about to turn considerably less so, as Severus Snape has a visitor he could not pretend to have not expected, and would never admit to have dreaded...
Wow, El! That was absolutely incredible, especially your characterisation. I am definitely going to read everything else that you have written now. That story deserves a long review, but I haven't got the words.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Meda. *hugs*
This was my first fic, and it will always have a special place in my heart, so I\'m always happy to see it well-received. I will be looking out for you on my shelf.
*is practicing her newly found skill of commenting on your work without becoming a blibbering wreck.*
I thought that as I read this very speedily and enjoyed it so very much it deserved a better review. I will skip my opinions on your characterisation of Sev because you know them all, I will merely say that once again you blew me away with your amazing talent of reading his mind and finding their exactly what I knew you would, although I couldn't have said so until I read it. *hopes that makes sense*.
I know you don't want a SPEWish review, so I'm just going to give you a favourite sentence from every chapter:
Were it not for my uncalled-for introspection on the nature of morality, I could have brought forth the little fancy of mine I had been contemplating for weeks, never finding the time to do it between the hardly pleasant duties and far less pleasant forced social intercourse. [Just so very Sev. It reminds me of both the baby Sev of Sempra and the adult Sev of the books.]
Don't you dare remind me whose life should have been a neverending plea for forgiveness. [*sobs* Always and forever, everything was about her for him.]
Had Lily Evans known about the depth and full meaning of your friendship, she would rather be your enemy for ever and ever. [And again. The never-ending self-punishment.]
Only one woman had ever called me that… consistently. [And again. Funny how I pick out all the S/L quotes, isn't it?]
I administer a more Muggle approach to revivification by means of a light… moderate slap. [Just for a change, I'll highlight a little sentence that made me laugh.]
Summary: Sonfic about Remus' and Tonks' last night alive for "Just a Touch Away" by Echo and the Bunnymen.
I really liked reading that.It's the first Tonks/Remus story that's left me feeling happy. But would Tonks really not go down fighting?
Author's Response: I was running out of time...I had timed Harry\'s thing and the length of time it took from there to where Tonks died, I didn\'t have enough left, so I just had her waiting for the duel to start and then Bellatrix disreguard all the rules of dulling and just kill her after greeting her. I\'m glad it left you feeling happy, though!
Summary: On one starry night, Luna tries to help Harry listen to the stars.
Very well written.
Summary: What happens when a Ravenclaw catches Sirius Black's attention? He has a riddle to solve, to find out.
All you have to do is read this story.
I've decided that however much I may... dislike Sirius, this story deserves a better review than I gave it. It is an absolutely lovely portrayal of how sometimes people aren't quite as they are often perceived.
This story has stayed with me, I think, because it was a very creative idea and I applaud you for it *applauds*. This review isn't turning out to be very much more helpful than my last, but it does say a bit more about *why* I enjoyed this. As I mentioned, Sirius is far from my favourite character, but this was too sweet not to enjoy. Well done!
That was a really good story, I loved it. =]
Author's Response: Thanks so much!