I am most certainly a bibliophile, and I really do love the Harry Potter world.
Live, love, laugh, and read, darlings.
Hello darling- very interesting and unique, I must say. Not sure why Lily would be thrown into prison for such a small offense, especially being just of age and still in school, and even more especially for three weeks. Promising start though- and the ending was very funny. Keep writing!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I shall.
This is a very powerful piece, you are to be commended. The song has always evoked a very strong sense of emotion in me, and putting it with this story is wonderful.
On a very minor note, perhaps just drawing out the last line a bit more, mentioning a "silence that, as ever, threatened to overwhelm him" or something along those lines would add more finality to the ending.
I liked that you made Lily forgive Snape, as I hadn't thought of that possibility, but the "umbrella" comment seemed a bit too short and simple for me, as I think Lily would've found something to say (being able to read him so well, and being so well-spoken in everything).
Great job, though. Keep writing!
Author's Response: Thanks! I know what you mean about the song - it\'s one of my favorites. And I know what you mean about the umbrella line, I wasn\'t quite sure what to have her say, and I definitely see your point of her saying more. Thank you for the lovely review, and I\'m glad you enjoyed this! =D
Hello--I usually can't tolerate slash fiction because it pairs up characters that aren't homosexual, but this made me laugh out loud. Cheers! Very cute--definitely would work some more basic description in, but very nice job.
Author's Response: Hee, thank you! I actually had more description in the first draft of this, but it felt too lengthy, so I ended up cutting most of it out.