I'm orginally from New Jersey,USA and currently live in Northeastern Pennsylvania. I'm 47yrs old, born on December 23rd.
I enjoy writing and art. I enjoy volunteering and walking.
I've been a fan of the Harry Potter series and the movies for the past 7 years.
Keep your chin up! Your train of thought can get sidetracked if you're trying to compose a chapter. Plus outside interferences don't help much either. In any case, you've done another fine job with this tale.
I'm not the best at reviewing, but I think this one's excellent.
Author's Response: aw, **huggles** Danke! :D This is a mighty fine review. ;) ~Evie
Dermot sounds like Snape in a way, hating Teddy Lupin, like Snape loathed Harry Potter. It's a great story non the less...Would Kevin like some ketchup with his reviews?? Just kidding! ;0)
Keep up the good work! I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Kevin doesn\'t like ketchup - he eats reviews, or rather, words, and ketchup doesn\'t really go. It makes the review hard to read, you see. ;) :p Glad you like it!! ~Evie
I don't see anything wrong with it either. It looks great and is a great beginning to what looks to be a fascinating tale.
Just have faith in yourself and the stories will turn out fine! ;0)
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! :D
I thought it was a great chapter. Teddy Lupin sounds adorable and Harry is well, just Harry! ;0)
Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you!
You know, I have no idea why your chapters are being rejected...I think this one is awesome! I see nothing wrong with it! I'm a writer also, and I'm not a pro at it...Practrice makes perfect and all that.
I just write for fun...Would love to try this, but....
Keep up the great work! :0)
Author's Response: Would love to try this? Go for it! :D You\'ll never know until you try, and this is the place for practicing! Believe me, I know - some of my older stories are cringy to read!! ~Evie
Very nicely done! of course, it seems odd not to see Prof. McGonagal as head of Gryffindor House and as Headmistriss. But changes are good.
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Well, Jo said she was a bit too old to take the job, and it stands to reason that she\'d retire. :) Glad you like it! ~Evie
Excellent chapter! And honestly! you'd think Snape was Ann's brother for heaven's sake!
He's such a dweeb!
Ooooo! What a devilish trick! So this is where James saves Snape...At least that's what we've heard.
Another fine chapter, I really am enjoying this story.
Well, what comes around goes around. Luckily everybody survived. But blosoming friendships faded away, or in the case of Ann and Sirius, stormed away.
Good thing James caught Snape in time or he would have been meat.
The beginning of the Lily and James era.
Nice story and cute...Hopefully Sirius can find himself a girlfriend.
Awwww!! Is that all there is?? Just kidding!
Great story! Can't wait for new chapters
That's what you get for not paying attention...
Nicely written, as always. Nice to see Snape bieng civil towards Sirius.
I can understand Harry's shock and disgust at finding out that Snape fancied Harry's mom. And his reaction of course.
Looks like a good beginning...
Lucius Malfy is such a slimeball, even as a teenager. It's easy to see the resemblance between him and Draco...
A great beginning!
Okay, that was interesting. Lily and Snape getting full marks on their potion, and Potter and Sirus got half marks, or credits as Slughorn told them.
The rivalry is just beginning!
Wonderful work! From snogging in the Slytherin common room, to the beginings of The Maraulders, a very good read.
Can't wait to see what they'll do to Snape.
Excellant! I forgot to post a review on the previous chapter, which was also excellent. Even innocent looking little girls can be eveil as Ann Warlow proved in the previous chapter.
Of course Sirius was at fault for hexing Snape.
And those naughty naughty Slytherins! Bella and Malfoy...tsk tsk!
I swear Remus lupin is the male equivilent of Hermione Granger. Just like when Ron and Harry were conspiring to do something dangerous, there was Hermione, being the voice of reason.
Another terrific chapter.
Another wonderful entry! Shame Sirius does'nt know who he is....Slytherins seem to slither out of the hands of trouble, don't they? ;0)
Ha ha! Yes it is dificult to even think about love at 12 years old.
Excellent story and can't wait to read the next chapter.