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11/13/07




Hi there! I have fourteen stories up, and my favorites are Ripping at the Seams, At the Bus Stop, and Worms for Teeth. Thanks for stopping by!

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Blue Eyes Reflecting by Vindictus Viridian

Rated: Professors • 102 Reviews
Summary: Originally for October Challenge 6: Romance: write a 'ship you don't necessarily support. In his fourth year, Draco discovers that the Malfoy prejudice against Weasleys may have a flaw. Alternate warning: outright lewd.
Draco smiled, the smile that charmed people into doing what he wanted, and opened the door of an unused classroom. Ron showed no signs whatever of cooperation. Draco upgraded the smile to ‘challenging’ and walked in himself, then waited, leaning casually against a desk. It might not work this time, but eventually…

By Vindictus Viridian, Ravenclaw.
Reviewer: Rhi for HP Signed
Date: 02/17/08 Title: Chapter 1: A one-shot

I really liked this, even though the Ron/Draco pairing seems a little odd at first glance. I thought this was well-carried out, but I wanted just a tad more about how Draco fell in love with Ron-- just realizing he liked blue eyes seemed a little random. Otherwise, nice!



In the Eyes of Others by Vindictus Viridian

Rated: Professors • 409 Reviews
Summary: Severus has never seen the appeal of repetition, particularly of things that ended badly the first time. In his life, he has kept one pet, owned one broom, and had one close friend.

Winner of Mod Quicksilver Quill for Best Novel! Thanks, all!

Rating and warnings do not apply to all chapters; I just didn't want anyone hooked and then shocked.
"What is it?" His mother held out her hand, and he put the letter in it wordlessly. "Are you eleven already?"

His father lowered the newspaper to look at the calendar. "Yesterday. ‘Appy birthday." And that was the end of that.

Reviewer: Rhi for HP Signed
Date: 03/07/08 Title: Chapter 2: Soap on the Hogwarts Express

Uggh!!! Whenever I read Marauder era fics from Snape's point of view I always end up so angry at the Marauders. They really can be gits, can't they? I feel so bad for Severus, that he got off on the wrong foot. :( Nice job, though!



Reviewer: Rhi for HP Signed
Date: 03/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Letter

"and the goat gives it a sort of innovative stubbornness I haven't a word for, an ability to endure and thrive where other beasts would fade and fail." Is the word Mr. Ollivander the elder looking for "perserverance"? ;)

This was really excellent! I'm hooked! So excited to see what will transpire in some 46 chapters. I love Snape.

P.S. I was rereading PS today and suddenly came across Harry looking around in Flourish and Blott for the first time, finding a book by a certain...Vindictus Viridian! Ah ha! (Oddly enough, my very foolish first thought was "Why did JKR steal the penname of one of her fans?").



Reviewer: Rhi for HP Signed
Date: 03/08/08 Title: Chapter 4: Getting Along

Just curious...was this written pre-DH?
Random things: Crows are my favourite animals, and Ink...what a great name! Maybe Snape and James will get along better....? *crosses fingers*



Reviewer: Rhi for HP Signed
Date: 03/08/08 Title: Chapter 5: The Black Feather

Oh!!!!! This is so sad with Ink!!!! This is rather strange to read, as I just finished reading A Matter of Malevolence by trinsan, another Snape POV. In AMoM Malfoy tries to be Severus' friend. It's odd now reading this where it's the opposite case. Very well done as usual, though!



Reviewer: Rhi for HP Signed
Date: 03/08/08 Title: Chapter 13: Defensive Moments

Oooh! Yet another incredible chapter. Interesting with the whole Sirius/James thing, as I thought I was the only one who thought that! :) On to the next chapter...Huzzah!



Reviewer: Rhi for HP Signed
Date: 03/08/08 Title: Chapter 18: A Lesson in Memories

Hmm...is Occlumency/Legillimency perhaps a part of the title? *shrugs* Excellent! One question: I'm not a very subtle person, and was wondering: is Sirius with Peter, or am I just imagining that? *shrugs again* On to chapter 19! And I never want it to end....



Reviewer: Rhi for HP Signed
Date: 03/08/08 Title: Chapter 20: Vinegar to Wine

One of the best parts about this story is how well you portray Severus' character. He has his flaws but you show him to be ultimately a good person, which is how I like to believe him to be. :)



Reviewer: Rhi for HP Signed
Date: 03/08/08 Title: Chapter 21: Euphoria

Yay!! Another excellent chapter. I like that Severus and Lily made up. "The Prince's Tale" in DH was far too sad.



Reviewer: Rhi for HP Signed
Date: 03/09/08 Title: Chapter 23: The Slug Club Meets

Haha--very funny at the end with Lily and Severus trying to fool Slughorn. :) I wonder what will happen the next time the Marauders stumble across Severus? Only one way to find out...on to chapter 24! Sad to say, I'm over halfway done...I never want it to end. :(



Reviewer: Rhi for HP Signed
Date: 03/09/08 Title: Chapter 24: In the Tea Leaves

I like that you gave Severus this odd little talent with reading tea leaves. But oh, how sad that he can See Lily's death...



Reviewer: Rhi for HP Signed
Date: 03/09/08 Title: Chapter 24: In the Tea Leaves

I like that you gave Severus this odd little talent with reading tea leaves. But oh, how sad that he can See Lily's death...



Reviewer: Rhi for HP Signed
Date: 03/09/08 Title: Chapter 41: An Office

Arg...far, far too similar to my Chemistry teacher! lol ;)



Reviewer: Rhi for HP Signed
Date: 03/09/08 Title: Chapter 46: Afterward

Oh my goodness....it's over. That is without a doubt the best fanfiction I have ever read. Are you sure you aren't an author in real life, too?
I really liked how you characterised Severus. You made him, through it all, a good--but misunderstood--person. I just looked at the date and found that you wrote this pre-DH--so kudos for figuring out the Lily/Severus relationship. This was very sad and well written and not something I am liable to forget any time soon. Severus in my mind is the tragic hero of HP--a true hero, but his story always ends sadly, and that is that. :( Really, really, really well done. Writing, plot, everything--impeccable. My heart bleeds for poor Severus Snape.



Reviewer: Rhi for HP Signed
Date: 03/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Letter

Now that I'm all done (a day's project, which successfully drew me away from my huge Culminating Project due tomorrow) I get the title. Very clever, that.



Not Another Mary Sue Fic! by Air Elemental

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 102 Reviews
Summary: A Mary Sue Parody fic! Infinity Babe has moved from New York to Hogwarts with her 'oh-so-evil' parents. Can Harry and the gang stop her from warping canon? Not to be taken seriously. Rated PG-13 for a reason. Scriptfic.
Reviewer: Rhi for HP Signed
Date: 01/12/08 Title: Chapter 4: Act Four

Oh, it ends there?!!! I'm ever-so angsty now!! By the way, what is a Mary Sue? Anyway, lol!!! I want to see how Harry's pregnancy goes... and who's the father....lol. :)



Background Secrets by Calaidi

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 167 Reviews
Summary: What if Harry and Draco were really friends behind all the insults and fights with each other? When would it have started and where would it end? Major spoilers for books 3,4,5,6. HPDM, FGL, BZSF, OWOC, poss RWHG, rating may go up
Reviewer: Rhi for HP Signed
Date: 02/01/08 Title: Chapter 4: Part I Chap III: Troubled Waters

*sigh* I love rereading this story. It's probably my favorite fanfic I've ever read..... Harry/Draco is just the best ship ever. :)



Reviewer: Rhi for HP Signed
Date: 01/10/08 Title: Chapter 11: Part II Ch VII: The Other Yule Ball

Awww.... why does it have to end?!!! This is like my favorite fanfic ever. And I have read a lot of fanfiction.



Ariel and The Triwizard Cup by Purplemage

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 255 Reviews
Summary: Get inside Ariel Sachs' head as he tries to survive his last year at Hogwarts. The Triwizard Tournament is going to be hosted once again after twenty-three years and Ariel is going to find himself in the middle of it. He soon learns that in love and war anything goes and that things are not always what they appear. A story of jealousy, gossip, teenage hormones and first love. (Rated for later chapters)

QSQ Award for Best Male OC, Ariel Sachs

QSQ Nomination for best Same-Sex Pairing Fic

I can't thank enough my wonderful beta Lys. Without her this fic wouldn't be posible.
Reviewer: Rhi for HP Signed
Date: 02/25/08 Title: Chapter 14: On a Night like this...

Oh wow, I just reread this whole thing, and it was amazing all over again!!! It's simply delightful. It's smart, it's funny, it's sad...it's prefect! :)



Reviewer: Rhi for HP Signed
Date: 02/08/08 Title: Chapter 14: On a Night like this...

YESS!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG, I love this so much!!!!!!!!!! I would write this in all caps to show my feelings, but that might look like a little much. Anyway, this is my fav story ever, going right to the Favorites!!! I love this so much. This has everything: Romance, drama, and a Tri--or is it Tetra?--Wizard Tournament! Ariel is the best character ever--I love him!--, and I'm glad he finally finds love. I love what you did with adding Karakum to the competition, too-- it worked in seamlessly. PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!! This was so amazing, I'm dying for more!!!