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Summary: James Potter: Marauder. Lily Evans: Prefect. They're both seventh years at Hogwarts. They're also about to have a pretty interesting year--complete with a few detentions, pranks, confusion, and laughter--in which they get through school, make some trouble and maybe, just maybe, sort out their feelings for each other.

Thanks to all you who have made it possible for this story to be in the Top Tens. It was a very happy moment when I first saw my story on the list, and I love being able to go back and see it there now. Still. Yay!

Throughout the latter half of 2010, and the first half of 2011, I re-edited this story. The changes were mostly to fix stray (and annoying) grammar and spelling errors, but also to rework some plot points in an effort to stay truer to canon. I also updated the style; having written this story so long ago, my writing has definitely developed (and I would say gotten better), so I edited to reflect that. (I apologize for the errors that were in the story before all this editing. I found them immensely distressing when I reread my chapters. Heartbreaking, really.)


Big “thank yous” go to the three people who helped edit/nitpick the first edition of this novel: violagirl, fairiesandcream, and Omagus.
And yes, this story is up on Fanficition.net under the penname: Io.Sono.Emilia.
Of course, as a disclaimer, I’m not JK Rowling. The Potterverse does not belong to me, but I am in it and love it.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 158315 Chapters: 50 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/28/05 Updated: 07/23/07


Reviewer: Seer_Witch Signed
Date: 07/03/08 Title: Chapter 48: It's Nearly Over

Woot. I loved it

 
Reviewer: Seer_Witch Signed
Date: 07/03/08 Title: Chapter 49: NEWTs

Remus's daydream about Lily gave me that feeling you get when looking through old stuff, or thinking of life after college (if you're just about to leave college) or any of it. When she said something like, "You'll have your friends, Remus John Lupin. You'll have your friends. And they'll be with you no matter what happens."

Actually, all did. Especially the bits about "one last time..." *sighs sadly and holds back tears* Hm. I seem to be getting more sentimental as time wears on. *sighs again and savors the last chapter*

 
Reviewer: Seer_Witch Signed
Date: 07/03/08 Title: Chapter 50: The End

*is crying too loud to say anything and finally gasps out:* THE END!!! *starts sobbing again*

 
Reviewer: Seer_Witch Signed
Date: 07/02/08 Title: Chapter 41: Necessary Reunion

I love...James! And Lily. I hate Layla still but I love Sirius and HATE Nikeia (with him)

 
Reviewer: Seer_Witch Signed
Date: 07/02/08 Title: Chapter 42: St. Valentine's Festivities

Haha! Sometimes I wonder which I enjoy more; the story or the Author's Notes. I suppose the story--it's longer. :P

 
Reviewer: Seer_Witch Signed
Date: 07/02/08 Title: Chapter 43: Even More Detentions

That was a pretty good chapter. Detentions are never 'fantastic' you understand, except the one in my dream last night...Ah, but I don't think there's ACTUALLY a censoring charm--never mind, never mind...

 
Reviewer: Seer_Witch Signed
Date: 07/02/08 Title: Chapter 44: America, Anyone?

I actually didn't think Chelsea knew. I guess that makes sense--it's Mary's sister, isn't it? Hm. Gar I need chap stick.

 
Reviewer: Seer_Witch Signed
Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Unbelievable Head

No I can't, I don't really get it. But great start to what I know will be a fantastic story ;D

 
Reviewer: Seer_Witch Signed
Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 2: The Trainride

I love the little kids too! Hehee

 
Reviewer: Seer_Witch Signed
Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 3: Back at Hogwarts

I don't get the layout at ALL but whatever. I'm too caught up in the story!

 
Reviewer: Seer_Witch Signed
Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 4: The Fight and the Punishment

I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 
Reviewer: Seer_Witch Signed
Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 5: Beside the Lake

IDIOTS! Why on EARTH would they interrupt a kiss! My goodness! Sorry, anyway, I like writing out author's note too ^-^ You aren't weird....alone. And I say Brit. Guess I'll have to change that. Thanks for A Few Grammar Lessons and a Story :P

 
Reviewer: Seer_Witch Signed
Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 6: The First Detention

LOVE! Sorry. I love: James/Lily fics, fluff, and detailed kissing scenes. All in one like you had is all the better!

 
Reviewer: Seer_Witch Signed
Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 7: More Cleaning

Hearts

 
Reviewer: Seer_Witch Signed
Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 8: Conversations

Author's Musings! Ha! Love the new title

 
Reviewer: Seer_Witch Signed
Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 9: The American

Haha. I'm not offended, by the way. I don't mind, I probably have insulted America a million times before and I've lived here my whole life and still live here. ^-^ Great story.

 
Reviewer: Seer_Witch Signed
Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 10: Could It Be Jealousy?

That was amazing. And Lily should've let Stacy take him. Aw well. ;D

Author's Response: What!? How could you say that!? Let Stacey have James!? Egad! *laugh* Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: Seer_Witch Signed
Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 11: More Detentions

Haha. It was awesome. And I think Snape should say something heart-felt to Lily!!!!! Love

 
Reviewer: Seer_Witch Signed
Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 12: Secrets, Questions, Answers, and Doubt

I'm thinking Snape or Sirius and someone.....?

Anyways, I'm reading because I'm dying of curiousity. Of course, your wonderfully detailed pieces that are, needless to say, marvelous, do help in the detailed kissing scenes, Lily/James fics, and fluff

 
Reviewer: Seer_Witch Signed
Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 13: Betrayal

Stupid Stacey! *snipes* Anyways. YAY! James and Lily

 
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