oh to be the filling in a fred/george sandwhich....
thanks for sharing with us
Author's Response: Thanks :D
sometimes we all need to just cry, and se needed it more than anyone else it seems. i love your writing. i wanted to cry along with her.
i like this story a lot it's kind of like anne frank's diary.
you're advancing their relaitonship in such a realistic way. too many stories have the characters in love after "hello" and don't smoothly develop the story. this is really a pleasure to read.
it's almost like "the power of one"
maybe all the times she's arguing with him, he's just arguing with her to argue, and he doesn't realy believe, or no longer believes, all the crap he spouts? maybe he's so used to playing roles, he has to keep it up, no matter what?
that was perfect, just perfect.
This was a wonderful story. The overall message of surviving and regaining trust, love and hope as well as rebuilding was lovely. I like not knowing what happened in the end-leaves me to think up my own happy ever after. Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm thrilled that you liked it.
the start was so well written and perfect. i love how it's a story about losing the "final battle" but still going on to possibly achieve the end goal.
i liked this piece. you did a great job covering history, setting the scene and playing it out between them with their actions, dialogue and their thoughts. well done, thanks for sharing.
i love that hermione knows what her knees are for. draco needs to take anger management class. in the end, it's good that draco knows how useless his house are as support. i can't wait to see how they end up getting along. draco is very self-centered, but i think he can learn to be better, i just think that thinking about others has ever been taught to him. if anyone can knock some sense into him and teach him what ther est of us learned when we were 4, hermione can.
Author's Response: Yes, yes - you would be completely right with thinking that. Great analysis of the story so far. Thanks for reading!!
You are such a tease. Thanks for the e-mail heads up you sent me. Your chapters are nice and long, makes the wait worth it even if i lack patience. You leave just enough plot hanging at the end of each chapter! I have so many questions I can't wait to be answered.
Author's Response: Haha, I\'m glad you enjoyed it. Hopefully ten won\'t be long... Thanks for reviewing!
I love your story and am always happy to see it up and waiting for me to read. this site always takes forever to update it. I read it at the other site, but cannot comment there. I hope that Ron and Harry learn to appreciate Hermione. Good job and thanks for sharing your story with us.
Author's Response: No problem :) I\"m glad you\'re enjoying it. Thanks for reviewing! Undone is waiting in the queue.
sheesh it was there then it wasn't. i hope they clear it soon.
it was worth the wait, i hope the next chapter comes out quicker!
Author's Response: Thank you! I just submitted chapter 9, so hopefully it will only be about a week. Providing there are no problems with the mods, of course.
Great plot so far, can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you!
your chapters are so long, it must take you foreer to write. i read this at ff.net and am happy to see it updated here. this was one of my favorite chapters so far and i know it'll just get better. i can't wait to see if draco will change into a werewolf or if he will be able to shift into a different animal. keep up the good work and i look forward to another update sooner than later : )
Author's Response: :) Actually, this chapter, once I got past the first part, was written in about twenty-four hours. Granted, others do take longer, but once I got started I just couldn\'t stop. I\'m glad you enjoyed the chapter. Now that\'s the one question everyone wants answered, isn\'t it? We\'ll actually be finding out rather soon whether or not Draco will be a werewolf. I\'m about half finished with chapter thirteen already :) Thanks for following the story, I always enjoy your reviews.
I hope she makes it to safety.
Author's Response: She does, but she won\'t stay there for long...
I don't think we need an aplogy for for chapter without action. You did a good job establishing a beginning relationship between Draco and Hermione.
Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m glad you liked it.
I can't wait to see what Draco and Hermione become and to find out what Harry did to Hermione and why they keft her.
Author's Response: All in good time :) Thank you for reviewing!
i hope all is well with you. You took a break awhile back and I can't wait for more of this story. Your chapters are always well written and very long, a great combination. Good luck with the writing and don't be a stranger.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I always look forward to hearing from you. I'll be back by the end of the summer, I promise :D