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Real name: Englebert Humperdink
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"The thing about growing up with Fred and George, is that you sort of start thinking anything's possible if you've got enough nerve."

Hello! I'm Padfoot, or PnP if you're in a rush. I like Harry Potter. I write fanfiction. I read fanfiction. You read fanfiction. Read my fanfiction.

The website above is my friend Orii's. I've got a few poems up on there-- feel free to check them out :D

Random info for stalkerish stalkers:

Hogwarts House- Gryffindor

Fav. HP Book- Sorcerer's Stone

Fav. HP Characters- Sirius, the Marauders (which includes Sirius, of course, but he's my favorite so he gets special recognition), the Weasleys, Luna, Neville, Tonks, Hagrid, the Trio, and Lily. Funny how a bunch of my favorites end up dead, isn't it?

Fav. Ships- Harry/Ginny, Ron/Hermione, James/Lily, Remus/Tonks, Neville/Luna

Fav. HP Movie- Sorcerer's Stone (gotta love consistency), Goblet of Fire

Fav. Fan Fic Authors- Schmerg_The_Impaler, Pussycat123, MagEd

Fav. Authors- J.K. Rowling, Harper Lee, Cornelia Funke, David Lubar, Ellen Raskin, Sarah Dessen, and many more

Stories:

A Weasley Christmas- first fic ever. Based off 'Twas the night before Christmas', only with a bunch of the lines changed so it pertains to Harry Potter.

A Letter For Fred- another poem. Rather sweet, from George to the recently-deceased Fred. I'm quite happy with how this one turned out.

The Trouble With Being Trusted- My very first Gauntlet, where a I wrote as Tonks. Includes younger versions of older characters, and the protaganist escaping death many times.

Who Killed the King?- My murder mystery WIP. I'm finally working on some more chapters, so hopefully they'll be up soon!

The Marauding Roses of Gryffindor- joint fic between me in a couple Gryffs. It was set up and put together by Michelle. And although I didn't win the date with Sirius, I got Remus instead, which is pretty awesome.

When Love Prevails- my second Gauntlet, co-written by the fabulous Brittany. Probably the weirdest James/Lily story you'll ever find. I wrote the wacky Lily ^_^

I hope to have more up soon, but feel free to drop a review for any of those!

My favorite HP quote of all time is as follows:

"--but you get these massive pus-filled boils too," said George, "and we haven't worked out how to get rid of them yet."
"I can't see any boils," said Ron, staring at the twins.
"No, well, you wouldn't," said Fred, "they're not in a place we generally display to the public --"
"-- but they make sitting on a broom a right pain in the --"

Yes, I have barely any emotional depth. Why do you ask?

Other favorite Quotes:

"You know, Minister, I disagree with Dumbledore on many counts...but you cannot deny he's got style..." (I liked it better when Kingsley said it in the movie. That was hilarious!)

"NOT MY DAUGHTER, YOU BITCH!"

"I'll join you when hell freezes over."

"Hello, Minister!" bellowed Percy, sending a neat jinx straight at Thicknesse, who dropped his wand and clawed at the front of his robes, apparently in awful discomfort. "Did I mention I'm resigning?"

“Do not pity the dead, Harry. Pity the living, and, above all, those who live without love. By returning, you may ensure that fewer souls are maimed, fewer families are torn apart. If that seems to you a worthy goal, then we say good-bye for the present.”

"If you want to know what a man's like, take a good look at how he treats his inferiors, not his equals."

"Keep muttering and I will be a murderer!"

Oh, and don't forget Elvendork! It's unisex!

"And, quite honestly, I've had enough trouble for a lifetime"
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Summary: This is book two in the "Potter's Pentagon" trilogy. Read "Potter's Pentagon: The Five" first, myesss? Cool.

WARNING: This story contains French people, an internal monologue about a blue orange, adolescent facial hair, good old-fashioned snogging, superstitious truck drivers, a portrait who calls everyone "Mavis," a zoo break-in, some very strange clothes, romantic conflict galore, and Ron Weasley's caffeine addiction. And worst of all, Professor Zabini!

Hogwarts is hosting the Triwizard Tournament, and when one of the members of Potter's Pentagon is selected to represent the school, much excitement ensues. Simultaneously, elections are being held for Minister of Magic, and things are getting busy at the Ministry.

Not to mention the fact that Jordan's made a new Muggle friend without informing her of the itty-bitty fact that he's magical, Haley has found an enchanted diary of dubious origin, Ted's met a werewolf from Beauxbatons, and Emma... well, Emma's not having a good year.

And what exactly is Ivy up to, anyway?

Everyone has secrets. But in the end, the truth will have to come out.


Starring Best Male Original Character runner-up Jordan Potter, Best Female Original Character Nominees Ivy Potter, Emma Weasley, Haley Potter, and Giorgi Anderson, and Best Male Original Character nominee Ted Lupin! Nominated for Best Post-Hogwarts story in the 2008 Quicksilver Quill Awards!

Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 76214 Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/16/07 Updated: 06/04/08


Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves Signed
Date: 05/22/08 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: In Which Pigs Fly And Emma Hugs Tyrone

Oh, darn. I'm so disappointed... you should really stop the false advertising...

Sure, Emma hugs Tyrone, but not one stinking pig flew! It didn't even get airborne! The outrage! The scandal! The...

Oh gosh (now I sound like David Archuleta), Jordan is amazing. And this line:

“I don’t know. It doesn’t exist.”

It sounds like something I'd say ^_^

All the characters were pretty awesome in this chapter. I'm sad to admit I don't really remember the hair ribbon thing, but as long as you won't eat me, I guess it'll be okay. What'd Marina say to Arden, anyways?

Harry smiled. “That’s impressive. Teamwork. I’d give a long and very dull speech about it, but I have to go and sort out this insane mess.”

Dad is so cool, thought Jordan.


Aw, Jordy loves his daddy!

Apple was kinda creepy. He didn't talk that much, but if he fought them or something, it would have been a total repeat of the last book. Not that I mind, but...

The Emma/Tyrone was adorable (practising for a play... *snort*... will they be singing 'Get that thing back where it came from or so help me'?), Marina was irritating (I'm biased), Haley was awesome-possum, Ted was cute (even though he had little time, but that's okay), Vlady was cool, Ivy was sweet (who else would work so tiredlessly for their boyfriend?), Arden was neat (I'm running out of adjectives and she truly was), and Giorgi was surprising in that she had no friends- I'd be friends with her! And I've already mentioned Jordan.

That was a runon. And I think I've violated the number of parentheses you're allowed to use in a sentence.

All in all, it was so hot, it could sing the phone book! I'm sad there's only one chapter left; In Which The Last Chapter is Posted, but then we get Potter's Pentagon: The Next (Book Three). Yes, be glad I'm not writing your story...
~PnP

Author's Response: PIGS DID FLY. Remember? Tancred Apple made pigs fly when he was doing his little whacko works of magic. Yeps. See, I wouldn\'t lie to you. I don\'t know what Marina said to Arden because I don\'t speak French. (I love these little plot devices I can use to get out of answering questions.) Hahahaha, you got the Monsters, Inc reference! You just won, my friend. As for the parentheses... join my club! I\'ve been REJECTED for using too many parentheses before! And you know what, you SHOULD write my story. That\'d be hilarious. My friend made up the weirdest plotline for a third book involving an evil barbershop quartet putting the Imperius charm on Ted and making Ron\'s hair never stop growing. Yes, my friends are odd.

 
Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves Signed
Date: 06/04/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: That Romance Chapter

*gasp* It's over.

Yaay! Percy's Minister again. And Vlad has an editorial... how cool!

Nitpick- Hospital Wing should be capitalized.

I love the Jordan transformation- it really brings out his character into a better light. After all, he isn't as 'awkward, unsociable, and irritable as he used to be.' You're very good at gradually aging your characters, by the way- they all seem to mature at their own pace and in their own way.

Jordan's happy! :O That's a first. I have a new found adoration for him. I have a feeling I'll like him even more in the next book...

You make Harry sound more like a kid than the ultra-serious guy most authors portray him as. I like your characterization- it seems more likely he would act this way around his kids, then all serious and commanding and stuff (after all, as you said in the previous paragraphs, he's not his son ^_^)

Just like Jordan, Haley's character shines through really well too. She is very trusting, and sort of like her mother in that way.

'Nother nitpick- when Harry says "...if you can’t see where they keep your brains?" Since Lee's not keeping Haley's brains anywhere, this part doesn't really make sense.

*gasp* Lee is Lily! Never mind that I already knew that from the other story... but it was a very nice way to reveal it.

I don't get what Ted means when he says "There wolf, there castle." Is he pretending to be a cave man or something?

*gak* Hagrid died before he got married? YOU CRUEL, CRUEL WOMAN, YOU!

“Care too much about how other people treat us and not enough about how we treat other people sometimes.” Is an awesome line. I love it! It's one of the best lines of the story.

And I love the wizarding Gieco reference! Do they use a gecco, or something else?

And I absolutely positively adore the paragraphs from “Do you, you know, uh, wanna rehearse for our play again?” (awesome fluffiness!) to 'Once again, Tyrone whistled through his teeth, though for an entirely different reason this time.'

Jordan got a hug! And you didn't invite me???

The last bit is totally... wonderful, amazing writing. It's not fancy or anything, but it's very true and describes the story perfectly. You always sum things up nicely- this was a marvelous end to The Truth. I'll miss these characters (even Tyrone!) during the posting waits, but Pride and Prejuiced Plums will keep me alive.

I can't possibly pick a favorite anymore- they're all so wonderful and unique in their own right. Least favorite... I don't have any, either, because we can't pick Marina ^_^ And I think picking Charybdis Nott would also be cheating. I relate to all of them, especially since they're all so real and believeable.

No matter how well you sum things up, I naturally have more questions. Will the foreign students be in the next book? Will Ron's past have to do with him killing Snape and all the other dudes? Do we meet Anatoly because of the Inter-House Unity project? Who dies- and when? (No, I don't think you'll answer this one, but I thought I'd slide it in.) Will I be sad when whoever dies? Do Haley and Jordy get boy/girlfriends? Will I ever shut up? (The answer is no.)

Well, it's sad to say goodbye for now, but seeing as the story's come to end, it's quite the necessity. I'm quite anxious to read The Past, but will obviously have to wait. (I don't think now's the best time to start shouting, 'Update soon!')

To sum up this extraordinarily long review, this book was amazing, funny, romantic, and a wonderful read.

~PnP

PS- One more question! (listens to groans) This is a safe-to-answer, non-rhetorical one. Do you have the whole family tree sketched out for the Weasleys/Potters? I was wondering.

Author's Response: Are you a beta? You\'re really good at noticing these little mistakes. Thanks for pointing them out! I probably won\'t edit them, because I\'m lazy, but I appreciate it.

\r\nI think Harry should be rather wise, just because of all he\'s been through, but he\'s still human-- he\'s not, like, Mufasa from the Lion King or anything. Actually, Harry in these stories is a lot more like a slightly idealized version of my own dad... I don\'t really have such a clear image of a grown-up Ginny, so she\'s not really in these stories much. Oh, by the way, I edited out the bit in Pride and Prejuiced Plums where it said Lee was Lily! After the first two reviews, I went \"... whoops,\" and changed it. I\'m a sneaky litle devil.

\r\nWhen Ted said, \"There wolf... there castle...\" It\'s a reference to the infamous movie (and now a Broadway musical!), \"Young Frankenstein.\" At one point, a werewolf howls, and Frankenstein goes, \"WEREWOLF?!?\" and Igor points and says, \"There-wolf. There castle.\" It\'s one of my favourite quotes, and I had to use it. Such a cheesy pun on were/where.

\r\nI\'m such a fluffy, cheesy person... I think you can best describe my stories as being the junk food of MNFF. No real substance, and not especially good for you, but fun and addicting?

\r\nArden and Marina will briefly appear in \"The Past,\" toward the end, but sadly, Vladislav does not appear in person. We do see Giorgi a lot, though. Ron\'s past does have to do with killing Snapers, and we do meet Ani because of the Inter-House Unity Project. You are a gooood guesser. And the person who dies kicks the bucket in Chapter 23 (at least, right now-- I may edit it later and change where it happens). So it\'ll be quite some time before the person dies. As for Haley and Jordy, well, I\'m zippin\' my lips!

\r\nI do have the family tree sketched out! I think I\'ll post it on my art thread on the forums, since it might be helpful.

 
Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves Signed
Date: 11/21/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: In Which Deja Vu Appears In The Form Of A Diary Of Dubious Origin

yahyahyahyahyah i alreadyyy reviewed... but i feel like doing it again so i will!!!!! i can just SEE emma causing opposite~of~heaven for mister apple if he took his elections to hogwarts *imagines emma sending wild turkeys after his pretty self*... yah i dont like apple! I also think Tyrone's um... "mustache" is annoying... WHY boys think those things are attractive... and i have a question about lee, and i dont think it would hurt to answer *nudges*... was he someone JK Rowling mentioned in the books or is he just a figment of your imagination?
Waiting for chappie three and LOVING CAPS LOCK TOO!!!!!,
Padfoot
PS Happy Thanksgiving to everybuddy even though it's tommorrow! and do only Americans celebrate turley day? yes im incredibly dumb, but the other reviewers are saying it to only americans (like moi) and nobuddy else... hmm... *scratches fake beard and then rips it off cuz like Robbie's mustache in HM its itchy*...

Author's Response: HAHAHAHAHAHA... Emma would indeed. Though I don\'t know what kind of crazy person would allow Emma to have access to wild turkeys!

Tyrone is pretty, mustache or not. But I think his mustache would probably be a lot prettier than most other teenaged guys, because he\'s TYRONE.

Can\'t answer your question, mwahahahaha. Sorry!

I don\'t know for sure if only Americans celebrate Thanksgiving... I thought they did, but I also know the German word for Thanksgiving is Erntedankfest, so I don\'t know if they have a different Thanksgiving, or if other countries celebrate it as well. I just know that Thanksgiving was established by the pilgrims in Massachusetts... *shrug*

 
Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves Signed
Date: 12/01/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: In Which The Champions Stood; The Rest Saw Their Better

(GASP) It's Emma? Really? Wow, I didn't expect it to be her. I thought it would be Haley
(since she said she couldn't do it), or Ivy (because she didn't want to). I knew it wouldn't be Jordan, since you really do love giving him a hard time ;). I feel very bad for him, though! Even if he is a stuck-up prat who wouldn't appreciate my sympathy. Bit like Theo Nott, I suppose.


Hmm, I can't wait to see what Arden turns out to be like... she'll probably make Ivy jealous. I wonder who'll win the Tournament! I hope it's Emma, of course, but you're very unpreditcable...


This was a great chapter! I look forward to the next one, and hope it gets validated faster. ^_^ Sorry if I'm being pushy, but I hate the wait! I read really fast and it annoys me when I can't just pour through it.


Buh-byes,
Padfoot
PS- You killed Lee Jordan??!!??!! How could you!!! First it was Hagrid, now Lee... they both have cool hair and have good lines! The shame! Oh, pygmy puffs, now I'm getting all overdramatic. hee hee. Ahem. Sorry.

Author's Response: I had to make it Emma because everyone else has their own plotline for this story. ^_^ Plain \'n\' simple!

Yeah, Arden... I actually don\'t like her much, but that\'s because she\'s the kind of person I don\'t like in real life. You\'ll see a LOT of her in next chapter. I hope it\'s validated faster, too!

Sorry about killing Lee Jordan... I do that kind of thing. I killed Viktor Krum, too. And Snape and Fenrir and Lucius. And I got Draco\'s soul sucked out. And I let Wormtail live. WHY AM I SO HORRIBLE???


Author's Response: On the bright side, I let Remus, Tonks, and Fred live?

 
Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves Signed
Date: 02/01/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: In Which Tyrone Does NOT Enjoy Brief Insanity

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I was right! I knew Emma wouldn't win this task! But the Emma/Tyrone and Marina/Haley pix-up was very... unexpected.

I feel terrible for Tyrone, but I'm glad Emma shouted at him. Nasty boy deserves it for hurting Emma's feelings. I thought they were going to, like, get together or something, because of this line:

They didn’t let go of each other’s hands until they reached the Great Hall.

But then I thought that you would get sick if you wrote all that romance.

Very creative task, I like all the Higgenbottom business. The Mavis part was absolutely insane- but that's all right, it's normal anyways ;)

Yaay! Ted and Arden are friends again! I hope she gets more friends soon...

I adore your characterization of Ron. You make him cuddly and lovable, and... Ron-ish. He would feel old if he was forty.

Love the pigtails reference, by the way. Does that have any tie to the real world?

Oh, and is our pal Giorgi coming back soon?

~Padfoot (the avid Emma/Tyrone shippa...)

Author's Response: First review for the chapter!!!! YAAAY!

People tend to be very right about these things, don\'t they? None of my real life friends predicted anything correctly, and everyone on the internet is getting everything right.

Awww, I don\'t think Tyrone meant to hurt Emma\'s feelings, do you? But then, I tend to be a lot more lenient toward Tyrone because he\'s so darn attractive. ^_^

I probably would get sick if I wrote all that romance. The third volume in this trilogy is VERY VERY VERY full of romance, and I practically had to force myself at gunpoint to write it. I didn\'t realize when I started out the trilogy that making people vaguely like each other would have to play out in some kind of way!

I had TOOO MUUCH fun with the task.^_^ You could tell, couldn\'t you!

I\'m very, very glad that you like my version of Ron, because Ron is my absolute favourite canon character, and I always worry that I\'m not doing him justice! I wuv that man. He plays a bigger role in the third book of the trilogy.

The pigtail thing DOES INDEED tie into the real world! I tend to put my hair in pigtails when I\'m in a fierce mood... some people have picked up on that!

You will definitely see more of Giorgi... and you\'ll see her in person in just a few short chapters!

 
Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves Signed
Date: 03/08/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: In Which We Finally Learn Exactly What's Up

I have a question! It actually pertains to the story, so I'll ask it here.

Is Arden's name partially from the word 'ardent'? It means 'passionate' and 'devoted' so it kinda reminds me of her feelings for Ted. If that's nothing revelant, well, I made it tie in ^_^

(coincidentally, I read the other review, and was rather shocked to find that Haley likes Ted. I always saw her as too hyper for him, myesss. Ah, well.)

I'm very eager for chapter ten's arrival- the suspense is killing me! Slowly... slowly...

Good luck with submitting when the queue reopens!
~Padfoot

Author's Response: Ooh, okay! Arden\'s name wasn\'t intended to sound like the word \'ardent\' (though I was watching Pride and Prejudice when I came up with a lot of the character names, and Darcy\'s always like \"I love you... most ARRRDENTLY\"). I actually picked her name because it means \'forest,\' and her last name means \'from the wood.\' (I think. I don\'t speak French.) I wanted to give her nature-ish names to show how much a part of her being a werewolf is... how it affects her more than it does Ted. I\'m always a little bit overzealous like that when it comes to naming.

You\'re right about Haley, and I think that if she actually dated Ted, she\'d break up with him pretty soon. But she\'s always fancied him. You have to remember that Haley, Jordan, Ted, and Emma all grew up together, and Ivy didn\'t come into the picture until they all went to Hogwarts. When she was little, Haley was probably at that stage where she was like, \"TED, LET\'S GET MARRIED!\" (I myself was proposed to twice in kindergarten, once with a green pipe cleaner ring. ^_^)

And when you\'re a teenager, there\'s kind of a special relationship that you have with people of the opposite gender that you\'ve known since you were little. Plus, I think Ted is to some extent the only person who really takes Haley seriously-- he\'s someone who treats everyone like they\'re important, and she likes that... oh yeah, and he saved Haley\'s life in fourth year.

I think if you reread the first and second books, Ted and Haley have an interesting dynamic... it\'s the kind of crush where Haley doesn\'t really want anything to COME of it-- she doesn\'t want to date him, she just fancies him. I think a lot of this happened because at the time of writing this stories, two of my best friends and I all had crushes on the same rather dorky boy-- I always liked the idea of an unassuming person getting ridiculous amounts of female attention.

I was kind of the Haley of the group, and I really wanted the Ivy of the group to go out with him even though I liked him too, and the Arden of the group was really jealous and weepy and despondent about it. And... I didn\'t really realize this until now, that there is a really heavy resemblance to my own life. Wow, thanks for making me realize this, hehe...

 
Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves Signed
Date: 01/16/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: That Romance Chapter

I'm sorry. I didn't like this chapter.

I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND IF I COULD MAKE THIS FONT BIGGER I WOULD!!!!!

And I love you for writing it!

The Ted/Ivy was amazingly written. I love how Zabini, of all people, walked in on them.

If he thought she was so special, why did he spend so much spare time with Arden.

You might wanna use a question mark instead.

The dress fit perfectly, and she didn’t look the least bit silly—she really did look nice.

I love how you can make Ivy sound beautiful without making it Mary-Sueish or cliched or wayyy too mushy. That's talent right there.

A petite girl with dark, curly hair and deep blue robes matching her eyes, was running away down the hall, sobbing quietly to herself.

That momentarily crushed my Ted/Ivy happiness. I do like Arden; she's sort of like a female Remus. But I'm glad you were nice to Ivy.

However, you weren't nice to Emma. But that would have been boring if she went with Tyrone. I KNEW he'd go with Marina! I hate her, stealing Emma's man.

I love Lee. I have no idea who he is and whatnot, but he's totally awesome. If only he were real, he could be Haley's boyfriend *goes off to crazy daydreamland*

And Jordan, well... he's still a git. There wasn't much of him in this chapter (hilarious having him as Emma's date, by the way), and I hope there's more of his wonderfulness soon. He reminds me of Simon from AI except just a tad nicer ^_^

This chapter was spectacular, defeinetly (I can't spell that word to save my life)- one of my favorites so far because I'm sentimental like that. I would have expected a little more anger from Emma when she found out about Tyrone's date, but it wasn't too bad since it would have taken away from the Ted/Ivy that so prominent in this chapter. I also noticed that this is the first chappie that doesn't have "In which..." in its title.

I hope the next chapter is up uber soon! And since this review was rather serious (for me), I will take this time to say SQUUUUUUUUUUUUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*cough* Thank you.

By the way, did I mention that WE WON THE FOOTBALL MATCH BY A TRULY MASSIVE MARGIN?
Cheers,
Padfoot ;)


Author's Response: HAHAHAHA, THANK YOU! I got so worried when you said you didn\'t like it!

I\'m glad you thought Ivy\'s \"makeover\" wasn\'t sentimental and Mary-Sue-ish, because I was worried. Ivy is no Marina, she\'s an average girl, and I was hoping it didn\'t sound cheesy.

I haaad to do the Arden sadness... after all, I wanted Ted to have to realize that sometimes, he has to just go ahead and do what he wants, that you can\'t always just do everything to make everyone happy because in the end, someone is still not going to be satisfied. Ted\'s never had to deal with romance before, and it\'s tough!

Sorry about Emma! But too much happy romance in a chapter makes a Schmergo vomit.

Yeah, I know Emma didn\'t seem that angry,but I actually do have a reason for that. Emma can\'t show as much anger as she usually does, because she doesn\'t want to show that she likes Tyrone. She won\'t even admit it to herself, so she can hardly stomp around ranting about it all the time. Poor, crazy, mixed-up Emma.

 
Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves Signed
Date: 12/08/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: In Which Ted Continues To Be Adorable


SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's up!!!!! Yaay!!! *Cough* No, i'm not obsessed... why do you ask?


Ted's sooooooooooo adorable! i love how he's so nice and friendly to Arden- she seems rather intriging even if she is a bit annoying.


Charybdis (that just spells villian) is such a Malfoylike character. I hope somebuddy knocks her lights out... I'm so kind, aren't I?


I like how Lee is nice to Haley, but I'm afraid he's evil and is gonna try to kill her or something. But you like her so much, her life probably isn't in any danger.


What's with Ivy? I know you won't tell me, but at least give a hint! Puleezzz? ? ??? But i thin somebuddy's gonna get angry when they find out about Arden!


Poor Jordy... he's just sinking faster in the sand! I hope he cracks soon. I like how you put the HP books into the story. I wrote a story (its not up on MNFF) about a girl who liked the HP books and then found out they were real... but I'm getting off topic...


Can't wait for the next chappie!


~Padfoot

Author's Response: HAHAHAHAHA, thanks! I\'m glad you\'re as excited as I am! I kinda wish Ted was real. Okay, and everyone else, \'cept Charybdis.

Charybdis is given more... depth in the third book, so in this book she gets to be two dimensional nasty girl who is trying very hard to fill Ophidias Malfoy\'s place. She makes my teeth itch. ^_^

My hint about Ivy is that what she is doing is not illegal at all. Not much of a hint, but I\'m evil.

Gotta feel bad for Jordy. (I love calling him that.) But you\'ve got to feel bad for Giorgi, too, because she\'s got no idea what\'s going on!

 
Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves Signed
Date: 12/08/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: In Which Ted Continues To Be Adorable


SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's up!!!!! Yaay!!! *Cough* No, i'm not obsessed... why do you ask?


Ted's sooooooooooo adorable! i love how he's so nice and friendly to Arden- she seems rather intriging even if she is a bit annoying.


Charybdis (that just spells villian) is such a Malfoylike character. I hope somebuddy knocks her lights out... I'm so kind, aren't I?


I like how Lee is nice to Haley, but I'm afraid he's evil and is gonna try to kill her or something. But you like her so much, her life probably isn't in any danger.


What's with Ivy? I know you won't tell me, but at least give a hint! Puleezzz? ? ??? But i thin somebuddy's gonna get angry when they find out about Arden!


Poor Jordy... he's just sinking faster in the sand! I hope he cracks soon. I like how you put the HP books into the story. I wrote a story (its not up on MNFF) about a girl who liked the HP books and then found out they were real... but I'm getting off topic...


Can't wait for the next chappie!


~Padfoot

Author's Response: I think you might like next chapter....

 
Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves Signed
Date: 12/18/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: In Which Emma Enjoys Mild Insanity

SQUEE!!! THE CHAPPIE'S UP!!!

Wow, most of my reviews had begun with 'squee'. Wait, this is only the second. Never mind!

NNOOOO!!! Emma didn't coem in first! Lemme guess, she's gonna be in like second in the first two and then win... and her cousin turns out to be evil and tries to killl her... and I'm getting carried away.....

Wait, what was the 'weird part that would make sense later'? I missed that. I think I'll have to re-read, but I am one who is rather unitelligent when it comes to details.

Hermione's in lurveeeeeeeeee!!! lol just kidding!!! Apple's really annoying. Emma should make a joke about him- stick something obscene in the middle of Tancred.... and an apple?

I feel bad for Ivy! But it's her own fault, not paying attentino to her friends. I wonder what studying she's doing? Maybe she's, um, I can't guess! And noffense, but the hint you gave me was rather un-hinty. But that's ok! I don't wanna be spoiled.

HALEY AS AN ACTRESS? THAT IS TOO AWESOME! I look forward to see what jobs the others what... perhaps Tyrone wants to be a guy model? Or start that band with Jordy? Heehee, I'm having mental images of 'Jordy and the Tyroonies' or 'Tyroonie and the Jordies' 'cuz Tyrone would want his name first ^_^

Great chappie! Can't wait for the next one!
~Padfoot



Author's Response: Hahahaha, SQUEEE is my favourite word for starting off reviews. Don\'t apologize!

Interesting theories you\'ve got there...

The weird part that made sense later was when Emma went insane due to the Fwooper. You probably had no idea why I put all that weird randomness.

*Smashes Apple with a brick*

I feel really bad for Ivy, too, but she has some rather awesome things in store. You know, that hint was really, really un-hinty. I was trying to be JK Rowling-ish! ^_^

Well, you will see in the next chapter what jobs people want, but I LOVE the idea of a band called \"Tyroonie and the Jordies.\" Ha, Tyrone WOULD want his name first. Why don\'t you just write this story for me, seriously? I love your ideas.

 
Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves Signed
Date: 12/18/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: In Which Emma Enjoys Mild Insanity

SQUEE!!! THE CHAPPIE'S UP!!!

Wow, most of my reviews had begun with 'squee'. Wait, this is only the second. Never mind!

NNOOOO!!! Emma didn't coem in first! Lemme guess, she's gonna be in like second in the first two and then win... and her cousin turns out to be evil and tries to killl her... and I'm getting carried away.....

Wait, what was the 'weird part that would make sense later'? I missed that. I think I'll have to re-read, but I am one who is rather unitelligent when it comes to details.

Hermione's in lurveeeeeeeeee!!! lol just kidding!!! Apple's really annoying. Emma should make a joke about him- stick something obscene in the middle of Tancred.... and an apple?

I feel bad for Ivy! But it's her own fault, not paying attentino to her friends. I wonder what studying she's doing? Maybe she's, um, I can't guess! And noffense, but the hint you gave me was rather un-hinty. But that's ok! I don't wanna be spoiled.

HALEY AS AN ACTRESS? THAT IS TOO AWESOME! I look forward to see what jobs the others what... perhaps Tyrone wants to be a guy model? Or start that band with Jordy? Heehee, I'm having mental images of 'Jordy and the Tyroonies' or 'Tyroonie and the Jordies' 'cuz Tyrone would want his name first ^_^

Great chappie! Can't wait for the next one!
~Padfoot



Author's Response: I really, really have to do something about this deja vu of mine.

 
Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves Signed
Date: 12/21/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: In Which Emma Enjoys Mild Insanity

Padfoot is posting again to say-
MERRY CHRISTMAS, SCHMERGO!
And to the respected members of Potter's Pentagon, of course.

And so this isn't spammy or hammy or jukebox jammy (I just had to include that again somewhere), this was a fabulous chappie and I hope the next one is updated TODAY so we can read it before the queue closes! Wishful thinking, I know.

Don't get drunk off eggnog, kids! I don't think you can, but still...

And, as me and my friends like to say... four more days till a fat guy breaks into my house and eats all the cookies!

Buh byes, Padfoot >.

Author's Response: The queue is already closed, but the mods are still validating stories that were submitted before it closed. YAY!

Merry Christmas to you, too! I\'ll have to remember that hilarious last sentence of yours and SHAMELESSLY STEAL IT, I mean, use it.

Winky probably can and does get drunk off of eggnog.

 

Meeting the Past by Alluria
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 17]

Summary: Albus Severus Potter is sent to the Headmaster's office, and while he waits, he has an interesting conversation with the portrait of Severus Snape.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 876 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/18/07 Updated: 11/19/07


Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves Signed
Date: 11/19/07 Title: Chapter 1: Meeting the Past

very cute... i would have liked it a little longer, but very sweet anyways!

 

Summary: Winner of the 2008 QSQ for the Best Female Original Character. Shiloh Sander’s second year begins peacefully, but it is a peace that is easily shattered when words of blood appear on Hogwarts’ ancient walls. With rumours of the Heir of Slytherin floating through the halls, battlelines are drawn in the Slytherin common room, between those who will support the Heir and those who will not. Soon Shiloh must decide where she stands. But the choice is only the beginning. In the middle of it all, Severus Snape continues his diligent search to find the daughter he lost, never knowing that this is the year it will come to an end. One girl’s choice. One man’s deepest wish. One year that will change both their lives…forever.






Sequel to Once There Was A Darkness: Year One. Warnings of Abuse and Mental Disorders are for brief mentions of child abuse and insanity.




Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Alternate Universe, Character Death, Mental Disorders, Mild Profanity, Violence

Word count: 232013 Chapters: 32 Completed: No
Published:
11/19/07 Updated: 08/13/11


Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves Signed
Date: 12/16/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three: Exploding Snap

Wow! That was written really well. It's really interesting to see Draoc portrayed from Shiloh's point of view instead of Harry's. Will there be more of Harry& Co. in this book?

Wonderful chappie- can't wait for the next one!

~Padfoot

Author's Response: Yes, it was fun to finally have a Shiloh/Draco moment. I knew I had to have a scene like this for a while and it was incredibly fun to finally get to write it. Besides, giving everything a different point of view is one my reasons to be writing this. To answer your questions, there will probably be as much as Harry&Co. as there was in the last book. Thanks for reading and reviewing. ~Chante\'

 
Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves Signed
Date: 01/29/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five: Ribbit!

Millicent was currently befriending a practically huge frog that looked close enough in resemblance to be Millicent's sister.
HAHAHA! That was the best line.

Love the chapter, deary. Great details, great plot- great everything! I loved how you added the bit about Theo Nott. He's one of the lesser characters and I'm glad someone remembered him.

Can't wait for chapter six! (Wow, we're on five already)
~Padfoot

 
Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves Signed
Date: 01/12/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four: Sweetly Green

It's so interesting how you can have a story during Harry's time that doesn't involve some child being friends with Harry and helping save the world. It's like a breath of fresh air that Shiloh doesn't really like Harry, refers to him as 'Potter', and thinks that he should get punished like any other student in a total un-Hermioneish way.

Roommate? What happened to best friend?

I like how Shiloh won't admit she's jealous, whether it's about Symone's friends or George Weasley. It gives her more depth than most OCs, and makes her believeable.

“It was all over the Prophet a year ago. Everyone was talking about it. How'd you manage to miss it?”

I bet Nicolette's a Muggle-born! It's a crazy guess, yeah, but otherwise she would know about Harry.

This was a great chapter, and I hope the next one's up soon!
~Padfoot

 
Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves Signed
Date: 01/12/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four: Sweetly Green

It's so interesting how you can have a story during Harry's time that doesn't involve some child being friends with Harry and helping save the world. It's like a breath of fresh air that Shiloh doesn't really like Harry, refers to him as 'Potter', and thinks that he should get punished like any other student in a total un-Hermioneish way.

Roommate? What happened to best friend?

I like how Shiloh won't admit she's jealous, whether it's about Symone's friends or George Weasley. It gives her more depth than most OCs, and makes her believeable.

“It was all over the Prophet a year ago. Everyone was talking about it. How'd you manage to miss it?”

I bet Nicolette's a Muggle-born! It's a crazy guess, yeah, but otherwise she would know about Harry.

This was a great chapter, and I hope the next one's up soon!
~Padfoot


Author's Response: I\'m glad that you liked that chapter - and yes, I love having a story that doesn\'t involve Potter. It\'s makes it very uncliche I think. And I\'m glad I can have her think that Potter deserves to be punished in a \'un-Hermioneish\' way. I\'m also thankful that having her be jealous worked, because I actually took it out at one point before reasoning that she, who has never been in a friendship like this before, could easily get jealous. If she wasn\'t, she wouldn\'t be believable. And Nicolette, a Muggle-born? It\'s an interesting theory, but she\'s a Slytherin. I don\'t even know if a Slytherin Muggle-born is possible. Good thinking, though, and I promise that I will eventually reveal why she was acting like that, because you\'re right about one thing. There is more to her than meets the eye...and she\'s not the only one with secrets. *giggles* Next chapter should go into queue today. Thanks so much for a wonderful review.

 
Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves Signed
Date: 12/05/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two: A Story Never Told

Wow, that was a really powerful and emotional chapter! Most stories' first few chapters are boring, but this is really exciting. I feel really bad for Shiloh... I wonder if Mrs. Zell knows anything about Snape? Anyways, I look forward to chapter three!
~Padfoot

Author's Response: Yeah, well this was supposed to be part of the first chapter, but it was much to long so I had to seperate them. But yeah, this chapter was incredibly fun for me to write. I\'m glad I got to add a bit of excitement too, because the next few chapters might be more boring as I try to set some of the story up. Anyways, thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

 
Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves Signed
Date: 12/05/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two: A Story Never Told

Oh, I also have a nitpick- you spelled Alastor wrong. Great chapter anyways!

Author's Response: omg, I did! *headdesk* I can\'t believe I did that. So sorry.

 
Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves Signed
Date: 04/17/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven: P.S. My Name Is Shadow

Ooh, she's trying to find her father! I wonder who will find each other first- Snape or Shiloh. (That sentence didn't make a lot of sense, did it?)

There were bunches of good parts- the "The door and I were just becoming acquainted” line, Fred and George, her code name being Shadow... it's really getting exciting. I wonder how Fred and George will react to the letter.

Sorry for such a short review for a brilliant and long chapter, but saying all my favorite parts woulfd probably have me copy and pasting just about all of the chapter ^_^

Author's Response: Don\'t worry about this not being a long review. I absolutely loved the review; it made my day. \r\n\r\nOf course, as you already know, I can\'t spoiler the story, so you\'ll just have to wait to see who find who. \r\n\r\nI\'m glad you loved that \"acquainted\" line. I chuckle every time I think of it, and I\'m glad other people got a kick out of it, too. And the codename too - I was actually worried that everyone would hate it. I\'m glad you think it\'s getting excited; I was afraid I was boring people. \r\n\r\nThanks again for the review; I really enjoyed it!

 
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