this is my favorite fanfic! i love the whole concept of harry being in slytherin. it's also really suspenseful and there are so many great twists! i LOVE it!!! keep up the good work!!!
Author's Response: You\'re a new reader, cool! Thanks for the review, I\'m looking forward to your thoughts on other chapters. :-)
great chapter! i really liked how the vanishing cabinet was like a parallel universe to hogwarts, and how it followed the whole layout of the castle. that was a really good idea! the puzzle concept was very cool too!
Author's Response: Thank you! I was afraid it could turn out too boring but adding more riddles and stuff would have taken me much longer, so I\'m really glad you liked it this way.
once again, another great cliffhanger!!!!! i can't wait to find out what happened to simon when he was arguing with the other slytherins!!!!!
6 years post HBP
H/G and R/Hr(DH spoilers are very minimal, just in terms of a use of a name- it doesnt follow canon storyline wise)
great story!!! i love the suspense!!! can't wait to find out what happens next!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
another great chapter!!! my heart was racing at the end! when are harry and ginny going to get together?!
Author's Response: Thank you! You\'ll just have to wait and see about H/G...hehe. Thank you so much for the review!
it was a very amusing chapter!!! that was such a funny story about ron's 20th birthday!!! i can only imagine what those pictures would look like!!! HA! HA! HA!
Author's Response: Thank you! I was trying to think of somethng a bit more cheerful and that was the result......Im glad you liked it! Hehe. thank you for leaving a review! :D
good chapter! we're finally getting some answers! holly sure is an interesting character!
Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m glad you think so! Thank you for reviewing!
i think it's bellatrix! I NEED THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Bellatrix, eh? You'll see soon enough! :)
All I can say is wow. This truly is one of my favorite fanfics! I think it's impossible for me to narrow it down to just one thing I enjoyed, so I'll list a few:
1. I thought that when Ron said he wanted to get back together, that Hermione really was going to get up and hug him or something like that. But instead she rejected him, and that's one of the things that makes this story so unique. Ron and Hermione had so many complications throughout the story, unlike other fanfics where everything is so easy and sugar-coated. It fit the characters personalities more to have them always argung about one thing or another, and that was one of the most enjoyable parts of the story.
2. The ending was great! I was so happy I guessed right! Having that revelation at the very end was perfect!
3. The plot was just absolutely amazing! It always left you wanting more, and it was intriguing too because it always had you gessing who was behind it all. The twists were great too.
So that's my opinion in a nutshell. Just one question. How DID Portia break them up? I don't think you revealed that. Anyway, amazing fanfic! I'll be looking out for more of your stories!
Author's Response: Thanks very much for the wonderful review! I knew from the very beginning that even after everything happened Ron and Hermione wouldn't just get right back together as, you're right, it doesn't fit their personalities. It was fun to write the twists and turns throughout the story and keep readers guessing, and I'm glad you enjoyed that too! As for guessing right about Hermione's pregnancy -- good job! :) I originally had the scene between Hermione and Portia written up, and in it Portia would reveal more, but I ended up deciding it was unnecessary, and it would only force me to draw things out and write another chapter. If you're really interested in learning more details, I'm considering writing a follow-up one-shot or maybe adding on an epilogue. Thanks again for the review!
oops. i made a mistake. my really long review was supposed to be for this chapter, "The Choice", but instead it ended up under "The Note". Sorry!
Author's Response: A review is a review is a review! Doesn't matter where it is :)
*stares silently at the computer screen for several minutes* that . . . . . was . . . . AWESOME!!!!!!!!!! DEFINITELY THE BEST CHAPTER YET!!!!!!!!!! THAT WAS SOOOO WORTH THE WAIT!!!!!!!!!!!! you scared me at the beginning though. i thought Portia was Luna. haha. :^) oh. and my theory is that Hermione got pregnant again after what happened at the hotel. that would be a mistake too, right? please please PLEASE update!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much! No, no, I couldn't possibly have made it Luna! Although I could see how you might think that for a second. That's an interesting theory, though, about Hermione . . . I guess you'll just have to wait and see. I'll update as fast as I can!
OMG!!! this has got to be one of the BEST fanfics i've ever read!!! it pulls you in and you just have to keep reading!!! GREAT STORY!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks very much! I\'m glad you think so!
i hate to be a pain, but do you have any idea how long it's gonna be until the next chapter is up? i'm so anxious to find out what happens next!!!
Author's Response: I know! It's taking forever and I'm sorry for that! I'd say it'll be two weeks until I submit it TOPS. Hopefully it'll be much sooner than that. Bear in mind, however, that it might be in queue for a while. Just keep hanging on a little longer!
a really great story! i love the plot idea!
Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m glad you\'re enjoying it. =)
Yay!!! Finally another chapter!!! Is another one on the way?
Author's Response: I've started writing the next chapter, and I'll try to update soon! :)
great story! very well-written! it's so realistic for the series! i could totally see all this happening afterward!
Author's Response: Thanks very much! I\'m so pleased by your positive review. Thanks for taking the time to leave it. cj
OMG! i've read this a few times, and i'm always sobbing by the end of it (and, trust me, it takes a lot to make me cry!)! one of the best written fanfics i've ever read! it's one of my favorites!
His fears? Flying...his own wand...fitting in...sticking out! His best friends? A passionate fire-breathing cousin, and a cool, aloof Death Eater's son. His destiny? Anything but ordinary!
Join Albus as he experiances his first year at Hogwarts and begins the journey out from under his father's collosal shadow, if he can survive it of course!
Meet the new Tenacious Trio, Albus Potter, Scorpius Malfoy, and Rose Weasley
HAHA!!!!! I'm still laughing over this!!! Never saw THAT coming!!! Great chapter!!! Very unexpected!!! I thought that Scorpius was going to end up in Gryffindor with Albus and Rose!!!
That would be one concensus, but I lurvs the idea of breaking the mold!
HAHA!!! great story so far!!! so funny!!! can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!
Hopefully that will be soon if the great and mighty gods of the Pit of Black Fire (the queu) see fit! Glad you are enjoying it! Please stay tuned!
i want to know so badly what houses they're going to end up in! great chapter! fred is sooooo funny!
Well the title is a hint :) The Mod God's were not kind to Chapter two...so fingers crossed that I can get Chapter 3 out soon.