Cool story. It's nice to read about an alternative universe in which Snape still hates Potter. Anyway, please give some clarification about Voldy's whereabouts. If Bella is around, he must be as well.
Author's Response: Thanks for your comments. I'm not sure I could imagine a universe where Sev and Harry were the best of friends or anything other than barely civil, especially once the true nature of their shared paths came out. Voldemort...well, you'll see how I'm dealing with him. You're right, Bella couldn't find her purpose if there wasn't a little something from him.
Ok, so it's great, really great. The characters are real. good job. Still, I have one BIG concern: will you still continue my favorite fic, SKOM? I feel like you are losing interest in Draco and Harry...
I may have not read attentivelly the first two chapters, but when I started on this one, I knew immediatelly something funny would happen. And I was right, because it really made me laugh, especially the Voldy part. The idea of the story is great and I always admire writers with a good sense of humor. I could never write humor fics. good job!
Thank you for reviewing and liking my story so much! It appears that the Lord Volders part is quite a hit! My own advice on writing humour is not to try too hard – if you have to think for a long time to come up with something funny, chances are, it isn’t. When I wrote this, I quite literally made up the story as I went and wrote down any absurd thought that came across in my head, and I am quite proud of the result!
And remember, if you need inspiration, there’s always Skittles™…
Tim the Enchanter
Thank you all for your reviews. This trailer continues with the story "Before goodbye" on ffnet and some other nice stories. Check them out. Best is probably " Lord Voldemort and the heir of Slytherin"
Lily Luna Potter is given History of Magic homework to write about the life and achievements of one Harry Potter, and (being the abnormal weirdo that she is) she decides to write it in verse. Sadly, Lily is labouring under the delusion that she is a talented poet, even though her rhyming is almost as good as her mother’s (as exhibited in CoS)…
Well this is what she wrote! Professor Binns won’t know what’s hit him...
A millon billion trillion Thank Yous to lunirina, who saved this from the horrific state it was in!
very nicely done!
Author's Response: Thanks =]
It was like a wizard tale. The clever Slytherin helps a hag who later repays the debt. Except that Rose Weasley wasn't a hag, and Scorpius didn't expect to call in the favour.
*Winner of the 2010 Next Generation QSQ award*
I wanted to review for many times before, but I was never logged in and too lazy to do so! This fic is really nice, catchy and you are very inventive! Good work!
Author's Response: You reviewed now, thank you! (and I wish MNFF allowed anonymous reviews. :D)
Ok, so now that I am logged on a permanent basis, I can review more often and for instance I can say that I loved this chapter. The story is getting better and better and the characterisation of both characters is excellent. Good work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for liking the characterization and making the effort to log in and review! It means a lot. :)