hey im jesse
i have read all the harry potter books and i think there amazing
[specially ron and draco] lol
im practically absessed with them now
so ..... HI
Don't read if you are offended with rape and abuse. Contains events that will be quite offensive and possibly "disgusting". You have been warned.
Runner Up in the Dangerous Liaisons Awards and He Had It Coming Awards.
~The story is now Complete!~
Thanks for reading!
omg thats sad! =[ im gonna keep reading... i hope they end up together!!
omg thats sad! =[ im gonna keep reading... i hope they end up together!!
ok... little confusing ending... is draco gonna die???
i liked the story... but i didnt... i mean it was a good story but i thought they actually loved eachother.... they were actually going to end up together....
but NOOOO they had to go on not loving each other just taking advantage and hurting? well thats the reason i didnt like it but thats just my personal opinion other than that goood job
omg wow speachless!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i loved it thats such a good story!!!!
it might help a little that im
a major ron hermione shipper
it haunted me a little that
ron and hermione were.... erm...doing...'things' together so young but without it the story would have been ruined
wow... blown away lol that was good!!!! but u must must must write anouther chapter or i might cry lol its starting to get susspensfull!!!!!!!!!! well i do like it but i dont like how lucius and siobhans relationship so far has been all about sex.... i mean they dont even like talk about anything they just... do it lol but i still thinks its good
ok well i liked it... but im like 13 sooo... that was..... er interesting in a nasty way lol but i think you perfectly captured lucius's character so far... u made him still have his... well high self respect and arrogance but still showed his gentle, loving side... i loved it!!!
that was briliant!!!!
"id like to lick you all over too"
that was too funny!!!!
omg.... i cryed
that was sad
i loved it though
id never pictured harry as one to let out his feelings... but now that i see that side i absolutly love it!!!!
i think this was very deep
It was full moon when the Dark Lord sealed a part of his soul within a magical amulet, and then broke it in half. One half was left to the faithful werewolves to guard. The other half was tossed into the impenetrable depths of time where no one but him could get it. When the first half has been found, the Order of the Phoenix selects Hermione Granger to go back into the past to search for the missing piece. What is waiting for her is a brutal task that will test her beyond her limits, and an undying love that extends beyond the boundaries of time.
No werewolves were harmed in the making of this story.
Update (9 May): Chapter 17, Burning, is up! Enjoy!
good chapter. Im DIEING to see what happens between her and Remus when she comes back to the future! DIEING! anyways, Remus knows it was really Hermione right? he didnt really think that was her mum. and he must not of cuz hermiones a muggle born
Author's Response: Ooh, good point. But we\'ll see how things go. Maybe Remus will wake up soon enough. Thanks for taking time out to review! =)
YOU SAID IT WOULDNT TAKE YOU 5 MONTHS TO POST!!!!!! ITS BEEN 8!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
it hasnt been updated in a long long loooooong time....
i really like this story so plz dont stop here!!!!!
i really really like it btw i dont think ive ever posted a comment but i love it.... im anxious to see how lupin and hermione will react when they see each other again in the present..
will it be acward and they wont talk about it? will they still be in love spite the age difference? what will she do about ron? wondering wondering
lol nice tease lol i was biting my fingernails!!!!!!!!! too bad for ron... mcgonagal had to ruin it for him... although if she hadnt maybe hermione would get mad like last time... mystery lol
GOOD JOB!!!!i seriously have no idea where all yall writers come up with all this excallent junk!!!! lol anywhoo i did miss ron =[ lol well whens chapter 7 coming btw??? merry chritmas!!!
omg i loooovvvvveddddd itttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lol good job, really good job, i hope ron and hermione make it!
Author's Response: Only one way to find out, really. Thank you very much; I\'m glad you liked it.
OMG WHAT R U PLAYING AT?!?!?!?!?!
u scared me sooo bad!!!!
i was crying my eyes
out because i thought
hermione died right after
she finally was in love
then i thought u might
be playing at something so i got my hopes up it was somebody else
then it was like "this lovely young lady" or something and i
started crying again and
then it said arthur was in pain
and i was like SNAP and started cracking up at how stupid
i was being lol
i think u should have made
it longer but i loved it anyways!!!
did you mean to make
ppl think hermione died?
because u did a good
god u scared the crap
out of me lol
YOU GAVE ME CHILLS WITH THE LAST LINE!!!!!
"all too soon reallity would bring them crashing back to there senses"
chills even typing that i got chills!!!!! omg i love how u bring back the title... is it bad to just now relize that all the chapters had something to do wiuth "senses" in the title lol?
i cryed my eyes out when i read this... i actually read this last week and couldnt figuree out the reason it wasnt letting me comment was becasue i wasnt signed in lol but i really think u captured the tru emotion of what it would be like to know ur dieing
Author's Response: To be honest, I think this is a much more romanticized and glorified take on reality. I don\'t know, I\'m petrified of death, and think that I wouldn\'t be able to take it quite so stoicly, but who knows, maybe when I get to be Harry\'s age here, I\'ll have a slightly different frame of mind? Anyway, thank you so much, and hope to read more reviews from you later.
aww i wanted them to get married poor harry... ='[
o well i still love how u keep rons humor even when hes in a nerve racking situation..
im glad u didnt just make harry and ginny look into eachothers eyes and fall in love again... hate stories like that
Author's Response: Something a little funny about that; the original ending was very similar to what you are talking about. Thanks to a couple of betas, however, I changed it to what you see here, and I am utter glad about that. Thanks and hopefully will see ya for hte next one.
i loved it
i love the like riskyness between there relationshipp
the teacher guy still creeps me out a little i was biting my nails with the whole fighting him thing...
yeah i cryed, it broke my heart when colin was hurt so bad ='[
wow that really makes me wonder... i have always pictured myself going to school with my friends for the rest of my life... wow i dont know what im gonna do in my last day of highschool... ahhh thats scary
Author's Response: Thank you so much, and I\'m glad you found a lot of things to take away from this. In truth, your final point I think hits upon the true heart of this story; the idea of growing up and coming of age. I\'ve always wanted to write a story along those lines, one that really got into the subject of saying good bye to your childhood, and now that I think about it, there is something significant about Ron and Hermione\'s small role, that whole idea of these are people who are already on the other side looking back. Anyway, I\'m glad you enjoyed it, and I hope to see you for the next one!
OMG THAT WAS AMAZING!!!!
i really enjoyed it!!!
i think you need to make an epilogue
but thats just my personal opinion
it was a good ending anyways
does it work? do they wake up?
what happens after if they do?
all questions i desperatly
want the answers too
answers that you could answer!!!!
lol so.... yeah
good job btw