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The Moon Divides by Potter

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 133 Reviews
Summary: COMPLETE!

(AU Fic) Two twins named Remus and Rachael Lupin have been inseperable for the eight years they've been on this Earth. But one fateful trip into the forest has changed all of that.

Excerpt from Chapter Twenty Three - A Second Chance

Professor Lupin walked over and sat down at the foot of his daughter’s bed.

“How are you?” he asked, watching his daughter carefully.

“Fine,” she answered, although she could have been better.

“How could you-,”

“Please dad,” Rachael cut him off. “Sirius already gave me the ‘how could you’ lecture.” Professor Lupin smiled.

“Did he now?”

“Yes and he got through to me pretty well.”

“Good, I just hope you know never to do something like that again.”

“I’m not going to, Mum’s not worth it.” Professor Lupin clicked his tongue.

“You can’t say that,” he said quietly, getting up and heading for the door. “Everyone deserves a chance to change. Just as you tried to prove that to your mother, one day she’s going to prove it to you. Everyone deserves a second chance.”

*Warning, some mental abuse and later a little physical, nothing terribly bad, just a warning*

Nominated for 2006, 2008, 2009 Quicksilver Quill Award - Best Dark/Angsty Fic
Reviewer: lunaandneville Signed
Date: 12/18/09 Title: Chapter 33: My Daughter

*claps rapidly* I freaking LOVE this story!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Wow, thanks! Glad you liked it!

Midnight Chills by Narcissa

Rated: Professors • 67 Reviews
Summary: Severus Snape had just suffered the most humiliating moment of his life... or had he? The nickname Harry should have seen, worse than Snivellus. (language warning!)
Reviewer: lunaandneville Signed
Date: 11/30/07 Title: Chapter 1: Midnight Chills

wow it was a good read i liked it. poor shrivellis... i mean... snape.

Ginny's Journey - Book I by Oddish

Rated:52 Reviews
Summary: In this AU story, Ginny Weasley is expelled from Hogwarts for her role in the Chamber of Secrets affair. Denied the magical life that is her birthright, her only option is to cross the Atlantic to attend an American wizarding school of dubious reputation. A long and frequently difficult journey through exile has begun.
Reviewer: lunaandneville Signed
Date: 11/08/09 Title: Chapter 14: Ch. 14 - Shockwave

Okay so I totally fell in love with this story on this site so I naturally HAD to follow it to ginny potter and read the rest... I fricken LOVES this fic!!!!!!

Sweet Sixteen Again by Crimsonphoenix1

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 328 Reviews
Summary: Post-OOTP. When Voldemort attacks Harry and Dumbledore comes to fight him off, Harry accidentally casts a strange spell that turns Dumbledore and Voldemort into 16 year olds-Harry's age. Now both of them must live with Harry and the Dursleys...Please R&R! COMPLETE!!
Reviewer: lunaandneville Signed
Date: 12/13/09 Title: Chapter 1: Attack

I loves it!!! I was wondering how in merlin's beard did harry know a spell to change albus and tom (hehehe) into teenagers!!! Brilliant!!!!!

Through A Hero's Eyes by Eponine

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 36 Reviews
Summary: Neville Longbottom lived almost his whole life with his Grandmother. He knows who is responsible for the insanity of his parents. But if he has a chance for revenge, will he take it? Neville's story, set in sixth year. Note: This story has been picked up again.
Reviewer: lunaandneville Signed
Date: 12/20/09 Title: Chapter 10: Bittersweet Revenge

I like this story.a lot you are a very good writer and I'm happy that you finished it!!! Well done!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review!


I Was A Famous Child Witch or Wizard by Burrowbrat

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 160 Reviews
Summary: This is a spin off of the famous child star countdowns. It is the famous child witch or wizard countdown. Where are they now? What made them worthy of the countdown? Fellow witches and wizards are on hand for one-on-one interviews about the famous witches and wizards.(pre-HBP)For those that have been wondering about the sequel, info can be found on my profile page
Reviewer: lunaandneville Signed
Date: 12/23/07 Title: Chapter 1: one-shot


Author's Response: good good, laughing is good for you and it makes me happy =)

Truth Be Told by CraftySlytherin

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 355 Reviews
Summary: What happens when Fred and George Weasley, Hogwarts' reknowned kings of pranks, decide to spike a shipment of pumpkin juice bound for Hogwarts with truth potion? A day filled with true confessions of Hogwarts students!!!!!
Reviewer: lunaandneville Signed
Date: 10/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

Love this story!!!!!

Reviewer: lunaandneville Signed
Date: 12/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

oh my goddess i love this story!!! it's amazingly funny!

Love Is A Remarkable Thing by prongs_potter_rulez

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 13 Reviews
Summary: The Last Battle between Good and Evil… Harry is cornered, injured and wandless, lying defeated against Riddle's tombstone, Voldemort leering at him. Voldemort oddly gives him a chance to ask any one question, so Harry asks something which has been etched in his head for a very long time...

WARNING: SOME SWEAR WORDS... ABOUT 4-5 IN ALL ONE SHOT!!!!!!!!!! Thx SO much to lunadragonfly from harrypotterfanfiction.com for the AMAZING banner - view it on my authour page!!!

EXTRACT “Yeah, I have a question,” Harry said suddenly, still staring into the scarlet, hateful eyes even though his scar seared in pain, “why did you give my mother so many chances to live?” This question had been etched into Harry’s mind for as long as he could remember, and maybe, maybe he would get it answered…

Voldemort grinned, “Ah, I you would really like to know, I will show you,” grinned Voldemort. Harry immediately knew nothing good would come of this…

620 READS BUT ONLY 3 REVIEWS??????? COME ON GUYS!!!!!!!!!! ONE-SHOT, R+R!!!!!!
Reviewer: lunaandneville Signed
Date: 10/21/09 Title: Chapter 1: Love Is A Remarkable Thing

Wow... Disappointing...

It Had to Happen in Snape's Class by nerd2006

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 95 Reviews
Summary: Post-HBP. Voldemort attacks Harry during Potions class. What will Snape's reaction be? PG-13 for violent scenes and mild language.
Reviewer: lunaandneville Signed
Date: 10/21/09 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Wow I love this rendition of the 6th book!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Captivus by Capricorn

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 13 Reviews
Summary: Draco Malfoy has been imprisoned by the Dark Lord for seven years. We meet him again, insane, lost, and dying of depression. It has been seven years now. Two thousand, five hundred, and fifty-five days since my spirit died. I was only seventeen. I lost everything. I lost everything on one fateful day. And now look at what I have become. Now, I don’t even have a name to call myself by, because I cannot seem to remember the name my father bestowed upon me. These days, I am merely Prisoner #70017.
Reviewer: lunaandneville Signed
Date: 10/16/09 Title: Chapter 1: #70017

Write another one!!!!!!

Harry Potter, the Half-Blood Prince and Mary-Sue by Valentinia

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 81 Reviews
Summary: What if Ginny hadn't been there after Harry won his Quidditch game? In his euphoria, Harry would have fallen for someone else, of course. And who could that be but the beautiful foreign exchange student, Mary-Sue!

A Mary Sue parody!

Warning: Extreme OOCness follows. All of the warnings this fic has are based on not-to-be-taken-seriously situations!
Reviewer: lunaandneville Signed
Date: 12/01/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: The Final Battle

okay i have to admit i wasnt sure if i wanted to read this cuz i'm thinking 'HARRY NOT LOVE GINNY!!! YOU'VE GOTTA BE KIDDING!!!!!' but then i HAD to know what it was about... and i'm SOOOO glad i read it it was amazingly funny and i completely agree that malfoy is a sexi sex-god lol. but my all time favorite part of the story was that neville asked luna to marry him and she agreed!!!! yea!!!!! i love luna and neville... i totally think that they should end up married... hence my screen name lol. how many times do you think this could be added as my favorite story??? you're definatly going on my favorite authors and this story is going on my favorites too. and this is the LONGEST review i've written so i'm going to stop lol. but 4 things first 1. keep writing i love your work 2.lollipop is the longest word you can type with only your right hand 3.stewardess is the longest with your left 4. typerwriter is the longest on one line... random facts...

Author's Response: :D lol. I\'m glad you liked the story! Thanks for the review! lollipop stewardess typewriter (just had to try those out. You\'re right. =D)

Leaves by Simply Being

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 14 Reviews
Summary: I would look out into the forest, full of huge lofty trees covered in leafy green foliage, pointing downward as if sensing the rain, and trying with all their might to get as far away as possible from it. It doesn’t really make sense, I used to muse to myself. Why would leaves hide from the rain? Maybe, I decided, because they were afraid; afraid that the thing they loved the most would somehow hurt them, and why bother even taking a chance? Therefore, I had concluded, they pointed downward as far as they could reach.

What if the death of Luna's mother wasn't an accident?

A/N: Thanks so much Kasey, Rachel, and Catrin! Also: This comes with a slight AU warning, it all depends on how you look at it. But, strictly speaking, it does not go against cannon.
Reviewer: lunaandneville Signed
Date: 12/10/09 Title: Chapter 1: Leaves

Great writing syle I love how you went from her P.O.V to 3rd person... Do not however agree with how luna's father become eccentric in this story but that's just my personal opinion... Even still you are an amazing writer

The Return by bajab

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 14 Reviews
Summary: Ten years after the defeat of Tom Riddle, but his legacy lives on. Post Hogwarts, short, action story with a twist or two.

Reviewer: lunaandneville Signed
Date: 11/23/09 Title: Chapter 6: Aftermath (Epilogue)

Very cool story I loves it

Promising Goodbyes by Wand_Waver2006

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 8 Reviews
Summary: Everything has gone down hill since Ron died, and Hermione feels she has no reason to live. This depression--along with her new love--pressures her to do the one thing she swore she'd never do:

Become a Death Eater.

Gauntlet #3, Wand_Waver2006 of Ravenclaw House

Just some minor language, otherwise there's no warnings.
Reviewer: lunaandneville Signed
Date: 12/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Promising Goodbyes

Wow... Just... Wow... I love this not a fan of Hermione becoming a death eater but well written none-the-less...

In the Pursuit of Power by Gonz

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 3 Reviews
Summary: When she was fired from the Ministry Dolores Umbridge lost her well earned power. Determined to regain what she has lost, Dolores makes a decision that will change her life forever. Journey with Dolores as she faces the trials and tribulations in her new life as a Death Eater.

Written for the Gauntlet Third Run by Gonz of Hufflepuff House.
Reviewer: lunaandneville Signed
Date: 10/20/09 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

Wow I love this very well written

Author's Response: Thank you.

Shades of Black by Striped Candycane

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 28 Reviews Past Featured Story
Summary: The three Black sisters are very different. But once a week, for a brief moment, they become very much the same...Pre-Hogwarts.

Reviewer: lunaandneville Signed
Date: 12/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i like this it is well written. great job

Janey Weasley-Springs; My Mother by Pussycat123

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 50 Reviews
Summary: Fifth in the Janey Weasley series – and this time we hear from Janey’s middle child, Tillie.
She is eleven years old. Her sister, Day, is fifteen, and she also has a seven-year-old brother called Nicky. Due to leave for Hogwarts at the end of the summer, Tillie is utterly perplexed. She can’t imagine life without her sweet, innocent (it seems) little brother to look after, or her carefree, happy mother to look up to. But as the inevitable grows closer, Tillie will soon have to accept that time will wait for no one ... Note: Don’t worry, I haven’t cheated you out of Janey’s wedding – all will be revealed!

Reviewer: lunaandneville Signed
Date: 12/23/07 Title: Chapter 1: Janey Weasley-Springs; My Mother

okay i have read all of the janey series i didnt reveiw until now though because i always leave an overall reveiw. i absolutly loveeeeeee it!!!! you did such a great job.... may i please use the characters Day, Tilley, and Nicky to write my first fan-fic?? please?? keep writing i love your style.

Author's Response: Um. I\'m really not sure I want you using my characters, it would be weird. Maybe you could just change their names and their appearance a bit ... tweak their personalities slightly ... and voila? I\'m just not sure I want people using my characters. Thanks. But I\'m really, really glad you like them so much, and the story. Really, you will feel ten times better if your first ever fanfic really is, you know ... yours. Believe me. =)

Ancient Magic: The Final Confrontation by Starmom

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 20 Reviews
Summary: It's time. Voldemort's plan to capture and conquer Hogwarts has been uncovered. The horcruxes have been found and Harry has found a way to "vanquish" the Dark Lord. The forces of good have gathered and the Final Battle is about to begin. A six-part version of the final chapter of Book 7.

Reviewer: lunaandneville Signed
Date: 10/14/09 Title: Chapter 6: Part 6 - Phoenix Song

I LOVED how well this was written

The Beast Within by La_Rubinita

Rated: Professors • 405 Reviews
Summary: Werewolves. Vampires. Spies. Secret societies. Love. Magic. Animagi. Prophecies. Ancient goddesses. Sacrifice. More than just the Wizarding world hangs in the balance. Will two unlikely partners have what it takes? D/Hr AU after HBP.
Reviewer: lunaandneville Signed
Date: 12/02/07 Title: Chapter 10: Trapped

oh my goddesss i LOVE this story!!!!!!! finish it finish it finish it!!!! PLEASE!!!!!?????!!!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

Author's Response: LOL, thank you for your enthusiasm! I will finish it, but we have a long way to go. I hope you stick with us!