Love the plot! Resurrecting Grindewald is a stroke of genius. Good writing! But what about the others? No power at all? Maybe a little symmetry as with the hogwarts founders. So, Hermione and Ginny should be more than just eye-candy. Will dumbledore be helping?
Author's Response: lol...you have no idea. i\'m barely halfway through here...patience...
Good plot lines. Except for a couple of kids, i.e. potter kids, the other cousins' characters aren't really developed. Even the friends don't get much description or mention throughout the story. Too many names as fillers.
Author's Response: I did debate on diving into each cousin\'s character more but Lily is the central focus and she\'s being quite internal at the moment. That will change as the story continues...but thanks for the constructive review, I appreciate it.
It is very sweet to provide some praise for Snape after all the second-guessing of his loyalties. Snape is the unsung hero in this series.