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Real name: Florence Emerson
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I'm orginally from New Jersey,USA and currently live in Northeastern Pennsylvania. I'm 47yrs old, born on December 23rd.
I enjoy writing and art. I enjoy volunteering and walking.
I've been a fan of the Harry Potter series and the movies for the past 7 years.
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A Heart Torn By War by MistressOfTime
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 57]

Summary: We learn here the story of Lily Evans, a Muggleborn attending Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Her best friend -- and secret love -- Severus Snape, has been her guide through the first four years of her magical education. However, rumors of Severus’ doings are starting to concern Lily, as she starts to notice James Potter, a Quidditch star with unkempt hair and a knack for trouble. Lily’s internal battle is heating up, as she prepares to start her fifth year at Hogwarts.

(Character Death and Sexual Situations Warnings are for later chapters.)

UPDATE 01/30: Chapter 2 is FINALLY posted! I hope you all enjoy this one! Chapter 3 is currently being edited, so I don't have any good excerpts to provide for you...however, keep checking here for updates!

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 8047 Chapters: 3 Completed: No
Published:
08/06/07 Updated: 01/30/08


Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed
Date: 02/01/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - Sneaks and Sorts

Awww rats!!! Now I'll have to wait 'till the next update! What was it that Lily saw on the bulletin board???
I'll be going insane!!!
Great chapter and story though, I thoroughly enjoyed it !
Best of luck on future chapters.

 

The Only One He Ever Loved by Salem
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 38]

Summary: The story of what happened between Lily Evans and Severus Snape their fifth year.

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 10005 Chapters: 7 Completed: No
Published:
08/08/07 Updated: 04/24/08


Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed
Date: 04/25/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Playground

Cute story. I've often wondered if Lily and Severus were ever close after the 'mudblood' comment he made after James upended him that time.
I really think in all honesty, that these two, minus James Potter of course, would have had a nice relationship. Then again, you have Sev's involvement with those Death Eater pals of his...

 
Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed
Date: 04/25/08 Title: Chapter 2: The Barrier and Train

Severus, the relunctant friend. He's so worried about offending the Slytherin set, that he becomes blinded by their power of persuasion, and loses his chances at being a bit affectionate towards Lily.
What ever he's afraid of, he's got to get over it, if he wants to be more than afriend to Lily Evans.
Great story, I love it!

 
Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed
Date: 04/25/08 Title: Chapter 3: Sneaky Sneak Attacks

Wow, James and Severus as partners in DADA...Of cousre, James would be relentless, what else would he be against Severus Snape?
Great story, and now that classes have begun, it should be interesting to see how Sev and Lily survive the school year.

 
Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed
Date: 04/25/08 Title: Chapter 4: Wandlight

Wow! a short chapter!! I just started reading and poof! The end! lol ;0) JUst teasing!
Well, they almost kissed...A very brief chapter, but fun!

 
Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed
Date: 04/25/08 Title: Chapter 5: Duel

Oh boy! a true fight between two wizards, and it sounds like each of them got his. I'm surprized James did'nt go for the most obvious, Snape's nose. I suppose he was so mad, that he wanted to hit every part of Snape he could reach.
Poor Lily, right in the middle of it! Hopefully, Severus won't take it out on her, for being there...
Great chapter!

 
Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed
Date: 04/25/08 Title: Chapter 6: Green, brown, black.

OH well, at least they won't be dueling after curfew any more.
Another great chapter...James can't seem to shake off his arrogence. I would call him a smart ass, wiseguy, etc, etc, sorry for the 'smartass' comment....

 
Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed
Date: 04/25/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chopped Beetles

Ooooo!! Tricky move Sev!! Obliviating James, so he'll have no memory of what he saw in the dungeons. Sweet!
I wonder if Snape was going to try the potion on James. Sounds like a Snape-like idea to me...
Great story and I look forward to the next chapter!

 

Summary: In the aftermath of the Battle of Hogwarts, the survivors must move on to rebuild the wizarding world. However, a new threat is rising, putting at risk the tentative gains made by Harry and his friends.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Mental Disorders, Violence

Word count: 48889 Chapters: 12 Completed: No
Published:
08/09/07 Updated: 09/21/08


Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed
Date: 01/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1--The Malfoys

Oh how the mighty have fallen! Excellent story so far, The Malfys are a marked family...Guess the wizard world does'nt have the witness protection program...
You did a wonderful job conveying the doom and gloom of Malfoy Manor and it's occupents.

Author's Response: I think hiding Harry at the Dursley\'s was the equivalent of the witness protection program. Unfortunately, that didn\'t work too well. Besides, who would really want to protect the Malfoys, anyway.

 
Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed
Date: 01/08/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2--The Dursleys' Tale

Wow! What an emotion-filled chapter! I was so happy that Harry came back to Privet Drive to check up on the Dursleys.
Aunt Petunia's behavior towards him was priceless. Even Dudley, the new and improved Dudley was decent with Harry.
A very sweet and touching chapter. I always resented the Dursleys for their mistreatment of Harry. Just goes to prove that a leopard can change its spots! ;0)
Best of luck in future chaptures, it's a wonderful tale.
And how sweet it was of Harry's aunt to give him that photo of herself, Harry's mom and the young Severus Snape.
Weird, now, Lily and Snape are now together for all eternity, along with James of course....

Author's Response: Thank you. I always thought that, vile though they were, the Dursleys deserved a chance to redeem themselves. I think this is about as close as they\'re going to get.

 
Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed
Date: 01/08/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3--A Hollow Feeling

Wonderful so far. You've captured the solemness of Harry's visit to his parents house beautifully. How fitting that he visit his parents' graves to tell them that he and his friends defeated Voldemort.
Very moving chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you again.

 
Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed
Date: 01/08/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4--The Lost Twin

Nice chapter, Harry meeting up with Ron and his mom. It is very sad, what happened to Fred Weasley and all of the others who lost their lives fighting Lord Voldemort, and the aftermath.


Author's Response: Thank you once again. You keep giving me reviews like these and I\'ll develop an ego problem. I particularly liked this chapter, too, and am glad that you liked it.

 
Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed
Date: 01/08/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5--Dinner and a Show

Excellent! Wonderful chapter! And a nice reward for Mr. Weasleyand his family.
Sounds like Harry's friends are being rewarded for all of their hard work, sacrifices and yes, even even the loss of loved ones.


Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you. Of course, keep in mind, no good event in the Harry Potter series goes unpunished.

 

Intertwining Fates by x_lily_evans_x
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 87]

Summary: Five people from the different walks of life. One, born of the noble, was pampered; one, born of the dark, was disgraced; one, born of the ordinary, was extraordinary; one was cursed; and one… well, liked cheese.

Five children, five lives. Add five yellowish envelopes with green writing, and their fates are intertwined forever.

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 19971 Chapters: 5 Completed: No
Published:
08/10/07 Updated: 01/29/08


Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed
Date: 12/23/07 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Wonderful story! To read the different reactions of all 6 kids is really cute.
Cute that Remus' mum called him 'poppet'
And little Peter eating cheese off of his pizza...a prophecy in the making??


Author's Response: Haha, maybe! Maybe not! It\'s just something I wanted to add in for fun. (: Haha not everything in my story is instrumental... I\'m not that professional. Yet (or so I hope). I\'m glad you found it cute! Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed
Date: 12/23/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One

It's nice to see the four main charecters in the story doing narrations of their thoughts about themselves and their families.
I suppose that when Petunia was denied entry into Hogwarts, it started her animosity against her sister Lily.
It's sad in a way...She was jealous too.
Anyway, great story! Keep up the good work.
And Remus might be a little shy. Thus the reason for his little short story! ;0)

Author's Response: Glad you liked the way I write it! It\'s more interesting to write from the different viewpoints, too. Yeah, Petunia\'s a pretty pitiful character. Imagine if your sister had magic and you didn\'t! I\'d be madly jealous, too. Thanks for the review!

 

Possessed by Werewolf_sympathiser
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 16]

Summary: When Ginny Weasley finds a mysterious diary amongst her school books she does what any eleven year old girl would do and writes in it. Shocked as she is when it replies to her quill’s words, Ginny continues to confide in the alluring Tom Riddle, but then strange things begin to happen that she can’t control…





Epilogue is up! The story is now complete!

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 9527 Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/31/07 Updated: 05/19/08


Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed
Date: 05/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: The Diary

Very nice introduction to what should be a fascinating story!
I remember a line in one of the Harry Potter books, where one of the Weasley parents, either Molly or Arthur, says, 'Never trust anything that can think for itself', which might had been about the diary of Tom Riddle.
I'm quite familiar with this story as it unfolds in the Chamber of Secrets, but it will be interesting to read what really happens!

Author's Response: Thanks. Yes that was about Riddle\'s diary at the end of Chamber of Secrets :)

 
Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed
Date: 05/09/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One: Harry Potter

Looks like Tom has Ginny doing some nasty things already. And Tom has shown her the way to the Chamber of Secrets. I would'nt trust Tom Riddle if I were Ginny, but she's under his spell alrwady. Poor girl! It's always the charming ones that cause the most trouble...
Great story!

Author's Response: Isn\'t that always the way!

 
Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed
Date: 05/09/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Two: Blood on the Walls

Totally spooky! I really like this story. Ginny is being tormented by things that she has no control over. And yet, she still confides in Tom...He sure knows how to manipulate someone.

Author's Response: Thanks. Yes he does! Jo showed us that much :)

 
Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed
Date: 05/09/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Three: Attacks

She is completely under his control and as you wrote, she realizes the connection between Ginny and the Riddle diary. Of course, Harry will find the diary, and he'll realize too, that Riddle is the one causing all of the mayhem.
Great story, and I look forward to reading the rest of it!

Author's Response: Thanks

 
Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed
Date: 05/09/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Four: Valentine's Horrors

Well, she has the diary back! Tom will keep feeding off her, until she completely dies, and he becomes more powerful, and human.

Author's Response: Indeed!

 
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