x~x Ravenclaw x~x
As usual, mouth-clapping drama. Maybe I need to get out more.
Anyhow! Hermione, you lusty little girl (yes I did read your author's note...kidding) someone's feeling addicted, aren't we? Haha. I love her for having the slip of Hermione she needed, when she almost did the right thing and turned him in. But equally as pleased that she chose Draco over Malfoy, which doesn't really make sense but you know. The one she loved over the Death Eater. Love for perfection!
Obviously I slapped my hands to my mouth AGAIN, when Hermione found out, and as soon as he rushed to the bathroom I moaned, "Sectumsempra," so mega-points for getting me to groan aloud and clap over my mouth for about the fifth time in a row!
Also, that was so sweet. I love how Draco has a conscience, for once. This is the only fanfic I've read where he's got one. Kisses for Hermione for being honest, and love to Draco for being adorable. Hugs to you for being awesome!
That whole word vomit thing, now made it a round #6 for mouth-clapping. And yes, I'm officially counting.
Draco's such a sweetie for hating everyone, just because they'd hurt Hermione. I'm now experiencing intensifying love. Thanks! :P
Anddd the "half the time he's doing me made me crack up. That was fantastic! Haha.
Times: #7. When Hermione pieced together that dear old Dumbles is doomed.
Times: 8. At the very end. *heart breaks and whimpers:* Draco? I love you. Please don't go!
Love for being a super amazing writer!
Times: 9. And DAMN. I'd really been trying to restrain myself. Oh, when Draco's hope had just left thanks to that Professor we all secretly loathe.
My hands shook a bit near the end, but perhaps I do get out enough and I managed not to slam a hand over my mouth. These are honestly immediate reactions, so yes, I'm pathetic.
But enough about me! You rock Nicole. Love for being one of the most amazing fanfic writers ever to grace the planet.
Times: 9 1/2. I just stopped myself when my hands were a few inches way. Honestly, I've got to get a hobby.
However! That made me smile. Even though Hermione was being stubborn, cross, rude, and pitiable at the fact that she had no friends, of course it made me smile. Because you rock, and can make two very alone people who are on a one-way crush make me smile. Obviously.
Okay, so who thinks they're going to do each other on this thing? I did! But guess not. Sigh.
Hermione! Please don't! Begging: Nicole, please tell me it ends with them at least smiling slightly at each other? Points for making me beg, by the way.
*starts screaming* NO! DRACO! DON'T DIE!
And of course, you get love for making me shriek. Obvs.
Hugs for Zofia, too. Firstly, for having an increasingly awesome name, but also for being compassionate.
Oh jeez. What a drama-king. 'The pain in my soul', honestly, Malfoy.
*gushes* I totally love him. Hugs for being awesome--again! And the number's still firmly at 9 1/2, as I'm proud to announce.
I, on the other hand, adore it. Oh Draco, don't you understand girls? She doesn't want to love you!
Aaand...now I'm talking to him. Mega-points, Nicole. Mega-points.
I laughed when Draco was like, "Wouldn't dream of it." It wasn't altogether one of the funnier aspects of the chapter, but it IS Draco after all, so he just makes me laugh. I was biting my lip in sadness when Hermione was explaining her "broken and alone" things, melodramatic bitch. I smirked viciously and half-sadly when Draco bumped his head on the floor. And you get points for invoking powerful emotions in me.
Part of that was totally gag-worthy, by the way. Absolutely sickening. "You're found." Siriusly. And I'd like to just say that I'm very proud of myself for knowing that he would propose as soon as he called it "another request".
But anyway and certainly more importantly! Soo sad-making that it's all over! No! I very much loved this Dramione story, curse me for falling into the trap of calling it that. But anyway, you, the utmost of many reasons, are making me think that maybe--just maybe--Hermione really had a secret, fiery passion for Draco Malfoy that was equally as flaming (wrong word? he isn't gay, after all) in him. And no, the ending was perfectly cute! I did not puke at the sugar overload, as I pointed out before, I gagged. XD Okay, I know I'm skipping around alot, but hey. (by the way: The standing number is 9 1/2). Anyhow! I'll be waiting for their daughter. Incidentally, my best friend's name is Nicole, so extra hugs for having that name. And sorry I keep saying "love for doing this" and stuff. I never really did that before...anyway! Ignoring that...love for having the greatest Dramione fanfic ever, complete with perfect fluff and delightful writing. Love!
Author's Response: Let me just say, much love to you for your AWESOME reviews. they were seriously the best ever! I'm so glad you enjoyed it so much! I loved writing it too! btw, "You're found"...yeah, knew that was cheesy when I wrote it lol! Ahh, but sometimes you can't avoid corny in fanfiction. Thank you for all of your blush worthy compliments, they were absolutely wonderful!! The hand slaps...made me smile every time. Oh, and Nicole really is my middle name, so naturally it's my pen name. Thanks sooo much again for the ah-mazing reviews! -Nicole
Argh! You've already gotten me to love to hate them, why am I reading on?
Doesn't Pansy like evil? I HATE TO LOVE THEM AND LOVED TO HATE THEM BUT NOW I JUST...! GAH!
I don't know why I had a random craving for "sexual situations" at two in the morning, but ah well. You obliged well, none of the Lily/James's did. I was actually looking for this one Harry/Draco fic, but ah well. This was actually much better. ;D
I loved it! But I just didn't get one thing: What exactly was the dare? Just going on a date with her? I assume the marriage part was James's idea, but I'm still not sure what Sirius dared James to do. It was fantastic, though
Honestly, us fans don't care as much about typing errors as much as the actual story. I'll be honest; I'll probably stop reading it, because I'm low on patience, sorry. I know lots of people that are, too. So, keep writing, (hopefully faster) and I loved the chapter!
That was awesome! I loved it
I loved it! Oh my god, I loved the line about Sirius willing to throw them out windows ;D Of course, it wasn't that big of surprise that it rocked :D
Just like last chapter, it took me until you said it was soccer to realize it was...well...soccer. Haha. Loved it (no shock) :P I can't wait for Abbi's idea ^-^
Why would it annoy MalfoyLove4 if you said the latter? Ah well. I love Lily giving in ^-^ I would've said something about Remus