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Harry Potter and the Knights of the White Dragon by Sarakiel

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 176 Reviews
Summary: After the fall of Voldemort, an ancient nemesis rears his head against the magical world. This time Harry is not the center of any prophecy, but can he prevent it anyway? Can a battle weary Harry Potter stand up to someone who even Voldemort feared?




Chapter 24 is in the queue
Reviewer: lalachoa Signed
Date: 03/01/08 Title: Chapter 23: King's Gambit

Love the plot! Resurrecting Grindewald is a stroke of genius. Good writing! But what about the others? No power at all? Maybe a little symmetry as with the hogwarts founders. So, Hermione and Ginny should be more than just eye-candy. Will dumbledore be helping?

Author's Response: lol...you have no idea. i\'m barely halfway through here...patience...



To Find the Truth by hopelesslyhopeful

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 247 Reviews
Summary: Harry and Ginny have led a happy life together that now includes their four children. But when Lily discovers a new 'talent' and old enemies combine with new, can the children of Order members and their parents unite and prevail?




To Rekindle the Flame sequel, although it's not necessary for you to read that story first to understand
Reviewer: lalachoa Signed
Date: 12/19/07 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Let Me Tell a Story

Good plot lines. Except for a couple of kids, i.e. potter kids, the other cousins' characters aren't really developed. Even the friends don't get much description or mention throughout the story. Too many names as fillers.

Author's Response: I did debate on diving into each cousin\'s character more but Lily is the central focus and she\'s being quite internal at the moment. That will change as the story continues...but thanks for the constructive review, I appreciate it.



Meeting the Past by Alluria

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 18 Reviews
Summary: Albus Severus Potter is sent to the Headmaster's office, and while he waits, he has an interesting conversation with the portrait of Severus Snape.
Reviewer: lalachoa Signed
Date: 11/22/07 Title: Chapter 1: Meeting the Past

It is very sweet to provide some praise for Snape after all the second-guessing of his loyalties. Snape is the unsung hero in this series.