Penname: Walna [Contact]
Real name: Nawal
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I'm a 17-year old girl living in the Bronx, New York. I only write for James/Lily because I love the pairing (unresolved sexual tension, anyone?) and because Harry annoys me as a character.

In all my fics, you can count on these: Remus is not Remy, his lycanthropy is a serious issue, Peter is not a useless idiot that is randomly sucked into the Death Eaters- in fact, I believe he only converted after graduation. Lily, as stated by JKR, is a popular girl who, like Ginny, has been with many guys, and James has been dating other people- seriously, you can't expect him to hold out for her and only her for seven years, can you?

Like at my school, Hogwarts is a hormone-filled place, so it's unlikely that any of Gryffindor's popular kids (the Marauders and Lily's group) are blushing virgins. I don't include drug use, because drugs make people useless, though there may be some underage drinking, swearing, etcetera. There will be no balls/dances.

I know it's a little too convenient that Lily's friends mostly turn up in the Order of the Pheonix, but that's who her friends would be. If you'd noticed, Hogwarts is also quite a bit more multicultural, and certainly less black-and-white. I generally try to make the stories canon-compliant, unless I explicitly say so.

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I love: LotR, PotC, adventure movies, most things involving Orlando Bloom and/or Keira Knightley. I'm an Anglophile, for sure. I apologize for my use of (what I know of) British slang.
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Summary:

"Love is unexplainable. There are no words for it. You can’t express why you feel so. It just happens," James said. "“Don’t you think that if I had the choice I would have chosen to love someone who didn’t hate me in return?”

“No,” Sirius said simply.

“You’re right.” James said, sighing. “I’m so screwed up, Padfoot.”

The drama-filled romantic tale of Lily and James's mysterious but unfortunate tale. It started with love and ended with death. It makes you wonder about the things they tried to live for. Pre-HBP



Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 94269 Chapters: 60 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/06/04 Updated: 12/15/06


Reviewer: Walna Signed
Date: 08/20/09 Title: Chapter 17: Dreams

Your chapters are a little bit rushed, so it's a little difficult to really connect with the characters. I think Lily and James getting together could have been delayed by a bit, though I like Remus and Katy.

 

Letters by Sarah Kavanagh
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 408]

Summary: Lily thought she was in for a boring summer... but James Potter had other ideas. Love Letters, with a rather bizarre twist.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 6636 Chapters: 3 Completed: No
Published:
04/22/06 Updated: 07/26/06


Reviewer: Walna Signed
Date: 08/21/09 Title: Chapter 2: Knees, a fun body part

You're hilarious. This is fantastic! I'd just take a look at some of the grammatical errors (and for the record, Eton's a boy's school) but this is great. Please update?

 

Summary: "Some mistakes are too much fun to make just once."

After Lily Evans, Head Girl of Hogwarts, starts a food-fight with James Potter, Head Boy of Hogwarts, they are both given detention for the rest of the year, and are assigned a 'detention journal', which the staff say will help to settle their 'overwhelming and disturbing differences'. We have come across Lily's journal; her take on why the whole affair ever started, her intriguing relationship with one ‘supreme git of the galaxy’, the extents to which she will go for revenge and where it will lead her...


"And if for some unknown reason you come across this, Potter, and the paragraph above does not manage to penetrate your unusually thick head and convince you of my stupendous dislike of you, I hope the following sentence helps: I HATE YOU!"

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations

Word count: 46326 Chapters: 15 Completed: No
Published:
11/29/06 Updated: 09/18/11


Reviewer: Walna Signed
Date: 12/13/07 Title: Chapter 11: Twenty-fifth detention... and the immortalized game of Truth or Dare

It's so good! I loved this chapter. I liked Sirius being all crazy.

Author's Response: Yeah, me too. THanks for the review!

 

The Curtain Call by Amelia Bedelia
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 421]

Summary: James and Lily spend their summers together producing plays, though neither are happy about the presence of the other. With James, as the set designer, and Lily, as the actress, tensions run high.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 101551 Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/29/06 Updated: 07/02/10


Reviewer: Walna Signed
Date: 12/15/07 Title: Chapter 11: Act 1, Scene 5

Ooh, it's so great! I can't wait to hear what her friends do. I hope Lily tells them about James soon! Are they coming to her play! Please update soon, I can't wait to find out!

Author's Response: I\'m so glad you liked the chapter! I\'m sorry the update wasn\'t sooner, though!\r\n\r\nThanks for reviewing!\r\n\r\nYours truly,\r\nAmelia Bedelia

 
Reviewer: Walna Signed
Date: 06/26/08 Title: Chapter 12: The Confession

I'm so happy! Her friends are great- so nice to her and everything. I want to read the next chapter so bad; please update!

 
Reviewer: Walna Signed
Date: 06/26/08 Title: Chapter 12: The Confession

I'm so happy! Her friends are great- so nice to her and everything. I want to read the next chapter so bad; please update!

 

Diatribe by Lily of the US
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 20]

Summary: In the dictionary, “diatribe” is defined as “a bitter, abusive attack or criticism.” In other words, a sharp blow. And living around self-centred James Potter brings one blow after another. Unfortunately for Lily Evans, it’s his annoying, egotistical attitude that she finds most attractive.



Rated 6th-7th years for language and some sexuality.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 2052 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
12/20/07 Updated: 12/31/07


Reviewer: Walna Signed
Date: 01/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: I Hate How I Love You

It's great ! I like your writing style. Did you say Caroline was one of her best friends? Please update soon!

Author's Response:

 
Reviewer: Walna Signed
Date: 01/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: I Hate How I Love You

It's great ! I like your writing style. Did you say Caroline was one of her best friends? Please update soon!

Author's Response: Ack, yes, I did- lack of character planning. I\'m going to fix that as soon as I finish typing this. Thanks for the review. I\'m glad you liked it! ~megan~

 

Turning Tables by x_lily_evans_x
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 44]

Summary: Lily Evans, Head Girl, has never been reckless. She has been reliable and careful, thinking through everything before making decisions. But when she recklessly takes on a challenge by Amelia Lance to see who can make James Potter fall for her by the Easter holidays, her life goes from orderly to complicated. However, Lily thinks she's got it under control. After all, this is James Potter, the boy who, at least, used to like her and ask her out. Winning this challenge should be child’s play, right?

It's amazing how wrong a girl can be...

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 5411 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
01/04/08 Updated: 06/22/08


Reviewer: Walna Signed
Date: 01/21/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

It was good. I liked Lily's sort of down-to-earth personality and James' persistence. I can't wait for the challenge!

Author's Response: I\'m glad you liked her personality. I hope you didn\'t find James too persistent, though. I didn\'t want readers to think he\'s the kind who asks Lily out three times a day or something. Because I don\'t want James to be that annoying and persistent. (: Thanks for the review!

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