wow that was amazing, it really touched me. I loved the writing style and it flowed easily from one event to the other, a great fic!!
This is interesting, i love the style though it is rather unnerving thinking of Harry in this light. It shows a lot though and it really kept me hooked, there was a lot of meaning hidden between the lines and i really liked it...
Author's Response: glad i could get everything across :)
I like the writing and the plot is great, it really shows Hermione in a new light. I would still think she would recieve owls and keep in touch with her friends, i doubt they wouldnt keep in touch. Aside from that its a great start i hope you continue
this is an extreemly well written story. I love the way you have portrayed Harry...unlike many fanfics it is much more believable. I hope you update soon...its a reasonable simple story line but you have written it in such a way i cant wait to see what comes next!