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Amphibious Lizards by Apollonious
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 117]

Summary: They are all talented, some more than others. Some play Quidditch. Others are known for their brilliance in academics. They are the Marauders and a group that has lain in the shadows up to now, called the Lady Firebrands, known for their hot tempers and rather subdued practical jokes.

Romance will bloom.

Rivalries will blossom.

The author will try to stop using so many bad plant puns.

The story of Moony, Wormtail, Padfoot, and Prongs' NEWT years will be told.

These are the Amphibious Lizards.


Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death, Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 70066 Chapters: 24 Completed: No
Published:
12/01/07 Updated: 05/25/12


Reviewer: Allymarieus Signed
Date: 12/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The First Jailbird

Hello darling- very interesting and unique, I must say. Not sure why Lily would be thrown into prison for such a small offense, especially being just of age and still in school, and even more especially for three weeks. Promising start though- and the ending was very funny. Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I shall.

 

Only Her, Always Her by solemnlyswear_x
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 17]

Summary: Past Featured StorySeverus Snape had been brewing potions since he was eleven, and had never found one he hated more than Amortentia.

When Severus finds Amorentia brewing in Slughorn's classroom, he thinks of someone he didn't need a potion to remember.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1408 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/13/07 Updated: 12/16/07


Reviewer: Allymarieus Signed
Date: 12/16/07 Title: Chapter 1: Only Her, Always Her

This is a very powerful piece, you are to be commended. The song has always evoked a very strong sense of emotion in me, and putting it with this story is wonderful.

On a very minor note, perhaps just drawing out the last line a bit more, mentioning a "silence that, as ever, threatened to overwhelm him" or something along those lines would add more finality to the ending.

I liked that you made Lily forgive Snape, as I hadn't thought of that possibility, but the "umbrella" comment seemed a bit too short and simple for me, as I think Lily would've found something to say (being able to read him so well, and being so well-spoken in everything).

Great job, though. Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thanks! I know what you mean about the song - it\'s one of my favorites. And I know what you mean about the umbrella line, I wasn\'t quite sure what to have her say, and I definitely see your point of her saying more. Thank you for the lovely review, and I\'m glad you enjoyed this! =D

 

The Other Weasley by annie
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 43]

Summary: Draco hadn't counted on the other Weasley. Rated for one expletive. Warning: This probably doesn't feature the pairing you're expecting :P

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: Slash

Word count: 983 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/15/08 Updated: 04/15/08


Reviewer: Allymarieus Signed
Date: 04/15/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Other Weasley

Hello--I usually can't tolerate slash fiction because it pairs up characters that aren't homosexual, but this made me laugh out loud. Cheers! Very cute--definitely would work some more basic description in, but very nice job.

Author's Response: Hee, thank you! I actually had more description in the first draft of this, but it felt too lengthy, so I ended up cutting most of it out.

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