I have followed the Harry Potter series ever since my mom handed me the first book.
HAHAHA!!! a shrine to Lily Evans . . . hehehe . . . THAT would be funny . . .
Author's Response: I KNOW! It really would. Hee hee.
It is so freakingly funny!!
*I'm sorry I'm on a sugar high*
I need the funnyness!!!!!
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, but iI\'m still working on the next chapter.:( *curses writer\'s block* If you want, you could go murder my writer\'s block with you sugar high!
OHHHHH MAN!!!!!!!!! I loved how they all thought that Lily was going to die but she ends up surviving!! I may be a bit deranged but some of my most favorite adventure/action stories have characters that either have a near death experience or the OTHER characters think that they are dead. It's sooooo suspenseful and I LOVE it!! I really liked how Harry is totally emotional about his kids. Especially when he braks down when he learns that all his kids have been kidnapped. And I love how the kids meet Lily and James and Sirius and Dumbledore behind the veil. You have a great imagination!! I admire the way you can put your mid on the paper. . . webpage. . . whatever! I've tried and it never comes out the way I want it to. . . =( OH WELL!!=) I can't mope around! I promise that I will read the sequal =)
Author's Response: Well, I don\'t think I\'m going to do a sequal now... ~Evie
It seems "love" a lot of things . . .
Author's Response: huh? \r\n\r\n~Evie
You need to update soon! I really like the Lily/James relationship! You make it seem so real and it's awsome because we hardly ever get to hear about them in the actual HP series so this is so totally AWSOME and I have now become addicted to this story.
Author's Response: I never mind an addicted fan ;) I wish there was more of them in the actual books too! Thanks for the review; I\'m glad you think I portray their relationship well.
This was a really nice chapter. I'm starting to think that I'm going crazy cause I could have sworn that I gave a review for this chapter . . . ^^0 hehehe . . . yay! James is his notoriously funny cute self!
So . . . Lily's going to get some closure . . . (I guess) from going to Beverly's grave. . . .With James! ^-^ (Sorry, I'm now a James addict . . . wanna read more of him.) . . . Peter . . . kinda sad to think that years later he will betray the Potters . . . *sigh* Poor Lily, she's just got so much on her mind . . . although it was interesting to get her point of view from when she was found. *nod nod* . . . Update soon!
Author's Response: I\'m a bit of a James addict myself -- don\'t worry, there\'s lots of him in the next chapter ;) It is sad to think about Peter betraying them; I agree. I\'m glad you liked getting Lily\'s POV of that moment -- I knew when I wrote that moment at the beginning of the story that a memory would later reveal Lily\'s POV at the time and that it would be the second to last in the series of memories from Lily\'s POV (effectively bringing things full circle!) and so it was exciting to finally get around to writing it. Thanks very much for the review!
Ok I was reading this story for a second time, (because it's just so darn good!) and I swear I caught more than I did the first time.
"Lily was going to rip this letter up before she even got to the bottom."
HAHAHAHA!!!! I can just imagine a Lily Evans sitting on a couch staring at a letter with such ferocity that it seems like there is fire in her eyes and her hands are clenched as they grip the paper causing it to wrinkle and crease. LOL!!!! I swear that is one of the funniest mental images I have in my mind.
(Is all nice and happy but emphasises the "and" in such a way that it's almost sarcastic)
Congratulations, I’m sure you, Vernon, and his drills will all be very happy together.
I like James. Buzz off.
(goes back to being all cheerful)
See you at Christmas,
The above is the way I read the letter and it cracks me up every time I read it. Honestly, your ability to mix humor and drama is astounding. It always leaves me wanting more. BTW, I saw that a new chapter is coming up, but I can't see it. =( WHY DOES IT TAKE SO LONG FOR THE MODS TO ACCEPT A STORY!!!??!! (I WANT TO READ CHAPPIE 20!!!! . . . um . . . 21?) Anyway, keep up the great work. ;)
Author's Response: I liked that letter a lot, I\'m glad you did as well! Thanks very much for the review; I always like it when people tell me what lines and scenes they enjoy, and I especially like you telling me how you imagined it, because I know how I imagine all the scenes I write, but I always wonder about the readers. . . .
(Sob). . . such a . . . (sob) . . .good. . . (sob) . . .story!!!!! T_T It made me weep for poor Emma. You keept it from going over the edge with that little insert of James near the end there. It was a nice touch. However, Emma really did seem suicidal for a minute there. You really had me worried. I think it's rather interesting how Lily is so dependant.
WE GET TO SEE JAMES' PARENT'S IN THE NEXT CHAPPIE!!!!!!!!!!??!!?!?!!!!!!! =D YAY!!!!!!!!! Can't wait for you to update so please do it soon. =)
Author's Response: I do think they\'re rather fun people (at least how I imagine them!) The chapter did get pretty dark, but I tried to keep it from getting too deep and dark. I\'m glad you liked it! Thanks for the review.
OH!!! BTW. . . Merry/Happy Christmas or whatever holiday you celebrate at this time of year. =)
Author's Response: Thanks! Merry Christmas to you too!
T_T The long que wait thing is over so why isn't the next chapter up yet? WHY WHY WHY?!!? (sob) I WANT NEXT CHAPPIE!!!!! The excerpt is taunting me . . .
Author's Response: Hopefully it won\'t be too much longer!
Awwww. . . this chapter is so romantic. I swear I probably blushed when I read this. I love how it was told from Lily's point of view. Normally I read all of the story that is written so far before reviewing but this was just such a good chapter! Excellent work!
Author's Response: I\'m glad you like it! :) Thanks very much!
. . . FLUFFY!!!! . . . Mrs. Potter reminds me of Mrs. Weasley. I love the way Lily has to ask James why he likes her. um . . . HE'S BEEN CHASING YOU SINCE FOURTH YEAR!! He has GOT to have some good reasons to like her if he's chased her for that long. Sheesh . . . aw well . . . I'll give her a break . . . she HAS been through a traumatizing experience . . .
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NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yay Lily and James. ^-^
Author's Response: This was very fluffy, I know. I thought the story needed it -- especially since things are going to get a little rough coming up. I can tell you that James\'s perspective on the conversation they had will be explored a little, though, and that\'ll add a little more fluff to the upcoming chapters ;) Thanks very much for the review!
If you get the time tell "Voldikins" that I will be sending him e-hugs and e-cuddles to his e-crucios. (Just to torture him MUHAHAHA!!!!!!!) Also, (if you get the time,) tell him that I have blocked all e-crucios that he may ever send me or any e-crucios that I will ever recieve in the future. And for every attempted e-crucio, he will recieve 20 e-hugs by a crazy blue mouse on a sugar high.
Excellent story by the way. . . I was nearly in tears due to laughing by the end of the thing. There was only one thing that made me sad. . . the ending. . . because the story was over and the funnyness had to stop.
Awsome how it was Harry who was BlondeD (if that was what it was called i forget) anyway Keep The Funnyness Coming!!! =P haha
Author's Response: HEHEHEHEHEHE, Voldemort will just explode with displeasure! Though the crazy blue mouse thing made me giggle like mad. *Hands you a hankie* The BlondeD part was in the plans from the very beginning.
YAY!!! Family reunion!!! . . . although I feel sorry for Petunia.
Ron's reaction to learning that Hermione was pregnant was PRICELESS!!! XD
. . . I have writer's block or else I would be praising more things about your awsome story. Anyway, keep up the good work and Update Soon Please!! ^-^
Author's Response: I had a lot of fun writing Ron\'s reaction to Hermione\'s pregnancy; I\'m glad you liked it, too! Thanks very much for the review. I will try and update soon.
I CANNOT BELIEVE THAT I DIDN'T SEE THIS CHAPTER SOONER!!! AND RAWR MY COMPTER HATES ME!!! I typed up a review and it didn't put it in. grr. . . So now I have to type up another review, but you know what? I don't mind because this chapter was SO FRECKIN AWSOME!!!! Honestly, I can't compliment it enough but you REALLY need to update soon! I WANNA SEE HARRY'S REACTION TO GINNY'S NEWS!!!!!!!! WHOO MORE BABIES!!! And if you dare start the next chapter in a different place and don't get to the part where Ginny says that she's pregant I WILL THROW SHARP POINTY THINGS AT YOU!!!!!!! (slaps self) Sorry, I've had sugar and soda . . . not a good combo . . . makes me too hyper . . . so anyways . . . Update soon! ^-^
Author's Response: I\'m glad you did see it soon -- and are willing to type up a second review for me! I\'ve written the start to the next chapter, however, I often change my mind about the starts of chapters, so who knows if this one\'ll stay as is for long. . . . I will try and update soon; thanks very much for the review!
I just have 3 things to say:
1) Update soon
2) Yay for your story
3) I like otters and the Harry Potter universe (alternate or otherwise)
Author's Response: Haha, well, thank you, and I will try and update soon!
uh-oh. . .
Ok I thought that Tonks came back to an empty HQ and then she got out of there. I personally think Snape is lying. . . again. Great cliffhanger though. However, that means that you will need to get the next chapter up faster.
Author's Response: I know, I know -- if I\'m going to do terrible cliffhangers, I should promise fast updates; and I am going to try and get the next chapter out quick! Thanks for the review.
FUNNY!!!!!!!!! oh my goodness. . . . the humor surpassed my expectations. . .
Author's Response: Now there\'s a sentance I like to hear! Thanks!
FUNNY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love stories that are told through letters. . . .mehehehehe. . . . Awsomeness is guaranteed . . . ^_^
Author's Response: =D Thanks, I\'m glad you enjoyed it!
0_o . . . wow . . . Ok . . . now for the review . . . here it is . . . now . . . (I really need to stop doing this) . . . so here's the review . . . FOR REAL!! : Not as funny as the other ones but incredably(sp?) cute. Loved the character of Annie . . she seemed to act as comic relief for all the mushy stuff that was going on. ^_^
Author's Response: Well, no, it wasn\'t as funny, but it was supposed to be more on the cute side anyway, so never mind. And, of course, it seems Annie did her job perfectly!