My name is Rachael. I'm 15 and wish something exciting would happen in my life. I am in love with the Jonas Brothers. I like Harry Potter, Twilight, The Chronicles of Narina, alomst anything else in the fantasy genre, music, Avatar: The Last Airbender, and Hannah Montana. I sing, act, and write. I'm not a pro at any of these things. I barely know if I'm any good! :) :P
I loved this fic!! I laughed a lot, I cried, I spent 2 days of my starnge, boring life reading it. It's one of the best fanfictions I've ever read!! For a second there, I thought Harry was dead. I started yelling at the computer. The only people who noticed already know I'm weird, so it didn't matter much.
Author's Response: Thanks very much! I\'m glad no one was scared off -- but of course, you know, I could never really kill Harry!
i luuv your story!!!Update soon!!!! Please!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I\'ll try to update! ~megan~
I loved this fan fic. This is the best Next Generation fic on MNFF(maybe the whole site)!!!! My favorite characters were Haley and Emma and Ivy. The only OC I didn't like was Ivy's older brother(I won't even attempt to spell his name right). I can't wait for the next book! Why can't MNFF ignore this plot sitch-ation?If MNFF won't accept, are you going to put it somewhere else? Anyway, loved the fic. I couldn't find anything that I didn't like. For a second, I really thought that Jordan was really an Overseer, and then I was totally convinced Haley had killed him. Now the song Haley made up at that part(the one about the bush and the ferret) is stuck in my head. I might start singing it at school tomorrow. YAY FOR WEIRD LOOKS YOUR PARENTS GIVE YOU!!!!!(hehehe... my mom heard me singing the song a while ago...). Anyway I loved the plot twist. And the whole story in general.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! You made me smle so much! I had a lot of fun writing it, and I think I probably will submit it to FF.net or something like that (even though I hate that site) if I really can\'t get it past the mods.
This story is amazing! I really love the way it's from Neville's POV. The conversation between Neville and Seamus was really great, too. I'm working on something like this, but it's from a third year girl's POV, I thought it might be interesting to write about that. Anyway, I can' wait for the next chapter!
I just wanted to let you know that I looove this story so far, and can't waite until the next update. Any idea when that'll be?
Author's Response: Well, I\'m like 80% done with the next chapter, so whenever the queue is up and running again, an update should follow! Thanks for reviewing, and I\'m glad you like the story! :)
omg! i loved that!! i've read the last book, and at the end i threw a fit(not that anyone heard it...) because the three people that die(that are in the Order) are three of my favorite characters!! anyway, great poem!
YAY!!!!Book 2!! I really didn't think the first chapter was boring(not that any of the last book was). Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Hooray! I\'m glad you didn\'t think it was boring... cute username, by the way!
Yay!!Great chapter.. Oh, oh! Is the diary-person Lee Jordan?? It fits-I think. Well, anyway, great chapter. I liked the part with Ted and the first years. Hehehe. Can't wait for the next chappie!!
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! You will see about the diary. I had fun writing the part with Ted and the kids... he\'s so unintentionally intimidating, fwahaha.
Yaaay!!! I've been waiting for this chapter for what seems like forever(I know it wasn't that long, I exaggerate a lot, forget about..)! Emma's the Champion!!!YAY!!! I had to cover up the bottom of my screen with my hand to keep from skipping ahead, a stupid I've fell into that I really need to stop. I loved the part where Haley started singing...Does she bust into song often(probably a stupid question since I've read the first one and this one, too so far)? I do a lot. I start singing songs that have to with a certain situation and it drives them crazy.:D Anyway, loved the chapter!!!
Author's Response: It\'s been eight days! Too long! Yeah, I had to force myself to not read ahead in DH to see if Ron died...
Hehehehe, Haley does indeed burst into song quite often. Much like me. ^_^ I can relate ANYTHING to a showtune.
sorry, i was typing fast and didn't type in two words. "Them" are my friends. I have a stupid habit of skipping ahead on something really good that I wanna know now, instead of waiting till it comes, so you can take that as a compliment.. :) Hehehe.
Author's Response: Haha, thanks. ^_^ I am the Queen of Typos, really, so I don\'t mind.
sweeeeeet!!! I liked the convo between harry and ron. hehehe!
NOOOOO!!!! Ivy thinks Ted has a girlfriend(or something along those lines)!!!!!! As a Ted/Ivy shipper parts like these get me excited(in more ways than one could possibly think of - should've seen me reading DH when *SPOILERS* Lupin said he left Tonks. I was practicly screaming "STUPID!! STUPID!!!" I know, I have problems).
Weeeeee!!! Haley wants to be an actress!!! And she's serious about it!!! You know what'd be awesome? A kind of wizard-type-Broadway-type thing!! I don't know how it would work, but it would be so cool!! Maybe they could like - I don't know, never mind.
Anyway, great chappie! Can't wait for the next one!!
Author's Response: I kinda threw the book across the room when Lupin said he left Tonks... hehe, just don\'t throw your computer across the room!
It would be awesome if there was a wizard-type Broadway-- special effects done by magic, etc. If you\'ve ever read the \"Bartimaeus Trilogy,\" there\'s something like that in there. I was kinda imagining Haley being a regular actress popular with the Muggles and wizards, because that would be cool, but I think I like your idea better!
OMG!!! I can't believe I forgot this - YOU USED THE SQUISHY PART IN FINDING NEMO!!!!!!! sorry about the caps - that's my favorite part in finding nemo!! we watched it the other day in school(in Algebra 1 - how weird is that?) and the second day, I was slowly going to sleep(not that I wanted to, I just didn't get enough sleep the night before, and Algebra's my first block) and that part came on, and I shot up and said it with it. Hehehe. When I saw that part, I was like screaming, "SWEET!!! SHE USED SQUISHY!!!!!" Now I'm gonna think Potter's Pentagon whenever I watch it. And Archibald.
Author's Response: YEEESSS! I love Finding Nemo! I think I can recite most of the movie... I was in chorus on the risers today, and the teacher said to just keep scooting, and well, I started singing \"Just keep swimming...\"
I have Algebra first block as well, except I\'m in Algebra 2 because I\'m a sophomore...
WooHoo!! Loved it! But Haley stops being hyper?! I like the hyper Haley!
Arden was sorta cool. She was more scared than what I'm used to, though. YAY!! I get to read something I'm not used to!(I like doing this - it makes everything less normal...and the less normal it is, the more I like it :D )
Charybdis Nott is EVIL!! I hate her as much as I hate Bellatrix and Azula(Azula's from Avatar: The Last Airbender - I call her the Bellatrix of the Avatar Universe....I do stuff like that a lot.)!!!
You used the Patato Joke again!!! I like the Patato Joke, even if I don't know the middle of it. :)
Author's Response: Oh, Haley will still be hyper in the future. She just wants to try and learn to be serious when she wants to be, as well. That is an important skill, by the way.
Arden does some way cooler stuff toward the end of the story when she\'s more in her element.
Wow, so much hate for someone you\'ve barely seen in the story so far! But Charybdis is very evil. She\'s even eviler in the third book... I can barely bring myself to write about her in that one.
Just think of the most obscene thing you can think of and stick it in the middle of the potato joke.
Great first chapter! Update soon! Please!
Author's Response: Thanks! My beta looking at chapter two right now!
OMG!! I loved it!! I had an idea for something like this, but never got around to writing it. I'm glad someone else did, though. It's great, can't wait to see more!
Author's Response: Isn\'t it cool (and somewhat annoying in a weird way) when someone has the same idea you do? That happened to me, too...creepy. Thanks! I\'m almost done with chapter one, so I\'ll submit it soon. Thanks again for reviewing!
Yay!! An awesome first chapter!! It was so cool! This was my favorite part:
“What do you know about it?” snapped Remus. “You’re only thirteen.”
“Remus, listen to me,” Sara said gently. “Love is all that matters. As for how I know this…well, I don’t want to talk about it just yet.” She bowed her head, hiding her face behind a veil of sable hair.
Author's Response: Thanks!