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Real name: Ashley Benton
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Hey everyone. I am a diehard fan of Harry Potter and every tiny bit related to it except the movies

Favorite HP book : Order of the Phoenix.
Favorite HP character : Lily Potter
Favorite books : Harry Potter, In the face of
Danger, Jewels of Tessa
Kent, Ransom
Favorite movies : Lord of the Rings, Queen
Cheaper by the Dozen
Favorite actors : Zac Efron, Tom Cruoise,
Brad Pitt, Dan Radcliffe
Favorite actresses : Julia Roberts, Emma
Watson, Hilary Duff
Gwyneth Paltrow
Favorite singers : Carrie Underwood, Hilary
Duff, Vanessa Hudgens
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Summary:

"Love is unexplainable. There are no words for it. You can’t express why you feel so. It just happens," James said. "“Don’t you think that if I had the choice I would have chosen to love someone who didn’t hate me in return?”

“No,” Sirius said simply.

“You’re right.” James said, sighing. “I’m so screwed up, Padfoot.”

The drama-filled romantic tale of Lily and James's mysterious but unfortunate tale. It started with love and ended with death. It makes you wonder about the things they tried to live for. Pre-HBP



Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 94269 Chapters: 60 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/06/04 Updated: 12/15/06


Reviewer: beetleatbay Signed
Date: 02/10/08 Title: Chapter 33: Venus Adams

The plot is going way great. i am a bigggggggggggggggggggggg fan of your stories though i may not have reviewed on all of them

 
Reviewer: beetleatbay Signed
Date: 02/10/08 Title: Chapter 37: Going Under

Wingardium leviosa is levitating sharm. the incantation for the disillusionment charm is not stated in the fabulous series. where as the chapter was concerned.great job as always. i really like your pen name

 
Reviewer: beetleatbay Signed
Date: 02/13/08 Title: Chapter 59: The Big News

whoa. i cant believe that only one chapter is left.

 
Reviewer: beetleatbay Signed
Date: 02/09/08 Title: Chapter 8: Lakeside Drama

I really like this chapter.

 
Reviewer: beetleatbay Signed
Date: 02/09/08 Title: Chapter 18: A Friend's Betrayal

It is a good chapter.
but in my opinion peter should have joined the dark side after some time. like say in a couple of years. because we all know that voldemort does not like waiting and it is a long time ahead when james will be killed. so when we talk voldemort and peter joining at the age of 17 he should be killed within six months. and as far as bellatrix and malfoy are concerned excellent.

 
Reviewer: beetleatbay Signed
Date: 02/09/08 Title: Chapter 19: Questions

oh my god i cant wait to know what happens next.

 
Reviewer: beetleatbay Signed
Date: 02/09/08 Title: Chapter 20: Mixed Emotions

it is an awesome chap. mow i am not reviewing until the story finishes of I may review if the chapter is great. they always are. and i love your cliff hangers because the story is complete. i am a mean girl too.

 
Reviewer: beetleatbay Signed
Date: 02/09/08 Title: Chapter 22: Twice Defied

everything is so fabulous. i just cant stop reviewing

 
Reviewer: beetleatbay Signed
Date: 02/09/08 Title: Chapter 23: No Mercy

it was really saddening. i got teary eyed. jkrowling had put a charm in those books that makes us emotionally attatched to the wonderful characters who had to go through so much for peace and harmony. for a reviewer's point of view. super thrilling chapter

 
Reviewer: beetleatbay Signed
Date: 02/08/08 Title: Chapter 13: Frozen Tears

Sorry for not reviewing for the previous chapters. i really like this story. and in fact i like all of the stories written by you. i may not have reviewed for other stories.

 
Reviewer: beetleatbay Signed
Date: 02/08/08 Title: Chapter 8: Lakeside Drama

i love your stories a lot. a lot

 
Reviewer: beetleatbay Signed
Date: 02/08/08 Title: Chapter 13: Frozen Tears

You are such a talented writer. Wish I could write someday as well as you do. I am just a beginner

 
Reviewer: beetleatbay Signed
Date: 02/11/08 Title: Chapter 39: The Mirror

it was greattttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt and so were all the previous chapters

 
Reviewer: beetleatbay Signed
Date: 02/11/08 Title: Chapter 40: The Truth

super great.

 
Reviewer: beetleatbay Signed
Date: 02/11/08 Title: Chapter 42: Gossip

It was a rocking chapter.
you should also submit it to humor fics and and it goes amazingly with the plot and characterization

 
Reviewer: beetleatbay Signed
Date: 02/11/08 Title: Chapter 43: Lily and Prongs Ride Again

beautiful. 50 points to Secret Lily for making my day.

 
Reviewer: beetleatbay Signed
Date: 02/11/08 Title: Chapter 44: Poetic Engagements

GREAT CHAPTER> GREAT PLACE> GREAT POEM>

 
Reviewer: beetleatbay Signed
Date: 02/11/08 Title: Chapter 46: Sweet Surprises

sorry for the last review. i just clicked submit by mistake. this chap was nice. but lily saying no has got a slightly lame excuse

 
Reviewer: beetleatbay Signed
Date: 02/10/08 Title: Chapter 24: Spirit Broken

Okay i will read Potter's charm. but no one ever so much emphasixe on friends. but then maybe hogwarts frienships are better than ours.

 
Reviewer: beetleatbay Signed
Date: 02/10/08 Title: Chapter 25: Prongs Troubles

it was nice really really wonderful

 
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