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Summary: James Potter: Marauder. Lily Evans: Prefect. They're both seventh years at Hogwarts. They're also about to have a pretty interesting year--complete with a few detentions, pranks, confusion, and laughter--in which they get through school, make some trouble and maybe, just maybe, sort out their feelings for each other.

Thanks to all you who have made it possible for this story to be in the Top Tens. It was a very happy moment when I first saw my story on the list, and I love being able to go back and see it there now. Still. Yay!

Throughout the latter half of 2010, and the first half of 2011, I re-edited this story. The changes were mostly to fix stray (and annoying) grammar and spelling errors, but also to rework some plot points in an effort to stay truer to canon. I also updated the style; having written this story so long ago, my writing has definitely developed (and I would say gotten better), so I edited to reflect that. (I apologize for the errors that were in the story before all this editing. I found them immensely distressing when I reread my chapters. Heartbreaking, really.)


Big “thank yous” go to the three people who helped edit/nitpick the first edition of this novel: violagirl, fairiesandcream, and Omagus.
And yes, this story is up on Fanficition.net under the penname: Io.Sono.Emilia.
Of course, as a disclaimer, I’m not JK Rowling. The Potterverse does not belong to me, but I am in it and love it.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 158315 Chapters: 50 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/28/05 Updated: 07/23/07


Reviewer: Seer_Witch Signed
Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 14: A Few Discussions

On the 'oddities and coincidences' section of this site (I almost said of Mugglenet, wondered if that'd be rude on a different site, and remembered this WAS Muggenet) it states that. The true Marauders end in S and the one that doesn't--Peter--is a traitor. A RAT. Sorry couldn't resist.

Fantastic writing! As always.

 
Reviewer: Seer_Witch Signed
Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 15: Another Detention

Not necessarily; if he didn't get to it, he didn't get to it. Oh well.

Anyways, wonderful wonderful! Okay, I'm going to shut up now and read! :P

 
Reviewer: Seer_Witch Signed
Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 16: Bad News

Anyways. Love. Hearts and hugs. Miss Logan and acceptance (sorry, Facebook). Anyway. *cries*

 
Reviewer: Seer_Witch Signed
Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 17: Talks with Friends

Oh, and by the way, I'd just like to say that I use anyway too much too. Relate-able. If you look back over my comments you'll find it's true. ;D

Fabulous writing, keep going ;D

 
Reviewer: Seer_Witch Signed
Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 18: Goodbye

Damn it Sev! I love you

 
Reviewer: Seer_Witch Signed
Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 19: Aftermath

Haha.

Yes, I love Sev. Somehow I overlooked that evil crap and the blah. Somehow, I loved him for becoming good even when I hated him for most of the series. Somehow, I love him and hate Kreacher when there's plausible reason to love Kreacher (See: My friend Ruby). I love Sevvy! *huggles Snape*

And I think James is going to go get Lily to exist with some life in her!

 
Reviewer: Seer_Witch Signed
Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 20: In Which Lily and James Have a Conversation

Fluffy ENOUGH! No, actually, I was thinking along the lines of--but no, no, I won't get into that....How inappropriate, that wouldn't rate the story correctly ^-^

Author's Response: Oh dear me.... ;D

 
Reviewer: Seer_Witch Signed
Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 21: A New Day

GASP! IT IS!? *hurries to dictionary.com*
1. a chattering or flighty, light-headed person.
2. Archaic. a gossip.
n. A silly, scatterbrained, or garrulous person.

Oh, you flibbertigibbet! Sorry.

Anyways, yesh, I LOVE Exploding Snap

 
Reviewer: Seer_Witch Signed
Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 22: More Bad News

I love it! Moldy-shorts. Haha.

Also, why on EARTH is Voldy at Hogwarts? You'd think--but ah, story-ruiner, isn't it, mate?

 
Reviewer: Seer_Witch Signed
Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 23: The Duel

HA! I'll be a Death Eater if I get a nifty cape! *slaps* I will NEVER repeat the word 'nifty'. Ignoring that gruesome display of horror....

Also! Sectumsempra. Not was I was thinking but nevermind that was in the fifth book, the weird flame thingy that knocked out Hermione at the Ministry! But that was because I mixing the curse with the PURPLE paste and the sleeping potion. That's a l ot to get wrong, but I managed it. Wow I'm stupid. But I know it

 
Reviewer: Seer_Witch Signed
Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 24: The Thirteen Inch Scar

LAlala. I love this story ^-^

 
Reviewer: Seer_Witch Signed
Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 25: The Passing Days

HA! I love SAm!!!

 
Reviewer: Seer_Witch Signed
Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 26: Coming Out of It

NO DON'T BEHEAD SNAPE I LOVE SEV!

Anyways, I'm thinking that, though usually I love love-struck Sirius in stories, and wish I was the girl, I'm thinking..not so much. Nikeia needs to WAKE UP! And she better next chapter. Also, Sirius...I realized after James almost said, "A girl in a closet," That I liked that Sirius BETTER! I would hate to be one of the used-girls, but Sirius, come on, needs to get a damned girl in a damned closet!

AN.Y.WAY.! Hey hey. Like I said. Nikeia better wake up, my amazing writer dearest.

When's dinner?

Author's Response: *starts cracking up* Oh my... your numerous reviews are MUCH too funny. :-D

 
Reviewer: Seer_Witch Signed
Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 27: This November Day

Yay! I love Sirius like a Popsicle! That was stupid. :P Ignoring that...Are those really true? And it WAS cliche I adored it! I'll remember that...though hopefully...My nose won't itch. And I thought it meant someone was thinking about you?

 
Reviewer: Seer_Witch Signed
Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 28: Hogsmeade

What?! I almost had a stroke. Why on EARTH isn't Remus with Josey? I figured them a better couple than Sirius and darling Nikeia (who by the way did NOT wake up as I demanded...)! My god, dearest and most fantabulous writer!

And, I just read your Author's Note, I see why Josey and Remus aren't together. And I know it's cliche but most stories are like that, I already said I disliked Sirius and Nikeia, I wish Sirius had some other chick in a closet. I understand why they aren't together; I forgive you now that I've read it *huggles*

And also, I loved the great minds/fools thing that I told it to my brother XD I only said the two quotes though ^-^ He's not obsessed like moi.

 
Reviewer: Seer_Witch Signed
Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 29: Before the Ball

BUT I HATE HER!!!! *growls and breathes heavily through my mouth, applying chapstick harshly as my lips dry through my breath* DAMN IT DAMN IT DAMN IT I HATE SIRIA! UGH! DAMN IT!

Love

 
Reviewer: Seer_Witch Signed
Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 30: I Hereby Dub Thee

BUT I HATE NIKEIA! *snipes* GOD DAMN IT! STUPID NIKEIA!

I loved the story even if I *glances angrily at Nikeia* disagree. On the finer details, at the very least.

 
Reviewer: Seer_Witch Signed
Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 31: Masquerade

DAMN IT I THOUGHT I SNIPED THAT CHICK!

Anyways. In freaking love with this story. Why else would I have skipped it the first time seeing 50 chapters? why did I feel guilt and return? Why am I still reading? DAMN IT because I love it!

 
Reviewer: Seer_Witch Signed
Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Unbelievable Head

Wool socks ARE nice. And who doesn't wonder? Someone not sane, I suppose.

Great as always ;D

 
Reviewer: Seer_Witch Signed
Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 33: Nikeia's Story

I don't mind it was short. Did I mention I want her sniped? I expected it to be long. But it wasn't, actually. And finally they know it was Sectumsempra! And I'm not crying, not a tear or a thought of one, not the slightest of sadness. Nikeia looks, in my mind, like...I can't describe. Big-boned reminds HP lovers of giants, which she most certainly is not, but...Ugh. Anyway, I despise her. As Lily's friend, I liked her and loved her name and loved Josey but hated her name....Anyway. I despise Nikeia.

However, I do care about Josey. *huggles Josey*

Loved the writing, hated the Nikeia :P

 
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