"Fill your paper with the breathings of your heart." ~William Wordsworth
girl, fifteen. an autumn baby. short, brunette, blue eyes. loves to read, write. doesn't mind school, ambitious. wants to be a librarian someday, even though people look at her funny when she says that. sophomore in high school. wants to go to a college nobody's ever heard of. kind of shy, pretty laid back. has been in a relationship with the most amazing man in the world since 9-19-09 b29;. loves her friends and family more than anything else. gets along with just about anybody. would love to get to know you :)
Summary: *How far would you go for love?* "If you touch her again, I'll kill you." "Go ahead for I'll come to her again and again." *Is it worth it?* "James leave her alone, she's no good for you." "Don't say a word against Lily!" *Will it last?* "It's forever, I've known it sice the day I met you." "Forever is a long time." "Not if you love someone..." I am finally re-editing this story, please take a look and see all the new stuff!
Great Story!!! I read it in three hours lol I just couldn't tear my eyes away from the computer. just a tiny bit more fluff than I like, but it was still wonderfull!
Summary: No one understands how I feel. How could they? They hadn't known James for as long as I have, and they hadn't had him taken away from them by the redhead.
Loved it! Very original!
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For all of you who wanted an update, I have a proposition. You may or may not like it, but it's all I can offer.
Check review challenge for the last chapter. details there!
James and Lily Potter were possibly the most famous parents in wizarding history. We know alot about their adult life, but what do we really know about their childhood? Even Harry never knew about the Drama, jealousy, danger, friendships, happiness, sadness, resentment,confusion and love that his parents went through as children. Here, their lives, from when the two of them were eleven to when they were brutally murdered at only 21, is recorded. Lily and James Potter were unsung heros. This is their story.
good story! i really like it so far. there is one thing that's kind of confusing though. i was always told in school that you start a new paragraph when a new person speaks. just thought I'd give you a suggestion!
this chapter was much less confusing. great job!
calista and snape! lol
peter definately. haha he's always so scared and well...mousey!
Summary: Yes, yes I know...the visual is enough to turn you off! (Run screaming and gagging in total disgust! Bleegggghhh!) Alright...get your minds out of the gutter! There will be no wrinkled old bodies wrestling and sweating in the throes of passion here. These are NOT hormonally driven teenagers. Rating is for subject matter only (I mean they actually mention the word…SEX! Horrors!). I have just often wondered if there wasn't something going on between these old fogies. JKR seems to hint at an intimate sort of playfulness between them and I decided to investigate that aspect. This is a one-shot complete character analysis. I hope you enjoy it and it doesn't give anyone nightmares. Let me know how you're sleeping...
**squeal!!!!** Ok, now that I'm getting through the initial shock of reading this, I'm realizing it was actually pretty good!!! I'm not really a Minnie/Albus shipper, so it was a little...strange...for me, but I thought the characterization was bang on and I was laughing through the whole thing. (Thats a good thing!!!) Nice job ;)
Summary: As stubborn Lily Evans grows closer to the infamous James Potter, lives are being torn, hearts are being broken. Join them on their unforgettable journey through love and understanding. R&R You'll love it! Not cliche!
OMG THIS STORY IS AMAZING!!!!!!!! One problem tho...ITS NOT YOURS!!! I cannot believe that someone would sink so low as to copy someone else's work. That's just...horrible. I know from experience that plagurism hurts and I would advise you to stop now before the mods find out. Then you'll be in really big trouble...
Summary: New year, new start, new feelings. Has James' newly deflated ego and mature attitude finally won over the heart of Lily Evans? With a mixture of embarrassing situations, falling out of bed, and roaming hands, this year could be an interesting one.
My first fanfic everybody, so any criticism is very welcome! enjoy!
Good first chapter- although I do have a few issues with it. Lily's sudden crush on James was kind of confusing (for lack of a better word) since she is supposed to not like him very much in their fifth year. It also seemed kind of OOc to have her be so embarrassed around him. Anyway, good first chapter. This stiry seems very non-cliche and I am interested to see how it turns out.
Author's Response: Thank you :) Yes, I am very seriously considering re-writing the first few chapters as my writing has changed quite a bit since then and I really am not pleased with them! Thanks for your review.
good chapter. an improvement on the last one, I must say. i like how you go back and forth between the marauders and Lily and her friends. very original
Author's Response: Thank you, I\'m glad you think that :)
very cute! I liked how you had Lily kiss James...not what you usually think of when you read J/L fics
Author's Response: Heh heh thank you. do you not think? I never really thought about it...thanks!
Summary: The story of the tragedy that would change the lives of two young boys forever.
*Note* If you review this, please do not mention the names of any characters. Thanks, I don't want to ruin the surprise for anyone
Ha I totally didn't get it until I read that conversation in HBP. It all makes much more sense now. Great job it was a wonderful story. I thought you did a really good job of concealing who the characters actually were. Very well written. I have to admit that I first thought it was going to be about Albus and Aberforth Dumbledore *blushes and looks at the ground sheepishly* No idea where that thought came from...haha. Anyway, good job! 10/10
Summary: 2009 QSQ Awards Winner for Best Chaptered Canon Romance
Before the chosen one was ever born, his parents had to meet, fall in love, and defy Voldemort three times. Easier said than done. Things were never easy for Harry Potter's parents, but it gets a whole lot harder when Death Eaters kidnap Lily. This is the story of Lily and James, the trials they face, and how James finally wins Lily's heart. (pre-Deathly Hallows)
“I’ll always protect you.”
Oh my god i love this story!! I read it over and over! please update soon; I know it takes a while tho
Author's Response: I actually submitted the chapter to queue a while ago, sometimes the mods are busy. They sent me an e-mail saying it had been accepted, however, so any minute now, really. . . .
Summary: Lily has planned this meeting from the day she and James began dating. First, there would be the greetings between James and her parents. Then, dinner would come. This would be closely followed by a time to just chat and have her parents and boyfriend become acquainted with each other. Everything would be perfect. But this all changes after her sister’s insufferable boyfriend shows up, “Black” magic goes haywire, and her parents don’t return from ‘their honeymoon all over again’ until the next day. Couples battle it out, and it seems no one will make it out in one piece after three arm wrestling matches, a bounding black dog, and an angry exchange. This meeting is certainly not going as planned...
Chapter 7 Updated!!
lol, this story's hillarious! i love it! great job! its one of my faves
Author's Response: Yeah! I\'m glad you like it! Thanks for the review!
Summary: Lily and James Potter were always happy and in love. In a way, they never had to try to make it work. But, going through a rough time, their relationship is pushed to its limits.
Written for the February One-Shot Challenge by Kask of Slytherin.
Winner of the February One-Shot Challenge.
Winner of the 2007 Quicksilver Quill Award for Best Canon Romance.
Thank you everyone :)
i really liked this story! it was great! you did a really good job!
Author's Response: Thanks!
i really liked this story! it was great! you did a really good job!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Summary: Severus Snape is no stranger to regret. It's in his very being. There were so many things he never said. One night, he contemplates the decisions he made, the love he lost and the price he paid for it all.
wow...im speechless. it was wonderful, just like all your other stories. you have an amazing talent...share it with the world
Author's Response: Thank you!
Summary: Ok, so I really really want to apologize to everyone that has read this and wanted more. I just... I got to a point of writer's block, big time... and I got lazy. I'm really really sorry about that. And, I wish I could add to this, but I just... I don't really have other ideas. I'm terrible at writing chapter work. I can never seem to finish it. So, I know it left off awkwardly, but odds are, it's gonna stay that way, at least for a very long while. I'm very sorry. And, heads up, I completely beyond appreciate everyone that has read and reviewed this. I saw the read count being over 22,000 today, and I was just like WOW. I never ever imagined that would happen!!! Anyways, this is pretty much the end of the story indefinitely, at least for now.
Aww! Very cute. I'm so much like Tonks its fightening, really. Lol. Anyway, nice chapter, can't wait for you to update!
Author's Response: Thanks! Is it really that much like her? Cool! The next chapter is in the queue, so...
I have to say-- I love Tonks' style!!!!! The story's not bad either. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you like it!
Summary: It is madness.
It is pain.
It is what we must fight.
The Death Eaters and the heroes. Two different sides of the war, two different points of view.
Let the blood soak through the innocence,
Let the darkness overcome the light. . .
loved it! gave me goosebumps...
Author's Response: thanks!