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I'm orginally from New Jersey,USA and currently live in Northeastern Pennsylvania. I'm 47yrs old, born on December 23rd.
I enjoy writing and art. I enjoy volunteering and walking.
I've been a fan of the Harry Potter series and the movies for the past 7 years.

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R.A.B. and the Beginning of the End by Wicked Wench

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: After Dumbledore’s death, Severus Snape encounters the mysterious R.A.B., and finds out the truth behind the “death” of his wife eighteen years ago. It is alternative universe because Dumbledore is not really dead in the story. This story is a romance – other ships.
Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed
Date: 02/25/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Cool story! I like this one alot. I'm glad to see Snape have someone who cares about him and that he cared for and loved too.
I like Snape,since reading Deathly Hallows, and I hope that he and Richelle can be happy, after they take care of business first.
I don't know, the Malfoys have family members coming out of their ears! I know this is AU and I love AU stories.
Sometimes I have to laugh at the pairings anyway, not Severus and Richelle, but her dad being Albus' brother? Curious.

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed
Date: 02/25/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Alone in the Dark

Great chapter! I'm really surprized to see that the teenager Snape and his girlfriend secretly got married while still students at Hogwarts, and that the secret held for so long.
This is such a sweet story and I enjoy reading it!

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed
Date: 02/25/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Mediterranean Morning

Another nice chapter. So Richelle has a home on the Riviera huh?
Severus is not exactly complaining about the bright sunlight and the beach....Hmmm, maybe he'll get himself a nice tan, god Knows he could use it, lol

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed
Date: 02/25/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Miranda Goshawk and a Cup of Tea

Another fine chapter. I like the idea of including Hermione in the mix. She is a very intelligent and bright girl.
She'll do her part well, I'm sure.

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed
Date: 02/25/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Severus's Smile

Wonderful!! I absolutely loved this story! Congratulations on writing a masterpiece! I'm very happy for Severus and Richelle and their daughter Heather!
I would love the chance to see Snape smile, I bet it changes his whole appearence!

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed
Date: 02/25/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Matthew Gladstone

All I can say is oooooo!! Regulus Black, pals with Heather and Richelle??
You don't want to get Snape's goose in a gander...
But it appears he's okay with it all.
Nice chapter and story!

Author's Response: Thank you for all of the kind reviews! I really appreciate your feedback. Hopefully, I will post again soon!

One White Pawn by Ravensgryff

Rated: 6th-7th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: Ron Weasley has started having some very odd dreams. What do they mean? More importantly, can they help the trio to finally defeat Lord Voldemort? A Ron-centric fic written for HP Quills for a Cause.

Dedicated to my husband who always helps me see the big picture.
Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed
Date: 01/15/08 Title: Chapter 1: Opening Game

Did I miss somthing? Percy is dead? That's sad, even though he was a coot working and following the Ministery's line to the letter.
Great story!

Always by Striped Candycane

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: I can imagine what you would look like
after being kissed, your burning hair
halo-soft around your face, your lips
half parted, flaming, full...

A train to Nowhere. A cherry red umbrella. A brief brushing. One last chance. An acid green light. What could have been.

These are poems featuring Lily Evans and Severus Snape, told in the tragic hero's point of view.
Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed
Date: 02/16/08 Title: Chapter 3: Phoenix

Okay, I wanted to read all three peoms before posting a review.
Very sad but beautiful. He truly loved her, and he was hurt by what he said to her.
Sometimes, it is hard to forget the hateful things you say to those you love. And it is even harder for the recipients of those hateful words to ever forgive you.
Severus and Lily never knew true love, because of his hateful words to her.
Now he pines for her, even after her tragic death.
The peoms weere beautiful.
I really enjoyed them.

A Hypothetical Harry Potter Book 7 by Abif

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: The story begins a few weeks after the end of Half-Blood Prince, when Harry is back at the Dursleys' once again, waking up Uncle Vernon from his favorite golfing dream. On escaping from the Dursleys', he finds that Hogwarts is open again and decides to return there after all, but only to find himself face-to-face with both Snape and Voldemort much sooner than he thinks! Through the course of the story, Harry will meet the most mysterious DADA teacher yet, learn the truth of the misunderstanding that took place on the lightning-struck tower, and discover that there really is a little more to Petunia that meets the eye, all the while with references to the amorphous Deathly Hallows.

This is meant to be a humorous rendition of what could happen in Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows. It is intended to be a parody rather than a serious prediction of what happens next.
Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed
Date: 12/23/09 Title: Chapter 1: McGonogall and the Muggles

Too funny!! Hilarious! Thanks for a great story! I had to laugh at the Dursleys' calling Dudley his cute nicknames! Holy cow, the kid's almost Harry's age, and they're calling him baby names still? *grins*
I'm going to enjoy reading this story! Thanks for writing it!

Author's Response: I seriously think that Aunt Petunia would continue to call him baby names even when he's much too old for it. But Dudley acting like such a helpless baby at the age of 17 was obviously OOC. I think he is a few months older than Harry, btw.

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed
Date: 12/23/09 Title: Chapter 2: From Under the Bed

This is a great story! I love the little jokes and the things they are saying. Like the new Weasley clock...And the gagging noises they all made at Bill and Fluer's wedding.
And Dumbledor showing up after Ron's impersonation of him. lol ;0)
Thanks for an awesome story!

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed
Date: 12/24/09 Title: Chapter 3: The Best Birthday

OH, a very strange chapter! lol *grins*
So Petunia turns out to be Aberforth Dumbledor, and Harry does magic out of school in front of Muggles, and gets away with it.
This tale is full of giggly fun! I'm really enjoying it! Thanks for a great story!

Author's Response: Hey, JKR did say that we would find out "a little more about Aberforth" in the second book and that there's more about Petunia than meets the eye.

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed
Date: 12/24/09 Title: Chapter 4: The New Neville

Neville has changed! Now he needs to get buffed up, get those muscles bigger so he can levitate people, longer.
Mrs. Weasley's paranoia is getting to her.
I hope no one dies...
Great story! ;0)

Weasley & Weasley (Deceased) by LuckyRatTail

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •

MAJOR SPOILERS A post-DH Fred and George fic.

It's been one year since the war ended and Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes is still going strong. That is, until Angelina shows up with news that her new boss is being blackmailed. Next thing, a mysterious package arrives on the doorstep, there's a spate of inexplicable burglaries in Diagon Alley, and an old friend appears to have come back from the dead…

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed
Date: 05/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

Holy cow! Poor George is really going through it, huh? This looks like a neat story, full of mystery and intrigue.
Just curous to see if George does'nt lose his mind over seeing Fred...
Great story and I'm hooked!

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed
Date: 05/06/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Wow, spooky! Great story, and Fred is all but flipping over backwards, to get George to believe that he is Fred.
I'm curious to see how Fred came back.
I wonder if he's the one in the Quidditch store?

Harry Potter and the Faulty Prophecy by werewolvesrock

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Harry Potter is going back to Hogwarts. But things have changed, he has got a girlfriend He has an army backing him and a cup has fallen in to his hands. He's ready to fight. And why are a Stag and Dog tormenting Death Eaters?

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed
Date: 12/28/07 Title: Chapter 1: Attack on Privet Drive

Nice story...I enjoyed reading about the Dursley's run in with Snape...Petunia eemed to be calm in light of the situation with her husband.
And Harry allowing his aunt and cousin to stay at Grimmauld Place...What a trip for those two!
Looking forward to reading the next chapter!

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed
Date: 12/28/07 Title: Chapter 2: The Best Birthday

A wonderful chapter! And a nice gift Ginny gave Harry. So the Weasleys must be Irish, for Ginny to give Harry the Claddagh ring.
And Hagrid giving Harry a three headed puppy! I hope it does'nt get as big as Fluffy!! lol

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed
Date: 12/29/07 Title: Chapter 3: Responsibility

Glad to see Harry blow off steam at his Uncle Vernon, saying all the things that he had pent up inside him all those years.
He deserved it though.
Great story, nice to see Harry get back at his relatives for the way he was treated.

A Proper Goodbye by Sly Severus

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: The war has ended, but there is one more thing that Harry must do before he can be at peace.

Takes place directly after the last chapter of DH.
Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed
Date: 03/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I just came across your story while searching for another and I must say it is beautiful. Very simply staed and very touching.
It brought a tear to my eyes.

Author's Response: :D Thanks. I\'m glad you found it so touching.

A Heart Torn By War by MistressOfTime

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: We learn here the story of Lily Evans, a Muggleborn attending Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Her best friend -- and secret love -- Severus Snape, has been her guide through the first four years of her magical education. However, rumors of Severus’ doings are starting to concern Lily, as she starts to notice James Potter, a Quidditch star with unkempt hair and a knack for trouble. Lily’s internal battle is heating up, as she prepares to start her fifth year at Hogwarts.

(Character Death and Sexual Situations Warnings are for later chapters.)

UPDATE 01/30: Chapter 2 is FINALLY posted! I hope you all enjoy this one! Chapter 3 is currently being edited, so I don't have any good excerpts to provide for you...however, keep checking here for updates!
Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed
Date: 02/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Well, Lily, you have quite a story going here! It is excellent! I love any story with Lily and Severus Snape.
I look forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed
Date: 02/01/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - The Hogwarts Express, Again

Wow, what a trip! Lily needs to sort out her priorities, and quick!
I just love this story, and I hope there's more updates in the future!